The Great God of Net Wen was reborn in 1927

On the eighth day of the Lunar New Year, the shops on the street resumed business one after another. Editor He was also preparing to go to work at the newspaper office with his briefcase, but he just went to Xu's house before going to work.

On the seventh day of the lunar new year, Shaoting sorted out the manuscript, and the new novel has written 25 chapters, with a total of about [-] words.

Although it is the first time to write an infrastructure novel, such novels usually have a lot in common with the farming novels in the early stage.If it weren't for the torture of writing traditional Chinese characters, Shao Ting felt that he would have absolutely no problem writing [-] characters a day.After all, in a sense, the early plot is indeed quite "running account".

Although the plot and rhythm points are stuck at the end of each chapter, this is already an essential skill for experienced web writers. No matter how watery the beginning and middle of a chapter are written, it is full of invalid information, but the plot must be left at the end point.

Later generations of Shaoting have seen some literary scholars comment on online articles, and this issue was mentioned in them——

The authors of web articles pay too much attention to writing skills and the entertainment of the story, thus ignoring the literariness of the story, so it is only natural to be evaluated as fast food literature.

To be honest, when I was 17 years old, I read this paper on Internet literature and listed the name of my own novel. After reading it, I thought about it for a long time, and went to ask a certain master who is also a professor of business administration on the same website and a part-time author of Internet novels.

The great god replied, I will recommend some books to you, and you will know what literariness is.

Then looking at the list of books sent by the Great God, Shao Ting was silent for a while, and answered honestly: I have read too many online articles, and I can't read such serious literary works for a long time.

The great god sent a [stroking] emoticon package to comfort him: It’s okay, you are still young, as the saying goes, you know etiquette when you are real, and you know honor and disgrace when you have enough food and clothing. First, you must ensure material tolerance, and then pursue the spiritual realm. the correct order.There is nothing wrong with Maslow's theory of needs.

Master: Halo... I forgot that you are only seventeen and haven't gone to college yet. Maslow needs to go to Baidu by himself.

Master: If you have the chance, consider re-studying. After all, you also need to communicate with peers, and you must have friends of the same age in reality.

Great God: And always alone, it will be very lonely, kid.

Shaoting replied back then: God, you should read less literature about youth pain.

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When Editor He came to Xu's house, he was warmly welcomed by the elders of the young court. He was eager to read the novel, but Xu Yanran and Zhang Shifei pressed him to drink a cup of hot tea first.

After hurriedly drinking more than half of the cup and filling up with tea, Editor He finally came to Shaoting's study, and saw Mr. Qian Fengmingyue doing his own gymnastics against the study window.

Seeing him coming, he asked, "It's so early? Editor-in-Chief He, have you had breakfast yet?"

"I'm so full right now." Editor-in-Chief He quickly waved his hands, begging for mercy, "Don't let me fill my belly again."

"Are you so full from breakfast?" Shao Ting was stunned, "Would you like some exercise to help you digest food?"

"No, no, just show me the new novel first." Editor-in-chief He sighed, "Since you called me yesterday, I can't wait to fly over to read the manuscript immediately."

Having reached this point, Shao Ting stopped talking, and the finished manuscripts had already been sorted out and neatly placed on the desk.

Editor-in-Chief He sat directly at the desk, and saw him with a solemn expression, holding up the stack of manuscript paper with both hands, bathed in the golden sunshine of the morning, and his whole person unexpectedly felt a little more holy.

Shao Ting looked at it with embarrassment, and those who didn't know it thought that Editor-in-Chief He was touting some precious jewelry and fragile items.This probably means that as long as Editor-in-Chief He is not embarrassed, then the one who is embarrassed is him who is watching.

After a few seconds of embarrassment, he continued to do radio gymnastics, and the study temporarily fell into silence.

After editor-in-chief He finished it, as a professional editor, even if he read these 25 chapters carefully, his reading speed was far faster than ordinary people.

Seeing Editor-in-Chief He put down the manuscript, Shao Ting pulled a chair and sat down facing each other. Seeing the middle-aged man frowning, his heart tightened. To be honest, he really has no confidence in this novel.

At least the feedback given by Mrs. Zhang and Xu Yanran is far inferior to "The Great Way and Immortal Journey".The two also commented that the plot and concept are very interesting, but in terms of follow-up reading, the two of them are not as impatient as they were in "The Great Dao of Immortal Journey". They both can't wait to read the next chapter after finishing one chapter.

And they are even more confused about the system that will appear later.

Zhenzhen's feedback is the best, she has to be the first reader every day, and Shaoting still wonders if his sister is giving him face.However, he later found out that Zhenzhen really liked the novel, so he was a little relieved.

The little girl also said to her mother and aunt: "What is difficult to understand about the system, it is no different from the old grandfather who gave the protagonist cheat books and elixir in "The Great Dao of Immortal Journey"."

But the children liked it, and the feedback from the adults was just not bad. Now facing the senior editor, Shaoting was already planning to fail the draft.

