Sister, Shut Up!

"Get out and get out."

The weather was already hot, even with the air conditioner turned on, it was still warm under the blanket with my senior sister.

As soon as Xiaoju's plump body squeezed in, Jiang Miao felt extremely hot.

What's more, this fat thing always likes to squeeze between the two of them, so he has to be separated from Su Huai Porridge, and he shrinks comfortably between the two of them, like a child playing with his temper.

"Xiaoju is good~ sister touch~" Su Huai porridge was very happy. She likes kittens very much. When she found that Xiaoju got into the bed, she turned sideways and reached out to stroke her. The soft cat fur felt smooth Appropriate and comforting.

"Meow~"

Xiaoju's big head arched towards Su Huai Congee's palm, her cute appearance would melt Su Huai Congee's heart.

Jiang Miao was jealous when she saw it, and imitated Xiaoju's action, and put her head in Su Huaiyu's hand, but she pushed her away with disgust.

"What are you doing here? You're squeezing Xiaoju..."

Hengtang Village itself has no walls, but the East Gate and West Gate are the two most spacious main roads, which are the most convenient for vehicles to enter and exit on weekdays.

However, as the demolition work progressed and the demolition contract was settled, a fence was erected around Hengtang Village, leaving only the east and west gates for people to leave.

Under the guidance of Su Huai Congee, Tang Zhuqing drove in from the east gate and arrived at the gate of Su Huai Congee's house smoothly.

But for the convenience of the truck, Su Huai porridge got out of the car, ran to Grandma Guifang's house next door and said a few words, then waved to Tang Zhuqing who was in the car, and asked her to park the car in the next yard.

Afterwards, my uncle took control of the truck, and turned the rear door of the carriage into the courtyard of Su Huai Porridge's house, facing her door, so that it was convenient to move things later.

Su Huai porridge had already told Su Dajiang about this matter in advance last night, so after hearing the movement outside, he came out with a few helpers who had been specially called early in the morning, preparing to move.

Although already bankrupt, Su Dajiang's series of operations before the bankruptcy still bought a lot of people's hearts. It is naturally very convenient to just call a few brothers to help move.

Uncle saw that there were quite a lot of them, so he didn't need to waste his energy. He just opened the door of the carriage and gave instructions from the side, trying to use as much space as possible in the carriage, and move as much as he could.

Jiang Miao followed her senior into the living room on the first floor, and immediately saw Xu Guiying sitting on the reclining chair alone. She didn't watch TV or knit a sweater. She just put her hands on the armrests and remained motionless on the reclining chair.

There is no shortage of things in the Jingjiang Mountain Mansion, and the furniture in the house here is already very old, so there is really no need to move it.

So in addition to Uncle Jiang Miao's truck, Su Dajiang also called other furniture collectors to come.

The relatively new ones are put on the truck, and the ones that are going to be thrown away are handed over to the waste collectors, and they can be exchanged for a little money.

So around Xu Guiying, there are the most conspicuous sofas and coffee tables first, then the wooden table with sundries on the side, the large solid wood table for eating, the high counter against the wall, the TV, and the long cabinet under the TV.

One by one, they disappeared before her eyes.

The first floor was quickly cleaned up, and in the end, only the recliner seated by Xu Guiying was left.

This recliner is not intended to be sold, but to be taken to Jingjiang Mountain Mansion.

The reclining chair is not old, it was bought by Su Huai porridge with the first drawing fee he earned in high school, and it has only been used for a few years now, and it is still very strong.

At that time, it can be placed on the balcony, and Xu Guiying can bask in the sun when she is free.

"Grandma, let's go upstairs and pack our things." Su Huai Porridge walked to Xu Guiying's side and whispered while helping her up.

Xu Guiying didn't speak, just nodded, and with the support of Su Huai Porridge and Jiang Miao, she walked upstairs.

There are a total of four rooms upstairs, and there are not many things to be moved to Jingjiang Shanfu, most of them are small objects.

