How to raise a passer-by wife

The arrogance reflected in the options does exist.

The manuscript in the hands of the three showed the source of that arrogance.

What Ying Lili draws is not comics, but illustrations, or sketches.

In addition, she only draws with a simple idea, and her screenwriting ability is also very average, and there is basically no plot in the painting.

It can be said that it is just a silhouette.

However, relying on a few silhouettes with no beginning or end, Kasumi Hill Shiyu wrote several short stories in a short period of time. Although the length is not long, the beginning, succession and transition are smooth and complete.

After reading the short story and then looking at the sketches, it seems that the colors gradually emerge, and the characters become vivid. It makes people feel that such a picture is taken for granted.

This kind of terrifying strength... is worthy of Xia Shizi.

Chapter 258 True Strength

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu raised her eyebrows and looked at Yinglili, "How is it?"

"This is just the beginning!" Ying Lili originally wanted to praise Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, but when she heard her say this, she was immediately dissatisfied, "What's the air now!"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu chuckled, "I'll wait and see."

Kobayashi Kongqing quickly browsed through the short stories one by one, sorted them according to the degree of intimacy and emotional progression, and corresponded to the various options branches in his mind.

Since the founding of the Kaeili Club, the production process that can really highlight the abilities of everyone has just taken shape.

Eri Rika's excellent painting skills are like a dot, polished into a line by Kasumigaoka Shiwa's excellent writing, and then relying on Kobayashi Sorao's excellent logical thinking ability, the lines are arranged and combined into a picture, and finally softened by Kato Megumi Turn, fill with color to form a complete and harmonious picture.

In this process, Ying Lili does not need to think about the plot, and can show her painting skills without restrictions; It is necessary to repeatedly arrange and combine, and adjust all the branch lines and main lines. This is also the job he is best at as he likes to plan.

Simply interspersing a few short stories into the plot, Kobayashi Kongqing showed his achievements to others.

Unlike the reaction just now, Kasumigaoka Shiwa and Eiriri frowned at the same time.

Ying Lili was not polite, as if she had just been fed dog food and wanted to vent her grievances to the person who fed her, "What! There is no beginning and no end, it's like forcing it in! It's so awkward! "

"Who did it become like this?" Kasumigaoka Shiyu leaned on her chin, "It shouldn't be the fault of some illustrator who draws endless illustrations, right?"

"Xiazhiqiu Shiyu! What do you mean? This is obviously because the plot you wrote is not smooth!"

"I completed the short story based on your illustrations, and the root is clearly in you."

"You still dare to blame me?!" Ying Lili frowned, "It's obviously... huh?"

Eirisu and Kasumigaoka Shiu's expressions froze, and they looked at Kobayashi Kongqing at the same time.

The root cause is obviously Kobayashi Kongqing here.

It was the method he proposed, but the results presented were not satisfactory.

To compare it, it is like a tree full of oranges, persimmons, plums, chestnuts, and pears.

It cannot be said that the fruit is not delicious, but it is indeed uncomfortable to look at.

"This is not the point." Kobayashi Kongqing tapped the printing paper, "What I want you to see is the general development, emotional progression and branching, and whether there are obvious conflicts and content that do not match the options."

"Hmm..." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu took a quick glance, "In terms of emotions, there is really no problem, and the various branches are closely connected in a progressive and horizontal way. But..."

"But it's too awkward!" Ying Lili pointed out, "This is not a script at all, but a collection of short stories!"

So far, the revised script is still a simple suture monster, lacking a unified style and smooth transition.

"I know." Kobayashi Kongqing walked into the room holding Kato Megumi's hand, "Give us a little time."

"Huh?" Ying Lili was stunned.

"Tsk." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu watched the two enter the room.

"Doesn't he restrain himself?" Ying Lili looked at Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, "Is he usually so presumptuous?"

"Ask me why?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu shook her legs, "I'm not usually here."

Ying Lili subconsciously looked at the rice cake.

"Meow?" Nian Gao made a weak cry.

The cat looked big, but it sounded weird.

Forget it.

Ying Lili looked away.

It's useless to ask...huh?

In the blink of an eye, Kasumigaoka Shiyu beside him disappeared.

Ying Lili scanned the living room, and soon found Kasumigaoka Shiyu lying at the door.

"What are you doing?" Ying Lili lowered her voice.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu moved her lips, and answered with lip language, [Source. ]

Take material? !

Ying Lili followed, and a faint voice came from the room.

Her face turned red rapidly, and Yinglili's ears were running hot.

Is this something she can hear?

The sporadic sounds coming out of the bedroom are basically the kind that Yinglili's book can only draw.

I seem to be able to hear it.

That's fine.

Ying Lili looked at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu with some guilt.

[Materials obtained. ] Xiazhiqiu Shiyu reiterated with her lips.

Ah yes yes yes.

Ying Lili nodded, this is the material.

The material of justice.

"Meow?" Nian Gao looked at the two strange people suspiciously.

What are these two doing?

Soon, footsteps sounded in the room.

