Su Meng was a little discouraged in an instant. If she had to change so many lines, wouldn't she have no time to play games?

"Host, think about your Crystal Palace, think about the beautiful days when you can sleep with Opie on your pillow. Don't you want to see this drama explode? Don't you want to open the unlimited capital system?"

The system spoke immediately.

Su Meng is very satisfied with Xianyu's attitude now, but it is impossible for Su Meng to retire directly, so the system can only slightly violate its original intention.Ask Su Meng to make a little effort.

Today's efforts are for better fishing in the future!

"Okay~ Then how do you change it?"

Su Meng said, and also took out a pen.

"It's very simple. We not only changed the lines, but also directly changed the character design. Doesn't Shen Gongbao look more righteous? Then we will modify him into a funny comparison who talks sarcastically. It completely subverts the audience's perception of some characters. Recognition, let the audience shout out such words as 'what kind of crap is this movie' when watching the movie, further lowering the box office and audience expectations."

The system said very confidently.

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Chapter 62 The character that the audience will definitely hate (second update)

The lines of Shen Gongbao in "The Demon Fox Su Daji" are relatively complicated and full of meaning. It is still a bit difficult to modify the plot under the circumstances that it is not easy to change the plot.

Fortunately, with systematic guidance, Su Meng modified it very quickly.

"System, why don't you have the ability to throw out a script that even a god can't save? It's too much trouble for me to write word by word."

Su Meng complained after revising Shen Gongbao's script.

"If you can open the unlimited money system, I will give you whatever you want, but you can't open it! And... haven't I relieved the pressure for you? Some lines have not been modified."

The system retorted.

"Is there no problem with the part that has not been modified?"

Because it would be too troublesome to modify all of them, so in line with the principle of salty fish first, Su Meng did not modify those lines that were neither high nor very important.

This seems to make Su Meng feel a little weird. A person who is serious for a while and not serious for a while, it seems that people will always give birth to a little strange feeling.

"Isn't this better? You can't even find the exact positioning of a character. Wouldn't it be a sudden death plan after the release? Someone will come and criticize you for changing your lines. Isn't the fan rate faster?"

"What's more, if you think about it, a simple funny comparison may also bring laughter to the audience, so that the audience will stay and watch because of this funny comparison. And if we directly create a character whose position is unknown, wouldn't it even make the audience laugh? All the things that might explode in the end have been extinguished?"

The system continued to explain, and suddenly felt so wise!Absolutely do not leave the audience with the possibility of wanting to watch.

"Yes, the system, you are really too smart!"

Su Meng sighed, as expected of the system, even this thing that she hadn't considered was taken into account.A simple funny character can also be successful!And this kind of funny and serious character will make people confused.

Isn't the powder falling off by brushing?

"What about King Wu of Zhou?"

As she spoke, Su Meng took out the script book of King Wu of Zhou.

Although King Wu of Zhou is the protagonist of the story of Fengshen Bang, in "Su Daji, the Demon Fox of Misfortune", King Wu of Zhou does not have many roles. The most important role is a dialogue with King Zhou, a righteous king and a tyrannical tyrant dialogue between.

This conversation was so exciting that Su Meng couldn't help applauding after watching it.So this paragraph must be changed!This paragraph must not appear in the play, otherwise it may play a role in bringing the dead back to life and become the finishing touch of the play.

"It's very simple, continue to change the persona, change the persona of King Wu. Change King Wu into a pure incarnation of justice, who will only use righteous words to criticize others, but ignore the mistakes made by people on his side. If pointed out Mistakes of this type are countered with the excuse that it was a necessary sacrifice or something like that."

"To put it simply, King Wu of Zhou is absolutely just. Even if the people on his side do unjust things, they will forcibly refute with just excuses. People will hate King Wu of Zhou."

"Because of the existence of the Conferred God List, King Wu of Zhou has a lot of fans. If the audience sees that we are black King Wu of Zhou, will it further reduce the viewing experience of the audience? So this scene will not be the highlight On the contrary, it will lead this drama to a deeper abyss, and even turn it into an epic bad movie."

