The next door neighbor is a sick girl [Comprehensive]

No one expected that during the first-year preparatory subject entrance examination of Hope's Peak Academy, a very sad thing happened in the afternoon English subject test. The listening equipment in the examination room malfunctioned strangely. The frequency of the sound is unstable, loud and small, which affects the listening test of all candidates.

After the exam, Hinata Tsutomu was stunned: "My hearing is over. I can't hear clearly at all. It's all down to me."

"Hope's Peak Academy has such an unfortunate thing that makes the examinees despair... My hearing this time is all due to deception..." Komaeda Nagito propped his chin thoughtfully, and then he was full of hope He laughed brightly like a cook, "Perhaps, this is the trial that Hope's Peak Academy gave us scum. Even this little despair can't be overcome, and I don't deserve to be admitted to Hope's Peak Academy. Despair , will always be just a stepping stone of hope! Could it be Hinata-kun, you don’t even have this awareness?”

It was the first time to face Hinata Sou who witnessed a certain white-haired maniac preaching, and Asakawa Airi who came to pick up Komaeda Nagito and went home for dinner together: "..."

Komaeda Nagito replied to Asakawa Yun's concern about the exam with a smile on the dinner table.After each exam, Komaeda Nagito listened to the exchange of answers around him, and silently estimated his own score.

The thought of being able to continue to the same school as Airi-chan made Nagito Komaeda feel very happy, and he even ate a full bowl of dinner excitedly.Speaking of which, he has grown to 1.8 meters taller than a year ago, and even gained ten catties, all because of eating and drinking at Asakawa's house for a whole year... He hasn't even touched instant noodles for several months...

Contrary to a certain excited Hope Chef, Asakawa Airi was a little too anxious to eat.

The results of this week's questionnaire, "Super Power Girl" ranked No. 11, only one improvement from last week.

I am a vest, who am I afraid of: Is it only me who feel that the plot is not as exciting as when it was a school festival?Feeling more and more boring and a little disappointed.

I just want to watch shonen manga: I think so too.The plot is so slow, after waiting for a week, the result is still in daily life.I'm tired of watching the plot of Cookie, when can I make trouble!This is "JUMP", not a manga for girls!

Ta sauce: I think Da Da draws very well!Call for the sweet plot!Looking forward to the confession confession confession!

Enkidu: I hope the plot will enter the next chapter soon, especially looking forward to the follow-up!

Azusa Kirikawa: I have been waiting for the second volume of the book on June [-]th!Definitely a hit! ! !

Jin'an: Come on, look forward to the update, I always feel that I can't get enough of it~

An Jiu: It's been so sweet lately~ But I'm afraid that Mrs. Pear Jam will set the flag.

In order to make troubles, I gave up naming: Our goal is: to make troubles!Make trouble!Make trouble!

Ha ha da passerby A: Did the author brush up the comments and get good reviews? ? ?There are still people watching such a bad plot.Are all the new writers on "JUMP" at this level?

The number of fans of Pear Sauce who loves painting has risen to 50. Originally, it was full of soft and cute comments, but since the serialization of "Super Power Girl", Asakawa Airi has more and more fans. It's also getting more complicated.Except for some soft and cute readers, those who seriously discussed the plot, left messages to urge updates, complained about the plot in a pointing tone, and those who thought it was not good went to Twitter to post bad reviews and criticize the plot everywhere.

The explosion of comments occurred during the two-week hiatus of Asakawa Airi, and most of them were reminders.

However, Makoto Kibou slammed all DISS Asakawa Airi or DISS "Super Power Girl" back, and Asakawa Airi's fans all said that this person who doesn't use swear words and repetitions is full of hope. A super high school class fighter.

Although there are fans' caring maintenance, Asakawa Airi will still feel depressed when she sees these □□, even if only one out of a hundred is a bad review, it can make her good mood disappear for a day.

Such negativity springs up like mushrooms from time to time, and Asakawa Airi begins to feel unconfident that maybe there is really a problem with the rhythm of the plot, and readers think that it is not good-looking, it must be because of their own poor drawing...

How should I draw to make readers like my comics more, and how should I draw to make the ranking of the questionnaire go up... I can't fall any further...

After struggling, Asakawa Airi took out the original outline and went through it again.In the outline, there is often a one-sentence plot, and she can draw a whole story in detail... The story is really procrastinating... She can always add more and more branch lines and draw longer.

So, Asakawa Airi modified it to speed up the progress, and then seriously started to draw the name of the next chapter.

