Loli Idols Do Whatever They Want

But Su Meng's modification is just right, showing some deep and connotative things in a very acceptable form, and also endowing it with deeper connotations.

For example, Su Meng's modification of the role of Shen Gongbao, sometimes serious and sometimes funny.It seems to be a character full of contradictions, but through some details and hints, it successfully gives the audience a sense of wisdom and foolishness.

"Mengmeng, don't worry, if you work so hard, then mom will definitely release this movie. Mom has worked hard for so long, just to let the world know your talent!"

When Lin Qian said these words, there was endless love in her eyes.

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Chapter 64 Funny characters people always like more (fourth more)

"Let's all take a look. These are Mengmeng's modified lines. Basically, they have been modified, and a considerable part of the character design has been modified. But it has no impact on the plot."

After integrating Su Meng's revised script, Lin Qian called together the director and screenwriter of the crew, and handed Su Meng's revised script to them to see if there were any major problems.

"Is it that fast?"

The famous screenwriter Qian Ke picked up the script book of the character Shen Gongbao as he spoke.

He was responsible for the lines of the character Shen Gongbao, because he couldn't grasp how much force he used before, so he directly chose to go all out and gave most of Shen Gongbao's lines a very profound meaning, and then look at Su Meng How much can be modified, and then he is making a second revision.

"This..."

Originally, Qian Ke didn't hold much hope. Even if Su Meng is a genius, but his life experience is limited, it is difficult to understand the profound philosophical lines he wrote. Even if he can modify a few lines, it is difficult to change the whole script have fun.After all, Su Meng has limited time to revise.

However, when he saw the first page, his eyes lit up.

"What's the matter? I remember when you wrote the script, you said that you can't understand most of it if you are not 30 years old, and it is difficult to understand what kind of person Shen Gongbao is in this play if you are not 50 years old."

A screenwriter next to him leaned over after seeing Qian Ke's reaction.

"No, we underestimated her."

Qian Ke said, and couldn't help sighing, now he finally understood why Zhang Qian and Zheng Yihang both emphasized that Su Meng was a genius.

He has seen too many geniuses and so on. He has talent and potential, but it is just talent and potential.Without the accumulation of time and rich life experience, it is difficult to write those things that are rich in connotation.

However, Su Meng is different. Although he is only revising the lines he wrote, compared with the boring plot of the first version he wrote, Su Meng's revised version is too interesting.

"Lin Qian, are you sure this was written by Su Meng?"

A screenwriter next to him looked at it for a while, but he couldn't imagine it.

Shen Gongbao's original character design should be a wise man with lofty ideals who has to succumb to reality but wants to resist, a sage full of contradictions.

He has a thorough understanding of King Wu's defeat of Zhou, and he knows what kind of existence he is in front of those saints who play tricks on the world.Although he said he was still resisting, he had already compromised in his heart, and he was just working hard to prevent himself from losing so ugly.

What's more, he knew that he would definitely have a seat on the Conferred Gods List. If those saints could be happier, his seat might be a little higher.

It seems to be a very high-level character design, but because the first version only considered the connotation of the characters, Qian Ke did not make the lines popular, but just added philosophy blindly.

And after Su Meng made the modification, the high-profile character of Shen Gongbao disappeared, and became a funny character that would make people laugh.

For example, in the plot design, Su Daji met Shen Gongbao before entering the palace.

"Little fox, there is an abyss in front of you. Although there is something you desire at the end of the abyss, you cannot jump over it."

"You don't need to beg. You came here on the order of Empress Nuwa. Of course, I won't stop you, but I've thought it through. It's too late to turn around now."

"Hey~ let's go..."

There are three dialogues in Shen Gongbao in this plot. Through these three dialogues, the image of Shen Gongbao is a wise man who has seen through Su Daji's tragic future and wants to persuade Su Daji against him in a three-dimensional way.At the same time, it also portrays Shen Gongbao's compromise in the face of power and his helplessness when he looks at Su Daji who has stepped into the abyss.

Under the power of the saints, he is just an insignificant little person, and all he can do is to please those noble saints with his ridiculous resistance.