Many things had already been packed in advance, but before leaving, Xu Guiying was still worried, and took apart one by one to check carefully to make sure that she hadn't missed anything.

Especially the wife's relics, each piece is well preserved, even better than when the wife was alive.

Especially those three pipes, after all these years, they have been polished by Xu Guiying, as if they were opened.

As for Su Huai Congee, apart from some of his own clothes and other sundries, there are also many things left by his mother, all of which must be taken to Jingjiang Mountain Mansion.

After loading all these items into the truck, the remaining items were handed over to the waste collectors for disposal.

"Let's go, I'll take you there." Tang Zhuqing walked ahead, calling them to get into his car.

Su Dajiang stayed here to clean up the mess, while Su Huai Porridge supported his grandma and got into Tang Zhuqing's car.

Jiang Miao also followed, and after getting into the car, Tang Zhuqing was asked to lead the way, while his uncle drove the truck behind and set off towards Jingjiang Mountain Mansion.

Nothing happened along the way, An An came to Jingjiang Mountain Mansion, and showed the travel code to the gate guard at the gate of the community. After being released, a group of people came downstairs and started unloading.

Fortunately, they didn't bring over any particularly large items, and the elevator in Jingjiang Mountain Mansion is quite spacious.

A group of people went up and down three or four times, and successfully moved everything up there.

Ding Ning, who was in room 1002, heard the movement on the way, and ran out to see, and found out that the senior sister had moved, and immediately called Chen Haotang out to help, so the moving process was smooth.

After Su Huai porridge thanked everyone for their help, the irrelevant people left.

Uncle left in the truck, Ding Ning and Chen Haotang also returned to the next door, Tang Zhuqing wanted to call Jiang Miao home, but Jiang Miao gave her a blank look: "My wife is here."

Tang Zhuqing stomped on him angrily, feeling that her younger brother was getting less and less cute, so she turned her head and went downstairs to leave, not wanting to stay in this sad place and continue to be hurt.

Jiang Miao naturally stayed here to help the senior sister clean up the mess in the living room.

There was a huge pile of stuff on the living room floor, waiting for them to deal with.

It was already past ten o'clock in the morning, Jiang Miao looked at the time, and simply said: "Let's not rush to tidy up, let's buy some food and make lunch first."

"Okay." Su Huai porridge nodded, looked at grandma and said, "This bedroom, grandma, if you are tired, you can rest for a while."

"I'm fine, you go." Xu Guiying waved her hand.

Although I feel sad, I feel a little uncomfortable after leaving Hengtang Village, where I have lived for decades, to come here, but I can't let my granddaughter worry about her.

Now that I am old, I can't take care of Porridge like I used to, but it can't become a burden, at least it can't delay the normal life of the two children.

And Xu Guiying also thought about it, it's actually not bad to live here.

After she lives for a few days and gets used to it, she can do the shopping and cooking at home by herself, and she can also help them clean and wash clothes when there is nothing to do.

The time saved for them can allow them to do their own things without worrying about these daily chores.

Xu Guiying's calculations were very good, and she even took into account how to avoid affecting the intimacy of the young couple.

Jiang Miao is a very nice guy, but no matter how good his character is, he can't just rely on being Congee's grandmother.

"Fairy Wood"

Thinking of this, Xu Guiying didn't go to rest in the guest bedroom. After moving a small stool over to sit down, she began to pack her things from the debris pile and moved them into the guest bedroom bit by bit.

Because Jiang Miao moved into the master bedroom a long time ago and shared the bed with Su Huai Porridge, the wardrobe in the guest bedroom has already been vacated, and the sheets and quilt covers have been washed clean.

Xu Guiying's own things are not too many. Put away her wife's belongings, put her own clothes in the closet, and there is nothing extra.

At this moment, Jiang Miao and Su Huai Porridge hadn't come back yet, so she wandered around the house casually.

From the living room to the guest bedroom, and from the guest bedroom to the master bedroom.

