Street Fighter Rescue System
Chapter 3
Zuo Jia was dumbfounded when he called "Master".
"What are you calling me?" Zuo Jia suspected that he had heard wrong just now.
The elite man glanced at the candidates who were answering questions in the classroom, and sighed: "Let's go out and talk."
The two came to a room that looked like an office next to the examination room.
After sitting on the sofa, the elite man adjusted his glasses and finally spoke:
"Master, you should calm down, otherwise, once the half-year assessment period is over, you will have to honestly follow the chairman back to Country M."
Zuo Jia: ...
It seems that the identity given to him by the system is not ordinary!
After thinking about the amount of information contained in the words, and comparing the information he had known so far, Zuo Jia felt that it was necessary to clarify the current situation.
After all, if the amount of information is not equal, it will suffer a lot.
"Can you answer my two questions first?" He carefully glanced at the elite man—very good, with a calm expression.
"First, who are you? Second, what are those people next door doing?"
The elite man sighed softly, and adjusted his glasses again: "I am Shen Yue, secretary to the chairman of the Zuo Group. The chairman is worried that the young master is alone in the country, so he sent me to assist the young master in his work."
"The ones next door—it's just a routine exam." After speaking, he looked at Zuo Jia with a look of "answers are over".
This style of answering questions is really familiar.The casual questions were answered quite standardly, and the things I really wanted to know were perfunctory.
Zuo Jia complained wildly in her heart: Shen Yue?hehe. ——Actually, you still have a nickname, "Two Five Eight".
Fortunately, I have many years of precious brain-burning history forced out by Internet articles, and my brain-supplement skills are outstanding!
Zuo Jia quickly completed a more reasonable explanation in his mind.
I am now in an amusement park called "Dreamland", which belongs to Zuo's Group.And I am the young leader of the group, and I came to "Dreamland" to do business management, and there is a "little brother" named [-]——no!It's called Shen Yue.The people who took the exam next door are probably the employees who came to apply for the job.
Brainstorming to this point, Zuo Jia guessed that the real assessment given by the system might be the management of this amusement park.Such as: within the specified time, let the amusement park get on track or something.
With the direction of hard work, the next step is to practice.The first step is the screening of employees.
Those "dancing demons" next door should be sorted out, and don't recruit anyone to the company.
Thinking of this, Zuo Jia said cautiously: "Well, those employees next door who came to interview should have an interview or something before the written test. I think some people are not suitable for the work here."
After hearing this, Shen Yue looked at Zuo Jia with a foolish look: "Young Master, what nonsense are you talking about? Those people are all visitors to the garden, how can they be confused with employees!"
What?
"What problem do you come to visit the garden?" My brain seems to be unable to keep up with the changes in the situation.
"The company stipulates: In line with the attitude of being responsible to tourists, before tourists visit the park, they must carry out systematic training of the company, and the company will conduct a unified assessment. The purpose is to let tourists understand the characteristics of our amusement park in advance, avoid danger, and facilitate Tourists can better experience our various entertainment facilities." Shen Yue replied solemnly.
Zuo Jia was shocked!The three views have been shattered into dregs.What kind of weirdness can come up with such a perverted rule!
Thinking of the "big brother" who took the case and handed in a blank paper, and thinking of the whole family who are still suffering, the black lines on Zuo Jia's face.The people left here have such iron heads!
— Ding Dong!
——When the number of candidates is detected to decrease, the score of the writer is "-1".
The timely insertion|insertion of the system tells Zuo Jia that the "head" is actually not that strong.
It is a miracle that the company survived in this way!
"That—this regulation will be canceled from today! You go and inform everyone, there is no need for exams!"
Tourists come to the amusement park to relax. The process should be happy and the mood should be pleasant.Who would make an exam disgusting!
It's putting the cart before the horse!
Zuo Jia exercised the power of the Zuo family's young master.
The system is messing around like this, obviously to make troubles, and we must set things right before the situation expands.
"I'm sorry, young master, you have no right to make changes to the company's regulations now." Shen Yue poured cold water on Zuo Jia.
"Why!" Zuo Jia almost jumped up.The ding-dong sound continued.It was probably because the invigilator left, so everyone finally couldn't bear it anymore and decided to be normal again.
