revived

Ren Hao shook his head, closed the book, and turned the cover towards them: "Look who the author is, it's Lu Xun!"

Chapter 123 Strikes, scripts, majors

Before they could speak, Ren Hao continued to take the next book, opened the pages, found the "problem passage" in less than two seconds, held it up and pointed it out to them: "Read the two paragraphs in this book again." Does the linking of paragraphs feel the same as Aunt Rong's book, and even the conversion method is exactly the same, well, let's see who the author is, Ba Jin."

Not to mention anything else, Fan Qirong was really surprised that Ren Hao found the passage he was looking for so quickly. Even if he is very familiar with this book, he might be able to reach the level of Ren Hao, right?

Fan Qirong can't do it by herself.

While the three of them were in a daze, Ren Hao took out the last book, without even looking at it, he turned to the first page and said to them, "I don't even need to read this book, you are on the first page." As for the question, well, let’s see who the author is, Lao She!”

Handing the books to Fan Qirong and Liu Hui for them to read carefully, Ren Hao immediately burst out laughing: "Lu Xun, Ba Jin, Lao She, which one is not a famous writer who can't be more famous? Don't they all make this kind of low-level mistake of connecting?" ? Don’t forget, these three books were taken by me casually, that is to say, their other books also have the same problem, hehe, this is a difficult question, so it seems that quotation marks should be added, right?”

As soon as Ci Juanjuan had finished complimenting him, Ren Hao stood up and rejected him, as if he had slapped him in the face. Liu Hui couldn't help but look ugly: "Lu Xun and the others can't be wrong, but we The two paragraphs about Qi Rong just now are obviously different from what you just pointed out."

Ren Hao curled his lips: "What do you mean by the same? What do you mean by different? Do you have to match every word and every punctuation to be called the same? Aunt Rong, tell me, I just gave a few examples, Is it the same as your two passages?"

Fan Qirong looked at Liu Hui hesitantly, and nodded lightly: "It's the same, especially Ba Jin's article, even the sentence structure is exactly the same as my two paragraphs."

"That's it, um, there is a mentality that is hard for anyone to avoid. When you see a masterpiece by a famous author, you subconsciously think that they are not wrong, and when you see a book by an author who is not famous, you also subconsciously think that they will. Make a mistake..."

"Hao!" Fan Qirong glared at him, not wanting him to mock Liu Hui, after all, he was her good friend in high school.

Ren Hao blinked innocently: "Aunt Rong, why did you call me? Hehe, I'm talking about you. You have committed this kind of mentality just now. You didn't care much about your classmate's words at first, but When he said that the sales of your first few novels were not good, it was obvious that you hesitated and gradually doubted yourself until you finally wavered."

Fan Qirong thought about it carefully, indeed, the change in her mood just now was all rightly described by Ren Hao.

"Actually, this kind of cohesion is not an error at all. Most traditional literary books will have this kind of jumping problem, but on the contrary, if you add some cohesive words or even paragraphs, the whole book will be unreadable." It’s gone.” Ren Hao went to the writing desk and picked up Aunt Rong’s novel, and turned directly to the 30th page. After looking at it, Ren Hao said: “The real mistake is actually here. Sure enough, Aunt Rong, you still didn’t change."

"Huh?" Fan Qirong put away her contempt for Ren Hao, and leaned over her head: "Where is it?"

"Then I'll just talk about it? If I say something wrong, please forgive me. After all, we are only high school students." Ren Hao also did not forget to mock Liu Hui.

Fan Qirong rolled his eyes at him angrily and amusedly: "Tell me, when did you become so talkative?"

Computers have only become popular in recent years, and Aunt Rong, like most traditional writers, is still accustomed to writing by hand.Ren Hao pointed to a few lines of beautiful and quiet handwriting on page No.30 and said, "Look at this sentence."

The scene in the book is a woman named Yanyan flattering a man, her words are very gentle.

Fan Qirong still frowned: "What's the problem? Auntie doesn't think so?"

