How to Develop a Sick Brother Control

And also smiled a little helplessly.

"Ok."

Listening to Kazuya's somewhat sarcastic answer, Kato nodded and walked out of Renya's room, preparing to prepare dinner.

"By the way, An Yi, where is your kitchen?"

And Kato, who was slowly concentrating on the preparation of dinner, shook his head and radiated the doubt in his heart: Don't worry, it is definitely just an illusion after your own guilty conscience. After all, a gentle girl like Ayase, How could it be possible to think so much?

----------------------------Dividing line-------------------- -------------Of course, what Kato didn't expect was that on the other end of the phone, Ayase, who had put down the phone, looked pale and froze for a long time: Yes, Hui-senpai again You lied to me, it was like this last time, and this time it is also a lie. If you just want to stay and take care of two boys, it is normal, but why is Sister Hui lying to me again?

Why is Hui-senpai being so dishonest about her brother?

Why lie?

It means that Hui-senpai is nervous about me, but why is she nervous about me?

Even if the two of them became a couple, there's no need to be nervous about me, is it really weird?

Unless, Sister Hui thinks that I like my brother, not the kind of likes of brothers and sisters, but the kind of likes of men and women?

Are you kidding me?

How could I possibly have that thought?

But, is it really not?

Ayase looked at her hands in a daze, and for the first time hesitated on this question.

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Although Kazuya and Kato reluctantly started work, Lunya's state has obviously not changed much. In the process of writing together, Kazuya is a little surprised that he often sees Renya. At first glance and some exaggerated expressions.

Although I don't know what Lun Ye's normal state was like when he was writing, and although I knew that Shiyu of Kasumigaoka would go crazy like Lun Ye when he was in a creative state, no matter how you looked at it, Lun Ye's state was not like that. It is the state of Shi Yu.

Because Shi Yu's crazy actions are all directed at specific characters in the script or novels. She developed this trait only after substituting herself into the feelings of the characters in the novel. Lun Ye, obviously different, one day Since then, the most nagging words in his mouth should be

"No, that's not enough", or

"It could be better, no, it could be better."

Although excellence is a good thing, it obviously needs to be built on the basis that excellence is helpful to creation, and Lun Ye's kind of

"Striving for perfection" did not play any positive role at all. According to some random scans of Lun Ye's

"abandoned"

According to Kato of the article, there is not much difference between the content of the script that is affirmed by Lunya and the content of the script that is denied by Lunya.

Although Kato is not an overly professional gamer, her views should at least represent the views of a considerable number of ordinary people, so Kazuo is also sure that Lun has not come out of his dead horn now, but should be Drill deeper and deeper.

"If it continues in this state, it is basically impossible to complete the script creation on time!"

Kazuya lamented looking at Lun Ye's not-so-pleasant state, and in this way, he had to try and think of an alternative.

---------------------------Dividing line--------------------- ------------- The so-called alternative is naturally to increase the number of people who write the script. Although everyone writes the script, it will inevitably cause the level of the script to be uneven, but in Kazuya's view , just like the painting during animation creation. If the level of the painting director is high enough, then as long as all the original paintings are not too bad and cannot be modified, then in the end, a good painting can be given.

The same is true for the current game script. If the person in charge of reviewing the script at the end can determine the general direction of the script and then revise the script, it does not matter even if the person in charge of script writing at the beginning is not that high.

Of course, this definitely refers not to the script of the three heroine lines, but to the lines of all the secondary heroines that Lun Ye is responsible for. From Lun Ye's own words, it can be seen that he seems to be responsible for four branch lines to one person. He expressed his deep fear and thought that he could only accept the revision of two lines at most, so it was very simple, just find another person to be in charge of the other two lines.

The content of the heroine of the sideline is actually not much. Even if there are some flaws, it will not be too much concern for the players, and part of the plot of this sideline can be constantly revised and improved. Finally, some of the sideline story is related to the main line. The part that supplements the main line can also be decided by oneself, and then handed over to the other party for writing.

So, in fact, the revision of the heroine of the sideline is much simpler than the content of the mainline.

And Lun also made this task so difficult purely because he himself fell into that kind of self-demanding situation, and in his current state, unless he was told to give up, he would not be able to get out of this situation.

So for Kazuya, it was inevitable to find someone else to help Lunya write the side story.

Of course, it's impossible to just pull one person to write the script, otherwise, Kato Megumi, who has been beside the two of them, half making soy sauce and half doing logistics, is the best choice.

First of all, this person must have sufficient experience in galgame games, and know all kinds of plots and the more common content in galgame; secondly, this person should have good writing experience, after all, if you have no writing experience, you must have a conversation about script writing. And psychological descriptions are hard to get started with.

In fact, the conclusion at this time has already come out, that is Takasaka Kirino!

As the guide of Kazuo and also on the sister galgame, although Kazuo is not sure whether Tong Nao has played other types of galgames, but at least people like the junior girl, or the sister's best friend, should have been involved with Tong Nao. , She should not be too unfamiliar with the lines and behaviors of these two types of characters.

More importantly, the rare Kirino has a background in writing novels, and, although I have not read Kirino's novels, even if the plot is nonsense, Kirino writes novels, and novels will definitely have dialogues and psychological descriptions. With this foundation, other aspects of the script can be supplemented by He also.

However, when Kazuya called Tongno with great interest, what he got in return was Tongno's rejection.

"I'm sorry, Kazuya, it's not that I don't want to help!

But know that I am very busy right now!

