revived

Fan Qirong interrupted him: "I have read the dialogue you wrote. Although there are some problems, it is definitely not impossible. You are capable of completing it by yourself."

"Well, even if I can finish it, it will take at least half a year, and the quality is definitely much worse than what you wrote. There is no need to doubt this, so Aunt Rong..." Ren Hao walked from left to right in his trouser pockets They took out two dozen personal coins and put them on the table: "Please accept this money, no, no, you must accept it."

Fan Qirong was a little unhappy: "What do you mean?"

"In the future, I will definitely write other scripts. If you don't accept it, how can I bother you?" Ren Hao is very serious: "The script of "DEATH-NOTE" was completed by the two of us, and I didn't give the money. Yours, but Risheng gave you."

"Writing and writing dialogues is actually not difficult. The world view and plot you construct are the most important. Auntie can't ask for this money."

"I can't say that. It's not difficult for you, but it is difficult for me. I know that the worldview structure and plot characters are the most important. That's why I'm going to give you a quarter of the money Risheng gave me. That’s [-], [-] is the first batch, I will give you the rest of the money after "DEATH-NOTE" is released."

Fan Qirong stared at him closely: "Are you serious?"

Ren Hao nodded: "There is no time to be more serious than now."

"Okay, I'll take the money!" Fan Qirong took the money in a hurry, threw it on the bed far away, and never looked at him again, "Remember! This is the last time Auntie will help you! I will write Dialogue, please be clever!"

Ren Hao gave a "uh" and secretly glanced at Fan Qirong whose eyes were still water, and couldn't help scratching his head: "Aunt Rong, that, don't be angry, oops, look, we belong to the relationship of partners, Japan Sheng bought our script, so naturally he has to give us money, if I took all the money by myself, it would be inappropriate both emotionally and rationally, do you think this is the reason?"

Fan Qirong didn't speak.

"Don't be like this, I..." Ren Hao talked non-stop for nearly 10 minutes, but Aunt Rong just ignored him.In the end, Ren Hao slapped his forehead recklessly, and put away the 2 yuan on the bed: "Don't be angry, I'll take it back, can't I take it back?"

Fan Qirong finally turned her head and looked at the depressed Ren Hao. She smiled softly and touched his head: "That's right. Auntie's main job is to write books, and the script is all about helping me." You, therefore, are not allowed to raise money with Auntie, do you understand?"

"Understood." But speaking of it, Ren Hao's temperament is also a bit stubborn. When it comes to issues of principle, he generally won't give in. This method won't work, so Ren Hao can only change to another one.

Just as Ren Hao was thinking about how to get Aunt Rong to accept the money, someone knocked on the door of her house twice.

dong dong...

"Does Qi Rong live here?"

Hearing this relatively unfamiliar voice, Fan Qirong blinked strangely, walked over and opened the curtain for a look, and opened the door casually: "I am Fan Qirong, may I ask who you are?" When seeing the man, Fan Qirong's heart moved, Feel a little familiar.

The man is about the same age as Fan Qirong, with shawl hair and casual clothes. He is not handsome, but he is very energetic.

"What? Can't you recognize me?" The man smiled and looked at her: "Look carefully."

Fan Qirong's index finger suddenly nodded between her eyebrows: "It's you! Liu Hui!"

Liu Hui laughed: "Thank you for remembering."

"Of course, you have been at the same table with me for three years in high school, and you can't forget it even if you want to." Fan Qirong said with joy and surprise on her face: "Come in, come in, what are you doing?" Found here?"

"I brought him here." A 30-year-old woman suddenly jumped out of the corner of the courtyard, and Ci Juanjuan blinked politely: "Rong Rong, long time no see."

Fan Qirong smiled wryly: "You stayed at my house the day before yesterday, why haven't you seen me for a long time? Don't be poor, let's all sit in the house."

"Okay." Ci Juanjuan waved to Ren Hao again, and said with a smile, "Little guy, hello."

Ren Hao naturally knew her. Ci Juanjuan was Fan Qirong's high school classmate and a close friend with her. She often came to Aunt Rong's house to play, and she was also close to Ren Hao.

She looks average, and she is more cheerful.Ren Hao has always had a good impression of her.

"Hello, Aunt Juan."

