From abandoned baby to CEO
Chapter 481 Don’t worry, Xu Chen is in trouble
Sun Xue was still a little reserved when she sat down to eat with Teacher Xu for the first time.
Fortunately, Teacher Xu is very approachable and always smiling.
After chatting for a few words, Sun Xue stood up and respectfully handed the gift to Teacher Xu.
"Teacher Xu, this is our first meeting. I heard that you like drinking tea, so I brought you some tea leaves for you to taste."
When Teacher Xu saw this, he stood up hurriedly: "You're so polite! We can just have a meal together, what kind of gift should we bring? It's too expensive."
Xu Chen quickly added: "Mr. Xu, you're welcome. This is Sun Xue's intention, so just accept it."
Teacher Xu hesitated for a moment, then smiled kindly and said: "Then it's better to be respectful than to obey, so I'll accept it. Thank you, Sun Xue."
Xu Chen sat next to Teacher Xu. He leaned towards Teacher Xu with an attentive look on his face.
"Teacher Xu, when are you going to be a guest at my house? I'll give you some of my dad's good tea then."
Teacher Xu's eyes narrowed when he smiled: "Yeah, you can have this. Lao Xu does have a lot of good tea! Last time I went to your house, the Pu'er that Lao Xu asked me to taste was very good."
"Pu'er, right? I asked dad to leave more for you. I'll call my dad now."
As he spoke, Xu Chen took out his phone and dialed his father's number. Teacher Xu stopped him with a smile: "No, no, no, I'm just joking."
Xu Chen had already dialed the number and pressed the hands-free button.
"Dad, I'm having dinner with Teacher Xu now! By the way, Dad, do you still have some Pu'er tea? Remember to leave a few cans for Teacher Xu."
"Okay, Dad, you and Teacher Xu have a few words."
Xu Chen immediately put the phone in front of Teacher Xu.
Xu Chen's father's magnetic voice came from the other end of the phone.
"Xiao Xu, what Xu Chen just said is no problem. Last month, a friend gave me a few kilograms of good Pu'er. It has an oily color and a good taste. I will share half of it when we meet."
Teacher Xu happily replied: "Thank you, Lao Xu."
As soon as Sun Xue heard this affectionate name, she knew that Teacher Xu and Xu Chen's father had an unusual relationship.
Xu Chen's father smiled heartily: "Xiao Xu, you should worry more about that boy Xu Chen, especially his personal issues. Do you think any of your students are suitable? Match him up, my mother and I will be anxious to death!" "
Xu Chen put his mouth in front of the phone, curled his lips and said, "Dad, you and my mother are worrying so much!"
"You kid, don't be impatient. You are already thirty years old. Do you think you are still a child? My colleague is the same age as me, and he has already become a grandfather." Xu Chen's father complained on the other end of the phone.
Teacher Xu picked up the phone and said mysteriously: "Old Xu, don't worry about it, Xu Chen is in trouble."
After saying that, Teacher Xu glanced at Sun Xue sitting opposite him with a smile.
Sun Xue blushed instantly.
"Xiao Xu, you said Xu Chen has a chance? What chance? Why has he never mentioned it to me or his mother?" Xu Chen's father asked.
Teacher Xu turned sideways, lowered his voice and said to the phone: "Old Xu, just put your heart in your stomach. Let's eat first, and we'll talk after that."
While we were talking, the dishes were served one after another.
Teacher Xu is from the south, and the dishes Xu Chen orders are basically based on Teacher Xu's taste.
While eating, we chatted.
Sun Xue found that Teacher Xu was not only amiable, but also very talkative.
During the meal, Xu Chen basically chatted with Teacher Xu. Sun Xue was like a good girl, blinking her eyes and looking at the two chatting with envy.
While chatting, the topic also came to literature. Xu Chen lost no time in asking Teacher Xu with a smile.
"Teacher Xu, have you read Sun Xue's online novel for her?"
Teacher Xu put down his chopsticks, nodded and smiled.
"I read it, but I didn't finish it. I read about 20 chapters."
Sun Xue immediately asked cautiously: "Teacher Xu, thank you. Where do you think the novel still needs to be improved?"
Teacher Xu answered seriously: "It's very good. It's my first time to read an online novel, and it's quite attractive."
Xu Chen immediately stood up, filled Teacher Xu's cup with tea, and took over the topic.
"Teacher Xu, you are so humble! There is definitely room for improvement in her work, and she is also in a bottleneck period now. She wants to improve her writing level to another level, so you can give her some suggestions."
"Yes, Teacher Xu, I still hope you can give me more advice." Sun Xue agreed.
Teacher Xu picked up the tea cup in front of him and took a sip. He looked at Xu Chen and smiled a little unnaturally: "You kid, you are quite caring!"
Xu Chen's face was full of happiness, and he urged: "Teacher Xu, please give her good guidance. Aren't we all your students?"
Teacher Xu thought for a while and said: "Then I will tell you my opinion, because I know very little about online literature, and my opinion is only for reference."
Sun Xue looked at Teacher Xu in front of her expectantly.
"The story is really attractive and can catch readers' attention faster than traditional novels."
"However, the characterization is not full enough and the story content is a bit monotonous. If more elements can be integrated into the work, the work will appear thicker."
Sun Xue seemed to understand, and his face was full of doubts.
Xu Chen also noticed the subtle changes in Sun Xue's expression and immediately asked Teacher Xu for his opinion:
"Teacher Xu, how to solve this problem? You can give her some advice."
"You want the characters to drive the development of the story. In terms of characterization, I will recommend a few books to you. You can read more and learn more."
"As for the weight of the work, it requires you to read a lot of books. You have to dabble in all aspects of knowledge, instead of reading the books you like. This is a process from quantitative change to qualitative change."
"Like me, although I am usually very busy, I can still read hundreds of books in a year."
Sun Xue was shocked when she heard Teacher Xu's words.
Reading hundreds of books a year means one book every three days on average.
No wonder Xu Chen said that Teacher Xu’s knowledge reserve is astonishing.
When I thought about it, I immediately saw the difference. Teacher Xu is so excellent and so diligent.
"Sun Xue, didn't you write a novel? By the way, let Teacher Xu give you a review."
Seeing that Teacher Xu was very interested, Xu Chen followed the trend and quickly reminded Sun Xue.
Teacher Xu was stunned for a moment: "Oh, yes! Bring the manuscript and we will discuss it together."
Sun Xue hurriedly took out the manuscript from her bag and handed it over with both hands.
Teacher Xu lowered his head and looked at it carefully.
Sun Xue secretly observed the expression on Teacher Xu's face. She found that Teacher Xu's brows were furrowed as he watched.
Sun Xue immediately realized that it seemed that Teacher Xu was not very satisfied with his manuscript.
Teacher Xu looked at it very carefully. After about ten minutes, he raised his eyes to look at Sun Xue and put down the manuscript. He picked up the tea cup and took a sip, then slowly spoke.
"Sun Xue, the overall feeling of your novel is very average."
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