Ren Hao firmly tapped his finger on the small book: "This woman gave me the impression that she was a very aggressive person, but you suddenly asked her to say such a gentle and flattering word, isn't it a bit inappropriate. "

Fan Qirong looked at him ponderingly: "People are very contradictory, I think there is nothing wrong with her personality."

When it comes to the field he is familiar with, Ren Hao looks very professional: "People are contradictory, of course I know that, I didn't say that your character named Yanyan is not well portrayed, on the contrary, the positioning is very accurate, but the sudden contradiction If it is, it will definitely give readers a feeling of discomfort. If it were me, I would give a little explanation before or after this passage, so that readers can understand her character thoroughly, or I can slowly lay the groundwork in the previous dialogue. Show her character, so that if you write such a gentle sentence, it will not be abrupt."

"Don't get excited, Auntie will take a look." Fan Qirong didn't expect him to make such a professional analysis.She took off her gold-rimmed glasses first, rubbed her sore eyes, then took the novel and slowly flipped through it.

What she was looking at was the words that involved Yanyan's portrayal in the previous article, and after every sentence, the brows gradually became serious.But just as she was about to speak, Ren Hao said it first: "Actually, I discovered this problem when I visited your house the other day, but I think that with your caution, it is basically impossible to violate this logic. It’s wrong, um, I saw that you deleted and deleted more than 30 pages ago, I guess, you overhauled it several times, so that one of the foreshadowing paragraphs was pulled down, so I didn’t say it, I thought you would finish it Afterwards, the problem should be found and corrected.”

Fan Qirong couldn't even speak, she swiped and turned the page to a dozen or so pages, pointed to the paragraph crossed out with a signature pen, and showed it to Ren Hao.Well, although it's not very clear, it can still be seen that this paragraph is exactly the foreshadowing about Yanyan.

"Hehe, let me just say, Aunt Rong, you won't make such a mistake."

Looking at the familiar yet unfamiliar Ren Hao in front of her, Fan Qirong forced herself to calm down: "I didn't make that mistake, but I made a lower one. If I didn't find out before handing in the manuscript, and the editor didn't find out after handing in the manuscript, then that's okay. This book is over."

"No, you are so careful, how could you not find it?"

"Hao." Fan Qirong suddenly changed her expression, staring at his eyes solemnly and seriously: "Tell Aunt Rong, what's the matter with you recently? Your English skills have improved by leaps and bounds, and you are proficient in washing clothes and cooking. Now it's good. Even Your writing and eyesight have reached an unbelievable level, Youdao has honed his sword for ten years, but your speed is a little too fast, right?" There was a little shock and a little joy in his words.

Aunt Rong was really happy for him.

"Uh, I've gotten better recently, and I'm learning a little faster."

"No! You have to make it clear to Auntie today!"

Ren Hao wiped his sweat with his cuff, "Ah, Aunt Rong, I have something to do, so I'll go back first." Behind him, Fan Qirong grabbed the back of his neck and dragged him back: "Since you are so powerful, here , You can also help to read the script written by Liu Hui, Liu Hui, can you read it?"

Fan Qirong really wanted to help Liu Hui. The script and the script are just called differently in Chinese and Japanese, but they are actually similar. Even if there is a difference, it will not be very big.So no one present has more say than Ren Hao in evaluating whether the script is good or bad.

The emotion on Liu Hui's face has calmed down: "Of course, Qi Rong, you haven't given your opinion yet, have you?"

Fan Qirong smiled wryly: "I really don't understand the so-called interlacing like a mountain, but your writing is very professional, and the plot is also very good. I think if I were the director, I would definitely adopt your script."

Ci Juanjuan interjected: "Liu Hui's writing is so good?"

Fan Qirong nodded and said, "You can tell by looking at it, it's very professional."

Before Liu Hui could say anything, Ren Hao said "cut": "Very professional? Very good? Aunt Rong, my opinion is exactly the opposite of yours." Now that he has dealt with this shameless book thief, Ren Hao is ready to Carry out this blow to the end.

