genius editor

Chapter 47

The weekend passed in the blink of an eye, and Duowei Elements, Bai Shangshang, and Xi Hui all turned in their manuscripts on time, which surprised Brother Liehuo very much.The editorial department is reviewing manuscripts all morning, and then holds a meeting.

"Bai Shangshang is definitely not good." Brother Liehuo said, "She seems to have written a mother's version of "The Grand Chronicle."

Ye Shun already knew this was the result. The fantasy and epic novels like "The Vast Chronicles" are completely inconsistent with Bai Shangshang's style.She is good at writing romance, and anything in her hands will become a long paragraph of inner monologue from a female perspective.But he thinks this is a good attempt: "Although Bai Shangshang's writing is not "The Great and Powerful Chronicle" at all, she uses small words to explain the world view of this epic, which is very biased towards the theme of big women. Anyway, the copyright is in our hands. Ten Continents and Three Seas has an open worldview. Is it possible for her to try this? This author needs to transform. Now the youth campus is basically saturated, and pure emotional dramas have no market competitiveness. Ten Continents and Three Seas Such a large IP also requires more development.”

Brother Riehuo also has this idea: "Yes, you can try to let her create a romance novel with a fantasy background independently. The fantasy elements don't need to be too much, about 2:8 is enough, and the rest of the space is still for discussion. Love. But for her 20% fantasy part, it is best to make a derivative setting based on the world view of ten continents and three seas. This can not only take advantage of the big IP, but also be more innovative, in line with the current fashion Trend. Ten Continents and Three Seas is something that happened nine years ago after all. Little readers don’t like to read just the well-behaved epic world view. They like to read interesting and novel things, so you let her put a coat on top of ordinary romance novels .”

Ye Shun nodded: "Okay."

"The next thing is to wash ashes and multi-dimensional elements... I said multi-dimensional elements, why is his writing style so similar to Xuan Yuan?" Brother Lie Huo couldn't help but sigh again.

Tian Tian sat in his seat, his eyebrows knotted in confusion.

He understood the urine properties of multi-dimensional elements.Although the multi-dimensional element was dragging black, it was necessary to drag black, but the manuscript was handed in on time, which made him very happy.But as soon as he got the trial draft, he discovered this problem: the style of multi-dimensional elements seems to be the original of learning.He was really right, this is also a Xuanyuan fan, and he doesn't like the style of the world.

Although these two ancient great gods both wrote fantasy epics, they are very different.At first glance, he is a straight man of steel, with a clear structure, strict logic, tense and exciting plot, and a tough fight.Against the background of the family, the country and the world, the fate of the characters is ups and downs, and it is really a bit like "Game of Thrones".

Xuanyuan is different.His writing is gorgeous, and the scene rendering is extremely powerful. Even if the plot is in the family and the world, those men don't fight well.If you have to sit in a restaurant in spring, drink a little wine and watch the scenery, a peach blossom falls faintly outside the window, and when he raises his eyes, his beloved woman is playing the pipa on the opposite tall building through a light veil... that's what it is Style.

And the multi-dimensional element is simply an advanced version of Xuanyuan.

His descriptions became more and more melancholic, delicate and moving. After reading the whole article, Tian Tian felt that he had made a mistake all along. His author might be a woman.

So sitting at the manuscript review meeting, he really couldn't boast a word.

Especially when he read the manuscript of the ashes.

Washing the ashes gave him the feeling that Sihai himself was writing.

First of all, the plot is handled very well.In the beginning, the clues are intertwined, the suspense is full, and the plot is ups and downs, which makes people breathless and enters the play instantly.He is also the only one of the three authors who submitted an outline.Bai Shangshang's outline is only a few lines, it's not an outline, it's something to deal with Ye Shun; Ashes is different, his outline is [-] words, and the follow-up clues are very smooth, it is conceivable that if he writes , There will never be a situation where the word count is overwhelmed and the plot is overwritten.

Next, let's talk about his characterization.

It's easy for a male author to lose his head and not his heart in creating characters. The reason why Zongsi can become a god is because he is not only a deadly rationalist, but also very clever in writing people.Ashwash perfectly inherited his two advantages.There is no trace of deliberate design in his works at the text level, and he didn't let the characters enforce it just because the outline was all sorted out.This shows that he thought through the characters first, and then arranged the follow-up behavior paths according to their personalities, so that the characters at the outline level and the text level were unified.Although no particularly impressive scenes have appeared so far, at least in Tian Tian's view, everyone is very alive, and there is no particularly big situation where people collapse.If he can maintain this level all the time, this finale will at least be a passing grade, and Xu Jingjing can't make a mistake.

The last point is style of writing.Tian Tian never thought that Xihui was good at writing ancient style prose. What he wrote was full of brains, and the writing was relatively concise and smooth. There were occasional long sentences, and they were more European. It felt like he had read too many classics and accidentally A few words of wisdom came out.However, the text in front of me has undergone a major change from the choice of words and sentences to the habit of sentence patterns, and the entire style of writing has become gloomy and frustrating, very close to the style of writing in the world.This shows that the vocabulary of washing ashes is very large, and his imitation ability is very strong.Tian Tian now understands why he can control almost all genres, and can write all kinds of novels, because he is an excellent imitator and chameleon. Through his super learning ability, he has never let himself be stereotyped.