Editor-in-Chief He frowned and said, "There are other people like the protagonist. Are these people also from time travel? Are they from the same place as the protagonist?"

Editor-in-Chief He finished asking and was waiting for an answer, so he looked at the young man in front of him and heaved a sigh of relief.He looked carefully again, and said with a smile: "Mr. Qianfeng is a little fatter than before, and his complexion is much better. I said that you are too thin to look good, and you still look thin now. You need to eat more meal."

Shao Ting said: "Don't frown all the time, Editor-in-Chief He still smiles more kindly."

Editor-in-Chief He: "Hey! Don't change the subject, you haven't answered my question yet."

Shao Ting thought about it, sorted out his thoughts, and told the overall plot of the story to Editor-in-Chief He.

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The protagonist of this story is Xuanyuan Ye, a 16-year-old handsome boy with black hair and black eyes.Xuanyuan Ye comes from the future, a peaceful age where there is no war and all people receive education.

When he woke up, he was already lying in the wilderness. At first Xuanyuan Ye thought he was tricked by someone to come here.But beside him, the two little clay figurines that were only as high as his knees, running and jumping around him vividly, made him realize that this matter was a bit out of the ordinary.

On the first day he woke up, Xuanyuan Ye took two little clay figurines who never left him, and found water sources and edible fruits. Through the fruits and plants, he recognized that they were all species he knew. At this time, Xuanyuan Ye still thought I am in the original world.

Until he tried to get out of the wilderness under the mountain, he found that there was an invisible but real transparent wall blocking him.In addition to being terrified, Xuanyuanye put a few leaves on the first night and slept next to the little clay figurine.

The following plot is that Xuanyuan Ye took the little clay figurines to make tools, pick up branches, find ways to make fire, and build simple houses in order to survive here.

Then, after an extremely simple house was successfully built, the system was born out of nowhere, and the house was upgraded to a masonry structure. The little clay figurines had flesh and blood and five sense organs, and turned into two boys as big as Xuanyuan Ye.At the same time, ten little clay figurines appeared.

Through the dialogue with the system, Xuanyuan Ye learned that if he wanted to return to his own world, he had to build a complete country.At the same time, in the process of his construction, every time he reaches the achievement of passing the system evaluation, his infrastructure will be automatically upgraded, and small clay figurines and materials will be provided.

So Xuanyuan Ye started the process of leading the little clay figurines, first building a house for them to live in, and then developing from a village to a town and then to a country.

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When Xuanyuan Ye brought a group of little clay figurines, Shaoting suddenly understood, and felt that he knew why Zhenzhen liked this novel so much. It seemed that it really suited the children's taste.

In the early stage of the story, if Editor-in-Chief He is also from the future, after watching Survival in the Wild, you will find that there are many overlaps.It mentions a lot of knowledge about survival in the wild, including identifying herbs, finding water sources, distinguishing directions through the sun, moss, and tree rings, and the story of Xuanyuan Ye catching grasshoppers and roasting them because he couldn't eat meat.

In the first 25 chapters that Editor-in-Chief He has read so far, a new plot point has appeared. Xuanyuan Ye discovered another human being who has a small clay figurine and a system, and needs to build a country just like him.

The following plot has not yet been written, and even the outline is not complete. Shao Ting can only roughly explain to Editor-in-Chief He: "This new person is called Li Mo, and he comes from the same world as the protagonist. But unlike the protagonist, Li Mo Mo treats all the little clay figurines as slaves, and the little clay figurines Xuanyuan Ye picked up is one of the slaves he sent out to find the border."

"Through the little clay figurines, the two know each other's existence. Xuanyuan Ye found that the upgraded little clay figurines are just like human beings. They also have flesh and blood, feelings and thinking. He taught them to read and write, and treat them as human beings like himself."

"Li Mo completely treats the little clay figurine as a slave. Even if it is an upgraded little clay figurine, what he instills is the idea of ​​the dignity of a slave and a slave owner."

"The protagonist cannot agree with this kind of value at all." Shao Ting said, "Refused to cooperate with Li Mo, and the two separated. The area where Li Mo is located is also far away from him. According to Li Mo's plan, the two seem to be There will be no day when we will meet again. Afterwards, the plot will enter into town construction, the transparent walls will disappear, and Xuanyuan Ye will start to walk out of the small town that has already been built, leading more people and little clay figurines to build new towns."

"A long part of the story behind is town construction, which is divided into port city construction, mining city construction, central city construction, and commercial city construction..."

Shaoting said several nouns in one breath, and Editor-in-Chief He's eyes widened when he heard it. When he heard that several cities were connected to form a complete territory, Editor-in-Chief He was already fascinated.

Shaoting: "Just as the country was taking shape, a man with the mark of a slave found him covered in blood."

"From the mouth of this slave who does not belong to his own country, Xuanyuan Ye heard a somewhat distant name."

"Li Mo, the country was destroyed by the third systematic person."