"The chairman said that before the young master has learned and mastered the operating conditions and management regulations of the amusement park, he must not exercise any management power." Shen Yue threw another blockbuster.
Zuo Jia raised his forehead, if this continues, all the tourists will definitely disappear.Fortunately, negative scores are not displayed.No matter how many points are deducted, the total score is still "0 points".
Fortunately!
It seems that I have to use the anti-failure knowledge of the university to "catch the buddha's feet temporarily".Pulling out the cheat book from the dusty corner, dusting off the dust, Zuo Jia said like a strong man breaking his wrist:
"Whatever you want to see, take them all out!"
Time passed minute by minute.
After finally reading all the documents, Zuo Jia no longer heard the "ding dong" sound.
Looks like it's all gone.Zuo Jia simply didn't think about it.
Fortunately, he finally got Shen Yue's approval, and finally he could start to rectify the amusement park.
First of all, the inhumane abnormal examination must be cancelled.
For the precautions of each project, the company will uniformly make a display board and place it next to the corresponding project, which is convenient for tourists to browse.
Set up road signs at the fork in the road to facilitate the guidance of tourists.And set up service stations scattered in the park to facilitate manual guidance and answer questions for tourists...
In fact, at this point, Zuo Jia vaguely understood the "experience" that the system said.
Zuo Jia has a bad habit of writing essays—that is, he likes to describe a large paragraph of foreshadowing at the beginning of the essay.The larger the structure of the story, the more detailed the description.
Take the novel "Dreamland" as an example.Because it is about the battle between the gods and demons.
So as soon as Zuo Jia came up, he described in great detail the overall structure of the God Realm and the Demon Realm, the distribution of continents, the hierarchy among the gods, and the various struggles between the gods and demons for thousands of years, which caused the current situation. Reasons for intolerance, etc.
Zuo Jia spent a lot of pen and ink on the background of the world, especially afraid that readers would not be able to understand the grand world he wanted to describe with empathy.I'm also worried that if I don't explain clearly, it will be very abrupt when I write the story later, which may cause readers to be unable to keep up with the development of the story because they don't understand the background of the story.
Although he has received many kind reminders, Zuo Jia has been determined to go his own way.In addition to being too obsessed with the background of the story he described, there is another important reason.That is, the main line of the story and the world that I have described are not perfect and comprehensive enough.
He is always worried that if he does not introduce clearly at once, he will have logical bugs due to missing important plots when he writes later.
So it was like completing a task, explaining everything clearly in one brain.
I am happy to write, but it hurts the readers.The bitterness of it can be regarded as a real experience today.The moment Zuo Jia saw the test paper, he wanted to slap his ass and leave almost immediately.
Now that I think about it, isn’t the overall feeling that the previous cramming-style background description brings to readers the same as an exam?
Readers read the story, but they don't know what you are writing, and they are stuffed with "knowledge points" in their minds. It is strange not to abandon the text.
It's as if tourists ran to "Disney" with great interest, and were stuffed with a test paper before entering the door, and were told to answer the questions first, and then they could only enter the park after passing the pass.At this time, even if someone told him how much fun it was, the reaction of a normal person would definitely be to swear, and then pat his ass and leave.
Zuo Jia was thinking, when the notification sounded in his ear again:
——The current score of the writer is "0 points".
——Familiar with the operation status, facility construction, and management regulations of "Dreamland". +5 points
- Abolish the unreasonable examination system. +5 points
——The cumulative score of the writer is "0 points".
——After the scores are broadcast, please continue to work hard!
Zuo Jia, who was about to be sublimated into a "thinker", was instantly beaten back to his original "sand sculpture" form under the "demon" of the little bitch of the system.
“258!你会不会算数!5+5=10,你说!你是不是少说个‘1’!”
System 258:
——The system detects that the writer has a lot of negative points.The score obtained by the writer is not enough to offset the original negative score.
——Not displayed due to negative scores.
——The cumulative score of the writer is "0 points".
——The system verification is completed, and no abnormalities are found, please make persistent efforts!
Zuo Jia: ...
Co-authorship not displayed does not mean no statistics.System This is a good word game!Feeling like crying, Zuo Jia began to feel sorry for the lost points.
Recalling the number of people in the classroom just now, Zuo Jia's scalp tingled.