"This case is done by ashes, there is no objection, right? His outline, what do you need to change?" Brother Liehuo feels that the quality of the manuscript this time is too different, and there is no need to argue at all.

"I followed the outline, there is no problem." Zhuang Mo made a final decision.

"That's fine, you can make a contract later, and call him the 30% advance payment first, so that he can finish it quickly." Brother Liehuo told Zhuang Mo, "You have to pay close attention to this matter, after all, time is tight. It's best He writes a little and you review it, otherwise, if there is any problem in the middle, it will not be able to be rescued.” In his experience, rebuilding after the event is the worst remedy.

Zhuang Mo rejected him: "I'm going on a business trip, and I'll leave in the afternoon. It may take a long time, and I can't take the ashes with me for the time being. I've already handed him over to Tian Tian."

"Are you going on a business trip?" Tian Tian finally understood what Zhuang Mo's word "temporarily" meant.

And Brother Liehuo let out an oh, feeling a little lost. Zhuang Mo didn't sit in Jingyu, he was quite guilty.Thinking of this, he suddenly realized that he had subconsciously regarded Zhuang Mo as his boss, not his subordinate.The first reaction when he heard that he asked for leave was that he had no support, instead of asking him why he went so far away.Brother Lie Huo sat there and had to deeply reflect on himself.

At the end of his reflection, he decided to let Zhuang Mo go.Anyway, he can see that he can't keep Zhuang Mo, so what can he do if he stays?Let him go out of the contract?Every time he assigns work to Zhuang Mo, he feels guilty...

"That's fine, let's go. Tian Tian, ​​follow Ye Shun to go through the contract and get familiar with it. I will personally check the author's ashes."

"Oh." Tian Tian was happy to let go, saving Zhuang Mo from chattering again.

After the meeting, Ye Shun threw the contract template to Tian Tian, ​​stood in front of the screen and explained to him how a general company signs a contract with an author, and what routines are in it.Halfway through the talk, Bai Shangshang called him to ask him how the result was. Ye Shun lowered his voice and walked to the rooftop: "No. The other two authors are fantasy writers, and this case was not settled."

Bai Shangshang let out an oh, but didn't say anything.

Ye Shun felt that the sun was coming out from the west.Bai Shangshang is a miser, and the articles he writes have to be realized no matter what. This time, he has been watching "The Great and Poor Ji" for a week. Oh let out a cry.She usually definitely wants to make use of the problem and make trouble for no reason.

Ye Shun guessed that she might have been under too much psychological pressure recently, and everyone was frightened, so he quickly softened his tone to comfort her: "You didn't do it because your personal style is too obvious, unlike "The Great and Poor", it's not because you wrote it. Okay. The editor-in-chief told me just now that you should try more in this area, because there is a shortage of romance stories in the fantasy setting in the market, and he wants you to write a one-liner about ten continents and three seas."

"Really?" Bai Shangshang sounded quite happy.

"Really. This is also an opportunity, isn't it? After all, Ten Continents and Three Seas is a big IP. If "The Grand Chronicle" is finished and published this time, it will definitely cause a sensation. When the film version is released, the topic will definitely be huge." Go up. You may have completed a transformation by taking advantage of this wind. What do you think?"

Bai Shangshang said with a deep nasal voice from the morning: "I don't think it's very good." "The Grand Chronicle" is overdue, so why is it so popular.

Ye Shun saw that she was in the mood to complain, so he couldn't help but smiled softly: "Then I have a few more projects to help you talk about, and the talk is almost done, let's meet and chat, and set a direction - what are you doing now? ?have you eaten?"

Bai Shangshang stretched his waist: "I haven't gotten up yet."

"Are you hungry? What do you want to eat? I'll give you some."

"I want to eat duck neck."

"Are you eating duck neck again? Didn't your gums swell after eating it last time?"

"I want to eat duck neck!" Bai Shangshang repeated it briskly.

"That's fine." Ye Shun put down his phone, ordered Zhou Hei Ya for her, and remarked that it should be less spicy.I also ordered a bottle of watermelon cream lozenges from the pharmacy near her home to send to her, just in case.

Later, when he was reminded that the lunch had been delivered, he went to WeChat to ask Bai Shangshang if he had eaten it and how it tasted.Bai Shangshang gave an OK gesture.He stopped by Moments to look through, and found that she had posted a selfie with her bare hair, with a single word: Annoying.Ye Shun was about to leave a message to coax her, when he suddenly found Xu Jingzhi leaving a message at the bottom: Come out for dinner

Ye Shun: "..."

Last time, Xu Jingzhi's assistant contacted Brother Liehuo to ask for Bai Shangshang's WeChat account. Brother Liehuo was in a dilemma and asked his opinion. He asked Brother Liehuo to hand over the matter to him. Adding Xu Jingzhi, he said that the girl was unwilling. .He thought the matter was over, but the two hooked up anyway.No wonder it doesn't matter if the manuscript of "The Great and Dang Ji" is rejected. Xiang Zhuang's sword dance is aimed at Pei Gong, and Pei Gong has already got it, so what's the matter with dancing the sword.

He thought for a while, ordered a cup of milk tea and delivered it to Bai Shangshang, but the delivery guy called and said there was no one at home.

The whole day after Ye Shun was very green.

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