Ci Juanjuan's brows twitched immediately, and when she walked over, she gave him a shudder: "Stinky boy! How many times have I told you! Sister! I want to call you sister!"

Ren Hao scratched his head: "You are of the same generation as Aunt Rong, so I naturally have to call you Aunt Juan."

Ci Juanjuan was so angry that her teeth itched: "Look at the beating!"

As a result, the waving finger was stopped by Aunt Rong, and Fan Qirong glared at her: "Look at our family Hao is easy to bully, isn't it? Aunt Juan is just Aunt Juan. She is in her early thirties and looks like a child." Yes." Then, Aunt Rong patted Ren Hao on the head approvingly: "Don't be afraid of her, just call her Aunt Juan."

Ci Juanjuan rolled her eyes: "Protect him, you just protect him, hum, sooner or later I'll clean up the two of you together."

Liu Hui, who followed them into the room, smiled and said, "You two are still the same as before, arguing every now and then?"

"Yeah, she doesn't yell for a day, and she feels uncomfortable." Fan Qirong said, and made tea for them, "Liu Hui, didn't you go to the United States with your parents after graduation? What brought you here Already? Come, drink tea."

Liu Hui took the tea and took a sip: "Hey, don't mention it, my mother's business has some problems, and it can't operate for the time being, and I can't help. No, I returned to China at the beginning of the year."

"We had several meetings in high school, but you didn't come. We thought you were planning to settle in the United States and wouldn't come back."

"That's not true. In the end, I still want to develop in China. By the way, Qirong, I heard that you are now a writer? Juanjuan told me at first, but I still don't believe it. Later, I read your book and found out Eye-opening, hehe, you were good at Chinese in high school, and I remember your goal at that time was to open a publishing house, right? I didn’t expect you to really develop in this direction.”

Fan Qirong said modestly: "What kind of writer? It's just for a living. What about you, what do you plan to do when you come back this time? Do you want to do business?"

Liu Hui frowned: "I originally planned to start a business, but my father's company has something to do, so I can't afford the money for the time being. If not, I want to go another way."

"Liu Hui, you can catch up on the past at any time, come to see me today, do you have something to do?" Fan Qirong sat opposite him: "Tell me, I will help if I can."

"Thank you in advance."

"Hehe, when did you become so polite, tell me, what's the matter?"

Liu Hui settled down, "That's it. During the past few years in the United States, I learned something related to directors, and I met some friends later, and I am quite familiar with film and television dramas. When I return to China this time, it is actually a I want to develop into the field of directing, but you also know that the things involved are too complicated, and to put it bluntly, I am not very professional, so it is impossible to take this path at the beginning, so I want to change a little bit, go The script way."

"script?"

"Yes, in the past few months, I have tried to write, and I feel pretty good about myself. Whether it is a TV script or a movie script, I can write it."

As a beginner, can you write any style of script?Still well written?

Ren Hao who was listening on the side couldn't help but shook his head with a wry smile, these words... a bit big, right?

But he was Aunt Rong's high school classmate, so Ren Hao had nothing to say.

"Qi Rong, I heard that you have written a lot of novels. I think that novels and scripts also overlap to some extent, so I would like to ask you to help me read and give pointers. After all, I don't know much about this industry."

Fan Qirong frowned: "I really want to help you, but I don't know much about scripts."

Chapter 122 Pirates, Finding Mistakes, Lu Xun

Fan Qirong was discussing with Liu Hui at the desk.

Ren Hao also chatted with Ci Juanjuan on the small bed: "Aunt Juan, when you were in high school, it must have been more than ten years ago? Have the three of you been on good terms back then?"

Ci Juanjuan rolled his eyes at him, snorted, but said nothing.

"Uh, sister Juan."

Ci Juanjuan smiled and said: "Smelly boy, this is more or less the same, um, I am idle anyway, so let me tell you, the three of us knew each other when we were in the first year of high school, because the seats are close to each other, we have a good relationship." Gradually getting better." Zi Juanjuan looked at the two people opposite, then suddenly lowered her voice and said, "Since the second year of high school, Liu Hui fell in love with Rong Rong and launched a fierce attack on her, but in our time, everyone He was very conservative, and Rongrong didn't agree to date him until he graduated from high school, and Liu Hui went to the United States with his parents, and we all thought that he chose this path out of frustration."