This kind of line design is very good, but it is too lofty. Maybe one or two years after the film is broadcast, someone will come to analyze the character of Shen Gongbao in depth, and then a bunch of audiences will feel that this is a buried masterpiece.

But that's just reviews, not box office.Movie history is not short of those movies that were highly rated as a mess but died suddenly at the box office.

Blindly high-powered style will only distance you from normal audiences, so what if you have a good reputation?Are there still few movies that are well-received or not?

If you want the audience to buy it, it is useless to blindly have a good plot and philosophical connotations. After all, the audience buys tickets to enter the movie theater to relax themselves, to make themselves happy, not to feel brainstorming. If you want to think about so many philosophical things, it is better to just buy a copy of "Nietzsche" and read it slowly at home.

Philosophy is something that philosophers should consider, and what ordinary people should consider is how to make their lives happy.As long as you can be happy, even if it is a funny film with no connotation at all, it will still sell well, and countless people will still pay for tickets.

As for the shortcomings?It may be that there will be a lot of critics after more people watch it.However, such a movie itself brings unburdened happiness to the audience.As long as you can do this, you are successful, even if you don't applaud it, it doesn't matter.

And these three high-quality lines have undergone Su Meng's modification, and they seem to have disappeared, turning Shen Gongbao into a funny-looking and weird-looking person.

"Wow~ Look what I found? A wild fox that wants to eat a swan!"

"Ah? Why did you ask me? Don't be so nervous! You are from Empress Nuwa, how dare I stop you! But are you sure you want to jump into the fire pit and become a roast fox?"

"Ok, ok, ok, ok, go, go, go, this is the first time I've seen such a stupid monster."

Through three ridicule-style words, the original high-quality setting is directly subverted, the impact on the plot has not changed, and the meaning to be expressed is basically expressed, but it will not make people feel boring.

The most important thing is that the audience does not need to delve into anything. While allowing the audience to understand the plot, it also makes the audience feel the helplessness of Shen Gongbao while smiling knowingly.

Especially when it is said that the existence behind Su Daji is Nu Wa, if you look into it, you will feel the desolate and powerless cry from him.

People under the eaves had to bow their heads.If you want to survive, sometimes you have to know how to act stupid. The saint said that 1+1=3, then you must not be equal to 2.This is reality.

Shen Gongbao persuaded Su Daji to return because he still wanted to resist in his heart, but he gave up after only a little persuasion and warning. This is also his compromise with the power.

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Chapter 65 This may be the finishing touch of the whole movie! (fifth more)

"Although it is unbelievable to say, I feel that she has captured the essence, reduced the distance between each character and the audience, and narrated some things that were difficult to express in an easy-to-understand way. It is neither boring nor boring. It will not be boring, and it will make the audience smile. The most important thing is to stand up to scrutiny, not just a comedy drama without connotation."

After everyone read all the scripts, Qian Ke said that suddenly he really wanted to meet Su Meng, the child prodigy who made "Zhuang Yanyi" so successful.

"I don't think it's as complicated as you think. The first point is that she is a child. The second point is that she is very playful and not good. She is more naughty than you think. The third point is her way of thinking. Not like us and don't want to be interfered by us."

At this time, the screenwriter Zhou Kang who was sitting next to Lin Qian said.

Compared with other screenwriters in the conference room, Zhou Kang has an advantage that others do not have, that is, he works in Mitian Media.

Although Su Meng stays at home most of the time, she sometimes comes to the company to play.Although it will not cause a lot of trouble to others, it will make people feel relaxed when they are free.But regarding Su Meng's lack of skin, everyone in Mitian Media has an understanding, that is, Su Meng's skin is extremely skinny, but it will not cause trouble to others.

Su Meng won't bother people who are working, but if someone plays with her, then that person will know what the devil incarnate is

For example, when others are free, they seem to serve a cup of matcha obediently, and all the matcha is filled with wasabi.Another example is putting devil's hot candies in normal candy packaging.

