Technician’s Manual
: Volume 5 Summary and Leave of Absence
Latest URL: From November to April, the fifth volume, which lasted for half a year, finally came to an end, almost as long as the longest second volume, which I did not expect. After all, in my plan, the length of the roll should be the same as a girl's skirt, and it should be shorter as it goes to the back, which is a big mistake.
The fifth volume is very tortured. In addition to the spiritual torture, there are also physical ones: I was gank by the new crown in December, I was gank by kidney stones in March, and I was gank again in April because I had to pull out the double J tube... Now I have 2 days a day Shengshui is rain or shine, readers who see here go to drink water!
Before talking about the fifth volume, I think it is necessary to talk about my expectation of the emotional line of this book before opening the book-that is, to stop at the ambiguous comrade-in-arms.
Yes, in my plan, the relationship between Ashura and Sonia, Deya, Weiser, and Vichy should be like moonlight until the finale, hazy and beautiful, shining but not blazing. Because it makes it easier to write a lot, and occasionally write about the Shura field that is not intense, so that their relationship can always stay at the level of campus love, and they can also avoid the intimate scenes that are very easy to be ganked, just like Ren Suo in the small world. Ash has been a virgin until the end - this is the most used and easiest route for me.
However, from the third volume, it started to go berserk. To put it mildly, it is "the author can't control the characters. It's awesome." To put it bluntly, it is "the author's writing level is too bad, it's rubbish." All in all, I will make a very sharp point. The topic is placed in front of the characters: the contradiction between Yaxiu's growing harem expectations and the heroine's desire for pure love.
To be honest, this is an unsolvable issue. I just can’t solve it in the small world, so I let Ren Suo’s virginity end, and then fooled it after changing marriage, but I don’t regret breaking this layer of paper—because it’s really interesting to write , hey hey hey.
But until the fifth volume, I was still avoiding dealing with this issue: to keep Yaxiu in a long-distance relationship with other people, to exchange space for time, so that everyone can't even meet the most basic emotional needs, and naturally it will not breed more. Advanced contradictions.
So at the end of the fourth volume, I really wanted to let Yaxiu continue to run with Igola and Harvey. The three-person group of condemned prisoners rampaged in the six hells, and the group of queens and princesses tried to break out of hell. It is also my usual handling method. It is a high-definition reproduction of the fourth volume, and then everyone is united to the end... But as you can see, the loved ones stay in the world, and the lonely people continue to trek.
I chose to end the long-distance relationship of the protagonist group, let them all get what they wanted, and let all the contradictions surface. Therefore, the main line of the fifth volume is two, one is "The Conflict between the Last Five and Ashura", and the other is "The Conflict between the Four Swordsmen and Ashura".
Only the concubine group has no conflicts with Axiu, but if the concubine forms the queen group, there may still be conflicts... The opposition party can't believe it!
What is more worth mentioning is that I added the setting of "sell your soul and you will lose your memory" to Yaxiu. The original intention was to go in the direction of sadomasochism, but as I wrote it, I felt that Yaxiu's sadomasochism was not in line with him. IQ, writing in the direction of sweetness, becomes "everyone takes advantage of Axiu's memory loss and quickly mobilizes the history books to revise the past", I feel that this taste is right.
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I've been thinking about three acts before I even open the book.
The first act is a pair of wings in the sea of knowledge.
The second act is the promotion trial of "knowing is coming" in Ruby Mountain.
The third act is the end of Death Maniac saying "Viewer, die with me".
This is one of the rare times that I carefully arranged the origin of the cheats obtained by the protagonist, and recycled the cheats during the writing process. Like Taipal, Ren Suo, and Leyu, I just plugged my cheat finger and finished the job. Why explain so much, let's face the blast!
The significance of the existence of the Last Five is not to foreshadow the recovery of "Aurora's Sorcerer's Manual". In fact, among the final five, the person I most want to write about is not the spectator, nor the death madman, but the black devil.
This is probably the doubt I had when I watched FSN. Would Red A be jealous when she saw Shirou who was happier than herself? Based on this idea, the group of the Last Five was born. When they saw that "the self in another world line is happier", what were they thinking?
Mirror Demon and Youmo are a control group. Although they are both indifferent, Youmo's indifference is "destroy it quickly", while Mirror Demon's is "I don't care". Death Maniac and Black Demon are also a control group. For another self who lives a happier life, Death Maniac is a sincere blessing, and Black Demon is jealous. I think this is a topic that is rarely seen in online articles. Even if most of them are from the good camp like death madness, so the black devil of the evil camp is the direction I most want to discuss.
In fact, if something like "I change my past me now" really happens, I think my mood will probably transition from a dead maniac to a black devil. At the beginning, I will be optimistic and see that "myself" is getting better and better. Just like developing a game character, I will continue to add equipment and skills to "myself", make up for past regrets, and satisfy unfulfilled wishes. But after passing a certain threshold, you will gradually start to envy "myself" for being so lucky, why you are so happy... In fact, the death madness also began to have this trend later, but she turned this resentment towards Sonia towards Asia Xiu let it out, she deliberately picked on Vichy because she hated Vichy, even Sonia could see Vichy's sincerity, couldn't Death Maniac see it? She just wanted to quarrel with Ashura more.