"Oh, so there is such a story." Ren Hao looked at Liu Hui for a while, and hummed in his heart. I said, since he entered the house, why hasn't his eyes left Aunt Rong? Hmph, he still wants to chase after my Aunt Rong ,Toad wants to eat.

Ren Hao dragged him into the blacklist in a very unassuming manner, and he really had the petty bourgeois mentality of "I'm not good, so don't think about it".

"Huh? Little guy, what do you mean by that hostile look in your eyes?"

"Cough, it's nothing."

"Really?" Ci Juanjuan blinked at him ambiguously, then turned her head away, and said softly to herself: "Our Rongrong's charm is really great, from retired to high school students, usually kill!"

"Shh... don't talk nonsense."

"I didn't tell you, what are you in a hurry for?"

Ren Hao smiled wryly in his heart, but in his previous life, besides his parents, Ci Juanjuan also knew that he liked Aunt Rong, so he didn't need to hide anything.Anyway, he is a "child", and it's not surprising that he has a crush on the beautiful and gentle Aunt Rong.

On the other side, Aunt Rong began to make phone calls, as if she was asking some of her peers if they knew any screenwriters, and she seemed to be introducing them to Liu Hui.

what……

Something suddenly flashed in Ren Hao's mind.

Liu Hui... Liu Hui... Liu Hui...

and many more!

This Liu Hui...couldn't be that Liu Hui!

A burst of cold air rushed up from the spine, Ren Hao shivered, and he remembered an event a year later.

That should be Aunt Rong's sixth novel, but when she handed over the manuscript to the publishing house, the review editor actually told Aunt Rong that this novel had already been published by other publishing houses, and just recently It's been on the market for a while!

Fan Qirong immediately became anxious, and without further ado, she directly sued the author of the book to court.

Since Ren Hao was still young, he was not informed of the details. He only remembered that the person who stole Aunt Rong's manuscript was called Liu Hui. Didn't make much money.The compensation is even less.

A few years later, Ren Hao also deliberately asked Aunt Rong and Ci Juanjuan about what happened back then, but they both kept silent about it. Now that I think about it, it is indeed a bit weird!

If Ren Hao's deduction is correct, this Liu Hui should be the one who stole Aunt Rong's manuscript a year later!

There are three reasons.

First of all, as Liu Hui said just now, his parents' business in the United States has problems. If the company goes bankrupt a year later, Liu Hui will be desperate, and it is not impossible to start with Aunt Rong's novel.And, most likely, his parents' business has gone bankrupt or suffered some other devastating disaster.

Secondly, Fan Qirong and Ci Juanjuan kept their mouths shut, most likely for the sake of face they didn't tell others. After all, it's not something glorious to be stolen by a good friend who has been on good terms with her since high school.Of course, it might be because of this unpleasant incident that Aunt Rong didn't want to tell others.

Three, and the most crucial point.

Why did Aunt Rong's novels have been stolen, but she only found out when she handed in the manuscript?

With Aunt Rong's prudence, she will definitely not show the manuscript to anyone except those who have a good relationship with her. If it is possible to steal the manuscript of the novel without knowing it, then Aunt Rong's friends are the most suspicious!

Adding the same name, it is almost certain that the person in front of him is that Liu Hui!

Ren Hao's thoughts changed sharply, and he looked at Liu Hui again.If you put aside prejudice, Liu Hui's impression is actually very good, mature and stable, with a pleasant smile!

Ren Hao narrowed his eyes inadvertently, looked at Aunt Rong, looked at Liu Hui, and didn't say a word.

Now that we know that Liu Hui will steal Aunt Rong's novel, as long as Ren Hao takes a little precaution, history will not repeat itself, so there is no need to worry, but the current Ren Hao really can't swallow this breath.

Ren Hao has never tasted the taste of being betrayed by his friends, but he can fully imagine that the taste will definitely not be pleasant!

At this time, Fan Qirong, who put down the phone, looked at Liu Hui and said, "I'm sorry, the authors I've been in contact with don't know anyone related to screenwriters, so I'm afraid I won't be able to help you this time, but I will help you again." Just ask, please leave me a phone number, I will contact you if I have any news."

