How to raise a passer-by wife

"Just try your best." Ying Lili paused, "Try hard...to see clearly."

"Huh?" Bo Dao went out to sea and didn't understand.

"Winter COMI, please work hard." Kato Megumi encouraged, "I'm looking forward to your game."

"Ah...um!" Poshima went to the sea with a smile full of vitality, "I will definitely work hard!"

So, when Megumi Kato spoke, the atmosphere changed completely.

For the next few days, Kobayashi Kongqing was studying the script written by Kasumigaoka Shiwa.

He vaguely felt that HASHIMA Iori was not talking nonsense.

Coupled with the previous worries, he also had a bad premonition in his heart.

But no matter how many times I read it, there is no obvious problem with the plot of this script.

The uneasiness in his heart did not decrease because of this, but increased day by day.

Chapter 235 Can't Help

First of all, what can be confirmed is that the script is very good, the plot is smooth, and the dialogue is natural.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu used her own advantages to describe the details of the sweet relationship between ordinary couples very well, just like what she saw with her own eyes, and the picture has a strong sense of touch.

With Ying Lili's painting, the appeal can be raised to another level.

But Kobayashi Kongqing always felt a faint uneasiness in her heart, as if she had overlooked something.

"Are you still worried about the script?" Kato Megumi handed the grapes to Kobayashi Kongqing's mouth.

"Yeah." Kobayashi Kongqing ate the grapes, "I'm a little uneasy."

"Could it be him talking nonsense." Kato Megumi speculated, "There are often such things in TV dramas, the kind that play tricks and disturb the mentality."

"I can't rule out such a possibility." Kobayashi Kongqing nodded, flicking through the printing paper, "The problem is that compared to his interference, my uneasiness is more serious, and I always feel as if I've overlooked something."

"That's what you say." Kato Megumi tilted his head, "But aren't you the producer? Even if there is a problem with the script, there are other people who can help."

"Eh?" Xiao Lin Kongqing's eyes paused.

This is it.

He is the producer, responsible for the progress.

The review of content is the job of the supervisor.

He finally found the part he had overlooked.

Producer - An Yilun.

He hasn't had any feedback since the script was handed to him.

"Hiss..." Kobayashi Kongqing took a deep breath.

Because An Yilun was too hip before, Kobayashi Kongqing no longer had any expectations for An Yilun, and even ignored him.

In the past few days, all kinds of things have been piled up, and they didn't notice that An Yilun didn't report this matter at all.

The growing uneasiness stemmed from An Yilunye's silence.

"You are amazing!" Reminded by Keiichi Kato, Kobayashi Kongqing immediately reacted and kissed Megumi Kato on the face.

"Hmm..." Kato Megumi raised his hand and stuffed another grape into his mouth, "Not honest."

"It's uncontrollable." Kobayashi Kongqing defended.

"Have you ever restrained yourself?"

"No."

"Bastard."

"Conversely," Kobayashi Kongqing asked, "Have you ever restrained yourself?"

"Yes." Kato Megumi nodded.

"what?"

Kato Megumi looked away, "It is now."

That is to say... Kobayashi Kongqing reacted for a while, and instantly understood.

"Hmm..." The girl's low cry was followed by a tactful rise, full of joy rose from the corner of her mouth and jumped to the tip of her brow.

Kobayashi Sorao's contented face was reflected in his big watery eyes, Megumi Kato said softly, "The grapes seem to be a little sour."

"Ok?"

"I'll eat it for you after washing it." Kato Megumi's lips moved slightly, "Then you just like this..."

"How?"

"Bastard."

As it was getting late, Kobayashi Kongqing sent Kato Megumi home.

In fact, if we discuss it, Megumi Kato will also stay.

But Kobayashi Kongqing didn't want to embarrass her.

Leaving Kato Megumi's house, Kobayashi Sorao didn't go to her own house.

After being reminded by Kato Megumi, he finally understood the source of the anxiety in his heart.

Now, he was going to deal with this anxiety.

After ringing the doorbell several times, no one responded, just when Kobayashi Kongqing was about to take some necessary actions.

The door opened.

"Ah, Kobayashi." Michiyu Hido was a little surprised, and then showed a surprised expression, "That's great!"

"Clothes." Xiao Lin Kongqing put his hands in front of his eyes, "It's quite cold."

Michiru Hido dressed coolly as usual.

Hmm...too cool.

"Don't talk about this first, come in quickly!"

"...You add some clothes first, and then explain the situation."

"You're really awkward!" Bingtang Michiliu found An Yilunye's shirt and put it on, then brought Kobayashi Kongqing into the door and found An Yilunye.