Oh my God!How many points will be deducted!
"258, can we start again?" Zuo Jia asked pitifully.
He made up his mind that if he could do it all over again, he would go to Shen Yue to obtain the management authority of the amusement park as soon as possible, and then quickly abolish the rubbish examination regulations before the first buddy made a fuss.Guaranteed not to lose a single visitor!
System 258:
——The system can be refreshed. After the system is refreshed, the writer will lose all the data before the refresh, as well as the points obtained.
——The system detects that there is still one candidate in the examination room, and the refresh will randomly reset the information of all candidates.
——Are you sure to refresh?
Just as I was about to say "Confirm to refresh", I suddenly heard that there are still candidates who have not left.Zuo Jia was shocked!
After the system's point deduction reminder stopped, Zuo Jia assumed by default that all candidates had left.Now I heard that there are still people left.In addition to being shocked, Zuo Jia was almost dead of curiosity.
What kind of person is that!It has remained until now.
"Don't refresh yet!" Zuo Jia hurriedly interrupted the system operation.
He couldn't wait to see, what kind of immortal was left behind, who was so stubborn!
According to the system's settings, "candidates" should correspond to "readers". The people who stayed behind must have true love for their own articles!
Zuo Jia greeted Shen Yue, and went out, with a delicate mood, to find her "true love".
Shen Yue, who was behind him, watched Zuo Jia's leaving figure. After a while, he silently took out a small notebook and wrote a few lines:
Mistake 90: There is a large background at the beginning of the article, and readers cannot quickly enter the storyline.Persuasion rate: [-]%
Mistake 70: The author's understanding of the story he wants to describe is not clear enough, and the logic is confused.Abandonment rate: [-]%
Solution: Before writing, clarify the main line of the article, make an outline, and clarify the relationship between characters.The beginning of the article goes straight to the theme, guides readers to quickly enter the storyline of the novel, and intersperses the background of the story that needs to be introduced step by step and skillfully in the novel.
Status: Fixed!
After finishing writing, Shen Yue closed the notebook.After looking at the word "Zuo Jia" on the cover, he silently stuffed the book back into his pocket, as if what happened just now had never happened.
"What are you calling me?" Zuo Jia suspected that he had heard wrong just now.
The elite man glanced at the candidates who were answering questions in the classroom, and sighed: "Let's go out and talk."
The two came to a room that looked like an office next to the examination room.
After sitting on the sofa, the elite man adjusted his glasses and finally spoke:
"Master, you should calm down, otherwise, once the half-year assessment period is over, you will have to honestly follow the chairman back to Country M."
Zuo Jia: ...
It seems that the identity given to him by the system is not ordinary!
After thinking about the amount of information contained in the words, and comparing the information he had known so far, Zuo Jia felt that it was necessary to clarify the current situation.
After all, if the amount of information is not equal, it will suffer a lot.
"Can you answer my two questions first?" He carefully glanced at the elite man—very good, with a calm expression.
"First, who are you? Second, what are those people next door doing?"
The elite man sighed softly, and adjusted his glasses again: "I am Shen Yue, secretary to the chairman of the Zuo Group. The chairman is worried that the young master is alone in the country, so he sent me to assist the young master in his work."
"The ones next door—it's just a routine exam." After speaking, he looked at Zuo Jia with a look of "answers are over".
This style of answering questions is really familiar.The casual questions were answered quite standardly, and the things I really wanted to know were perfunctory.
Zuo Jia complained wildly in her heart: Shen Yue?hehe. ——Actually, you still have a nickname, "Two Five Eight".
Fortunately, I have many years of precious brain-burning history forced out by Internet articles, and my brain-supplement skills are outstanding!
Zuo Jia quickly completed a more reasonable explanation in his mind.
I am now in an amusement park called "Dreamland", which belongs to Zuo's Group.And I am the young leader of the group, and I came to "Dreamland" to do business management, and there is a "little brother" named [-]——no!It's called Shen Yue.The people who took the exam next door are probably the employees who came to apply for the job.
Brainstorming to this point, Zuo Jia guessed that the real assessment given by the system might be the management of this amusement park.Such as: within the specified time, let the amusement park get on track or something.
With the direction of hard work, the next step is to practice.The first step is the screening of employees.
