My 2d is Definitely Not Normal

In Su Jie's opinion, the average house girl may not be proficient in cooking, but the black cat is obviously not in this range, and her level is even better than Su Jie. As for Su Jie's idea, it is naturally Gaosaka, who has never touched the spring water. Tono, his own sister.

"Thank you!" The black cat was a little shy, but he could see that he was very happy with Su Jie's compliment.

"This is shredded pork with green peppers, you should eat more." The black cat pointed to a plate of fried pork with green peppers. This is because the Japanese do not like green peppers very much, but the Chinese do (the author himself).

Wugeng Hinxiang moved his lips on the side, as if he wanted to say something, but the black cat immediately glared at him with a sharp look, shrinking back in fright at Wugeng's words, and pouted and lowered his head to eat, obviously I have experienced this kind of reaction just now when I experienced some discordant things.

"Spicy~Spicy!" Wugeng Zhuxi followed Su Jie's example and also took a bite of green pepper, her cute little face was wrinkled and looked pitiful.

The black cat gently gave Wu Geng Zhu Xi a drink of orange juice, Wu Gen Zhu Xi took a big sip, smiled happily, and hugged her sister's arm like a spoiled child.

Seeing this family, Su Jie was moved. The black cat's parents worked in other places and might not come back often. The black cat in the family became the mainstay of the family. They had to take care of their two young sisters and fulfill their parental responsibilities. This task is arduous as one can imagine.

Looking at the economic conditions of the black cat's house, you can see some looks from the furniture and electrical appliances in the home. In addition, the simple clothes worn by the sun at the fifth watch are also a bit old. Although they are very clean, Su Jie can see that these may be It was the clothes of the black cat in the past, which was worn by the grown up Wugeng Hinata.

In this world, Japan has not shown any signs of recovery since the collapse of the bubble economy. The unemployment rate is still high. The work pressure in Japan is not easy to complete, black cat With three children at home, the family pressure is naturally greater.

"Help them if you can." Su Jie made a silent decision in his heart. The black cat asked himself for comics, maybe he wanted to do more part-time jobs to relieve the family's financial pressure.

......

After the meal, the black cat sent the two younger sisters to watch the anime, and then took Su Jie into his room.

To be honest, this is the first time that Su Jie has entered a girl's room. My sister, Tong Nai, doesn't count...

There are many cartoon drawings in the room, and some common props are placed on the table, such as wings, costumes, magic wands, etc. There are also many scattered tools on the side, which seem to be made by the black cat himself.

"Don't be nervous." After entering the room, before Su Jie showed anything, the black cat's face slowly turned rosy first, sitting on the bed without speaking, Su Jie had to speak by himself.

Su Jie moved a chair and sat down, facing the black cat, and said, "Let's get to the point, I'm just a newcomer to comics, and I can't guarantee how much I can teach you. You have to work hard on your own."

Chapter 46: You are not an old driver at all

"In this way, let me take a look at the sketches you drew before. I remember you said that you have submitted manuscripts to comic magazines. Can you show me?"

"It's all here."

Bang!The black cat took out a thick stack of drawings from the desk. The number of these drawings combined was less than that of a medium-length comic.

Su Jie reached out to take it, and under the nervous gaze of the black cat, he flipped through the pile of drawings one by one.

......

After more than half an hour, Su Jie raised his head from the pile of sketches and met the black cat's uneasy gaze.

"How about it." The black cat bit her pink lips slightly, hoping that her work could be recognized by others. This is what every cartoonist hopes to do.

Su Jie shook his head and said, "Although I don't want to hit you, your comic story is too bad."

Ah!

The black cat suddenly stood up!

"And there is also a problem with your drawing method. Every character's chin is drawn too sharply in your comics. This kind of stereotyped drawing method and character modeling is difficult to attract readers' attention."

"Always use purple and black to draw a dark style of the world, this style is actually not pleasing, even if you want to create a dark world, you can't just use two colors like this..."

"There are also......"

After explaining the problems of the drawing one by one, Su Jie saw that the black cat's face was getting worse and worse, but he still resisted to finish the sentence. Although it was not pleasant to say, it was the truth.

After experiencing the prosperous era of comics in the past life, Su Jie can easily judge the quality of a comic with the eyes of future people, not to mention that Su Jie has countless data and comic comparisons in his brain, so that Su Jie can hardly judge. error.

"However, your basic painting level is still passable. As long as you can change it, you may not be able to successfully publish your own comics."

When Su Jie finally concluded, he gave the black cat a little confidence. The painting level of the black cat is about half a kilogram of that of Su Jie, which is worse than that of the professional H-man teacher Ying Lili.

