Sister, Shut Up!

The most common thing about this is that the protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats a tiger, hiding his strength and fighting back.

Many new writers know that the protagonist should pretend to be aggressive, but the writing is very blunt and embarrassing.

Jiang Miao felt that the problem lay in the second point.

That is, relationships.

The refreshment generated by the information gap, or the sense of expectation, needs to be conveyed through interpersonal relationships.

The better the relationship is set up, the stronger the sense of anticipation.

This is also why in a fire book, when the protagonist kills the villain, the climax of the plot can make people hooked, but the reader will only feel indifferent when the villain is killed in the hit book.

Because in terms of dealing with the interpersonal relationship between the villain and the protagonist, the hit book handles it better, making readers more eager to take the role of the protagonist and kill the villain.

Love essay is actually a truth.

The better the interpersonal relationship between the hero and the heroine is established, the more readers have the desire to act as the protagonist and fall in love with the heroine.

Of course, on the basis of poor information and interpersonal relationships, the deduced character design and plot are things that require further consideration.

After all these are dealt with, a relatively better-looking beginning of the novel can be presented to readers.

"Isn't it very complicated?" Jiang Miao smiled and asked Su Huai Porridge who was listening beside him with a confused face.

Su Huai Porridge was still immersed in the explanation of his junior, subconsciously nodded, and then realized, he let out a long sigh of relief: "Is writing a book so troublesome?"

"Actually, it's not that troublesome..." Jiang Miao spread his hands, "Many authors who have written fire books, in fact, don't study to this point at all, and more often write books with intuition."

"Some people can write Wanding just by intuition, while some people will always fail after writing their own pen no matter how much they study the essence of Huoshu."

"This is the talent gap..."

When Jiang Miao said this, she leaned back in her chair with some sighs, envious of those perverts who learned without a teacher.

"What about you?" Su Huai porridge asked, tilting his head, "You have written two great masterpieces now, right? In the eyes of ordinary street writers, you are also a very powerful boss. Isn't that considered a talent? "

"I can only make up for my weakness with diligence, right?" Jiang Miao looked helpless, "I didn't get up until I wrote the sixth book. A real genius has written a book or even passed the first book."

"Why do I feel like you're showing off." Su Huai porridge said disgustedly, "You're obviously very powerful."

"If this new book is still high-quality, I will admit that I am very good, okay?" Jiang Miao shook her head with a smile, "Don't look at the soundness of my analysis above, I have no idea what the new book can achieve."

To put it bluntly, those fire books were analyzed for various reasons, but in the final analysis, it was because of their achievements that they proved themselves.

If there is no achievement but only theory, then no one can be convinced.

Jiang Miao is not so arrogant yet, and feels that he has seen through the essence of online articles, as if he can dominate the world as long as he masters the two points of information gap and interpersonal relationship.

In fact, this may be just the beginning, and it can only prove that he may be on the right path now.

There are still too many things waiting for him to learn and improve in the follow-up.

"So when will you release the new book?" Su Huai porridge squinted at him.

"Isn't this just the second edition? Let me edit the beginning of the third edition first." Jiang Miao leisurely touched the keyboard and mouse, clicked to create a new chapter, and pressed the space bar, expressing that he would continue to work hard. .

Su Huai Congee curled his lips, betting in his heart that it would be good if this guy could write 1000 words in one night.

At this moment, there was a knock on the door outside the bedroom, and Xu Guiying's voice came in: "It's dinner."

"Here we come!" Su Huai Porridge responded and cleared the table.

Jiang Miao on the side was even more straightforward, got up from the chair directly, left the new chapter without writing a single word, and prepared to fill his stomach first.

Su Huai Congee's grandma has been living here for almost a week, and Jiang Miao found that it didn't affect her daily life, and even saved them both a lot of time.

When Xu Guiying lived in Hengtang Village, she lived alone for a long time.

Su Huai porridge has to go to school and can only come back after the holiday, while Su Dajiang is busy with his career all day long and rarely comes back to see her.

So in Hengtang Village, Xu Guiying took care of the family affairs by herself.

I have to clean up every day, cook and do my own laundry, and tidy up the flowers and plants in the yard.

It seems to be hard work, but when a person's life is all that is left, he will find that there is always more free time than you think.

So for the rest of the time, Xu Guiying often could only lie on the recliner, staggering and wasting away, facing the people on the TV.

Whenever the granddaughter comes home, the color of the home will become colorful, sweeping away the gloom.

In fact, Su Huai Congee had suggested before that Xu Guiying would be taken to live in Jingjiang Mountain Mansion, away from the school, so that Su Huai Congee could take care of her.

But Xu Guiying is a nostalgic person, Hengtang Village is still there, all the familiar people are in the village, and all the memories of the past are here, so I don't want to leave.

It wasn't until now that there was no choice, Xu Guiying came here to live with her granddaughter.

But after a few days of getting used to it, she felt that such a day might not be too bad.

Although I still do laundry, cooking, and cleaning every day, in addition to washing my own clothes and cooking my own meals, I can also wash the clothes of my granddaughter and grandson-in-law and cook meals for the whole family.

This makes everything make sense again.

Xu Guiying felt her body became healthy.

Jiang Miao also thinks this is good. Usually, when grandma cooks, he and his senior sister don't have to be so busy preparing dishes.

On weekdays, lunch and dinner are combined, and it takes an hour or two to cook, plus washing the dishes after eating, which is okay once in a while, but it is really easy to wear down one's will in the long run.

If it weren't for Jiang Miao and Su Huai porridge living together in the kitchen, they probably would have been too lazy to do it.

