Sun Xue immediately greeted me with a smile: "Teacher Xu, please give me some guidance on the problems one by one."

Teacher Xu took out a pen from the bag he carried with him and waved to Sun Xue, "Come here and we will look at each item."

Sun Xue hurried over and sat next to Teacher Xu, and Xu Chen also leaned his head over.

"First of all, the beginning is not attractive enough. There are too many words to describe the scene, which seems a bit cumbersome and affects the rhythm of the entire story."

While talking, Teacher Xu used a black pen to draw out the problematic areas.

"Sun Xue, you must understand that scene description serves the story. You are a bit overshadowing this. This long scene description can be replaced with one sentence."

Sun Xue nodded immediately: "Okay, Teacher Xu, I will remember it."

"And here..."

Teacher Xu started from the beginning and analyzed the problems in the work one by one.

Soon, the manuscript was filled with revision comments.

Sun Xue lowered her head and listened carefully.

It took Teacher Xu almost an hour to finish the manuscript.

After Teacher Xu analyzed the work, Sun Xue was so moved that she said thank you several times in a row.

She gained so much!

There were many problems that had been bothering her for a long time, but after Teacher Xu pointed them out, she felt like she was enlightened.

Xu Chen immediately leaned into Teacher Xu's ear and whispered: "Teacher Xu, can Sun Xue participate in the competition after polishing this novel?"

Teacher Xu pondered for a moment: "It's possible, but the probability of winning is almost non-existent."

"If you want your work to win awards, the subject matter is also very important. In terms of subject selection, you must strive to be novel. Her subject matter is too common."

"Oh, I understand!" Xu Chen nodded.

Then he added tentatively: "If you can't choose a new subject, after you finish writing it, you can find time for her to read it again, okay?"

Unexpectedly, Teacher Xu readily agreed: "That's no problem. Once you've written it, send it to me."

Xu Chen immediately filled Teacher Xu's tea cup with a diligent expression: "Teacher Xu, you are so kind. Thank you, Teacher Xu."

Teacher Xu smiled knowingly: "You kid, I understand what you are thinking."

There was an imperceptible smile on Xu Chen's face, and his face was slightly red.

Teacher Xu pretended to be very serious and said to Xu Chen: "Sun Xue is an excellent girl, you must treat her well."

Xu Chen was silent and looked happy.

Hearing this, Sun Xue looked at Teacher Xu in surprise. She wanted to defend herself, but she swallowed the words in the end.

Teacher Xu turned his attention to Sun Xue, with a faint smile on his face, "Sun Xue, Xu Chen is very accomplished in literature. You should communicate more together and ask him for advice."

Sun Xue blushed and replied: "Okay, Teacher Xu."

I thought to myself, this teacher Xu is quite interesting, he actually regards her and Xu Chen as a couple.

However, she was especially grateful to Xu Chen. She could see that Xu Chen's every move to please Teacher Xu at the dinner table was all for her sake.

The meal was very pleasant, and we chatted for several hours. The topic revolved around literature and creation. To be precise, it is around Sun Xue's works.

Sun Xue has gained a lot.

Many of Teacher Xu’s words suddenly awakened her and made her suddenly enlightened.

Her confidence in the next creation greatly increased, and she remembered Teacher Xu’s advice to her. You need to read a lot of books so that your creation can reach a higher level.

Sun Xue prepared a new entry with confidence, but she decisively gave up that manuscript.

Since Teacher Xu suggested that she study more, Sun Xue has readjusted her work and rest schedule.

Take a break at 11pm, so you can squeeze in another hour of reading time every day.

She decided to go to the library every night to read and write.

After dinner, she took her computer and plunged into the school library to create and read.

The school library closed at 11pm, so she insisted on leaving until closing time.

Xu Chen remained unshakable and got up early every day to run with Sun Xue. After running, he would go to the lake to study.

On this day, the two of them walked towards the lake after running. Xu Chen's face was full of doubts: "Sun Xue, where have you been after school these days?"

"Go to the library and study!"

"No wonder? Are you free tonight? Why don't you go sit in the coffee shop!"

Sun Xue smiled and shook his head: "No, I can't mess up my plan."

Xu Chen was puzzled: "Sun Xue, why are you working so hard?"

"Xu Chen, didn't you listen to Teacher Xu? You need to read a lot of books."

Xu Chen retorted: "That is a long-term plan, not a matter of one or two days."

Sun Xue disagreed: "Xu Chen, do you know? This kind of learning opportunity is very precious to me."

"You all went to college, so maybe it doesn't matter. But I'm different. An opportunity like this may only come once in my life, so I have to cherish it."

Of course Xu Chen couldn't understand what Sun Xue said. He actually wanted to find a chance to go shopping, watch movies, eat delicious food, and have fun with Sun Xue.

In his opinion, isn't that what chasing girls is all about?

However, he found that Sun Xue didn't seem to be interested in these. All she could think about was reading and studying.

He also found that when he was with Sun Xue, Sun Xue always treated him with respect. She acted very politely and showed no reaction at all to his overwhelming love.

This made him very distressed!

Logically speaking, since his performance was so obvious, Sun Xue should be able to feel it!

Hey!

He sighed silently and smiled helplessly: "Sun Xue, then I will accompany you to the library to study in the future."

Sun Xue said hurriedly: "No, you are busy with your business."

Hearing Sun Xue's words, Xu Chen felt a little disappointed.

However, he ended up going to the library.

He will not be discouraged by this. Since Sun Xue likes to read, he will study with her, as long as Sun Xue is happy.

Half a month of school life flashed by.

Apart from sleeping and resting, Xu Chen spent most of the rest of the time with Sun Xue.

Go running, go to the lake to study, go to the library to study at night, and discuss creative issues together.

Xu Chen tried to find various excuses to ask Sun Xue out, but Sun Xue's decisive attitude made him compromise every time.

He felt very unhappy and joked: "Sun Xue, when you graduate, I suggest that the principal give you a Diligence Award."

Sun Xue smiled and said nothing, she understood Xu Chen's thoughts.

But in her opinion, Xu Chen didn't understand her at all.

As long as she makes up her mind about something, she will go all out to do it, and no one can shake her belief.

She is eager to submit a satisfactory answer to herself when she graduates. She is eager to have her photo entered into the college's hall of honor. She is eager to study at a top foreign university.

She is even more eager to prove herself in front of her classmates: online novel writers are no worse than their traditional writers, or even better than them.

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