The Great God of Net Wen was reborn in 1927

Editor-in-Chief He felt that he was so attracted by this story that he couldn't extricate himself, so he heard Xu Shaoting say: "Then the plot after that is the opening of the world map. It is different, and the function of the country is also different. And the seven people have their own thoughts, and the plot changes from the creation of the country to the story of the war between countries."

"Of course, as the protagonist, he must be kind, compassionate, intelligent, and decisive, and he will be the one who wins in the end."

Editor-in-chief He nodded again and again, and praised him very appreciatively: "Wonderful! And then?"

Shaoting opened his eyes wide: "Then the story is over. The full text is estimated to be about 90 words, not more than 100 million words, and it will take about four to five months to finish."

Editor-in-Chief He smiled and said, "Of course I believe in your hand speed. Especially compared with other writers in our newspaper, you are simply the object they should learn from!"

Shao Ting smiled embarrassingly, and Editor-in-Chief He said: "I'm telling the truth. You don't know that those authors just cancel their manuscripts, and the excuses they find are even more bizarre. Some authors just went to attend the funeral of their grandfather. They ran more than once."

"Then let's stop talking here. I will also take your manuscript to the newspaper office to arrange the date of submission and proofreading." Editor-in-Chief He added disappointedly and longingly, seeing that the plot could not be dug out from Shaoting. Sigh! Why is the plot stuck here? You are so good at dictation, I think this is the talent of the authors."

When Editor-in-Chief He said this, he took his manuscript and his briefcase and left.It was only two days after we met again, and the serialization date of the novel was quickly finalized.Several years ago, the "Shanghai Morning Post" finished several novels, and now the newspaper is most in need of space.

In view of Shao Ting's hand speed and the fact that the plot of the novel was relatively flat in the early stage, a serialization of more than [-] words in three chapters per day was finalized, and the manuscript fee was doubled again compared with "The Great Way".Editor-in-Chief He can say without exaggeration that in the entire Shanghai stock market, there should be no novel that pays more than Qianfengmingyue.But whoever makes the entire Shanghai stock market can't find a second author who can write such interesting and novel themes.

There is also a small change. Editor-in-chief He suggested that the title of the article "I am engaged in infrastructure construction in a different world" should be changed.Aside from the fact that the title is too long, the title is indeed incomprehensible, and it is obvious that it has nothing to do with the title in the later stages of the novel.

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On the tenth day of the first lunar month, for the first time, there was only one novel serialized in one page of the novel page of the Shanghai Morning News.

But when everyone saw the bold print that read "Qianfengmingyue's new work "Our World"", they suddenly realized, no wonder the entire page was vacated, after all, Qianfengmingyue deserves such an honor.

There are also authors who feel sour and publish articles in other publications saying: "Shanghai Morning News" is not afraid of chilling the hearts of other authors, why not change its name to "Qianfeng Mingyue Morning Post".

Editor-in-Chief He responded directly the next day: You thought you had dedicated the entire page to Mr. Qian Feng, but I feel bad for serializing five chapters at once, because the author who was scheduled to deliver the manuscript went to his grandfather's funeral again!

Zhenzhen was also very naive, and asked Shaoting: "Is there a typo in the typography, how could it be 'again' for grandpa's funeral? A person cannot die twice."

Shaoting: "So this is an excuse, a fabricated reason for not submitting the manuscript."

Xu Yanran was rereading the newspaper with her hand. She always read Shaoting's manuscripts to help him correct typos and wrong sentences. When the newspaper was published, she would read it again. "A Great Way to Immortal Journey" was published at that time, and she read it again with the book in her hand.

Listening to Zhenzhen's innocent words, Xu Yanran sighed sadly: "I can see that apart from my sister-in-law, Zhenzhen is also a real person, but this is not a good point, alas..."

"But wasn't the name you decided on in the first place "My World"?" Xu Yanran asked curiously, "How did it become "Our World" now? The difference is not big, right?"

Shao Ting didn't know how to explain it. When he finally said the name to Editor-in-Chief He, he suddenly paused for no reason. Editor-in-Chief He said, "The name of "My World" is very simple."

Shaoting said: "Let's add another word, "Our World". What do you think of this name?"

Editor-in-Chief He read the work twice, and said with a smile: "There is a difference in one word, but there is a deep meaning. You have no problem, if you think it is suitable, then the title of the article will be the five words "Our World"."

The final result is as printed in a newspaper, but Shaoting did not expect to add the words "New Works of Thousand Winds and Bright Moons" specially, and the bold and enlarged ones are the same as the title. Every word has become a signboard.

Just like he didn't know, there are still many authors with the pseudonym "Mingyue Qianfeng", "Qianfengyueming" and "Qianfengyueyue".

In the initial stage of the serialization of the novel, and five chapters were released at one time, feedback can basically be received very soon.

Newspapers and periodicals are fast, and as expected, there will be various post-reading impressions of "Our World" published the next day.

The fastest running among them has to be said to be negative comments.

Classified, the negative/face/evaluation/valuation are mainly two points:

——A thousand winds and bright moons is also a talent to be able to make the next novel not to advance but to retreat. Those who don't know may think that this is a novel written by elementary school students.

——"A Great Way to the Fairy" is interesting, at least it combines our Chinese traditions. What is this "Our World" about?What did the protagonist do in the first five chapters?

Picking up branches?Fruit picking?Down the river to catch fish?And that building is also called a house?Who are you fooling by writing these things?Only children will see these things!

You Qianfengmingyue can't write anything, and you can't fool people like this!

Evaluations from an objective point of view also look questionable.First of all, I praised the clever use of the word "crossing" at the beginning, which is very attractive, and the little clay figurines described are also very cute. Although the writing style is more childish than "The Way of the Great Dao", it is smooth and natural, and the reading experience is still very good .

However, the comments changed the subject, and the novel only wrote five chapters on how to find food and drink, as well as picking up branches and finding wood and leaves to build a house, which is really puzzling.

However, with the jewels of "The Great Way of Immortals" ahead, I believe that Mr. Qianfeng's subsequent plots will be exciting and endless. There will definitely be various romantic characters on the stage, with a magnificent and romantic plot that is not inferior to "The Great Dao of Immortals".

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Shao Ting felt very complicated about these evaluations. He didn't take the negative/negative/evaluation/evaluation to heart. Seeing the evaluations of obviously old readers, he didn't know how to explain them.

The plot he first envisioned was a cool story in which the protagonist accepts a younger brother and receives a beautiful woman, but he forgot about it as he wrote it.At least for the first 40 characters, the protagonist is doing solid infrastructure construction, trying his best to expand the territory, and think of ways to build cities.

As a result, he had long forgotten the refreshing element of accepting beautiful women.There are a group of little clay figurines who are regarded by the protagonist as his own sons and daughters. After all, the protagonist watches them grow up one by one and teaches them to learn by themselves (more because of the system upgrade).

There are many little clay figurines who have turned into beautiful women, but everyone is committed to the development of agriculture, commerce, culture, and infrastructure, and is busy solving the problem of food and clothing for an increasing number of people. How can they have the thought to accept beautiful women and talk about romantic love? .

Even if there is, it feels like a country love story...

So seeing many old readers who are still looking forward to the same plot as "The Great Dao Xiantu", Shaoting is ready for the bad feedback of the new novel.