After saying this, Q version of Vic finally breathed a sigh of relief.

"How is it? How long will it take to finish?"

He looked at the virtual Vic and Vic and asked.

"Hmm..."

Vic pondered for a while, closed his eyes and began to perceive the response of the higher narrative layer.

"The 'author' told me that it will be finished in two days."

"You continue reading. If everything goes well, we should be able to get rid of the peeping of the higher narrative layer soon."

After hearing this, Q version of Vic smiled with satisfaction.

"Very good, let's continue."

"Well, it's still Sean's business."

"But I'll still read the contents of the World Book."

...

"After the war, everyone's attitude changed significantly, taking stock of their gains and returning to daily life. It can also be described from the perspective of the maid, etc."

"The change in everyone's attitude here is a reasonable extension of the story development, which can reflect Sean's influence in the war. Returning to daily life and describing it from the perspective of the maid is a good way to enrich the story. It can show Sean and the maid's life more comprehensively and dig deeper into the maid's personality and emotions."

"The first time Sean went to teach, he taught the refining of the blood cloud potion (low-end version) and so on. There were many people coming to the class, and the setting can be explained accordingly."

"The plot of Sean teaching is very meaningful. In addition to showing Sean's knowledge reserves and teaching ability, teaching the refining of the blood cloud potion can also go deep into the field of magic knowledge and attract the interest of high-dimensional observers."

"You can even use the hands of students to show the importance of this knowledge and Sean's prestige."

"You can also describe the potion refining process, ingredients and precautions in detail, as well as students' reactions and classroom interactions."

"With The daily life of the maid, 10 years, exchanging gold essence, preparing potions, the maid's promotion to the apprentice level, caused a lot of sensation, and countless people wanted to become Sean's students. "

"The description of daily life in these 10 years is very important, and the process of exchanging gold essence and preparing potions should be detailed."

"Including the way to obtain gold essence, the difficulty of preparing potions, etc., and the maid's promotion to the apprentice level caused a sensation, which is in line with the logic of the story, and also highlights the growth of the maid and Sean's influence. "

"At the same time, it can also show the reactions of people around, further showing the influence of this event. "

"A noble The descendant of the clan is gifted. His father took great pains to collect a material that Sean needed (he learned it by chance and snatched it from a lucky person), and came to give it to Sean. Sean wanted to give him a reward, but the other party declined and wanted his descendant to become his apprentice. Sean thought about it and agreed, accepted the material, accepted a student, and gave him many treasures. "Here, the nobles' pursuit of Sean is shown. The process of the nobles collecting materials can be described in detail, reflecting the preciousness of the materials and the difficulty of obtaining them, etc., and the plot of Sean accepting students is reasonable, showing Sean's attractiveness and generosity, and also laying the groundwork for the follow-up."

"The daily routine lasted for 10 years. Sean's student was promoted to level 9. He went out to show off in the name of Sean. After forcibly buying a material, he found that it was a companion of the material mentioned above, so he followed and tried to rob it, but was caught. After modifying his memory, he gave the material and let it go. (Thinking he could hide it from Sean)"

"Well... Sean's student's growth and behavior in the past 10 years are consistent with his personality traits, highlighting the student's youthful frivolity and dependence on Sean. The forced purchase of materials and the subsequent robbery plot increase the interest and complexity of the story. "

"Also, the modification of memory after being captured reflects the opponent's cunning, and also implies Sean's deterrence. "

"Q version of Vic said a long paragraph in one breath, then picked up the water cup beside him and took a sip.

"By the way, the nobleman got a stone ring not long ago, which can open a portal connecting to a small plane, so he was promoted to the apprentice level, and then continued to obtain materials from the small plane for sale (there is no professional system in the small plane). "

"The fact that the nobleman got the stone ring here is very novel. You can describe in detail the origin of the stone ring, the principle of the portal and the situation of the small plane, including the distribution of resources and the activities of the nobles, etc., to increase the fantasy and appeal of this matter. ”

“After Sean discovered and cracked the code, he became suspicious and went out in the name of recruiting students (write a conversation with the dean, which can be used to describe the cruelty of the world), went to capture the nobles, learned the whole story (with some twists and turns), and found that most of the energy in the ring had been wasted, so he thought of sending a maid in. ”

“Sean’s behavior reflects his wisdom and sense of justice. The conversation with the dean can be used to describe the cruelty of the world in depth, such as the fierce competition among professionals and the consequences of violations. In addition, the process of capturing the nobles can be detailed, adding twists and turns and tension. It can also raise the idea of ​​sending a maid into the small plane and pave the way for subsequent plots, which may arouse the curiosity of high-dimensional observers. ”

“Continue recruiting students, daily life on the road, Sean’s students use Sean’s reputation to coerce the other party to submit, and the maid’s attitude towards this, and the scenery and treatment of the various places where the students are recruited, etc., can describe daily life, such as skiing, etc. ”

“This part of the description enriches the content of the story, showing the atmosphere of life during the recruitment process. The students coercing others is in line with their personality, and the maid’s attitude reflects their loyalty. ”

“At the same time, the description of the scenery and treatment in various places can make high-dimensional observers better understand the story world, and daily activities such as skiing can increase the fun. ”

“After returning to the city, the new students were shocked to see the city, and continued to write about daily life and material collection, etc., describing Sean’s plans for the future. ”

"The reaction of the new students here is reasonable, and the magnificence and uniqueness of the city can be described in detail. Continuing daily life and collecting materials is in line with the development of the story. Sean's description of future plans can also enable high-dimensional observers to understand Sean's goals and directions more clearly."

"Daily life, lasting 100 years."

Q version of Vic smiled and continued reading.

"100 years of daily life is a long time span, and it is necessary to select key nodes for detailed description to avoid monotony and reflect the passage of time and the growth of everyone."

"Sean has reached level 22, the maid has reached level 19, the material collection has been completed, and Sean has purchased various supplies."

"By the way, the level upgrade and material collection are important achievements during this period. You can describe in detail the insights and breakthroughs during the upgrade process, as well as the hardships and uses of material collection. When purchasing materials, you can simply mention the types and uses of materials to prepare for the follow-up."

"Attending the funeral of his friend with the maid, feeling the time, the maid sadly expressed her feelings to Sean, and after the funeral, Sean talked to the maid, and Sean asked the maid to be ready."

"The funeral plot adds a lot of emotional depth. You can describe in detail the atmosphere of the funeral, the sadness of everyone, and the emotional exchange between Sean and the maid. The maid's expression of feelings is an important node in the development of feelings, and you can observe the emotional changes of the two in depth."

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