genius editor

Xuanyuan regretted that night, he made a fuss too much, and was provoked because of a small editor's slight contempt... He began to reflect that it is really not a good thing to have too much self-esteem.

In fact, his abandonment of writing back then was not only due to the competitive pressure that Tan Si put on him, the climax ending was too difficult to write was also a big reason.He became popular with his first book, and a famous author often spreads a lot of dishes, and the ending is desperate, which is because the story frame has not been done yet.At that time, he felt vaguely that he really couldn't do this, so he wrote half of it, threw it there and ran away.Suddenly asking him to pick it up and continue writing, this decision was a bit hasty.Once he screwed up, where would he put his face, the name "Xuan Yuan" would be removed from the altar.

And how can writing things sell land to make money...

Xuanyuan opened Weibo distractedly, and browsed through the message records.He seldom appears in public, so a post on Weibo can always cause a sensation among readers, and the messages are all "The writer my grandma chased after has finally been updated".On the one hand, he felt that readers did not care about leaving messages. On the other hand, he felt that there were too few messages. He was picky in two dimensions, quality and quantity, and finally he didn't bother to reply to any of them.

However, when he was pulling down the private message, he saw a message: "Master, would you like to write an outline?" It was particularly eye-catching in the list of private messages expressing love, talking about advertisements, and adding followers.

Xuan Yuan: "..." I'm really fucking bewitched today.

Xuan Yuan sent a "don't write" back, and the other party quickly replied with a series of replies.

"Hello, I am a small editor. The young author and I grew up watching your books and are your dead fans. My young author writes very well, but he doesn't like to write outlines. Can I trouble you to tell me that you write it, so that I can go back and persuade him【Bixin.jpg】”

Xuanyuan looked at the ID on the top bar, it was either Xiaotian or Xiaoxian

It was that silly x without a doubt.

He looked at the wall clock at night again, it was past eleven o'clock in the evening, and he was still thinking about this matter... Xuanyuan felt strangely a little bit ironic.

As a great god, his love and admiration for readers has long been numb, and it is difficult for him to be moved by this.But now he has a new identity, a young rookie with nothing.There are actually people in this world who care about that little vest who is nothing, and who are thinking about him after get off work, so they go to ask for a word of encouragement from the high-ranking Da Da Da... If it works, it is really lost to him.

Xuanyuan: okay

It's not Xiaotian, it's Xiaoxian: Oh!Then I will ask again!

It's not Xiaotian, it's Xiaoxian: Daddy, do you write the outline?Xuan Yuan: write, write, write, write

Not sweet but salty:

Great!Well~ I hope you can fill in the hole soon! ~

It didn't take long before Xuanyuan's mobile phone QQ was poked and shaken.His silly editor took this screenshot and came to show off to him, trying to persuade him to write an outline and a new book.Seeing him jumping up and down, Xuanyuan couldn't help laughing: "You're a fake. A god with more than 3000 million followers, would he care about you?"

Tian Tian rolled on the bed: "Xuanyuan is doting on me! I've always been a European! Go back and write a few topics, I'll review them for you, make an outline, and publish it quickly after writing. Books! If I, a European, make books for you, you will definitely be popular!"

Xuanyuan picked up the phone and sent a message to Brother Liehuo, and after three seconds, he called Brother Liehuo: "Your attitude is not good, I want to change the editor."

Brother Lihuo: "Big QAQ, I'm afraid there is some misunderstanding..."

Xuanyuan: "I sent you a message, but you didn't reply in seconds."

Brother Lihuo: "QAQ, I'm still typing... I can't type that fast..."

Xuanyuan: "Then I will change to an editor who can type very quickly."

Brother Liehuo: "Big QAQ, can you see if our Xiaoye can do it, and the second prize in the typing competition..."

Xuanyuan: "I want to change editors other than Ye Shun."

Brother Liehuo: "How about Zhuang Mo!"

Xuanyuan: "..."

Xuanyuan: "What Zhuang Mo, I've never heard of it, don't."

Brother Raging Fire: "..."

Xuanyuan: "I'm going to write the finale of "Dusty Smile" next, and I need a 24-hour online editor who is on call to discuss the outline and plot with me."