"Okay, thank you." After telling Fan Qirong's phone number, Liu Hui then took out a notebook from his bag, "It doesn't matter if you don't understand, help me with my staff and see how it's written."

Fan Qirong took it hesitantly: "Alright then."

"By the way, Qirong, how is your novel going?"

"Well, basically it's finished. I'll review the manuscript a few more times before handing it over to the publisher."

"Congratulations first, um, if it's convenient, can you give me a look?" Liu Hui said: "I have read a lot of novels, so I can give you some advice."

"Okay." Fan Qirong said to Ren Hao: "Hao, the novel is over there by the bed, help Auntie get it."

Ren Hao's eyes moved, he hesitated for a moment, Fang picked up the black book and handed it to Liu Hui.Even after reading it once, it is impossible to memorize all Aunt Rong's language, at most she knows the plot, but the charm of traditional literature lies in the words, so Ren Hao is not afraid that Liu Hui will copy this book.Besides, Liu Hui won't steal Aunt Rong's manuscript until next year, so it doesn't make any sense to guard against him now.

After that, Ren Hao went home and ate two apples, sorted out the sentences that Aunt Rong had written, and returned to Aunt Rong's house an hour later.

As soon as the door was opened, Liu Hui pointed at Aunt Rong's small black book and said, "Look at the two paragraphs here, do they feel abrupt? Well, you'll know if you read them along."

Fan Qirong silently read it a few times, then slowly shook her head: "I don't think it's wrong. When you say abrupt, do you mean language or logic?"

"Neither, what I'm talking about is the connection between paragraphs." Seeing that Aunt Rong was still shaking her head, Liu Hui organized her words and said, "These two short paragraphs are slightly jumpy, you have your way of thinking, maybe you think It’s okay, it’s very comfortable, but readers are different, and their way of thinking can’t be the same as yours. From the public’s point of view, the connection between these two paragraphs is too fast, which will definitely make readers a little stunned. Well, the impact is of course Not too big, but in line with the goal of moving towards perfection, I think it should be changed."

"Is that so?" Fan Qirong frowned, and thought about it, "But I wrote the previous few books like this, and I don't think it's wrong?"

Liu Hui smiled and said, "I think the reason why your sales of the first few books were not high must have something to do with this."

Fan Qirong became serious, tilted her head and pondered for a while: "Then how should I change it? Add a linking sentence in the middle? But in that case, won't it be too poor?"

Liu Hui chuckled and shook his head: "I don't know how to change it. You are the only professional in writing novels. I can at most read it."

Fan Qirong thought hard and nodded: "Thank you, I have to think about how to change it."

Ci Juanjuan looked at Liu Hui with a smile on her side: "You have already picked out the faults of our great writers, okay, I haven't seen you for more than ten years, and you have improved a lot, hehe, no wonder you are so confident in your scripts, so It's hidden."

When Ren Hao heard this, he almost couldn't laugh out loud!

What is this all about!

Hidden?

This level is called hiding?

Don't be kidding, okay?

Ren Hao really couldn't stand it anymore. In order to prevent Aunt Rong from getting into a misunderstanding, he walked over and took a look at the passage pointed by Liu Hui, and then he laughed, looked at Aunt Rong and said, "Aunt Rong, it's just about connecting the paragraphs. Say, your writing is so good that it needs no revision at all."

Fan Qirong blinked: "Really? But when Liu Hui said this, I'm really not sure. It seems that there are some problems."

Ren Hao shook his head: "The reason why you are not sure is actually because your own novel is involved. The so-called authorities are obsessed with it, and that is what they are talking about."

"Young man." Liu Hui looked at him amusedly: "Are you still in high school?"

Ren Hao and him looked at each other: "You want to say, how many things can a high school student know? You want to say, how many books can a high school student read? If you think so, then I'm sorry , you are wrong."

Ren Hao ignored the changes in the faces of the three of them, and went to Aunt Rong's bookshelf, took out three books casually, and then took out one of them and opened it. Hold a book and stand in the air so that Aunt Rong and the others can see it.

"The two paragraphs I pointed to are exactly the same as the paragraphs you picked out from Aunt Rong's book just now. According to what you said, then there is something wrong with this book?" After flipping through a few pages, "There is also a problem here? If you search this way, at least a few hundred of the problems you mentioned can be found in this book."