Although it is very funny, many people have been on Su Meng's way, but sometimes as long as they are cute, they can be forgiven.What's more, Su Meng will not affect those who are working, so people from Mitian Media still like Su Meng very much.

"why would you say so?"

Qian Ke raised his own doubts.

"So, if you ask a very simple question, do children think about fun first when they think about something? Or is it about depth?"

Zhou Kang asked back.

"this..."

Qian Ke hesitated, of course he knew the answer to Zhou Kang's question, how could a child care about the depth of a thing?

"You mean that we adults often fall into the misunderstanding of thinking and complicate simple things. Children are different. The starting point of their thinking must be interesting, and they want simple things to be solved easily. And Su The reason why Meng can modify it so well is that he can see the boring things in our script."

"As a child, she still has to consider the thoughts of adults, but while considering the thoughts of adults, she also wants to make those boring things interesting, coupled with her talent in literature, so this script was born, right? ?”

Qian Ke said, feeling a little suddenly enlightened.

"The authorities are obsessed, but the onlookers are clear. This may be the reason why Su Meng didn't want to come to discuss the script with us before. She didn't want us adults to influence her. I heard that Su Meng didn't read the script during the filming of "Zhuang Yanyi" .”

Zhou Kang said and looked at Lin Qian first.

"Well, it's also because she hasn't read the script. She has not been influenced by the script, so she can use her talent more recklessly to create the plot she wants."

Lin Qian said, a trace of pride appeared in her eyes, this is her daughter!

"Zhang Qian told me after filming that he was a little jealous of Su Meng. At the beginning, I didn't understand why he would be jealous of a child. Now I understand. Don't talk about him, I'm jealous too. Plant something... oh~”

In the end, Qian Ke could only end her words with a sigh.

"Brother Hang, why don't you join our discussion?"

At this time, Zhou Kang found that Zheng Yihang, the chief director who should have been the most active, was very silent, which did not fit his personality.

You must know that when the first version of the lines was written, Zheng Yihang was able to talk for hours without stopping by himself, which shocked them all.And now it's a little too silent.

"I was just thinking, is she really just a child? Look at the setting of King Wu of Zhou for yourself. Her talent and thinking about society may be much stronger than those of us who have stepped into society."

Zheng Yihang said and put the script book that he had been holding in his hand before on the table.

"I don't think there is any need to change the settings of King Wu of Zhou!"

Another editor, Shang Tong, a famous novelist, opened an extra copy of Zhou Wuwang's lines in his hand.

He was responsible for King Zhou Wu's lines, because the role in the plot is relatively simple, so he didn't think about modifying it, and completed the setting at one time.Minor revisions may be made later, but he doesn't think the revisions will be large, so he didn't look at it just now.

"It almost overturned my previous setting!"

After a brief glance, Shangtong frowned.

Very poor, extremely poor setting.A purely righteous and brainless character most often appears in the theme of Dragon Quest or some younger works, but there is no right or wrong and no justice in the adult world, so if such an image appears in all age groups The words in his works, on the contrary, will make people disgusted.

However, he did not express his views all at once.The main reason is that Zheng Yihang was affirmed by him in the previous line book discussion, a person who is underappreciated.

Zheng Yihang can definitely see how bad this setting is, so why did he still agree?

"Hiss~ She won't even change King Zhou's settings!"

After thinking about it for a while, he also found that he had fallen into a misunderstanding.You can't use a simple character setting to judge whether a character setting is good or bad.Whether it is literature or film and television works, there are only suitable roles, not bad ones.

Put the right characters in the right scene and match the right scene, so that even a simple story about eating can have the possibility of becoming a god.It is the most stupid way to look at a problem with one point of view.

"Well, it has also been revised. She should have read some historians' comments on Emperor Xin, the prototype of King Zhou. At the beginning, I also thought that King Wu of Zhou's settings were modified very stupidly, but after seeing King Zhou's lines and After the revision of the characters, I carefully thought about the impact on the whole plot, and found that this should be the finishing touch of the whole movie, a perfect summary of King Zhou, and a perfect mockery of our lives."

After Zheng Yihang said this sentence, a lament for himself appeared on his face.