After all the calculations, Brother Li Huo only had Tian Tian the most empty: "Is it okay to be young and have low qualifications?"

Xuanyuan: "It doesn't matter."

Brother Lie Huo pushed Tian Tian to him.

Xuanyuan thought for a while, adding both numbers might be a waste of time: "I will send you the outline at that time, you can pass it on to him."

Brother Raging Fire: "Why?"

Xuanyuan: "Why do you ask so many questions?"

Brother Raging Fire QAQ: Obviously you asked for it!

A few minutes later, Xuanyuan's other mobile phone rang again.

One mouthful of salt: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

A mouthful of salt: Oh my god!Xuanyuan Dashen is the author of our company!The editor-in-chief just called and said that he wanted to fill in the "Dust Smoke and Smile" series, and asked me to review the outline together, and I asked him to sign it privately!

Multi-dimensional elements: Yes, when the time comes, share a wave, let's discuss and learn together

One bite of salt: OJBK!

Multi-dimensional elements: the great god filled the hole, you lost the bet

One bite of salt: I am willing to die!

Multidimensional Element: You just like him that much

A mouthful of salt: Nonsense!He is my white moonlight and cinnabar mole!

Multidimensional Elements: Then what am I?

One mouthful of salt: who are you?

Multidimensional elements: ...

Drag black.

Tian Tian thinks today is a really good day, although his author drags him down every day, but the master is going to fill in the hole!Satisfied and went to sleep.And Xuanyuan stayed up half the night, watching traitor Tian Tian's Weibo, and finally saw bloodshot eyes, and only read half of it-this stupid x is reposting the marketing account every day, the screen is full hahahahahaha, people can't stop come down!

From the next day, Zhuang Mo disappeared from the editorial department, and he didn't know where he went.Tian Tian has a lot of things on his hands, and there is no time to be sad for a while.

He first signed a continuation contract with Ash Cleaning.This is the first time he has signed a contract with the author, and the terms hurt his eyes. He really admires Ye Shun for being able to recognize the reasons for each of them, what is the mystery behind them, and which words to change can set the author off. In order to protect the interests of the company to the maximum extent... Ye Shun is simply like a conspirator.Fortunately, this is a full copyright contract, not even the right to authorship, and the author can get nothing but money, otherwise Tian Tian is really afraid that he will be torn up with him.

However, it seems that it is the first time to sign a contract, and he happily signed his name, not caring about what rights Jingyu took away from him.In his eyes, Jingyu gave him 10 yuan, and it is okay to take him away.

"Hmm... so his name is Ren Mingqing." Tian Tian received the courier, glanced at the neatly written handwriting, and placed it on Brother Lie Huo's desk proudly.

His second task is to help Xuanyuan make an outline.This is not a simple matter, he had to read "Dust and Smoke" again, and asked the multi-dimensional elements to sort out the clues and foreshadowing together, anyway, he himself said that he wanted to "discuss" and "learn" together.

Xuanyuan soon became bored with this work. "Dusty Smile" has nearly 140 million words, and there are many holes dug there that seem to be impossible to fill. His mind is a mess.

Multi-dimensional elements: If you want me to say it, just write it directly, wherever you write it counts.

A mouthful of salt: That’s not acceptable, Xuan Yuan has already set a good precedent.If he didn't count what he wrote, you wouldn't be clueless now.The outline is a kind of regulation about "what kind of story to write".You see, "Dusty Smile" is essentially a fantasy martial arts novel, so he has determined the theme and direction, and will further define the content of the story.Can you sum up the story of "Dust Smoke Smile" in one sentence.

Xuanyuan recalled his original intention of writing this novel.

Multi-dimensional elements: I want to write a story about ten continents and three seas.

One mouthful of salt: No, that's not the case, it's too general.Give me character, cause, effect.How the protagonist is at the beginning, what transformation he undergoes, and what he becomes at the end of the story.For example, "The Count of Monte Cristo" is a story about a young sailor who was murdered and imprisoned for many years and became the Count of Monte Cristo for revenge.

