How to Develop a Sick Brother Control

"The two of us completed all the script revisions without the permission of Shi Yu-senpai?"

And was also clearly a little shocked by the proposal.

"If you think it would be better to wait here, I have no opinion!"

"Got it, I'll do it!"

Lun also raised his hand first.

"I should have thought of this earlier, although the script needs to be overhauled, but the specific plot does not need to be modified too much, the main thing is to add other plots to make the branch more attractive, and these are things the rest of us can do too. , Since it can be done, then of course I will do it!"

Afterwards, Lun Ye showed a provocative look towards He Ye:

"Or, Kazuya Aragaki, after writing the script, you feel that you don't have the strength to revise it, and you don't want to do it?"

"how could it be possible?"

Kazuya raised his head, showing a disdainful expression,

"For the provocation of a guy like you, even if it is a trap, I will jump out and show you!"

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Although the big words were released, both Lun Ye and Kazuya knew that it was definitely not an easy task to complete such a task of revising the script without the guidance of Shiyu of Kasumigaoka.

And he understands this point very clearly. He deeply remembers that Shi Yu used much less time than himself to complete his script task twice, and he has written a lot of this. The speed of the people of the things is still overwhelmed by Shi Yu, so it is the first time to write, not to mention the speed of Lun Ye, who has no experience and no reliable teacher guidance.

"So how often do we aim to complete the new script revisions?"

Like when He and Shiyu worked together, Kazuya and Lunya also divided the work, but this time it was Kazuya who took on the three independent heroine lines - Weiyang Line, Liuli Line The revision work of the line and the Mauri line, while the task of Lunya is to enrich the plot of the other side characters.

"I think it's better as soon as possible?

After all, the original painting on Ying Lili's side is still waiting to be revised, and it takes a lot of time to modify the script. It would be better if it can be completed within a week! "

Lun also stared blankly at the computer screen and said.

For Lunya, it's not that he doesn't know what he wants to write. In fact, before Kato proposed to let him and Kazuya take the responsibility of revising the script, he had a vague sense of needing to revise the script himself. , he also has a rough estimate of the plot of many side scripts.

However, thinking about the plot in his mind is not the same as writing it out in detail, especially before writing, he has realized many problems in other people's writing, and he wants to avoid and correct similar problems. in this way.

On the other hand, although he has read the script countless times, he is still far inferior to Kazuya, who created the script together with Shi Yu.

Therefore, compared to Kazuya who started working while asking about the progress, the progress on Lunya's side is really not optimistic.

"Can not be done?

Sure enough, from the beginning, I was asked to directly create and enrich the plot. This is too reluctant. If there are only one or two lines, I can try it hard, but at the same time, I have to combine the arrogant childhood sweetheart line, the sister's girlfriend line, and some natural lines. The characters in the stagnant school girl line and the partner line of other clubs are written with enough cuteness, which is still too early for me. "

Finally, after two hours of no progress, Lun also sighed heavily,

"Although there are a few specific strategy plots of the sub-line characters that can be added in the form of Finaldisk, but if these characters are not cute at the beginning, they will not attract players, and the follow-up finaldisk will be useless!"

The current situation reminds Lun of the situation when he first started writing the game plan. At that time, he was completely unable to write a word. However, the current situation is completely different from the situation at that time. At that time, he was very inspired. Procrastination in ambiguous situations, and now, for Lunya, is the feeling of intimidation caused by worrying about the consequences of one's own failures when full of inspiration.

"Can't you write it?"

He glanced at Lun Ye, whose face was flushed, and Kazuya turned his head worriedly. In fact, his state was not very good, although he would feel more relaxed when revising the script of the Weiyang line that he was in charge of.

However, when he thought of revising the different options of the Liuli line and the Xunli line in the later stage, he was a little uneasy, because he knew that, especially the character of Liuli, Shi Yu put a lot of effort into it, if his modification did not succeed If so, what he will suffer is not only the result of the unsuccessful game, but also the direct destruction of Shiyu's achievements in Kasumigaoka.

However, in the current situation, it is obviously the issue of Lun Ye that is more important.

"There's no way. Although I worked very hard, I thought that if I couldn't write well, it might lead to the failure of the whole game. I couldn't even write under this kind of pressure!"

Lun also said with his head down, obviously this was his real frustrated idea.

"Don't be too nervous, right?

In the end, both Aragaki-san and Kasugaoka-senpai will take care of you, so you just need to create! "

Kato said with some comfort, but obviously this did not play any role in the recovery of Renya's state.

"I think so too, but at least Kazuya and Shiyu-senpai shouldn't put extra burdens on them, especially Kazuya, if senior-senpai can't release the closed state for a long time, then the task of reviewing the manuscript may have to be handed over in full. to you, right?

It's not that I'm worried about you, but after all, you don't have the ability of Shi Yu-senpai? "

Lun also secretly looked at Kazuya while typing on the keyboard with some pain. After all, what he said might indeed hurt someone.

