How to raise a passer-by wife

Although the two scripts tell the same story, the emphasis is completely different.

The first draft is love in this world, sweetness is hidden in the ordinary;

The second draft is the fate of the previous life, and there is sadness in the turmoil.

The cuter is naturally the first draft, and the second draft is even more tear-jerking.

In terms of overall balance, the first draft is stronger after all.

The most violent plot line must be the second draft.

I have to admit that after reading the second draft, I feel that the first draft of the story is a bit shallow.

This is not a difference in the degree of intention, but simply a different theme.

Compared with tragedies with a long aftertaste, family comedy itself does not have an advantage.

Also because of the theme, the first draft is a good product suitable for the public, while the second draft is a masterpiece in the hearts of some people who can match the radio waves.

At least Xia Shizi fans will definitely like it.

The first draft is mainly entertaining, and the second draft is mainly storytelling.

If a finished product is made, the first draft is the most harmonious version as a whole, and the second draft is completely unique to Kasumigaoka Shiwa.

Whether it is a masterpiece in the eyes of the public or a masterpiece in the eyes of a small audience, it can help Kobayashi Kongqing to secure his position.

Both are excellent, what a sweet annoyance...  

"A masterpiece for the masses, and a masterpiece for the minority." Kobayashi Kongqing said bluntly, "What's your decision?"

"I...I can't choose."

"Is this the work of the director?"

"But both scripts are excellent," An Yilun also looked at Kobayashi Kongqing, "Conversely, which one would you choose?"

"Can you be more skillful in shirking responsibility?"

Kobayashi Kongqing's idea is very simple. Both scripts are very good, so it doesn't matter which one you choose.

That being the case, pick one at random...etc.

【"If the problem is solved, everyone will be happy. If the conflict is temporarily suppressed, there will still be an outbreak."】

【"It's because I'm the author, so I know better. This city is such a city, but I just want to try it—for the last time."】

【"Think about it, my sister reminded me vaguely before that it was the last time, and now I'm working overtime to finish the script, and the progress of the light novel has also been put on hold. It means she doesn't want to delay the progress of the game production, doesn't it?"】

[Most importantly, which side do you like? 】

So...is that so?

All the fragments pieced together a complete picture at this moment, Kobayashi Sorao finally understood Kasumigaoka Shiwa's plan and thoughts.

After the problem with the script last time, Kasumigaoka Shiwa was just like what she said.

It doesn't solve the problem, it just suppresses the contradiction.

Soon, she has a new plan.

Wanted to try it out - one last time.

The plan is very simple, part of which was completed with the help of Kobayashi Kongqing.

The first is the release of the new book. In the book, the image of the senior sister and the active male protagonist are created to stimulate An Yilun to change.

An Yilun has indeed changed, but it is not the kind that Kasumigaoka Shiyu expected.

His change was not for his senior, but for his cousin, Michiru Bingtang.

But this is just a blip in the plan.

After the new book became popular, veteran otaku An Yilun would naturally not miss it.

But when he wanted to discuss the plot with Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, the senior was indifferent.

Only in this way can An Yilun realize how valuable the previous communication is.

When this awareness reached its peak, the second draft of the script appeared in An Yilunye's mailbox.

This is the continuation of "Love Metronome", the sublimation of the script outline, and Kasumigaoka Shiwa's last attempt.

Therefore, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu only gave An Yilun the second edition.

Others can make the game exactly from the first draft without delaying the progress.

Everyone can assume that the second draft does not exist.

In addition to An Yilun also.

"You are the director, this is your job content." Kobayashi Kongqing closed his eyes slightly, "Unless it affects the production progress of the game, I will not interfere."

"That's what you say..." An Yilun also scratched his head, "But how do you choose?"

"If you really don't have a clue, why not get out of the script and think about the author's intentions and the impact of the choice." Kobayashi Kongqing paused, "As for the standard, my sister has already said it."

"The most important thing is, which side do I like...?" An Yilun also murmured, "Xunli, and Liuli..."

Chapter 237 Only One Left

"So...the situation is like this." At Kobayashi Kongqing's home, Kobayashi Kongqing explained the situation to Kato Megumi and Eriri.

The two are reading Kasumigaoka Shiwa's second version of the script.

"Wow..." Kato Megumi blinked dully, "That's amazing."

"The development of the plot is completely different..." Ying Lili gritted her teeth, "If I was not in charge of the original painting of this work, and the number of original paintings that have to be added or changed until now has not appeared in my mind, I think I must very touched."

"That's right." Megumi Kato realized later, "If you choose the second edition, there are many places that need to be revised."