Multi-dimensional elements: The story of a despised illegitimate son who inherited a mysterious ancient sword and strives to become a master.

Yikouxian: That's right, so the story of "Dusty Smile" should be written around the purpose of how Bai Xin went from a humble illegitimate child to the top of the world step by step.However, Xuanyuan wrote more than 140 million characters, and Bai Xincai, I think he is trying to cheat.He spread too big a plate.

Xuanyuan: "..."

The world view is too big, there are too many things I want to write, and the protagonist is only 18 years old after writing six books. I am really sorry.

Yikouxian: So far, the focus of the story has been on the ebb and flow of several forces. None of these forces belong to Baixin himself. It feels like he is just a bystander and has not yet gained real power.

Multidimensional elements: Then how do you say it should be written?

One mouthful of salt: According to the normal rhythm, Baixin should be set up at the beginning of the chapter; then a big disaster is given to him, which makes him fall into the bottom of the valley; he also got the golden finger by coincidence.In this way, he has a sense of substitution and particularity as the protagonist, and the main body of the subsequent articles will be written around how he rises up, without digressing at all.Generally, the protagonist in the story has a subjective goal that he wants to achieve, and he keeps striving for it, as if fighting monsters and upgrading maps in the game, so that the main line will be clear.If the protagonist doesn't know what to do, the reader will follow and be very confused. "Dusty Smile" is a good article, but have you ever felt that each of his incidents has nothing to do with Bai Xin.Bai Xin is just wrapped up in this historical torrent, bumping into walls everywhere.I don't know when he will rise, it looks like a prequel.

Multidimensional elements: Isn’t the routine you mentioned just the routine of web articles?Internet articles are always just Internet articles, but "Dust Smoke Smile" is a masterpiece.

One mouthful of salt: If you look down on web articles, at least it will be over.We are going to be at the bottom of the pit forever.

Xuan Yuan couldn't help cursing in a low voice: "You are the one who wants me to end, and you are the one who bad-mouths me."

Multidimensional elements: Then what do you say?

Multidimensional elements: If it were you, what would you do?

Yikouxian: It's very simple, use the finale to solve this prequel.At the end of the story, Bai Xin gains strength, inherits one party's power, and has the capital to compete in ten continents and three seas.He ended his bewildered and powerless adolescence, and made up his mind to climb from under the feet of everyone to above everyone.It is equivalent to what I just said, completing the opening chapter of the entire series.

Xuanyuan thought for a while: "Not bad."

Ever since Zhuang Mo asked him to fill in the hole, he has always had such a hidden worry: he has dug such a big hole, and if he wants to finish it within 30 words, it will be anticlimactic.His protagonists have not grown up, let alone compete in ten continents and three seas.If the existing one is used as a prequel, as Yi Kouxian said, if a book completes the prequel, then his psychological pressure will be much less, because this volume is enough to express this plot.

One mouthful of salt: Then you can summarize the story of the finale in one sentence.

Multi-dimensional elements: Bai Xin has experienced a series of incidents, inherited the ancient sword and the position of master from his master, and is determined to compete in ten continents and three seas.

Xuanyuan was startled when he typed this line.The many clues that seemed to be clueless were actually guided by a few words, and the main line was easily determined.He couldn't help but think, this little editor looks stupid, but he's quite capable.He didn't know that the reason why Zhuang Mo dared to hand him over to Tian Tian was because Tian Tian graduated from the Chinese Department and had a solid foundation in dismantling texts.Xuanyuan has no other problems, but his foundation is not solid, and the two of them are a good partner.

Tian Tian was relieved to see that the multi-dimensional elements had such a high level of comprehension.

A mouthful of salt: OJBK.You go to expand this "series of incidents", sort out the plots of the main characters in this book, weave each other, and achieve the fate of each person

Xuanyuan felt that this was not particularly difficult.

Yikouxian: Give me an address, I will send you some books

Multidimensional elements: ?

A mouthful of salt: You are very talented, but you lack a little experience

Multidimensional elements: ...

Did he read it right, he, inexperienced?Ha ha!Ha ha ha ha!