Now that Xu Guiying lives here, it happens to kill two birds with one stone, and the three of them feel at ease.

After dinner, Xu Guiying took out her mobile phone and asked, "Congee Congee, help me find out, what Alipay is this, and how do I use it?"

"Why do you ask this suddenly?" Su Huai porridge looked strange.

"I think there are still a lot of them in supermarkets."

"Then just use WeChat." Su Huai Porridge took grandma's mobile phone, taught her how to pay with WeChat, and sent 1000 yuan by the way.

Elderly people don't use mobile phones very much. For the functions of mobile phones, they always stop at making calls and sending text messages.

Although Xu Guiying is literate, she is not proficient in typing in pinyin, and it is always difficult to write directly on the screen with her callused hands.

So the mobile phone is more of a simple tool for making calls to her.

But it was just this tool. After switching to a touch-screen phone, Su Huai Porridge taught Xu Guiying for a long time before he learned how to use the touch-screen phone to open the contact directory, find Su Huai Porridge's contact information and make a call.

Later, she installed WeChat for her grandma. The only contacts in WeChat are Su Huai Porridge and Su Dajiang, and now there is only one more person, Jiang Miao. She has hardly used it on weekdays.

I don't know if it's because of the new environment, but I even took the initiative to learn mobile payment today.

"Grandma, look, click on this [My] interface, click on [Services], and then click on [Receipt and Payment], when paying, show this QR code to the cashier, let them scan it, and the money will be paid Already." Su Huai Porridge taught it twice.

Xu Guiying didn't understand what he heard, and was a little confused. After taking the phone, she tried it once, and was directly stuck at the step of finding [my].

Jiang Miao and Su Huai porridge took the trouble to teach them, breaking down the steps and explaining them over and over again. They also took out their mobile phones to simulate the cash register situation for Xu Guiying, and taught her how to pay with the mobile phone.

However, Su Huai Porridge did not bind grandma with a bank card, and only asked her to call when she ran out of money on her mobile phone, so as not to be scammed by a telecom one day.

At the end of the teaching, Xu Guiying finally mastered the basic functions of WeChat payment.

However, Su Huai Congee was still worried, and said from the side: "I'll go shopping with you tomorrow, and I'll watch you pay once."

"Okay." Xu Guiying laughed happily when she heard that her granddaughter was going to accompany her to buy vegetables.

"By the way, grandma." Jiang Miao on the side suddenly thought of something, stretched out his hand and said, "Lend me your phone again, and I will download something fun for you."

Xu Guiying didn't know why, so she handed over the phone in a daze.

After Jiang Miao took the phone, she opened the software store with a smile, found an app in it, and clicked to download it.

Su Huai porridge leaned over curiously, watched Jiang Miao download a Douyin, and immediately saw black lines all over her face: "Why did you download this for the nanny?"

"Normally grandma has nothing else to do, so it's good to have some leisure and entertainment." Jiang Miao blinked and said.

You want to talk about downloading other things, no matter how fun it is, old people like Xu Guiying can't understand it.

But Douyin, a short video app that only needs to be swipe down to watch, is perfectly suitable for audiences like Xu Guiying.

Su Huai Porridge gave him a blank look, but didn't say much. It's not a bad thing for grandma to have access to the Internet.

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While young people are enjoying themselves in the new world of the Internet, a large number of middle-aged and elderly people seem to have been abandoned by the world.

But the ridiculous thing is that capital will not abandon these people, and even when they find that the young people's market is no longer easy to occupy and develop, they have already set their sights on this part of the group that is still isolated from the Internet.

If the family does not teach, capital will teach, and by the way, an education fee for the elderly will be charged.

"Grandma, if you see any live broadcasts selling goods here, just treat them as fakes." Jiang Miao turned on Douyin, and it was easy to find live broadcasts selling goods.

"Then why are there so many people buying it?" Xu Guiying took a look and found that many people left messages and bought it.

"There is no shortage of liars and fools in the world." Jiang Miao sighed, and then said, "We are all smart people, just watch the video and have fun."

"But I don't think you usually use this one?" Xu Guiying asked suspiciously, "The other pink one, don't you often use it?"

Talking about this, Jiang Miao's expression froze.

Su Huai Porridge on the side was even more shocked, and quickly waved his hands and said, "That is too complicated to use, grandma, please read this first."

Oh my god... If grandma sees her video on the beep station, Su Huai porridge thinks that she can dig a grave and bury herself...

280. Brothers Gather Again

In mid-August, Jiang Miao received a video from his mother.

The video was very short, only about ten seconds, and it was shot by Tang Xiaojing in the car, aiming at the road outside and the scene beside the road.

Familiar streets, sidewalks are surrounded by a two-meter wall, and a low ruin undulates within the wall, and broken bricks and tiles can be seen faintly.

Hengtang Village was demolished.

Jiang Miao looked at the picture in the video, feeling nothing in her heart.

Although it was his grandmother's house, except that he lived there for a while when he was a child, he didn't live there much when he grew up, especially after going to school, he spent most of his time in school, so he didn't have too deep feelings for Hengtang Village itself. .

But after he showed it to Su Huai Porridge, the senior fell silent for a long time, leaning her head gently on Jiang Miao's shoulder, and finally retracted into his arms, curled up into a kitten.

After a long time, Su Huai porridge sat up from his arms, and whispered: "Don't show this to grandma."

"Okay." Jiang Miao nodded in agreement.

After recent adjustments, the beginning of Jiang Miao's new book has basically been finalized.