Kobayashi Kongqing shook his head, "Actually, it is not necessary."

"Huh?" Kato Megumi cast a puzzled look.

"Len is also entangled in the two scripts, which means that the two scripts are equally good, so either one can be produced." Kobayashi Kongqing explained, "Regarding this point, the senior sister also has the same idea."

"Huh?" Ying Lili made a suspicious voice.

"If you really have to choose between the two scripts," Megumi Kato followed Kobayashi Sooqing's train of thought, "Sister will send the script to everyone in the club."

Eriri was like a student who lowered her head and picked up a pen in a math class. She couldn't understand what Kato Megumi and Kobayashi Kongqing were talking about, "Then what is the second version of the script! Why did Kasumigaoka write it?"

"To put it more simply." Kobayashi Kongqing said bluntly, "We just need to continue the work at hand according to the first version, and leave them alone."

"Then what if Lun also chooses the second version?" Ying Lili asked.

You're the only one left in the club... Ah, and Michiru Hido.

"That's their business too." Kobayashi Kongqing replied.

"What..." Ying Lili wanted to say something, but suddenly realized the core of everything Xiao Lin Kongqing said.

A warm and cold truth.

The so-called second edition has nothing to do with the game club 【Kayingri】.

That was a private matter between Xiazhiqiu Shiyu and An Yilunya.

In the first edition, Hyundai Xunli is the protagonist of a well-deserved role.

In the second edition, Liuli, who is closer to Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, is the real protagonist.

The whole script is full of the taste of Xia Shizi.

If An Yilun also chose the second edition, he would have chosen Xiazhiqiu Shiyu.

When the time comes... Will I really be able to calmly create the second version of the original painting?

Ying Lili doesn't have that self-confidence.

Kasumigaoka Shiwa...have you even considered this?

Ying Lili reacted.

Just like Kobayashi Kongqing said, Kasumigaoka Shiwa had no intention of making a second edition from the very beginning.

An Yilun also chose the first edition, so there is no need to worry about the second edition.

An Yilun also chose the second version, and the second version will not be actually produced.

The amazing second edition is just a love letter written by Kasumigaoka Shiwa in the form of a game script.

This is a private matter between Xiazhiqiu Shiyu and An Yilunya.

No matter what An Yilun chooses, it has nothing to do with other members of the club.

Has nothing to do with... Yingli pear.

"Hmph, just right." Ying Lili snorted softly, "If the second edition is made, it will be completely unique to Xia Shizi, and Kashiwagi Eri's color will be completely obliterated."

"Eri Kashiwagi's color is better to be restrained." Kobayashi Kongqing reminded, "We are a game for all ages."

If Kashiwagi Eri had too many colors.

That is to become a pigeon to kill Matt - a perverted bird.

After setting the direction, it is naturally the daily work.

But I don't know why, Ying Lili is always absent-minded.

"Eriri," Kato Megumi asked with concern, "are you feeling unwell?"

"Ah... um." Ying Lili was stunned for a moment, "That... I... that..."

"That... ah." Megumi Kato thought of something, "Is it uncomfortable?"

"Yeah." Ying Lili nodded slightly, feeling a little uncomfortable.

"Sorao," Kato Megumi called, "Is there any painkiller?"

"Yes." Xiao Lin Kongqing got up to get it.

"Huh? No... um..." Ying Lili blushed, "That... I'm going back today."

"I send you."

"No... no need."

Ying Lili almost ran away.

Kato Megumi and Kobayashi Kongqing were left looking at each other.

"Alright." Xiao Lin Kongqing thought for a while, "Her family should have better medicine."

"Yes."

"Speaking of..." Kobayashi Kongqing looked at Kato Megumi.

"Don't tell you."

"I haven't asked yet."

"Then do you know the answer?"

"Understood." Xiao Lin Kongqing blinked, "By the way, it's a little early to disband today."

"It's earlier than usual." Kato Megumi packed up his things, "I can go home earlier today."

"Do you want to go home?"

"of course."

"It's okay to go back later." Kobayashi Kongqing suggested, "Father-in-law and mother-in-law get off work very late."

"Hmm..." Kato Megumi pursed her lips lightly, "Do you want to continue making games?"

"There's no need to be in such a hurry." Xiao Lin Kongqing shook his head, "Take a break, combine work and rest—what do you want to do?"

Kato Megumi thought for a while, "Then let's play a game."

"what?"

"how?"

"I thought I've been making games, you're a little tired of games."

"Indeed." Kato Megumi nodded, "But aren't there many types of games?"