Comics are about storytelling. If you can write a good story, everything else is a small problem.

For example, "One Punch Man" that Su Jie is currently painting, in the hands of ONE, the original painter of the original earth, is to attract readers with its story. As for the style of painting, it is not an exaggeration to say that it is a soul painter. Murata Yusuke redrawn and began to embark on the road to serial success.

It can be said that storytelling is the core premise of comics. Su Jie's drawing standard cannot be said to be very high, that is, to the extent that it can be targeted, but because "One Punch Man" has a good storytelling, it can be successfully published in "Weekly Shonen Jump" Get serialized.

"Change..." The black cat's eyes slowly lit up, Su Jie's analysis was straight to the point, the black cat was not afraid of being criticized, but he was afraid that no one would pay attention to his work, and that no one cared about his creation, this is the most painfully.

"Yes, change, let's start small first. You are too one-sided about the shape of the character, and the pointed chin has limitations." Su Jie saw the black cat humbly asking for advice, touched his chin, got up and took the pen and paper: "I'll draw a few characters, you can compare and see the results."

It's not convincing just to say that, in order to let the black cat understand his mistakes more clearly, Su Jie has to use his real skills, that is... plagiarism.

The pencil quickly sketched on the manuscript paper, and the plump and independent characters jumped onto the paper, and quickly formed with the pencil that Su Jie turned.

These cartoon characters drawn by Su Jie are mainly based on slightly round chins, and the character shapes are more varied and rich, and will no longer live in the traditional pointed chin triangle faces. This kind of face division can not only make the characters more three-dimensional and rich, It also allows many hairstyles to be used with reasonable face shapes, which is also the trend of comics after the 21st century.

The black cat's eyes slowly widened, watching Su Jie easily draw several cartoon characters with independent shapes, the surprise in his heart can be imagined.

"This is the gap." The black cat thought silently in his heart, listening to Su Jie's explanation while drawing, eager to try.

"Come and try."

Su Jie handed the pen and paper to the black cat and pointed out the areas that need attention. It is not difficult to change the painting method. As long as you practice more, you can always succeed.

The rare thing is the construction of the story. This thing is very talented. If Su Jie didn't have a brain with a super memory, it would be difficult to come up with an excellent comic story.

Time is passing quickly, Su Jie taught black cats in all aspects, first of all, to change some bad habits of black cats, such as the dark style of drawing comics, the shape of characters with pointed chin, and the design and development of the story. .

Su Jie taught the black cat everything he knew. Of course, due to the limited time, it was impossible to finish it all at once. Su Jie just chose the key points to explain first.

There are all kinds of information about ACG recorded in the brain, Su Jie picked out some information related to comic writing, and repeated it to the black cat.

A few hours later, Su Jie looked at the sketch in his hand, which contained the characters that the black cat learned to draw. He had initially changed the drawing method of the pointed chin, and the chin became round. This is already a great improvement.

In the future, I will practice more and learn related design experience, and I will always be able to draw the characters well. Su Jie is also taking advantage of plagiarism. There is no need to think about characters at all, because there are ready-made works in his brain.

The hour hand was already pointing to 10:30 at this time, Su Jie saw that the black cat had made a lot of progress, so he said goodbye.

"Just come here today, I'll come back when I have time."

"Thank you, senior." After Su Jie's teaching, the black cat now has great respect for Su Jie, and thinks that Su Jie is a master. These few hours of teaching have benefited the black cat a lot, and he knows where to change. , is much more powerful than blindly learning.

Su Jie waved his hand and was about to open the door to go out. After twisting the door handle, the door was pushed open, and the two villains immediately rolled in.

"Hyuga, it's you again." Seeing Wugeng Hyuga, who had a bad expression on his face, and Wugeng Zhuxi, who was cute and innocent, the black cat immediately became angry.

Su Jie was also a little speechless, and said, "I'll call you the Queen of Gossip in the future, Hyuga Gossip!"

"You two bully me together, Zhu Xi, go to play with my sister." Wu Gengri pouted at the small mouth, knowing that he had provoked public anger, and took his sister Wu Geng Zhu Xi's little hand and wanted to run.

"Did I let you go? Su Jun, please allow me to handle the housework."

The black cat stretched out its evil claws to Hyuga again, and with Hyuga screaming 'ahhhhhh', the old driver overturned again.

"At the age of eleven or twelve, it's just a toy car! You're not an old driver at all."

Chapter 47: "One Punch Man" serial release

Time passed quietly, high school life was always ordinary, and a week passed quickly in the blink of an eye.

on Monday!