Those "dancing demons" next door should be sorted out, and don't recruit anyone to the company.
Thinking of this, Zuo Jia said cautiously: "Well, those employees next door who came to interview should have an interview or something before the written test. I think some people are not suitable for the work here."
After hearing this, Shen Yue looked at Zuo Jia with a foolish look: "Young Master, what nonsense are you talking about? Those people are all visitors to the garden, how can they be confused with employees!"
What?
"What problem do you come to visit the garden?" My brain seems to be unable to keep up with the changes in the situation.
"The company stipulates: In line with the attitude of being responsible to tourists, before tourists visit the park, they must carry out systematic training of the company, and the company will conduct a unified assessment. The purpose is to let tourists understand the characteristics of our amusement park in advance, avoid danger, and facilitate Tourists can better experience our various entertainment facilities." Shen Yue replied solemnly.
Zuo Jia was shocked!The three views have been shattered into dregs.What kind of weirdness can come up with such a perverted rule!
Thinking of the "big brother" who took the case and handed in a blank paper, and thinking of the whole family who are still suffering, the black lines on Zuo Jia's face.The people left here have such iron heads!
— Ding Dong!
——When the number of candidates is detected to decrease, the score of the writer is "-1".
The timely insertion|insertion of the system tells Zuo Jia that the "head" is actually not that strong.
It is a miracle that the company survived in this way!
"That—this regulation will be canceled from today! You go and inform everyone, there is no need for exams!"
Tourists come to the amusement park to relax. The process should be happy and the mood should be pleasant.Who would make an exam disgusting!
It's putting the cart before the horse!
Zuo Jia exercised the power of the Zuo family's young master.
The system is messing around like this, obviously to make troubles, and we must set things right before the situation expands.
"I'm sorry, young master, you have no right to make changes to the company's regulations now." Shen Yue poured cold water on Zuo Jia.
"Why!" Zuo Jia almost jumped up.The ding-dong sound continued.It was probably because the invigilator left, so everyone finally couldn't bear it anymore and decided to be normal again.
"The chairman said that before the young master has learned and mastered the operating conditions and management regulations of the amusement park, he must not exercise any management power." Shen Yue threw another blockbuster.
Zuo Jia raised his forehead, if this continues, all the tourists will definitely disappear.Fortunately, negative scores are not displayed.No matter how many points are deducted, the total score is still "0 points".
Fortunately!
It seems that I have to use the anti-failure knowledge of the university to "catch the buddha's feet temporarily".Pulling out the cheat book from the dusty corner, dusting off the dust, Zuo Jia said like a strong man breaking his wrist:
"Whatever you want to see, take them all out!"
Time passed minute by minute.
After finally reading all the documents, Zuo Jia no longer heard the "ding dong" sound.
Looks like it's all gone.Zuo Jia simply didn't think about it.
Fortunately, he finally got Shen Yue's approval, and finally he could start to rectify the amusement park.
First of all, the inhumane abnormal examination must be cancelled.
For the precautions of each project, the company will uniformly make a display board and place it next to the corresponding project, which is convenient for tourists to browse.
Set up road signs at the fork in the road to facilitate the guidance of tourists.And set up service stations scattered in the park to facilitate manual guidance and answer questions for tourists...
In fact, at this point, Zuo Jia vaguely understood the "experience" that the system said.
Zuo Jia has a bad habit of writing essays—that is, he likes to describe a large paragraph of foreshadowing at the beginning of the essay.The larger the structure of the story, the more detailed the description.
Take the novel "Dreamland" as an example.Because it is about the battle between the gods and demons.
So as soon as Zuo Jia came up, he described in great detail the overall structure of the God Realm and the Demon Realm, the distribution of continents, the hierarchy among the gods, and the various struggles between the gods and demons for thousands of years, which caused the current situation. Reasons for intolerance, etc.
Zuo Jia spent a lot of pen and ink on the background of the world, especially afraid that readers would not be able to understand the grand world he wanted to describe with empathy.I'm also worried that if I don't explain clearly, it will be very abrupt when I write the story later, which may cause readers to be unable to keep up with the development of the story because they don't understand the background of the story.