Of course Kazuya didn't realize this at all, he just nodded and said:

"Yes, I really don't have the ability of a senior, but if you don't write hard, I won't have a chance to review!"

"Okay, I'll try my best!"

Lun also glanced at Kazuya, who also had a bad expression on his face, and sighed heavily and said.

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As for why Kazuya should have a more spacious home, it was because Kazuya was worried about causing unnecessary trouble for Ayase.

Of course, why did Kato join with the two of them, and Kazu couldn't even think about these things, but the natural trust in Kato made him feel that Kato would definitely handle some logistical work. OK

Of course, the handling of this logistical work includes not only the provision of dinner and supper, but also some notifications to family members.

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"So, is it possible that my brother won't come back today?"

Ayase, who received Kato's call, said with a complicated expression while holding the microphone tightly in her hand.

"Sorry, Ayase, there is an important problem with the club, so Aragaki-san has to stay here to solve it!"

Kato also said apologetically to Ayase.

If there is one person who Kato can't handle so well, that person is probably Ayase. Although he has maintained a good relationship with Ayase before, Kato's conscious deceit to Ayase was still made by Kato. She has always maintained a sense of guilt towards Ayase.

Therefore, even if he tried his best to avoid such feelings, Kato subconsciously lowered his stance during the conversation with Ayase.

"Actually, it's nothing. If it's the club of Sister Hui and her brother, is that the game club founded by Senior An Yi?"

After his situation was known to Ayase, Kazuya also told Ayase about his work in blessing-software. Of course, he also told Ayase what he called

"Pretty Girl Game"

true meaning.

However, in order not to disgust Ayase, he just told her that this is a love simulation management game for all ages, and did not confess to Ayase the 18-ban clips that may appear in such a game.

So, even though she sneered at this kind of virtual love game, Ayase has temporarily understood the real situation of this kind of thing.

"Yes, there is something wrong with the script of the game, so Aragaki-san is working hard to revise it."

"But, if I'm not mistaken,"

Ayase's voice was obviously suspicious, and she said,

"The script of the game should be in charge of that Kasugaoka-senpai, right?

And the elder brother is only the person in charge of the coordination in this club, so there is no need for him to accompany Kasugaoka-senpai to supervise all the time, right? "

Although Ayase's words were polite, there was still a dissatisfaction between the lines that Kazuo couldn't come back, and this feeling was also noticed by Kato.

"Is such that,"

Kato had a headache and wanted to explain, and then she realized that it would not be easy to explain all these things to Ayase. In the end, she explained the situation succinctly,

"The current situation is that Kasumigaoka-senpai can't revise the script, and the production time is relatively tight, so I can only let Aragaki-san, who has experience in writing novels, work hard."

"I see,"

Although this answer was not very satisfactory, Ayase could feel that Kato on the other end of the phone was not lying, so she agreed lightly, and Ayase said,

"Then, if my brother doesn't come back, will Senior Sister Hui also stay with Senior An Yi?"

"Is this?"

Kato doesn't know if it's because she is too sensitive, but now she is not so confident in front of Ayase, and she still suspects Ayase's motive for questioning now, so, by accident, she can't help but scatter it again. a little lie,

"I prepared a little dinner for the two of them and went back. After all, I'm useless here, and it may interfere with their writing ideas."

Of course, in fact, Kato had already called her family and expressed her idea that she might not go back, and her family, as usual, agreed to her request very freely.

"Okay, but if I don't take care of me, I'm still a little worried!

Especially that senior An Yi, I still remember that the last time my brother stayed with him for one night, nothing happened. This time they might have to stay up all night again, which will seriously affect the rest and study. right?

Not to mention that if the spirit is not good, it may affect his afternoon football training. "

"Aragaki-san asked for leave from training, but I don't think you should worry about that. After all, they have plenty of time this time, so they should still sleep on time."

Kato comforted Ayase reluctantly while looking at Kazuya and Tonya, who were clearly preparing for the night.

"All right?

So please, please, Sister Hui, take care of my brother more? "

After receiving a comforting reply from Kato, Ayase unexpectedly did not dwell too much on this issue, but answered simply.

"Well, Ayase, you don't have to worry anymore!

I will take good care of him. "

"Okay, so that's it?"

Ayase smiled softly and put down the phone.

"OK, Ayase, pay attention to yourself too."

Ayase's last chuckle always made Kato feel that something was wrong, and after thinking about it for a long time, she gasped a little: Why bother me to take care of Kazuya?

I clearly told her that I was going back?

"Kato, what's wrong, thank you for your hard work, is there any problem with Ayase?"

Noticing that Kato had hung up the phone, Kazuya's words came in, interrupting Kato's thinking.

"Ah, there's no big problem, but you'll have to be criticized by Ayase when you go back. I think Aragaki-san, your parents are your sisters, not yours?"

Kato quickly switched states, made a relatively relaxed and normal expression, and said.

"Well, there's nothing I can do, maybe my parents just trust me too much?

After all, when I was not worried, I was consumed when I was a child?

So in order to help me, Ayase can only play the role of the so-called supervisor? "