In addition, Kasumigaoka Shiwa participated in game production for the first time, so in Hashima Iori's view, this is the mistake Kasumigaoka Shiwa will inevitably make.

"But..." Kasumigaoka Shiu clenched her fists, her nails dug into her flesh, "No matter how I think about it, I can't imagine other heroines becoming happy with Seiji..."

Writing something is essentially hurting the enemy by eight hundred and oneself by one thousand.

If you want to impress your readers, you must first impress yourself.

If you want readers to accept it, you must first accept it yourself.

Thinking of ten points in the mind, leaving eight points on the pen is considered the best of the best, and in the eyes of readers, leaving six points is the rarest of all.

In the final analysis, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu himself didn't even think about the ending of other lines, so how could he write it.

Even if I barely write it out, it tastes like chewing wax.

Filled with a feeling of [ah, let's end it quickly].

"If senior sister can't think of it," Kato Megumi looked at Ying Lili, "then let Ying Lili draw it first, and then senior sister can think about it again?"

"Huh?" Ying Lili was taken aback, "Let me draw first?! Just a few lines of plot, how can I draw?"

"Hmm..." Megumi Kato thought for a while, "How about drawing in the direction that will most annoy my senior?"

"Hmm..." Ying Lili's eyes lit up, "I can do this."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu: "..." Hui, you really are that kind of character.

"Okay." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu flicked her long hair, "Ying Lili, as long as you can draw it, I can write it for you."

"That's what you said!" Ying Lili looked excited.

Draw a picture that makes Kasumigaoka Shiwa jealous, and then ask her to write a story.

This feeling is too exciting.

But... how to draw it?

What are you going to draw again...

Kobayashi Kongqing couldn't help lamenting the impermanence of fate.

In the past, there was a fanfic of Kasumigaoka Shiwa's light novels drawn by Yingli Li, but now it is reversed, and Kasumigaoka Shiwa wrote the fanfic of Yingli Li's illustrations.

With the help of the relationship between Kasumigaoka Shiwa and Eiriri, positively stimulate their creative enthusiasm, this is Kobayashi Kongqing's initial idea.

However, progress has not been very smooth.

And now...

Kobayashi Sorao took Kato Megumi's hand and kissed the back of her hand lightly.

It was finished easily by Megumi Kato.

"What are you doing?" Kato Megumi blushed.

"I want to kiss."

"You don't want to," Kato Megumi shook Kobayashi Kongqing's hand, "You kissed me."

"Then give me another kiss."

"Shut up."

Yingli Li: "..."

She seems to know how to draw.

With an idea in mind, she immediately began to write, keeping her ears shut.

Can't hear, can't see.

Kobayashi Kongqing also discovered more problems.

With the right direction of thinking, he was able to detach himself from the plot.

"The emotional description here is too detailed," Kobayashi Kongqing pointed to a description on the document, "so the music and illustrations can't play a role, and need to be streamlined."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu tapped the keyboard mark, "Is there any more?"

"Here, here... and here, wait a minute." Kobayashi Kongqing simply printed out the two scripts and marked the parts that needed to be revised.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu pursed her lips, did not say much, and immediately started to revise.

"Hui." Kobayashi Kongqing called softly.

"Huh?" Megumi Kato leaned over, "Is there anything I can do to help?"

"Yes." Holding Kato Megumi's hand, Kobayashi Kongqing hugged her into his arms, "I have sorted out my thoughts, and the rest is to write them out."

Kato Megumi glanced at the direction of Kasumigaoka Shiwa and Eiriri, "Then why are you hugging me..."

"In order to make the words I write more warm."

Kato Megumi twisted, "Sounds like an excuse to take advantage."

"Is it that obvious?"

"It's not obvious."

Chapter 257 It's You

"It's like this." Kobayashi Kongqing explained, "I'll type out the script later, if you feel bad, just tell me."

"Won't that interrupt your train of thought?"

"No, don't worry."

Kobayashi Kongqing has already sorted it out in his mind, and now he is just typing it out.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu glanced at him.

This kind of ability is the envy of anyone who lives on words.

"Okay." Kato Megumi asked a new question, "Then it's okay for me to sit next to you?"

"I want to hold you."

"Just hold it."

"..." Kobayashi Kongqing's gaze was easily captured by Kato Megumi's white nape.

"Don't bite... um~" Kato Megumi's voice changed halfway, and rose mellowly.

Inspired and inspired, Ying Lili bit her lower lip and sketched quickly, rustling.

Nian Gao meowed twice and found that no one paid attention to it, so a cat ran to eat cat food.

