Ying Lili was also shocked by these words, "Wait a minute, if this is the case, the workload will be doubled directly, and your original idea should be corrected from the beginning of the story."
"But in that case, whether it is Xunli or Liuli, their meaning of existence will be preserved." Kasumigaoka Shiwa said, "A writer should love the characters in his own writing, right? Or, Sawamura-san thinks the content of the story Expansion will lead to an increase in the workload of the original painting? So although suggestions are made, modifications are not supported."
"Stop looking down on people, isn't it just a little more work?" Ying Lili snorted and sat back on her seat, "You are the one asking for trouble, and I have an assistant here. If it becomes painful in the end, I don't know."
Xia Zhiqiu raised his hand with one hand, "Can we get rid of that meaningless arrogance? It's enough to perform in front of Mr. Mori, why can't you treat me more frankly like you did to Mr. Shinomiya?"
"Who isn't being frank?" Ying Lili snorted. "In short, I just put forward my own point of view. If you think it needs to be revised, you are free to change it."
After finishing her coffee, she was about to get up to pay the bill, and then left the cafe.
"I said, is Sawamura-san planning to let me revise the outline of the story alone?"
"Huh? Do you still want me to find you an assistant? Dianthus can't do it." Ying Lili said.
"I didn't mean that." Xiazhiqiu Meifeng picked lightly, "They are all partners under a plan, can't you give some benefits like Mr. Sigong?"
As soon as the words came out, Ying Lili hugged her body immediately, and shrank back to the corner of the seat, "What do you mean? What are you going to ask me to do?"
"That's not what I mean." Kasumigaoka said, "I just want someone who can read the outline at any time and tell me how I feel when I am revising the outline. Isn't Sawamura, who is also the creator, a ready-made candidate? Or is it , you want me to go find Mr. Ethic who can’t be contacted? If so, the outline might collapse, okay?”
Ying Lili put down her hands, "Why are you such a troublesome woman..."
"Ah, you just know now?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said, "Since you agreed to cooperate with me, you should get used to things of this level sooner, right?"
"Tsk——, okay." Ying Lili said, "Then you can go to my house with your notebook later. But it is said that the meaning of existence of two people is preserved, but the ending that Liuli chose to give up just now was denied. In that case, what will happen to Xuri's ending?"
"This...then I'm afraid I'll have to ask Shinomiya-san and Eiriri-san."
"Huh? What's the matter with me and Shi Zhu? And why are you suddenly so intimate, you guy. Also, don't walk around or touch my things in my house."
"Yes, yes, I understand." Kasumigaoka Shiu walked behind Eirari, nodded in agreement with Eiriri's request, and then suddenly said, "Hey, Eiriri-san. Which side do you think is the past karma or the present intention? More important?"
"A script?...Maybe it's now." Eriri thought about it and replied, "You can't forget the past, but you have to carry the present and move forward to the future. After all, Seiji and Xunli both live in the Now, and Liuli is a few generations ago... Hey, what kind of expression is that on your face!"
"No, nothing."
Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked at Yinglili who wanted to walk in front of her, and felt that she could hardly restrain her smile.
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The next day, Monday, was a school day as usual.
Lunch break at the private Toyosaki Academy.
"How long are you going to be depressed? You didn't even come to yesterday's seminar?"
At the corner of the remote staircase, the listless Ai Lunya bumped into Kasumigaoka Shiwa who seemed to be waiting there.
"Senior Shi Yu?" An Yi raised his eyes, "That... I—"
"I'm not interested in meddling in your personal affairs with Sawamura-san and Kato-san." Kasumigaoka crossed his arms, "But don't forget, it was you who brought us together to make a game."
"But Eriri and Kato—"
"Kato-san is probably not angry." Kasumigaoka stood motionless with her arms folded, staring at An Yi, "As for Sawamura-san, her anger has dissipated, as long as you don't repeat the stupid things before, there will be no problem. "
An Yi was stunned, "Yinglili's anger has disappeared?"
"Don't ask me, it has nothing to do with me." Xia Zhiqiu gestured to the stack of printing paper in his hand, "I didn't come to you to talk about this, the plot discussion meeting you were absent on Sunday, I have already written the plot concept Alright, as the chief director and editor-in-chief of the project, don't you plan to take a look?"
"Plot idea..." An Yilun finally cheered up.
He followed Xiazhiqiu Shiyu to the rooftop where no one was there, and handed over the revised plot idea to An Yilunye.
It took about 10 minutes, An Yi raised his head from the paper with a look of unsatisfactory expression.
"It's amazing, this concept!" He said excitedly, "Although the direction of Xia Shizi's previous works is completely different, the atmosphere and surprises are dotted in the plot paragraphs, which makes people breathless! Especially As the story progresses, the causal relationship between different options leads to a completely different choice when leading to the final outcome! Whether to choose Xunli in this life or Liuli in the previous life; whether to continue to live with Xunli in your daily life , or reconnecting with Liuli in the previous life, no matter which one is full of charm, this kind of plot structure that makes people have to play the second week of the game is really addictive!"
"So, Mr. Ethics has no objection to the plot concept?"
An Yilun also nodded vigorously, "No! Especially at the end of the game, Xunli and Liuli's personality dialogues again and again, as well as the part of the final farewell, that kind of handsome and free and easy, with a little bit of reluctance, is really amazing. It’s great! And the favorability of Xunli and Liuli is set separately, if you can’t focus on the favorability of one party, you will go to BE because of the sick and delicate attribute, which is full of challenges!”
"I plan to set up at least fifteen BEs."
"Senior Shiyu! No, Teacher Xia Shizi!" An Yilun also held the plot outline high, "You are simply a god!"
Facing this praise like a fanatical believer, Kasumigaoka Shiwa was slightly moved, but finally sighed silently, and then said: "Since Mr. Ethics thinks there is no problem, then it can be regarded as the final draft, right? Then hand it to Sawamura-san and start Formal character design."
"Hmm! I didn't expect Senior Shiyu to come up with an outline that I couldn't pick at. It's really great!"
Kasumigaoka yawned lightly, "...it's not my fault alone. The current outline is the second edition, and Sawamura-san and I revised it on the basis of the first edition."
"Is that so... the two of you are really powerful, you are the strongest partner!"
"You can't say that." Kasumigaoka put down her hand, and glanced at Ai Lunya's face, "In the end, if it wasn't for Shinomiya-kun who had doubts about the meaning of Xunri, Sawamura-san wouldn't be able to mention it." Make new suggestions. I can't write this outline. Yesterday's discussion meeting was still very good. After all, I got OK from Mr. Ethics once."
"Hey?"
The existence of a certain trigger point in the words, like the butterfly effect, made An Yilun feel stuck in his throat.
But Kasumi Hill did not give him time to ask further questions,
"It's four o'clock in the morning all night, and I still need to rest, so I will go back to the classroom first."
After dropping these words casually, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu left the rooftop, leaving An Yilun sitting on the bench alone in a daze.
Standing in the stairwell of the rooftop, when slowly closing the door from the inside, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's gaze silently swept over An Yi's disheveled expression.
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