Kasumigaoka Shiu and Eiriri hurried back to the sofa, with expressions on their faces that nothing happened.

It's just that compared to Kasumigaoka Shiwa's excellent acting skills, Ying Lili was obviously a little flustered, drinking lemon tea one after another.

The door opened and the two walked out.

Ying Lili raised her head, "Is it over?"

"En." Kobayashi Kongqing nodded.

"So fast?"

Kobayashi Kongqing: "Huh?"

The printer buzzed, and soon, a new script was printed out.

Of course only a small part.

It is a branch plot that combines several short stories.

"Let's have a look." Kobayashi Kongqing handed the new script to the two of them.

Kasumigaoka Shiwa and Eiriri quickly read, whether they are light novel authors or otaku, the skill of quick browsing is a basic skill, which can complete the most reading in the shortest time.

"Huh?" Ying Lili read it once, then went back and looked again, "It seems..."

"The sense of incongruity has been eliminated." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu answered, and quickly spoke again, "Or it should be said that it was cleverly hidden, although it was only a small change, but the fluency was greatly improved-how did it do it? "

"I'm an OEM." Kobayashi Kongqing moved sideways, raised his hands to show the girl beside him, "This is the hero."

"No more." Kato Megumi grabbed Kobayashi Kongqing's hand.

That's right.

It is Megumi Kato's excellent observation ability and undisturbed thinking of ordinary people that turn decay into magic.

In the past ordinary life, Kato Megumi was able to complete sharp complaints and real injuries.

Although she doesn't have the painting skills of Eriri, the screenwriting ability of Kasumigaoka Shiwa, and the overall planning ability of Kobayashi Soqing, she has the sharp observation ability to eliminate the sense of disobedience in the script.

Unlike Kasumigaoka Shiwa and Eiriri, who have always attracted much attention, Kato Megumi has played the role of passers-by for quite a long time.

That is to exist without being noticed.

From the standpoint of a bystander, she can perceive more undisturbed things that people in the story cannot perceive.

I don't know the true face of Lushan, I am only in this mountain.

That's roughly how it feels.

Although it is impossible to eliminate all the sense of disobedience, Megumi Kato can weaken the sense of disobedience to the point where it will not be noticed.

Chapter 259

After Kato Megumi's polishing, the script that was originally stitched together strangely has a harmonious and unified temperament.

Compared with model identity and programming ability, Kato Megumi's ability to violate and eliminate is truly rare.

It is still in the preliminary stage. The follow-up Kasumigaoka Shiwa will fill in the content, and then Kato Megumi will re-polish it. After several repetitions, the script will finally be considered to be formed.

Seeing concrete results, Kasumigaoka Shiwa and Eiriri's work became more motivated.

It was not until it was dark that the two left one after another.

After tidying up briefly, making a staged summary of today's work, and marking the unfinished parts, it is officially over.

After two days off, classes start tomorrow, and even less time to work.

"Hui," Xiao Lin Kongqing said, "It's almost time, I'll take you back."

"Ah...um." Kato Megumi simply packed up his things and said goodbye to the mochi.

"Today's work is going well." Kato Megumi tilted his head, "If we continue like this, we should be able to catch up with the progress, right?"

"Almost." Kobayashi Kongqing nodded, "According to the current enthusiasm of senior sister and Ying Lili, it should be no problem."

"Speaking of...why would you agree?"

"Ok?"

"It's just combining the two versions into one game."

"There is a problem with the single script, and we discussed it just now." Kobayashi Kongqing replied, "Now the two versions are combined to form a complete script. It's like a question of options. Most of the options in the senior sister's script It's the kind of life and death that you choose, and you can't go back after you choose the plot, or there is no big change in which plot you choose. If the two versions are combined, you can use the options to jump repeatedly between the two versions, and it is solved. Lots of questions."

"Not this." Kato Megumi looked at him, "You decided to combine the two versions before you found out the problem."

"Ah, indeed."

"At that time, no problems were discovered, so it doesn't matter if you only make the first version, or it's safer." Kato Megumi's eyes were gentle, "Senior sister also thought the same, didn't she?"

"Because you came up with a good idea."

"But this method is risky. It is obviously safer to only do the first version."

"But you put forward your own idea, which is still a very good idea," Kobayashi Sorao gently shook Kato Megumi's hand, "so I am willing to take risks for you."

Kato Megumi raised the corner of his mouth, "I know."

Kobayashi Kongqing laughed, "Then you still ask."

"I know, and I still want to hear you say it." Kato Megumin's long fingers penetrated into Kobayashi Kongqing's fingers, "That kind of talk a lot."

"I'm willing to take risks for you I'm willing to take risks for you I'm willing to take risks for you..."

"I haven't said it many times." Kato Megumi shook his hand, "Naughty."

"It's mainly because your method is indeed feasible, so we can make such great progress and discover problems that have not been discovered before." Kobayashi Kongqing smiled, "Judging from the current results, this kind of risk is worth it .”

worth.

"Is that so..."

"However, before you tell me the method, I want to try it."

"Huh?" Megumi Kato was curious, "Why?"