Just when everyone thought it was too sweet, the plot of "Super Power Girl" suddenly reversed. Bai Mao said that he had been using the heroine, and left the school with the villain after he was done.The painting style in the comments turned into crying again. Although the ranking in the questionnaire rose to No.9, Asakawa Airi's mood did not relax.

Looking forward to the sweet Mo Ying: Pear sauce, don't abuse me, I believe that Bai Mao didn't do it on purpose... There must be some misunderstanding!He must be involuntary!

Xiao Zhi: Caught off guard by a knife QAQ

Untitled Song: I'm sorry I don't dare to say hair glass anymore! (.)

Justice: I want to be sweet!Don't let the heroine misunderstand the hero!Quickly let the heroine save the hero!

Mr. Fan. :sugar!sugar!sugar!

猫炲潶川: Shocked. jpg Madam, can you tell me about how long the abuse will take_(:з」∠)_I’ll come back to see it after the abuse is over

Cherry Wolf Dream: I'm sorry, I'll get fat first too...

Hehehe passerby A: This kind of misunderstanding plot is a bit rotten, the heroine's IQ catches the chicken!

I'm the heroine: Bai Mao is not likable at all, I still don't like him, I hope he won't become the hero.

After the plot began to abuse, after reading the comments on Twitter, Asakawa Airi began to feel at a loss again.

Do you really want to continue drawing according to the previous outline?If it is too cruel, will the readers abandon the pit?In this way, the ranking of the questionnaire is about to drop again... No, it can't fall any more... If it falls any further, she will...

It seems to be disturbed by invisible... Asakawa Airi's painting is getting more and more restrained... I can't let it go here and I can't bear to start... Her inspiration for the story is gradually drying up, and the storyboard draft is getting harder and harder. Not to mention, continuous The ranking is around No.10 for a month, and such a result is obviously impossible to become a best-selling work.

But even so, in order to promote the second volume of "Super Power Girl", the editorial department still decided to hand over the coloring page of Chapter 29 to Asakawa Airi for drawing.

"Weekly Shonen Jump" is released every Monday, No.20 Episode [-] happens to be on June [-]th, and the second volume of "Super Power Girl" is released on June [-]th.Whether it is a single book release or a front page, it is an opportunity for Asakawa Airi to rise in the ranking.

It has been serialized for nearly eight months. Asakawa Airi also painted the frontispiece once in the seventh chapter, and then was honored to draw the cover of "JUMP" once when the questionnaire ranked first for three consecutive weeks, and then painted the frontispiece again pages and two color pages in volume.

The first frontispiece coloring page showed a white-haired boy hugging a little white cat on campus and smiling very gently. This statement officially made this white-haired deskmate a male protagonist.The questionnaires and Twitter comments of that week almost all said that the picture of the front page is very warm!

It is indeed very warm.

Asakawa Airi still remembers that in December last year, a lost white milk cat ran into Shio Middle School. It was very clean and very close to her. When she saw Asakawa Airi and Komaeda Nagito passing by, she trotted to Asakawa Airi’s place. He rubbed his feet desperately, and then lay down on the ground and rolled.So, Asakawa Airi, who couldn't walk when she saw the cat, immediately fed her lunch, petted and hugged the little white cat and held it high.

Asakawa Airi was having a good time masturbating the cat, but Komaeda Nagito was standing beside her, looking at her and the cat.He didn't take the initiative to approach and touch, but his eyes were so bright that they revealed desire.

Asakawa Airi suddenly remembered that her boyfriend once said that she likes small animals very much, and she even raised a puppy before, which exists like a family member...

Thinking that I had a great time masturbating the cat, but I didn't let the other party enjoy it. Although I was a little bit reluctant, I still hugged the little white cat into Komaeda Nagito's arms, and then saw my boyfriend hugging him in a panic. The cat couldn't help laughing out loud.

Asakawa Airi couldn't imagine how Komaeda Nagito raised a dog when he was a child. Last year he mentioned that the relationship between the two was still very stiff when he raised a dog, so he didn't ask any further questions, but Asakawa Airi always felt that he loved small animals. Boys are super kind and caring. Boys who are liked by small animals must also be gentle and good-looking.

Sure enough, the little white cat looked at Komaeda Nagito with its big eyes open, and rubbed its head obediently on his chest, and Asakawa Airi saw Komaeda Nagito was slightly stunned, and the movement of stroking the cat was skillful and gentle , gently coaxing the cat with his original suave voice, his whole body exudes a warm and masculine aura.

It's beautiful, it's really... super beautiful!

Thinking that I used to think, like Miota Yubuki, that a shit-stirring stick like Komaeda Nagito must have abused small animals since childhood, Asakawa Airi felt her face was a little swollen...