"Woo... woo woo, eh... woo... woo... woo...!"

So Kobayashi Kongqing met Ai Lunya who seemed to be bullied by Fat Tiger Nobi Nobita.

"Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..." crying so hard that An Yilun even hit her Hiccup, seeing Kobayashi Kongqing, greeted with a sad face, "Hi... are you here?"

"I should have reminded you," Kobayashi Kongqing frowned, "Don't read it with the idea of ​​a fan, remember your identity as a producer, and find out possible problems in the script."

"I know that...but..." An Yilun's dark circles are also very obvious, and he has obviously stayed up lately, "Sister's script..."

"My side continues to advance the progress of the game production. You review the follow-up script and give feedback in time." Kobayashi Kongqing repeated what he said before, "You also agreed at the time, right?"

"I......"

"As a result, I've been crying for the past few days." Michiru Hido was not polite, "Ah Lun, this is not right."

Michiru Hido is a more casual kind of person, but in the process of composing, he will often communicate well with his teammates.

Bingtang Michiliu said what Kobayashi Kongqing wanted to say, leaving Kobayashi Kongqing with nothing to say.

"Forget it, let's talk about the key points." Kobayashi Kongqing suppressed his useless emotions, "How about the script?"

"Superb!"

"There are no serious minefields and content that is likely to cause players to hate, right?"

"Of course!" An Yilun also nodded vigorously.

"So, what's the reason you haven't had any feedback?"

An Yilun also showed despair, "I...I don't know how to choose!"

"Yes or no, what's so hard to choose?"

"No..." An Yilun also put two stacks of printing paper in front of Kobayashi Kongqing, "I don't know which script to choose."

"Ok?"

"After I got the script from you, I stayed up all night and read it several times. When I was about to give feedback, I received an email from my senior." An Yilun also turned on the computer, and clicked on Kasumigaoka Shiyu's email.

==

This is the second draft of the true ending line.

That is another possibility in the game.

Brother Lun Ye, make your choice.

First draft vs. second draft, which side is interesting, which side will be accepted, and which side will sell well.

Most importantly, which side do you prefer?

==

The attachment below is the second draft document.

Xiao Lin Kongqing's eyes were slightly closed, and he let out a long breath, "So you are stuck in a difficult choice and forgot to give feedback?"

"Sister's writing is really good!"

"Then why didn't you say it." Kobayashi Kongqing reiterated, "What about the feedback I want?"

"Yeah...sorry..."

Chapter 236 Cause and Effect

"..." Kobayashi Kongqing sat down and began to read another script.

"Uh... Kongqing?" An Yilun also asked tentatively.

"how?"

"Is that so?" An Yilun also lowered her head, "It's all my fault..."

"I am the one who chose you, so your mistakes are my mistakes." Kobayashi Kongqing replied, "After you realize that part of your mistakes, the rest of the blame is a waste of time-the primary goal now is Solve the problem."

"Mm...hm." An Yilun also nodded.

Kobayashi Kongqing quickly scanned the script, then put down the script and let out a long breath.

"How so, awesome, right? This is the sad love preacher, sentimental tear-jerker writer-Xia Shizi, that is, Shi Yu-senpai, who worked hard to write it..." An Yilun also asked endlessly.

"Indeed, I can understand your difficult choice." Kobayashi Kongqing nodded, "But..."

“I will definitely remember to give feedback next time!”

"En." Kobayashi Kongqing nodded.

Sorry.

Probably not next time.

"The development of the plot is completely different from the first version." Kobayashi Kongqing finally understood why Kasumigaoka Shiwa hasn't shown up recently, just like she said in the email.

Another possibility in the game.

She almost completely refurbished the script, and the plot is still smooth and consistent, so it can't be seen that it is the same story as the first draft.

Although it has been written once, the amount of work is still terrifying.

Although the development of the plot has changed drastically, the foreshadowing laid down bit by bit from the prologue is still as good as the first draft.

Moreover, the recovery method of the foreshadowing is not exactly the same, and the angle of interpretation has also been subtly changed.

The same sentence, in the first draft, expresses the mutual trust of the characters, but in the second draft it becomes the last words when they sacrificed for each other.

This kind of interpretation difference that reverses the tone of the whole story is distributed in every corner of the plot, and the integrity and interest are maintained at the original level.

Kasumigaoka Shiwa is so well written, it's like she prepared it in the first place...wait.

Kobayashi Kongqing recalled that when he first read Kasumigaoka Shiu's plot report email, he had the feeling that Kasumi Hill Shiu was at ease.

Now it seems that it is not an illusion.