By the way, did Ayase tell you that I’m writing a novel for mobile phones recently, let me tell you, my novel has already received a lot of hits, for the sake of novel creation—”

"Sorry, Ayase didn't tell me this, you probably didn't tell her?

If you really think about your friendship, I think you'd better tell her about it!

She's been sad lately thinking you've made other new friends online and snubbed her! "

"Eh, is that so?"

Tongno's voice was obviously a little excited, but she didn't care about Kazuya's dry dissatisfaction and complaints,

"Anyway, thank you for telling me this, and I will explain it to Ayase, but you also know that my mobile novel has become more and more popular, and it takes me a lot to update the novel every day. It's time, so I'm very interested in the script and so on!

But we'll have to see if there's any free time in the future!

sorry! "

"Ah, I wish you drowned in your cell phone novel!"

Kazuya hung up the phone angrily and said dissatisfiedly, although he did expect that Tong Nai might refuse his help for the mobile novel, but he did not expect to be rejected so simply,

"How much the reconciliation between you and Ayase is also my effort?

Why don't you have the mentality of repaying your gratitude at all? "

Of course, when I think about it, it seems that I haven't had one-on-one contact with Kirino for a while. This is because I promised Ayase that I will no longer have a private relationship with Kirino, and on the other hand, it seems that Kirino himself I am also a lot at peace because I am busy writing this mobile phone novel.

And when I haven't been in touch for so long, I asked the other person to help me as soon as I opened my mouth, and it was not such an easy job. This kind of invitation seems to be a bit too much. Thinking of this, Kazuya's heart is relaxed. a little.

"Oh, by the way, Kazuya, do you have any better material for writing novels or something, if you can, provide it to me?

Anything going on around you?

I don't know much about your boys' situation and say-"

On the other end of the phone, Tong Nao was still a little excited, although this was much better than her usual arrogant look, but Tong Nai in this state made Kazuya sigh with emotion: Girls are always in trouble. Very fatal!

----------------------------Dividing line-------------------- ----------In the end, after dealing with Kirino's request to Kazuya in turn, Kazuya's plan to abduct and help Kasaka Kirino was also announced to be shelved.

"So, who's next?"

It was at this time that Kazuo also received an email:

"Master, when is the next novel writing instruction?

Hinata and Zhuxi are going to an event this weekend. I don't have to take care of them this weekend. Is it ok this weekend? "

"Okay, it's up to you!

Black cat beast! "

Kazuya's eyes suddenly lit up, who said that there was no one there, this is not a coincidence, is there a person in front of you?

It is normal for black cats not to be considered by Kazuya at first, after all, those of black cats

"poisonous"

Kazuya's novel left a deep impression on Kazuya, so subconsciously, Kazuya has classified black cats into the so-called category of so-called black cats.

"Can't write novels"

on the list of people.

However, if you think about it carefully, this evaluation is quite unfair for Black Cat, who has written many novels and submitted countless drafts to magazines, so at least from the perspective of daring to write , The confidence of the black cat is not lacking. From this point of view, the black cat has surpassed An Yilun, who is very uneasy about his own script.

Secondly, the black cat is a very stubborn character who will never admit defeat easily. She will still put in a lot of effort in what she has to do, so even if her script is not well written, she will not I gave up because of Kazuya's one or two blows, but will keep revising and strengthening.

In the end, this is also a situation that can be revealed from the novel before the black cat. In terms of the emotional content that he is not good at, the black cat is particularly good at imitating, although this kind of imitation will appear very clumsy in the novel. , but in the script creation of galgame, some necessary similar bridges are indispensable, and the black cat's familiarity and imitation of these contents in this regard has a taste of self-taught.

Therefore, to sum up, such a black cat, which may still be a blank piece of paper and has a strong plasticity, can try to be as close as possible to the existing writing style of Kazuya and Shiyu, for the writing of the script. Collaborate to create unexpected value.

In a sense, the black cat is actually more suitable than Tong Nai, because Tong Nai has formed his own habitual style of writing in the process of writing, and it is difficult for He Ye to adapt to Shi Yu's delicate style of writing. It is even more difficult for Nai's Mary Su Wenfeng to adapt to Shi Yu's script.

But the black cat is different. The black cat is now in the stage of self-correction, which also means that she can imitate.

"Come to my side now, I have a perfect opportunity to train you, seize the opportunity!"

Thinking like this, Kazuya quickly sent an email to the black cat.

And soon, the reply from the black cat came. It could be seen that although there was some hesitation at the beginning, the pie that Monofilament and also painted for her was really tempting, and she quickly stepped on it. :

"Okay, wait a moment, I'll make dinner for my sisters and come here!"

"OK, I'll be waiting for you at the door of the game store you often go to!"

And also a little excited to reply to an email.

Some secretly shouted happily:

"There is help!"

"Any help?"

Although his voice was very soft, Kato caught Kato's face with Kazuya's somewhat excited look.

"Could it be that Kasumigaoka-senpai is back?"

"Of course not. If Shi Yu-senpai comes back, it will not be a simple problem with help, but a problem that you don't have to worry about at all, right?"

Kazuya made a joke and said excitedly,

"It's okay, although this guy's strength is not that good, but it's convenient because she really wants to improve, so it doesn't matter if you can do your best to squeeze her potential!"

"she?

Is it a girl? "

Ren also asked in surprise,

"Is it going to sea? No, the paintings of going to sea are really good, but writing scripts is completely two fields. Going to sea is not as reliable as Ying Lili!"