Both Fan Qirong and Ci Juanjuan couldn't laugh or cry, they always felt that Ren Hao was deliberately against Liu Hui.

"Oh?" Liu Hui's face changed: "You haven't even watched it, so you can't tell?"

"Aunt Rong, like your classmates, it seems that you really don't understand the work of screenwriting." Ren Hao slowly sat down on the bed, weighing Liu Hui's script in his hand: "Let's not talk about the script that can't be reached. In the hands of the director, if I were the director, I would throw it in the trash bin after reading the script for two seconds, and I believe that 90.00% of the directors would not have the heart to read it carefully, hehe, Do you know why?"

Ci Juanjuan stared at him: "Stinky boy, don't buy a lawsuit, just say it!"

"That's because, your script...is too 'professional', so professional that it has surpassed your industry, where is the number one camera placed, what close-ups should be given at this time, etc., these directors You don’t need to think about the things you think about, and there’s no need to write them in the script. Just imagine, if you were a director and saw a script that almost produced all of your work across industries, would you say you would adopt him? If the script is so In detail, why do you need him as a director?" Ren Hao talked endlessly.

Fan Qirong saw that Liu Hui's face was not right, and said to Ren Hao one by one: "Hao, are you sure?"

Ren Hao nodded firmly: "This kind of script doesn't even have a chance to be placed on the director's desk, and it will probably be rejected in the first trial, hehe, if you don't believe me, you can try it, I'm sure of this. "

After finishing speaking, Ren Hao glanced roughly again, "Let me give you one last word. There is a motto in script writing: Simple is the best! It means that the simpler the story, the better, and the content of your script is exactly in line with it." Violation, whether it is good or bad, I don’t need to say, right?”

Chapter 124 Xia Wanqiu's Translation, Remuneration, One Point

At first glance, Liu Hui's script is really bluffing. A lot of professional words are piled up together, giving people a very powerful feeling.Youdao is for laymen to watch the excitement, so Fan Qirong thinks it is good.

Ci Juanjuan naturally didn't believe what Hao said, no matter how you look at it, Ren Hao is a freshman in high school, "Brat, do you have any basis for what you said?"

Ren Hao's answer surprised her: "No, I'm just a child, I'm just talking casually, hehe, everyone just listen to a piece of music and just ignore me." True and false, false and true.To put it bluntly, Ren Hao is not obliged to give Liu Hui too much advice, so they think that whether it is the truth or a lie, Ren Hao has nothing to lose.

Ci Juanjuan was almost pissed off by him, and knocked on his forehead: "Hmph, so you kid is talking nonsense."

Fan Qirong stood up at this moment, she shook her head with frowned eyebrows: "Juanjuan, probably, what Hao said is true."

"Huh? How do you know?"

Fan Qirong looked at Liu Hui, and then shifted her gaze to Ci Juanjuan: "Hao wrote similar things, and the price he was offered by the other party after being adopted was more than twice that of ordinary screenwriters, so what he said was more valuable than that of an ordinary screenwriter." We all have authority, and if Hao says the script is bad, it probably means it’s really bad.”

Ci Juanjuan was stunned for a moment: "Has he ever written a script? Which movie?"

"Well, you can ask him himself."

Ci Juanjuan grabbed Ren Hao and asked non-stop.

Liu Hui, who had been beaten by Ren Hao, remained silent after that, as if he was thinking about something, until it was almost time for dinner, he rejected Fan Qirong's invitation, and left in despair, with a slightly depressed look on his face.Ci Juanjuan waited for a while, and went back without eating.

Only Fan Qirong and Ren Hao were left in the room.

"Hao, you always seem to be targeting Liu Hui just now, is there any reason?"

"I didn't target him. If it wasn't for your sake, I wouldn't have told him whether the script was good or bad, and let him make a detour."