So much so that when I conceived the frontispiece color picture that night, my mind was filled with such a gentle and beautiful scene.

She was still quietly thinking excitedly in her heart: Since Komaeda also likes cats, she can raise a cat together in the future~~~ Exist like family!

Asakawa Airi, who has a big brain hole, the plot of the seventh chapter also has such a scene: the heroine ran into a white-haired deskmate who was bandaging a kitten with a leg injury under the wisteria tree on the campus, and immediately Go forward and use the superpower of the healing department to cure the kitten.

Bai Mao hugged the cat and thanked the hostess with a smile.Originally, although the two were at the same table, they had no intersection, but after this incident, the two secretly raised this little white cat together on campus, and their relationship became closer and closer.

Airi Asakawa drafted the frontispiece very smoothly.Coloring begins after a single pass of drafts and line art at the editor.The coloring was also done in one pass without any modification at all, and was praised by the editor for injecting emotion into it.

Rational use of the law of warm and cold changes in color has a strong expressive force and artistic vitality.

Compared with black-and-white comics, Asakawa Airi's coloring style has such characteristics.

The cover of "JUMP" drawn by Asakawa Airi is after No.13, after the heroine blackened and caused trouble.The heroine on the cover has half an angel's gentle smile and half a devil's evil smile, directly pointing out that the heroine has a blackened personality under her normal identity.

For the last two coloring pages in the volume, Airi Asakawa always had various inspirations in his mind, wishing to draw all his characters on the coloring pages to show his face.

Therefore, upon receiving the good news from the editor of Gangura, Airi Asakawa was nervous and looking forward to it, and because of the lack of self-confidence brought about by the recent unsatisfactory results, she felt uneasy and anxious.

Can I really draw the frontispiece this time?

It will be the end of June in two weeks, and the rankings of No. 20, No. 30 and No. [-] are very important to her.

What kind of content should be drawn to make readers like it more?

Asakawa Airi revised the plot over and over again, but no matter how she drew it, she felt that the picture was a bit dry, so this time she didn't hand over the name of No.20 Episode [-] until Sunday.

Expressing her slow apology to Editor Gangura, Airi Asakawa anxiously waited for the editor's review, but when Editor Gangura looked at her NAME, her brows were tightly knit together.

Every time he finished reading his comics, he always had a gentle smile on his face, and even though his ranking had slipped, he still encouraged himself with a smile on his face.But now he closed NAME very seriously, and asked in a very stern tone: "Asakawa, what's going on with this plot? Is it your own thinking?"

"Ah?" Asakawa Airi was a little confused for a moment, and hurriedly replied, "After reading the comments on Twitter and letters from readers, I found that some readers felt that the plot was too cruel, and some readers mentioned a lot of things about the plot. Suggestion, I think it's good... so I tried to add some readers' opinions..."

"Asakawa!" Editor Gangpu scolded quickly, "This is a top taboo! Why did you make the same mistake as Yacheng Mu Mengye!"

"The same mistake...?" Airi Asakawa's eyes widened.

In two months, Majoko did not escape the plot of the original work after all, and was hospitalized due to a weakened liver function. The serialization of "Suspect Detective TRAP" was temporarily suspended by the editorial department.After he was discharged from the hospital in May, he continued to serialize "TRAP", but at the beginning of June, last week, due to lack of popularity due to the three-month hiatus, he was announced to be cut in half within five weeks.

"If it's an opinion that fits well with your own work, it's not a bad thing to add these ideas. But Asakawa, you care too much about those comments. Every sentence is influenced by comments. It has become more and more Deviating from your original outline. Some of the comments hope you will start abusing quickly, some hope you write warm dramas, some hope you write fighting dramas, some hope you write emotional dramas, and some don’t want you to write... You can’t be everyone’s Everything you like is taken into account. If you accept everything indiscriminately and disrupt your original original settings, your own comics will become such a mess and fragmented thing!"

"You have to think clearly about what you want to draw and what you want to express in comics!"

"I'm sorry..." Her throat seemed to be strangled by something, and Asakawa Airi had difficulty breathing.This is the first time she has been severely criticized since drawing manga.She only felt that her whole body fell into the ice cellar together.

Seeing Asakawa Airi's eyes were red, Gangura editor also realized that his tone was too harsh.

He can feel that Asakawa Airi is working hard to draw well, and every time he interacts with readers, he is the most active, and he will read letters from readers carefully.

Her comics have always been able to integrate her own emotions to resonate with readers. This is Asakawa Airi's advantage, but it has gradually become her disadvantage.She has soft ears and is too easily influenced by comments, especially when she serializes long comics.

