Sister Hui Ye Wants Me to Be Reliable

"It was Kato-san who put it on for you, I just told her where the blanket is."

Shi Zhu answered casually, folded the blanket, and stuffed it back into the cabinet.

"I see."

Xia Zhiqiu, who had a clear understanding, also left the room.

Shi Zhu was still concentrating on tidying up the things on the table.

Chapter 57 So, Dragon and Tiger found a new development in the discussion

After the meeting at the board game shop, the discussion on the plot concept in which only the club supervisor was absent was disbanded.

The four said goodbye to each other at the door of the store, and then left in different directions.

But Kasumigaoka Shiwa was stopped by Sawamura Eriri when she was less than 50 meters away.

"Sawamura-san? Is there anything else?" Kasumigaoka stopped, "Shouldn't you go back on Shinomiya-kun's motorcycle?"

"It's not good to bother Shizhu every time, and it's not a school day." Ying Lili followed, "I have something I want to talk to you about."

"Talk about what?"

"About the idea of ​​the plot."

The blond painter walked side by side with the brunette writer who was half a head taller than her.

"Didn't the discussion just now be over? Although Shinomiya-kun's opinion cannot be said to be meaningless, it is also very vague in terms of the result." Xia Zhiqiu shook his head, "Since there is no decent revision opinion, then we can only After returning to school, let Mr. Ethic take a look..."

"That's it." Ying Lili's attitude was quite correct, "When that guy Shizhu thinks about things, he really doesn't look like a nerd, or when he looks at this story, he doesn't have enough nerd thinking. But his opinion is not It’s not unreasonable, Kasumi Hills, you know it well, right? Unless you assert right now that the character ‘Xun Li’ was only created to be destroyed.”

"Oh? It seems that Sawamura-san has thought of something else, but he didn't have time to organize his words just now?" Kasumigaoka turned his face slightly, with a half-smile, "For the time being, we have cooperation in different aspects. It's okay to listen."

So the two turned around two more blocks, sat down in a corner of a cafe by the window, and started an extended battle for the seminar.

After the waiter put the two cups of coffee in front of each other, Kasumigaoka Shiwa picked up the tweezers, picked up a cube of sugar from the sugar bowl, threw it into the cup, and then casually stirred it with a teaspoon.

Ying Lili didn't touch her cup, she leaned back gently on the backrest, and looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu who was careless.

"So, let's get to the point?" Ying Lili started her own words with a seemingly questionable sentence, "Dianzhu wondered, 'Is Ye Xunli's 16 years really meaningless'; Kato said, 'Maybe There is no way to grasp the thoughts of Xun Li who is destined to disappear'. From the creator's point of view, I don't think there is a problem with your choice, but from the player's point of view... I probably care about Xun Li's thoughts, or Say it's a question."

"in other words?"

"Xunli was replaced by Liuli in this way. Even though they are essentially the same character, the replacement between them must be something that is contradictory." Ying Lili said, "It is also said in your story that Liuli's relationship with Xunli As far as Xun Li is concerned, it is the other self that exists in her heart, that is, another personality, not the lost memory of Xun Li. Therefore, the equal sign between the two characters cannot be drawn smoothly."

"But if we don't follow the existing arrangement, then Liuli will disappear after the story ends." Kasumi Hills said quietly, "In this way, through the progress of the story, the plot foundation accumulated several generations ago will be shown, It would also be meaningless.”

"Yeah, Liuli's disappearance is tantamount to turning the background of the whole script into a farce." Ying Lili looked at Kasumigaoka on the opposite side, "But how should Xunli's disappearance be understood? Go back and read the conception again, I I can feel that during the creative process of Kasumi no Oka, you pay more attention to the past Liuli, rather than the current Xunli."

"After all, Xunli has inherited the memories of the past. The composition of Xunli's personality is also influenced by Liuli's personality."

"So is it necessary to deprive Xuri of the meaning of existence?" Ying Lili said, "If I have to say it, I hope that Xia Zhiqiu can handle Xuri's part more carefully."

"What do you mean?" Xia Zhiqiu was curious about what Ying Lili was thinking at this moment.

"At the end, it is no longer such a simple plot where Xunli is replaced by Liuli." Ying Lili said, "If there is a plot between the two personalities Xunli and Liuli, each expresses his own thoughts and expresses his own thoughts in the story. In the end, arrange for Xunli to give up voluntarily, or say goodbye to Seiji more freely, and leave Xunli at the end, wouldn't it be more handsome?"

"But in the final analysis, the final result is actually disappearing." Xia Zhiqiu said, "What's the point of this?"

"Of course it is to make the role of Xuri more plump." Eiriri smiled proudly, "It's like Katsuragi Takashi and Kiryu Sento communicated with each other, and Katsuragi Takashi who came up with the answer gave up the dominant power. Although that belongs to the past. That's it now."

Kasumigaoka Shiwa squeezed the center of her eyebrows, "Let's not talk about Sawamura-san's example that only you understand, but if you follow your original example, let Ruri, who has tied up all the karma chains, bid farewell, and then entrust Seiji in the present world to Xun Li is also feasible."

"No, I don't think it's possible..." Ying Lili frowned, "This story itself is based on the two people from the previous generation, so both Seiji and Xuri will be influenced by the previous generation. So Liuli can accept Xunli's entrustment, but if it's the other way around, Xunli might not admit this result."

"You mean, admit it?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu raised her head and looked at Ying Lili who was sitting opposite her, "It's obviously the same thing, but Liuli can accept Xunli but not Xunli, do you think so?"

"It's not that I think so, but I feel that it would be a little uncomfortable. The initial start was because of the previous generation, and then the experience was entangled with the previous generation, and finally it was gifted like this. If this is still the case If I can accept it frankly, although it is a bit incompetent to say so——but I don’t think I will like this role anymore.”

Ying Lili replied like this, then took a sip of her cup of coffee, then put down the cup and put a cube of sugar in it.Xiazhiqiu Shiyu watched her actions with great interest, and then continued to ask.

"Is that so... It's not an evaluation from the creator's perspective, but a dislike from the reader's perspective? That's it, I understand."

Kasumigaoka Shiwa, who understood the meaning of Yinglili, took out her mobile phone and wrote something, and said while recording: "I probably understand what you mean, and it would be better to deal with it this way. But because of this reason, maybe The whole idea has to be revised.”

"Does it need to be modified so much for Xunli's final attitude?"

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Chapter 58 It's common sense to hold it high and fall hard again

"No, it's not just the attitude at the end. It's because of your proposal that I suddenly realized that if these two characters were given enough choices, the story would be better."

"So what are you going to do?"

"Add Xunli's ending. Through different options in the game advancement process, the story will eventually go to a different route. Since it is already a galgame, there is no need to be obsessed with an ending, right?"