When Jiang Miao and Su Huai Porridge came home, the master bedroom had been cleaned up, but grandma didn't see anything.

Xu Guiying walked from the master bedroom to the kitchen again, looked at the red and blue aprons on the wall, the clean and tidy countertops, the neatly arranged seasonings, and the orderly arrangement of knives and kitchen utensils, then turned and walked into the bathroom.

Towels are one red and one blue, bath towels are one red and one blue, tooth cups are one red and one blue...

At a glance, those who can use couple models basically have not escaped the clutches of the two.

Xu Guiying laughed as soon as she looked at it, her eyes were a little bright, and she walked out of the bathroom when she heard the sound of the door opening behind her.

"Grandma, what's the matter with you?" Su Huai porridge asked worriedly seeing that she looked a little wrong.

Xu Guiying smiled and shook her head: "It's okay, it's fine, everything is fine."

279. Bad reviews

After returning to Jingjiang Shanfu, Jiang Miao's life became more regular again.

In July of the summer vacation, the demolition of Hengtang Village drew Jiang Miao and Su Huai Porridge's energy.

Now that the dust has finally settled, Jiang Miao has more time and energy to devote to the beginning of the new book.

In the past month, he revised the beginning of the two editions back and forth, and the idea was similar to what he had considered before. It was a love story with a fantasy background that the hero accidentally discovered the leader's daughter in the Demon Cult and used it as a gimmick. .

Most people may think that this thing is quite simple to write, but in fact there are many things to ponder.

Especially the beginning of a book, which itself serves as the task of attracting readers to read along the way, is the most important thing.

Jiang Miao considers himself a common man, and only wants to write novels that he likes and can make money. He has no great pursuit of so-called profound, connotative, artistic conception, style, and philosophical books that reflect any phenomenon or highlight any ideas. .

Or in his own opinion, there are only two reasons why a book can be handed down.

Either useful or nice.

A book that is both useless and unattractive has no value in existence.

He is useless by himself, so he can only write some good-looking books, which will please the readers, and he will also like it. He can also earn a little money to support his family and marry his senior sister back home.

So, for a good-looking novel, or a narrower scope, a good-looking web novel, love novel, how to write at the beginning, so as to retain more readers?

In this regard, in Jiang Miao's current writing framework, the bottom core is two points.

One is poor information. .

The second is interpersonal relationship.

Take his last book "Sister Step on Me!" " as an example.

The original setting of Jiang Miao and Su Huai Porridge is that they know each other by their screen names on the Internet, but they don't know each other in reality. At the same time, they are about to form a relationship between senior sister and junior.

Moreover, the two also think that the other party is of the same sex rather than the opposite sex. The various information gaps caused by this, and the next level of information gap caused by these information gaps, will arouse readers' curiosity and sense of expectation.

People can't help but want to see what the two of them will look like after they find out the truth.

Among them, interpersonal relationship is the bridge that builds the information gap and conveys the sense of expectation.

If the above layer of interpersonal relationship between senior sisters and juniors is stripped away, the plot is actually not bad, but it lacks some sense of expectation.

If Su Huai Porridge is not a illustrator, Jiang Miao is not a love essay author, and the two just know each other on the Internet, but there is no closer cooperation in interpersonal relationship. For example, Su Huai Porridge draws illustrations and standing paintings for Jiang Miao, then this The sense of expectation will be even weaker.

Therefore, a good interpersonal relationship also determines whether the information gap you create can generate a stronger sense of expectation.

When Jiang Miao realized these two points, "Sister step on me!" "This book has been written to the middle.

Because after Jiang Miao wrote that the male protagonist exposed the senior's vest, the subscription results of this book began to decline all the way, so Jiang Miao has been summing up experience, hoping to analyze something useful from it.

When talking about writing skills in this area with other authors, Jiang Miao figured out the mystery bit by bit, and understood a little bit the essential reason why his book was popular in the early stage.

To be honest, after seeing this point clearly, the reasons for many popular books are also very clear.

The first is to create poor information.