Fan Qirong shook her head and looked at him, and after a while, Fang said: "Forget it, let's not talk about it, um, don't you always feel that you owe Auntie something, so in the future, you will help Auntie read her books before handing them over." Look, pick and choose, and then we owe nothing to anyone."

"It still doesn't work. The editor is in charge of picking the wrong job. Even if you are negligent, the editor is professional and basically won't miss it."

Fan Qirong cast a blank stare at him helplessly: "When did this kid become stubborn?"

Ren Hao laughed and said: "This is a matter of principle. If you don't want the money, I will be uneasy." Seeing the displeasure on Aunt Rong's brows again, Ren Hao hurriedly stopped talking and changed to another person. Topic: "Are you planning to move in the next few days? Have you packed your things? How about I help you tidy up?"

"Don't worry about it. Although I bought the house, it hasn't been renovated yet. My aunt has to wait for the demolition money to arrive before I can decorate and buy furniture. Well, how is your house? I asked my eldest sister yesterday, she hasn't decided where to move yet. Well." Fan Qirong knew that Ren Hao's family was not rich, so the last time she went there was to discuss with Zhuo Yuqin, if there was not enough money, get some from her first.However, with Ren Xueyu's character, Zhuo Qian could barely borrow money, but he would never borrow Fan Qirong's money.

"Our family doesn't know yet, but if possible, hehe, I still want to be neighbors with Aunt Rong."

Fan Qirong touched his little face: "Okay, you are earning money now, and with your family's demolition money, you should be able to buy a house in Cuilin. Well, the lowest price there is 4000 per meter, the average price , is about 4300."

"Well, I have to discuss it with my parents when I go back." Speaking of this issue, Ren Hao's eyes moved suddenly: "Aunt Rong, can you give me your room key, I want to go there to see the environment and the layout of the room .”

Without even thinking about it, Fan Qirong took out a key ring from the small drawer of the desk, and there were two identical keys hanging on it. Aunt Rong took the ring and took one off and handed it to Ren Hao: "Take it, remember, It's Unit 503, Building [-], Cuilin Community, after you've finished reading it, you don't need to give the key to Auntie, just leave it with your mother."

With the relationship between the two families, the keys of each house are backed up in the hands of the other to prevent accidents.Last time, Fan Qirong lost her key and opened the door with Ren Hao's backup key.

"I see, then I'll go back to eat first."

"Let's eat here with Auntie, the vegetarian dumplings made by Auntie."

"No, my mother has already prepared the meals. If I don't go back, she will be in a hurry. Well, see you again, Aunt Rong."

"Goodbye."

……

During the remaining days of the National Day holiday, Ren Hao was busy organizing scripts, revising the dialogues that he felt were inappropriate, and finally copied the edited Chinese scripts to a 3.5-inch floppy disk.

On the first day of school, Ren Hao went to Xia Wanqiu's office during lunch break. Since the English teacher Ruan Jingyuan was also eating, he paid more attention to his words, "Mr. Xia, I would like to ask you to do me a favor. Can you do it?"

Xia Wanqiu ate a meal from the cafeteria, and mumbled a word: "Say."

Ren Hao took out the floppy disk and put it on Xia Wanqiu's desk: "Look, if it's convenient for you, can you translate the contents of this floppy disk for me, um, I want it in Japanese, I'm sorry to trouble you."

Xia Wanqiu frowned and put down her chopsticks: "Japanese?"

"Yes, I need it urgently, thank you."

Ren Hao originally thought that Xia Wanqiu would refuse straight away or ask the root cause, but who knows, Xia Wanqiu only gave a soft "hmm", put the floppy disk into the table casually, and stopped talking.

"Then... thank you very much for your hard work."

"Ah."

Ren Hao who went out could not help but smile wryly, the series of explanations prepared for the need for Japanese translation were all useless.Xia Wanqiu deserved to be Xia Wanqiu, all actions were beyond Ren Hao's expectation.

The next afternoon.

When Ren Hao and Cui Wenwen were chatting about music, he heard someone calling his name at the door of the class, and then Jiang Wei suddenly stood up, his voice full of vigilance: "What are you doing here?"

