Wizards are mighty

"After asking for details, Sean offered support and helped him to be promoted to the trainee level. My friend was very grateful and set off shortly after completing the promotion. (Exchanged soul collectors and potions, etc., rented staffs, and prepared)"

"Hey, Sean's kindness and helpfulness are reflected here, and he also shows his rich resources and powerful abilities. When helping friends to advance and prepare, the functions and acquisition methods of various items can be described in more detail. "

"Soon after, I went to the kingdom and described the country and the people. I went to the maid's friend's house. Her family was shocked by the maid. Sean revealed his identity and aura. However, after a while, the second official level arrived. Sean talked to her and revealed his identity and thoughts. , the second-level official agreed after thinking about it, and signed an abyss contract. (The contract has descriptions such as "try to avoid our side." There are different rewards for resisting, repelling, wounding, and killing) (Xien's side was originally weak, The other party also added a new official level)"

"This part shows Sean's ability to cope with the new environment and his wisdom. The description of the kingdom and the people can be more detailed to highlight the social environment in the context of war."

"By the way, the process of signing the contract and the description of the contract content must be clear so that high-dimensional observers can understand the stakes involved."

"Then there was a decisive battle outside the imperial city (the maids and others did not participate in the battle). Sean hid in the crowd. At first, he took advantage of the opponent's unpreparedness (being held back) and defeated an army of 50,000. The opponent's level 20 warriors came after him. Sean had already Prepare for battle (shield, flight, drink medicine, slow to face the enemy), then avoid the battle, defeat the army, and fight with it, describing the chaotic battle situation and Sean's mood."

"This is a fierce battle description, showing Sean's powerful strength and fighting skills. During the description process, attention should be paid to highlighting the tension and excitement of the battle, and at the same time, Sean's psychological activities should be described to make the high-dimensional Observers can better understand the motivations for his actions."

"Defeat an army of 100,000 again, gather the blood cloud giants, and then confront them head-on, while defeating the army as a supplement. (Sean knocked the target away, and the blood cloud giants defeated the army)"

"The plot here further demonstrates Sean's combat capabilities and his spell skills, and the description of the Blood Cloud Giant can be more detailed to highlight its powerful combat power."

"Defeat 50,000 troops again, confront them, and become more and more courageous as they fight (Sean has 50,000 mana left, and the opponent has 50,000). Defeat 100,000 again, and the blood cloud giant is at its peak. Sean's confinement spell hits (30,000 remaining), and the giant is at full strength. He hit the opponent hard several times and escaped with injuries."

The opponent tried to escape, so the protagonist used the magic in the staff to imprison the opponent, and used the Blood Cloud Explosion Technique to successfully kill him.

The two opponents were frightened and ran away. The protagonist used the blood cloud technique to kill 300,000 enemy troops again and collected the energy and soul of the blood cloud potion bottle. During this period, he had a conflict with his teammates, but forced them back, and then continued the slaughter. The collection was completed. Then stop.

Describing the post-war scene, the protagonist talked with two teammates. (The two were afraid of the protagonist's murderous nature, background, strength, etc., so they offered a large amount of wealth and materials. After the protagonist returned to the city, he frightened the maid and others, and discovered his own mental problems. But it is difficult to adjust in a short period of time (showing the maid's absolute loyalty and trust to the protagonist).

The Q version of Vic had an excited look on his face.

"Daily life in the academy includes learning knowledge, trying alchemy, practicing spells, etc. These activities are in line with Sean's growth path in the academy environment. At the same time, introducing the academy from the perspective of a maid also enriches the perspective, but care should be taken to avoid repetition and try to use the perspective of a maid. Different aspects and details are shown in it. ” ˆ ˆ ˆ “The daily description of 50 years requires a good grasp of the rhythm. You can select some important events or nodes to focus on description, such as important annual festivals, large-scale activities of the college, etc., so that high-dimensional observers can Feel the passage of time and Sean's growth and change."

“It is reasonable to establish the research direction starting from hunting official-level monsters, which can show Sean’s ability improvement and the relationship with the dean. This process can describe in detail the difficulty of hunting, the details of teamwork, and Sean’s role in it. The plot of refining the blood cloud potion bottle and upgrading it is in line with the logic of the story, and can describe the difficulties and breakthroughs in the refining process in detail. "

"The conversation between the maid and her friend and the subsequent plot are in line with the character and story development logic. The maid's friend was anxious to be promoted due to the war, which triggered Sean's attention and actions, which reflected Sean's kindness and sense of justice, and Sean's process of helping his friend to be promoted to the trainee level. It can be more detailed, such as how to use soul collectors and potions, the process of renting staffs, etc. "

"After going to the kingdom, the description of the kingdom and the people can be more vivid, so as to highlight the tense atmosphere of the war and the complexity of the social environment. The process of signing the contract with the two formal levels should be clear, including a detailed explanation of the terms of the contract and both parties psychological activities and so on.”

"Of course, the decisive battle outside the imperial city is an important plot, and the battle process needs to be described in detail, including Sean's tactical use, skill release, and the opponent's response strategy."

"For example, Sean's description of defeating the army when the opponent is unprepared can be more detailed, highlighting the suddenness and cruelty of the battle; in the process of fighting with level 20 warriors, Sean's flexibility and psychological pressure should be shown; the concentration of blood The description of the battle after Cloud Giant should highlight the giant’s power and Sean’s collaborative combat capabilities.”

"Also, after the battle, Sean's conversation with his teammates and the harvest of wealth must be reasonable, showing Sean's change in mentality and his teammates' fear of him."

"Let's put it this way. It's reasonable to describe the change in everyone's attitude after the war, which can reflect Sean's influence in the war. When he enters the daily life again, he can continue the previous style, but he should pay attention to changes and development to avoid monotony."

"Why should we describe it from the perspective of the maid? Because describing the daily life from the perspective of the maid can continue to dig deeper into the character and growth of the maid, such as the learning progress of the maid in the academy, the expansion of social relationships, etc."

"Another very important point is that Sean's first class is an important plot. The content of the class, the students' reactions and Sean's performance in the teaching process should be described in detail. Through these descriptions, we can further explain the setting and show Sean's ability."

"In addition, the plot of the maid's promotion to the apprentice level can be more detailed, such as the changes and feelings during the promotion process, and the reactions of the people around her. The plot of the noble's heir becoming a disciple is reasonable, which can show Sean's appeal and influence. In this process, we can describe in detail the arduous process of the noble collecting materials and Sean's emphasis on materials."