One mouthful of salt: You are a person who is born to write stories. You have the ability to write stories that are thrilling and full of climaxes, and make readers fall in love with your protagonist. This is your talent.But this talent is not an ability, but an intuition about the story.

Multidimensional elements: what is ability?

Xuanyuan felt that he was too busy, and he had to listen to a small editor to teach him what writing skills were.

A mouthful of salt: Ability is not a vague intuition, but a clear understanding and use. It is an all-round structure, layout, arrangement, circumflex, sense of language, and mastery of writing.You can use it but don't understand it, and you can use it if you understand it. Obviously the latter is better!You see, after a little discussion, we can finish the outline of "Dusty Smile", can't we?The books I send you are all about the general laws of stories, supported by theory, and you will be more confident when you write it yourself [Prove to the heavens that I will never admit defeat.jpg]

Multi-dimensional elements: Don’t tell me you want to send me “Story”, “Hide and Seek” beat chart, etc. If you write the story according to this method, the story will be very rigid

A salty mouthful: The rule is the creative experience of the predecessors. They know that writing stories in this way will look good. You should refer to it.When you write an article, the details are very expressive, and you can hardly make mistakes, but you lack the overall structure.I'm very worried that if you continue like this, you will be like Xuan Yuan, who can't finish a book in a lifetime. It's beautiful, but you just can't finish it.

Xuanyuan got an arrow in the knee.

He looked at the messy black words on the white paper, lit a cigar, and recalled the scene when his elder brother tried his best to persuade him to write an outline.

"You are the most talented person I have ever seen," Sihai Zongheng always said, "but talent itself is a double-edged sword. People with talent can't help showing between the lines, but what you show is It's not what the story itself needs, it's a question mark. A humorous person always inserts too many jokes into the story, a beautifully written person prefers long paragraphs of description, and a sensitive person endlessly focuses on emotional lines …The comfort zone of these authors may interrupt the rhythm and beauty of the story. For example, in "Dusty Smile", you regard him as your stage, but you can't even give him a break. An author expresses himself in this way Desire is above the work, which is a manifestation of disrespect for the work."

Xuanyuan used to think that what he said was nonsense. Isn’t writing self-expression?Can you show off your strength?But when he calmed down and returned to the original point and the basics with Yikouxian, he realized that he had indeed taken a detour and had a bad result.People who write stories don't respect the story and write whatever they want, and the story will make the most direct resistance-it becomes ugly, disorganized, and even unable to end decently, making it difficult to swallow.

"Have you heard that joke? A blind man is less likely to fall over a puddle because he has no sight to rely on. A bright-eyed man is more likely to fall in a gutter because he is too confident in his sight.

"Talent is to an author what vision is to a human being. If you have talent, you think you can easily write well, and you will ignore the most fundamental basis of the story; if you have talent, you think you are a genius, and you will reject boring accumulation. , training and reflection, feel that these are reserved for the mediocre, you don’t need them at all. Then the next story is the tortoise and the hare. When you are complacent, those “mediocre” you look down on have already entered the room.”

……

Xuanyuan closed his eyes amidst the smog, remembering what his elder brother said, he smiled and shook "The Paradox" in his hand.Back then, he was mean to Tan Si in front of his elder brother several times, and his elder brother warned him not to be so proud. Although Tan Si is not as good as him in writing, he is worse than him in story structure, plot layout and suspense. There is nothing to be unconvinced about.If you have shortcomings, you will make up for them. If you feel unwilling, you will try to catch up. If you are worried and look down on this and that, you will not be able to solve any problems.

When Xuan Yuan opened his eyes again, he tapped the keyboard with clear eyes.

Multidimensional elements: okay

Multidimensional elements: send me those books of yours, I will learn and learn

It's time to lower your proud head.

His talent will not be devalued by words such as study and hard work.

Tian Tian made a comparison in front of the computer.

One mouthful of salt: Your task this week is to think about how to write the outline of the ending of the prequel of "Dust Smoke Smile", baby boy!When you get Xuan Yuanda’s outline, you can compare the gap between you and the Great God

Multidimensional Elements: Roll

A mouthful of salt: I will always be with you!mwah!