Although he has received many kind reminders, Zuo Jia has been determined to go his own way.In addition to being too obsessed with the background of the story he described, there is another important reason.That is, the main line of the story and the world that I have described are not perfect and comprehensive enough.
He is always worried that if he does not introduce clearly at once, he will have logical bugs due to missing important plots when he writes later.
So it was like completing a task, explaining everything clearly in one brain.
I am happy to write, but it hurts the readers.The bitterness of it can be regarded as a real experience today.The moment Zuo Jia saw the test paper, he wanted to slap his ass and leave almost immediately.
Now that I think about it, isn’t the overall feeling that the previous cramming-style background description brings to readers the same as an exam?
Readers read the story, but they don't know what you are writing, and they are stuffed with "knowledge points" in their minds. It is strange not to abandon the text.
It's as if tourists ran to "Disney" with great interest, and were stuffed with a test paper before entering the door, and were told to answer the questions first, and then they could only enter the park after passing the pass.At this time, even if someone told him how much fun it was, the reaction of a normal person would definitely be to swear, and then pat his ass and leave.
Zuo Jia was thinking, when the notification sounded in his ear again:
——The current score of the writer is "0 points".
——Familiar with the operation status, facility construction, and management regulations of "Dreamland". +5 points
- Abolish the unreasonable examination system. +5 points
——The cumulative score of the writer is "0 points".
——After the scores are broadcast, please continue to work hard!
Zuo Jia, who was about to be sublimated into a "thinker", was instantly beaten back to his original "sand sculpture" form under the "demon" of the little bitch of the system.
“258!你会不会算数!5+5=10,你说!你是不是少说个‘1’!”
System 258:
——The system detects that the writer has a lot of negative points.The score obtained by the writer is not enough to offset the original negative score.
——Not displayed due to negative scores.
——The cumulative score of the writer is "0 points".
——The system verification is completed, and no abnormalities are found, please make persistent efforts!
Zuo Jia: ...
Co-authorship not displayed does not mean no statistics.System This is a good word game!Feeling like crying, Zuo Jia began to feel sorry for the lost points.
Recalling the number of people in the classroom just now, Zuo Jia's scalp tingled.
Oh my God!How many points will be deducted!
"258, can we start again?" Zuo Jia asked pitifully.
He made up his mind that if he could do it all over again, he would go to Shen Yue to obtain the management authority of the amusement park as soon as possible, and then quickly abolish the rubbish examination regulations before the first buddy made a fuss.Guaranteed not to lose a single visitor!
System 258:
——The system can be refreshed. After the system is refreshed, the writer will lose all the data before the refresh, as well as the points obtained.
——The system detects that there is still one candidate in the examination room, and the refresh will randomly reset the information of all candidates.
——Are you sure to refresh?
Just as I was about to say "Confirm to refresh", I suddenly heard that there are still candidates who have not left.Zuo Jia was shocked!
After the system's point deduction reminder stopped, Zuo Jia assumed by default that all candidates had left.Now I heard that there are still people left.In addition to being shocked, Zuo Jia was almost dead of curiosity.
What kind of person is that!It has remained until now.
"Don't refresh yet!" Zuo Jia hurriedly interrupted the system operation.
He couldn't wait to see, what kind of immortal was left behind, who was so stubborn!
According to the system's settings, "candidates" should correspond to "readers". The people who stayed behind must have true love for their own articles!
Zuo Jia greeted Shen Yue, and went out, with a delicate mood, to find her "true love".
Shen Yue, who was behind him, watched Zuo Jia's leaving figure. After a while, he silently took out a small notebook and wrote a few lines:
Mistake 90: There is a large background at the beginning of the article, and readers cannot quickly enter the storyline.Persuasion rate: [-]%
Mistake 70: The author's understanding of the story he wants to describe is not clear enough, and the logic is confused.Abandonment rate: [-]%
Solution: Before writing, clarify the main line of the article, make an outline, and clarify the relationship between characters.The beginning of the article goes straight to the theme, guides readers to quickly enter the storyline of the novel, and intersperses the background of the story that needs to be introduced step by step and skillfully in the novel.
Status: Fixed!
After finishing writing, Shen Yue closed the notebook.After looking at the word "Zuo Jia" on the cover, he silently stuffed the book back into his pocket, as if what happened just now had never happened.
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