Ren Hao saw that the person who came was actually Zhou Kailiang who had been beaten by him. After so many days, his injury has healed.

Zhou Kailiang said: "Teacher Xia told you to go to the Political and Education Office." He turned around and left, and it was obvious that he was very reluctant to say this.

Department of Political Affairs and Education.

Xia Wanqiu heard a knock on the door, and softly said "Come in". After seeing that it was Ren Hao, she stretched out her slender fingers and clicked on the computer screen: "The translation is complete." Due to limited funds, The current English office is not equipped with computers for the time being, only the Office of Political Affairs and Education and several important office locations have them.

Translation finished?

Ren Hao was stunned at the time, "It can't be so fast, can it? It took me nearly three hours to input these Chinese characters into the computer one by one, let alone you have to translate?" Moreover, it is still short compared to the time spent in contact with the computer. For Xia Wanqiu, Ren Hao's typing speed is definitely more than a star and a half faster than hers.

Xia Wanqiu got up and leaned her hips against the desk, she gave up her seat without saying a word.

Ren Hao sighed in his heart, and he understood a little bit that the reason why Xia Wanqiu was so fast should be that she didn't pay attention, otherwise it would take at least three days to translate seriously.

But after all, he was helping him. Ren Hao didn't show any other emotions on his face. He walked slowly to the computer and sat down. He moved the mouse and clicked on the script translation under the Japanese system.

Ren Hao stared at the fifty-sound chart for a while, and then took a deep breath!

The details of Japanese dialogue are very different from Chinese. One of the important points is that in Japanese, men and women, old people and children, adults and minors all speak in different ways. A simple " The word "I" can be said in many ways by different people or different personalities.Moreover, there are too many types of ending words in Japanese.

The so-called who says what, this is the most difficult point for Chinese to Japanese translation.

However, Xia Wanqiu did it, and it took a day to do it.

In fact, before Ren Hao gave Xia Wanqiu the floppy disk, it was not that he did not intend to remind her to show the character of the character through dialogue. This is also a very important thing in the animation script, but considering that it is not good for him to trouble others, he did not raise that excessively Ren Hao thought, this job can only be done with his half-baked Japanese.

Ugh……

Ren Hao was a little speechless. It could be seen that Xia Wanqiu put a lot of thought into this translation. If he translated blindly without reading through the manuscript a few times, it would definitely not achieve such an effect.

Ren Hao really felt a little unbelievable, remembering that Xia Wanqiu's family didn't have a computer, so that means, she spared her spare time to do this at school, but why so fast?

The answer will be revealed soon.

Because at this moment, Xia Wanqiu's phone that was charging rang, "Mom, what's the matter... um... um, I didn't go home yesterday... um... I have something to do at school... the phone is dead... I know It's... um... Is there anything else... um, I hung up."

"Mr. Xia, you, you have been typing here all night, and you didn't go home?" Ren Hao was stunned.

Xia Wanqiu, who looked tired, took a sip of tea and looked at him sideways: "Don't get me wrong, I didn't go back yesterday because there was too much work backlog for the National Day, so I had to rush overnight. Your manuscript is too easy, and it took three hours to finish it. .”

Ren Hao felt like a bright mirror in his heart: "Mr. Xia, thank you."

Xia Wanqiu hummed, leaned against the table, didn't push him away, didn't speak, just drank tea slowly.

"Don't you ask me why I want this Japanese translation?"

Xia Wanqiu lowered her eyelids and didn't look at him: "No need."

Ren Hao took a deep breath, turned around and pointed to the monitor: "Since you are a Japanese student, you should know Japanese animation. This "DEATH-NOTE" is it. My job is to write the script, which is the one you translated. Well, now Risheng Company has adopted this script, but their production staff are almost all Japanese, so naturally they can’t understand this Chinese script, so I asked you to translate it.”

Xia Wanqiu listened quietly without saying anything.