Once the mood fluctuates, the plot becomes uncontrollable, being influenced by others to the point where I completely lose my previous confidence and control over the plot.

Of course, the state is not right recently, and it may also be because both parents were hospitalized after the car accident and my father has not yet been discharged from the hospital, and the publication was suspended for two weeks before, so I haven't fully adjusted my mentality...

After all, I'm just a middle school student, and I have to take care of my studies, take care of my parents, and serialize long manga, so my body can't bear it...

The Hong Kong editor who mistook it for this factor could not help softening his voice and added: "Now the questionnaire ranks in the middle, and the result is not too bad. You don't have to worry too much, and don't force yourself. Although the plot is too cruel, it will inevitably drop some Ranking, but if this emotional climax point is portrayed, it will definitely make the ranking rise suddenly. And the second volume will be published soon, and the serialization meeting will definitely be no problem. So, calm down and deal with the plot, Go slowly at the original pace, okay?"

Asakawa Airi buried her head very low, clenched her fists slightly on her knees, and nodded with a sore throat: "Editor Koura, I'm really sorry...I will definitely change the name and give it to you as soon as possible."

"If Chapter 20 of No.30 is too late for the opening color page, it can be changed to Chapter [-]."

In order to ensure the quality, the editor of Gangpu felt that the time should not be too rushed, but saw Airi Asakawa shook her head quickly and said: "No, editor of Gangura! I will definitely finish it within the stipulated time! Please believe me."

No one expected that the next day, the Kanto area of ​​Japan was ravaged by a typhoon. The violent storm all day caused a total of more than 40 flights to be cancelled, railways were suspended one after another, traffic operations were greatly affected, and even two people died, at least 29 people. Injuried.

This thunderstorm also directly caused a sudden power outage in the community where Airi Asakawa is located.In order to catch up with the manuscript, she took out the candle and drew in the dim candlelight.

After the port editor left, Komaeda Nagito felt the gloom of Asakawa Airi.Since Asakawa Yun was discharged from the hospital, Asakawa Airi has been drawing in her room, even more desperately than when she first serialized last year.

It is really tiring to draw a weekly magazine. He has to keep his brains open and maintain a stable level of serialization... and Asakawa Airi's hard work makes him feel like he is being oppressed by eager emotions.

Thinking of so many things that have happened in the past one and a half months, Komaeda Nagito feels very sorry for Asakawa Airi, who is desperately ignoring her own body, and wishes that she can help Asakawa Airi paste the dot paper.

"Airi, just let me know if you need anything."

"I don't need anything, just be quiet." Airi Asakawa grabbed her hair and said impatiently, "Don't randomly enter my room and affect my painting."

"I'm sorry." Putting the water glass gently on the table, Komaeda Nagito replied with some disappointment.

In the early morning of the next day after the typhoon passed, Asakawa Airi, who woke up staring at the dark circles under her eyes, suddenly received a call from her editor.

Due to the low terrain, the publishing house's warehouse was soaked by the rainstorm, and almost all the books in the warehouse were damaged by the rain.

Asakawa Airi hurried over to save her booklet, but saw that there was still water on the floor of the warehouse, and the staff of the publishing house were cleaning it, and many soaked cardboard boxes and quilts were piled up by the wall in a mess. The second volume of the booklet, which she had already printed and was about to release on the [-]th, was unfortunately destroyed a week before the release date.

The publishing house suffered heavy losses, and the release date of the single book of "Super Power Girl" was finally postponed due to force majeure, and the specific publication date has become unknown.

Asakawa Airi returned to her room and continued to draw, and Komaeda Nagito's rambling echoes echoed in her ears: "Such an unfortunate thing happened, I am so desperate... But everything must be a stepping stone to hope! Don't be discouraged, Airi! I believe that the second volume will be republished soon!"

No!Not at all!

There is an overwhelming lack of time, enough to make people anxious and maddened.

Asakawa Airi doesn't want to waste even a second now.

My mind was full of thoughts about what to do.

There is no single book for me to reverse sales, only the questionnaire is the only way to go, and I have no way out.

I can't lose my ranking anymore!No, because there is no time to let myself slowly climb up...

The author has something to say: Airi is very impatient, Airi is very impatient, and Airi is also very scared┭┮﹏┭┮

原本应该写到爱梨焦躁起来的原因的，但……啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊都12点了，来不及写了先更新吧哭！ ! !

Then I realized that I forgot to apply for the list. If there was no list for a week, I shivered and realized that I could update slowly again.