Kasumigaoka Shiwa tapped on the keyboard, muttering to herself, and the red notebook screamed.

As long as I type fast enough, dog food can't catch up with me.

In this somewhat serious atmosphere.

There is an atmosphere of incompatibility between the owner and the mistress of the house.

"Hmm... It would be better if there were cherry blossoms here, right?" Megumi Kato said, "It feels like flying all over the sky."

"Good idea." Kobayashi Kongqing put a bracket behind it, (cherry blossoms flying all over the sky).

"Is that enough?"

"Well, just leave the rest to Ying Lili."

"Would it be better to add an ending sound here?" Kato Megumi pointed to a line of dialogue, "For girls, adding an ending sound is quite cute."

"for example?"

"No, this kind of thing."

"Indeed...does the action here need to be a little more intimate?"

Kato Megumi was curious, "We're all hugging each other, how can we be more intimate?"

"Like this..."

"No..." Kato Megumi's voice was soft, "Work hard."

"It's part of the job."

"This is obviously one of the reasons you bully me - it's so itchy..."

In such an atmosphere, Kobayashi Kongqing wrote a part of the content extremely quickly. When he looked up, several hours had passed.

Xiao Lin Kongqing stretched his waist, and there was a sound from the joints behind him.

"It's about time for something to eat." Kobayashi Kongqing hugged the blushing Kato Megumi in his arms, "What do you want to eat?"

"I'm fine." Kato Megumi leaned against Kobayashi Kongqing's chest, feeling as if he had eaten a lot of candy, and he felt a little lazy.

It's all Kobayashi Kongqing's fault.

He was obviously writing a script, but he was not honest at all.

Although it is also working hard, it is working hard in another direction.

There is no such thing as him.

The male and female protagonists in the plot are obviously very restrained, but the person who wrote the plot is getting more and more presumptuous.

badass.

"Sister, Ying Lili." Xiao Lin Kongqing turned her head, "What do you want to eat?"

"..." Ying Lili glared at him, but said nothing.

not hungry.

Not at all hungry.

The senior is still typing on the keyboard, looking like a madman.

"Combine work and rest." Kobayashi Kongqing reminded, "It's time to take a break—senpai?"

"Kobayashi Kongqing..." Kasumigaoka Shiyu muttered and moved her lips, "You are actually distracted in the creation... Do you have any idea of ​​working hard?"

She raised her head abruptly, revealing a prajna-like face.

"There is not much left in the construction period, but you still have to eat at this time. Will you die if you don't eat or drink?"

"Yes." Kobayashi Kongqing replied naturally.

"If you want to eat, don't you have nails? There are also finger skins and the meat on the inside of your cheeks. If chewing those is not enough, eat your tongue!"

Kato Megumi shrank into Kobayashi Sorao's arms.

The current Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu is terrible.

"My previous efforts were to not fall into this situation." Kobayashi Sorao patted Kato Megumi on the back, "Okay, work is suspended, and we will conduct a staged summary after eating."

"I want to eat fried shrimp." Ying Lili looked up.

"Potato stew." Kasumigaoka Shiyu followed suit.

After eating, everyone put the results of their work on the table.

"I sorted out the general plot line, added connections before and after, and changed some options." Kobayashi Kongqing took the lead in summarizing, "During the modification process, I discovered some problems."

"Let's talk." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was already a little numb.

"The options are unreasonably designed. I checked most of the options. Except for the correct option, the other options are extremely boring."

"Otherwise?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu asked back, "I made a wrong choice, do you still want a positive response?"

"That's not what it means." Kobayashi Kongqing explained, "This is not a question, only the correct option. This is a game, so the option should make the player have the idea of ​​[what will happen if you choose this], not that this option obviously cannot be selected. a feeling of."

The options designed by Kasumigaoka Shiwa are full of a feeling of [choose this for my old lady].

And the result after choosing other options has a feeling of [letting you not choose that].

In general, somewhat arrogant.

"Options are the actions taken by the protagonist. The three options require different plot development directions. When the option is the heroine, there must be plot events that emphasize the characteristics of each heroine." Xiao Lin Kongqing took out the thinking guide he had organized. In the picture, starting from Chapter 1, the branches continue to increase according to the options, and then they are closed with different options. "I have a general context for the former, as for the latter..." Kobayashi Kongqing looked at Ying Lili.

"I drew a few pictures." Ying Li Li Chongxiazhiqiu Shiyu raised her chin, "I left them all to her."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu pursed her lips, obviously still immersed in the serious mistake Kobayashi Kongqing just made, and silently pushed out the printed manuscript.

The three of them circulated and flipped through it, then looked up at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu at the same time.

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