It seems that some readers are looking forward to the head-to-head confrontation between the viewer and Axiu, but Tingri never thought of letting them confront the wheat. The main reason is that Tingri feels that his pen is not strong enough to write it... The prototype of the viewer is Aizen, It is already the limit to establish his person through the description of others. If I describe the viewer and Ashura head-on, I feel that I can't write that flavor.
But just as Ash said to the black devil, the only person in this world who can understand her is the witch, and the only person who can understand the viewer is actually only Ash. The only contact between the viewer and Ashura was during the God Fire Trial of Sen Luojuan, and Ashura treated him like an older brother.
It was also from then on that I realized that the viewer and Axiu would never meet again. Because the viewer is not a death maniac, who can give everything for Sonia and Yaxiu; the viewer is not a black devil, who can accept his own crazy behavior... The viewer is the leader of the team, and everyone else can act emotionally. But he must be patient and patient to carry out the plan to the end.
When the viewer realizes that Axiu can touch him, he will never meet with Axiu again, and he will not give Axiu any chance to soften himself. This is in line with his cold and cautious character, and his rationality must always occupy Upwind, so I will not arrange their second meeting.
In fact, the Last Five and the Ash Five have never met each other, so I would occasionally imagine these reunion scenes in my heart——
The helpless viewers are shouldered by Yaxiu, like a naughty younger brother and a calm elder brother; Sonia happily dragged the madman to go shopping, she is the most beautiful two touches of red in the mall; Hei Mo and Diya are together in the amusement park Playing in the house, it is completely impossible to tell who is the sister and who is the younger sister; Mirror Demon and Weiser are reading the latest magic treatise at home. Ask Mirror Demon if he wants a drink; Specter and Vichy scramble to take care of her baby (Huh? Why is only Vichy having a baby?)
But in the end it's just a thought.
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The character cards of Niya and Deathcrazy have come out, so there are actually three sword girls in this book, the future, the main body, and the shadow. I hope these three sword girls can leave you with a different and beautiful image.
I haven't made up my mind about the next volume yet. Besides the outline, there is one more thing I need to deal with: the change of Ashura's status. In the first five volumes, Ash has been wandering and hiding his name. Even in the fifth volume, he only traveled to the five countries as a tourist, but in the sixth volume, he is already the only one who is actually the second highest. There are four six-wing fighters under his seat. force.
He is no longer a weakling who is always ravaged by fate, this time there is no existence above him, he is fate itself.
Even if he doesn't have this will, resources and power will naturally gather to him, his every move will be speculated by countless people, and his words and deeds can change the fate of countless people... He adapts to his new identity.
In addition, because the relationship between Ashura and Sonia has entered a new stage, there should be corresponding changes.
But in any case, the sixth volume is the final volume responsible for the ending, probably (at least I hope) it will not be very long, and it would be best if it can be completed in twenty or thirty chapters.
Speaking of this, I have to mention one thing. In February, Amao (not praying for ten strings) told me to finish the book in February, and I also said that the paper would be finished in February. As a result, he finished the book in early April, and I even delayed it until April. Late month... Now I see him every day without code words and I am very jealous!
I thought about the ending, before the book was opened, and I borrowed a very old-fashioned picture from a classic web article. However, after the ending, it will probably be like a small world, and write a few more chapters similar to the future talk.
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This time I should take two or three days off, not only because I was thinking about the syllabus, but also because I had a very serious sleep problem in the past half a month. I often woke up after sleeping for four hours, and I couldn't fall asleep no matter what. I am really a little scared now, whether it is exercise or conditioning, I have to solve this problem in the past few days.
Like today, I went to bed at 8:30 and woke up at 12.
I have to sleep for at least six hours at a stretch every day~www.readwn.com~ so that I can work with peace of mind.
In addition, I don’t know if it’s because of spring, I seem to be in heat, and I have a strong, uncontrollable desire to read romance comics every day (maybe I don’t just want to read romance comics, but at present, I only want to read romance comics. way), almost to the point of "I don't want to write until I finish reading it", so the update has been getting later and later these days.
I have watched several of them in the past few days, and the one that impressed me the most is "A Town with You", but I don't recommend you to watch it, don't turn around and scold me. By the way, why do Japanese comics not have I really don't want to be reborn, reborn, this kind of urban harem type, it's either a stomachache or a harem comedy, you can't have a stomachache, but is it still a harem...
All in all, it was very reasonable for me to take a few days off.
Take __ days off and come back!
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Next volume, Seven Heavens.
I wrote a testimonial at the end of the 3,000-word volume, so I updated it today, and I brought the monthly pass (reach out).
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