Today is the day when the new weekly issue of "Weekly Shonen Jump" is released. Many young girls and teenagers who love manga and other spiritual food gathered in bookstores all over Tokyo, ready to buy them as soon as possible.

In a bookstore on a bustling street in Hengqiao District, the door was crowded early in the morning. Most of them were young people and teenagers, and they were also the main consumers of Japan's "Weekly Shonen Jump".

"The door is open!" Someone suddenly shouted in front, and the shutters of the bookstore opened.

The owner of the bookstore, who is over fifty years old, appeared at the store door with a kind smile, and stretched out his hand to instruct customers to enter the venue in an orderly manner without crowding.

The impatient crowd swarmed in, and soon the bookstore was packed.

It is possible to open a bookstore in the bustling area. Naturally, all kinds of magazines and books are available. However, there is such a crowded situation on Monday. Most of them are for "Weekly Shonen Jump". The sales booth specially set up for Weekly Shonen Jump was overcrowded.

In the crowd, Kirino was wearing a black woolen coat. The weather in Japan has cooled down recently, and the weather in the morning is extremely cold.

Usually at this time, Tong Nai may still be hiding in bed and sleeping late, but today Tong Nai rarely wakes up early, for no other reason, just because today is Su Jie's work serialized on "Weekly Shonen Jump" day.

While Su Jie was getting up to cook, Tong Nai sneaked out and came to the nearest bookstore according to the planned route.

The "Weekly Shonen Jump" area was full of people, most of whom came in groups to watch each other after buying "Weekly Shonen Jump".

Tong Nai managed to grab a copy, not daring to squeeze into the crowded store with turbid air, and paid for it early to go out.

With the brand-new "Weekly Shonen Jump" magazine in hand, Tong Nao took a deep breath. Although it wasn't her work, she was equally excited and excited, just like when she first performed at the cultural festival, she was both nervous and excited. is to look forward to.

Turning the page, Tong Nai quickly rummaged through the five centimeter thick "Weekly Shonen Jump" until she saw the name of a familiar work.

"One Punch Man"

Author: Cult Gentleman

Before reading the content, Tong Nai was stunned by this pseudonym.

Opening the page, the content of One Punch Man is completely presented in front of Tong Nai. Although he has seen Su Jie's drawings before, Tong Nai still takes the trouble to read it again, because the meaning is different.

"Hey, this One Punch Man is quite interesting. The protagonist is actually a bald man. Take a look at it."

"Really, haha, this Saitama is so funny, I'm bald and stronger, haha, I'm dying of laughter."

"The setting is really interesting. It's the first time I've seen a protagonist who is invincible as soon as he appears. The battle is so exciting."

"Let's see, this is a new serialized work. The author has never heard of it before and should be a newcomer, but his strength is really powerful! The story is very strong."

"Hey, you said it so well, I haven't bought Weekly Shonen Jump, can you let me watch it together?"

"Of course, this comic is really funny, and there are inexplicable battles, and I can't wait to see the next issue now."

"Agree!"

"Seconded!"

"+1"

Hearing the heated discussions around him, Tong Nao was startled, and the next second turned to joy. A deep sense of pride emerged from the bottom of his heart. Tong Nai could hardly hold back his impulse and wanted to tell the surrounding aloud. Everyone, the author of the comic you are discussing is your brother.

Turning around, Tong Nai saw that most of the readers in the bookstore holding "Weekly Shonen Jump" were attracted by "One Punch Man". With a low laugh, the scene fell into an atmosphere that blended quiet and lively.

Even the owner of the bookstore, who was over [-] years old, was wearing reading glasses at this time, and he could not take his eyes off the plot of "One Punch Man". Seeing his focused expression, he was obviously attracted by One Punch Man.

"Good book, good book!" While reading, the bookstore owner whispered and said happily: "It seems that the sales of Weekly Shonen Jump are going to sell out again. I need to buy more during this time."

"Boss, do you think this "One Punch Man" comic will be a success?" Tong Nai couldn't help but be curious and asked the bookstore owner.

"That's for sure." The owner of the bookstore glanced at Tong Nai, seeing that Tong Nao was cute and beautiful, he couldn't help but say a few more words: "From the perspective of my bookstore for 20 years, I have seen examples of comics becoming popular. Countless, this "One Punch Man" already has the potential to become a big hit, and it will soon spread throughout Tokyo, not...not all of Japan."

"Harry Gado!" Tong Nai was overjoyed, thanked the bookstore owner, and ran away with "Weekly Shonen Jump" in his arms, leaving the bookstore owner confused, wondering why the other party wanted to thank him.