"The most important thing is that as long as you admit that these mistakes were made by you in the future, won't you lose your followers quickly? You can also find a very good reason to retire, go to school for two years, and completely cool after you come out. Open the unlimited fund system through!"

The system said solemnly, once again satisfied with his wit.

"That is to say, let King Zhou Wu, who was originally a wise and wise king, become the kind of little white protagonist in the traditional Dragon Quest story? As long as he is against him, he is evil, and everything he does is righteous? Is that so?"

Su Meng opened her mouth to confirm.She also felt that the system was right.

"That's right, that's it. So in order to further increase the disgust of the audience, we also have to slightly change the character design of King Zhou. For example, King Zhou knows that his dynasty is about to collapse, and King Zhou also knows that Su Daji is a Nuwa faction." To confuse him. It's just that the destiny is like this, he can't resist, so he can only enjoy himself in time."

"Of course, don't make it too obvious. Let King Zhou's setting be a little bit more in line with the real history. He has great wisdom, but he also likes to enjoy himself. After knowing his ultimate destiny, he also made a compromise while resisting. .A tragic figure, with such destiny, he can't resist and can only wait for the destruction to come."

"In this way, the audience shows pity for King Zhou, and then conflicts with the brutal image that King Zhou should have in their minds, let them know that the screenwriter of this film is completely messed up, and also spray you on other journalists who wrote film reviews Reasons. After all, these are your decisions."

The system continued, feeling more and more that he has entered the state, and it may help Su Meng create an unprecedented super bad movie!

"Wonderful~ System, you are so smart, why didn't you come out to guide me when I was acting in "Zhuang Yanyi"? Then there wouldn't be so many things to do."

While praising the system, Su Meng also complained a little. If the system had appeared in the first place, there would be the explosion of "Zhuang Yanyi"?It's already chilled out, okay?

"You're not talking nonsense, and you don't look at how simple the task I gave you when I started, the ghost knows you will play like that."

After hearing Su Meng's complaint, the system also complained a little bit. It's something that others want to cool down all at once, but Su Meng insists on complicating simple things. The 30.00% audience rating created by "Zhuang Yanyi" is a miracle that is absolutely impossible to be broken by subsequent TV series.

If it weren't for Su Meng not having a fan base, she might be a god right now.Therefore, it is necessary to use a super bad movie to shake Su Meng's core fan base that has initially stabilized, so that Su Meng will be forgotten faster after she retires.

Even if someone still remembers Su Meng in a year or two, they are just teasing, not becoming Su Meng's fan.

"Okay, so I let you come this time, what's your opinion! Then I talked about the task, and you can come up with a good reward for me after filming in a few days."

Su Meng said, remembering that the system hadn't issued a task to her yet.How could she miss the opportunity to be rewarded for nothing?She didn't get the 1000 million and [-] lottery draws last time, but it made her heartache for a long time!

Chapter 63 The first version of overexertion (third update)

"Sister Lin, it's time to get off work."

In the middle of the night, Lin Qian's assistant walked into Lin Qian's office and reminded her, with a trace of admiration in her words.

She will come to work under Lin Qian's name. Apart from salary and treatment, she will worship Lin Qian more.

A real strong woman, she sold her real estate ten years ago and bought a humble small studio, stepped into the complicated show business circle, and started her legend.

Many people say that Lin Qian's success is due to luck. This may be true, but it is absolutely inseparable from hard work.

It is very rare for a person who has reached Lin Qian's level to do some small things by himself, let alone soak in various materials all day long, arrange his travel schedule full, and even accompany his most beloved It's hard to find time for my daughter.

"Well, don't wait for me next time. The company is not very busy recently. I'm just busy with my own affairs."

"This is what I should do."

"Take it easy."

After Lin Qian finished speaking, she simply tidied up and left the office.

After sitting in her car and seeing the deserted streets, Lin Qian felt a little lonely and guilty in her heart.

According to Su Meng's current age, she should spend more time with Su Meng, but she has too many things to do.The only comfort is that Su Meng understood her, and never really blamed Lin Qian for not being with her.Moreover, Su Meng is still very self-reliant, and she hardly needs to worry about anything.

"Aunt Lin, you are back."

When Lin Qian returned home, it was almost early morning, but she still saw Bu Miaohan waiting in front of the dinner table.

"Well, why don't you go to bed, it's late."

Lin Qian asked.

"It's okay, tomorrow Saturday, I don't have class. Then you go and carry Su Meng to bed, I can't hold her."

Bu Miaohan said and pointed to the study, then turned around and entered the kitchen.

After hearing Bu Miaohan's words, Lin Qian's eyes showed a trace of helplessness, but more of a kind of satisfaction.

When she came to the study room, she saw Su Meng curled up on the spherical sofa chair like a kitten, covered with a blanket, with notebooks, backing boards, and pens beside her.

Not caring about those notebooks, Lin Qian gently lifted the blanket and picked up Su Meng.

Su Meng slept deeply, and a little bit of saliva flowed from the corner of her mouth, which seemed to be a sweet dream.And Lin Qian's movements were also very gentle, without making Su Meng feel conscious discomfort at all.Finally, she gently put Su Meng on the bed, covered her with the quilt, and returned to the dining room.

"Has she stayed up all night writing scripts again?"

While Lin Qian sat down, Bu Miaohan also put a bowl of hot noodles on the table in front of Lin Qian.

"I didn't stay up late today, but I played games for a while at lunch and dinner, and I was writing scripts at other times. Tell me that she has finished writing all the scripts at around nine o'clock, and you can get them when you come back later. I tidied it up. She seemed to be too tired and fell asleep on the sofa. I can't hold her, so I can only wait for you to come back. "

Bu Miaohan said.

The two revisions of the script allowed Biao Miaohan to completely change her view of Su Meng. At the beginning, Su Meng looked like a hopeless salty fish, but that was just not the time to work hard.

As long as it's time to work hard, Su Meng works harder than anyone else. The way she curled up on the sofa and fell asleep like a kitten because she was too tired became very handsome in Bu Miaohan's eyes.

This may be the reason why Su Meng can succeed!

"Is that so? Then you've been working hard to take care of Mengmeng recently, and I'm a little busy at work."

Lin Qian said.

Bu Miaohan really feels a little sorry for taking care of Su Meng while going to school, but Bu Miaohan herself is too strong, if she hires a nanny, it will hurt her heart.

"It's okay, this is what I should do. I'll go to bed first, Aunt Lin. I'll clean it up tomorrow after you finish eating and put it on the table."

Bu Miaohan didn't say too much, it was almost early morning, and she was really sleepy.

"Well, let's go."

Lin Qian said, feeling even more comforted in her heart. There is a daughter who understands her, and then there is a caring little padded jacket. What else should I pursue in this life?

Soon, Lin Qian finished the supper that Bu Miaohan had prepared for her, washed the dishes and came to the study.Sitting on the sofa where Su Meng was sleeping before, she reached out and picked up the script book that Bu Miaohan had organized next to her.

Although she knew that Su Meng was revising the script when she came back two days ago, she didn't go to see it because she was afraid of disturbing Su Meng, and she didn't know the extent of Su Meng's revision.

However, after picking up the script book, she discovered that Su Meng's revisions to the script book were much larger than she had imagined. Most of the characters' lines had been revised, and the lines of important characters had been revised by more than 60.00%, even There are also quite a few characters whose character settings have been modified.

Seeing all this, Lin Qian felt even more relieved. Although she contacted two big-name screenwriters and novelists to write the first version of the script, because she didn't know Su Meng's specific positioning for the film, Therefore, there must be excessive force in the writing of the lines, or the positioning is not identified correctly.

As for why Su Meng wasn't allowed to talk to the person who wrote the script book?It's very simple, Su Meng won't go by herself.So Lin Qian could only find someone to write it, and then asked Su Meng to modify it.

From the perspective of Su Meng's modification, they still set the film's positioning too high.This is not to say that the final achievement will be achieved, but that the audience may resist if the positioning is too high.

Even if the things in the movie are reasonable and profound, so what?If the audience can't understand it and feel that the show is too high-end and not suitable for them, then they will naturally not pay for tickets.

Lin Qian also noticed this when reading the first version of the lines. There were too many places where too much force was used, and she just said some big truths, trying to express what the show wanted to convey.But also because it is too high-end, it distances itself from the audience.

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