The system asked me to be a teacher

Chapter 96 Composition Correction
Looking at Zhou Qianqian who was in so much pain that she couldn't control herself, Kong Meng also felt sorry for her.

In the process of Chinese grading, when it comes to difficulty, dictation of famous sentences and sentences can only rank second, and the most difficult thing is composition.

Maybe the teachers in other schools don't think so, it's just a composition, just take a look and give a score.

But Zhiyuan is different. It attaches much more importance to composition than other subjects. It even clearly stipulates in the school regulations that as long as it is a student composition, at least a comment of no less than 200 words should be given.

200 words...

Hearing this number, all the teachers were heartbroken.

For a composition, students can only write eight or nine hundred words at most, but you asked me to add another 200 words?
Don't play with people like this!

It is not unacceptable if there are only ten or eight articles.

However, there are only ten classes in the second grade of Zhiyuan Middle School, with 30 students in each class, which add up to 60000 words, and they need to be completed in one day.

In view of the difficulty of the project, the second grade group arranged for two teachers to change the composition, but even so, each person has 2 words...

Deng Yun suddenly said: "Mr. Zhou, if you don't want to change your composition, why don't we change it?"

Zhou Qianqian's eyes lit up: "Really? That's great! Thank you, Teacher Deng, you will always be the most handsome!"

Deng Yun smiled slightly, and tapped the screen to draw lots.

Zhou Qianqian hurried over: "What are you smoking? Can you change it...Uh, o((⊙﹏⊙))o!"

Deng Yun said helplessly: "This... sorry, I really can't help you."

Because what he got was also a composition...

"Teacher Zhou, why don't I give you the 'Write Famous Sentences'!"

Deng Yun promoted his style, and Confucius and Mencius didn't want to appear too stingy.

And even if he is not interested in Zhou Qianqian, being able to help a beautiful woman is still very fulfilling.

But Zhou Qianqian shook her head: "Forget it, I'm fine with other things, but I'm not sensitive to typos. Asking me to change 'famous essays and famous sentences silently' is not as comfortable as criticizing essays!"

Kong Meng smiled lightly, of course he could recognize that this was the other party's excuse.

Can be a language teacher in Zhiyuan, how can it be insensitive to typos?She just doesn't want to bother herself.

After all, compared with Deng Yun, who has worked together for many years, the two are not familiar with each other, and it is easy to cause unnecessary misunderstandings when exchanging shallow words.

Withdrawing his thoughts, Confucius and Mencius focused on the test paper.

As he expected, those classical poems can be judged right or wrong with just one glance after integrating the systematic study case.

Accurate and efficient, so he changed half of the 10 sets of test papers in less than 300 minutes.

Just when he was about to make persistent efforts, Zhou Qianqian suddenly uttered an exclamation: "Wow, are all the current students so talented?"

Deng Yun next to him asked curiously: "Why, did some students write good essays?"

As a Chinese teacher, what Deng Yun likes most is composition.

He agreed to exchange with Zhou Qianqian just now, besides the other party being young and beautiful, the most important reason is this aspect.

Zhou Qianqian nodded, and opened her mouth to read: "Third watch lights and five watch chickens are the time for teenagers to study. The black hair doesn't know how to study early, and Bai Shoufang regrets studying late.

Mr. Deng, this student used such a sentence as the beginning of the essay, it is absolutely amazing. "

Deng Yun quickly leaned over to look, and sat back in his seat in a daze for a long time.

Frowning tightly, his heart was full of shock.

Obviously, this is an original poem, and those who can make poems of this level must have extremely profound literary accomplishments.

As a teacher, what Deng Yun is most proud of is not how he manages the class in an orderly manner after becoming the head teacher, but his own literary skills.

He graduated with a master's degree in Chinese Language and Literature. Although he later chose to become a teacher instead of further education, he never stopped studying.

Deng Yun likes to study, read a subset of classics and history, and read articles from all over the world.

This is also the reason why he has been mediocre in Zhiyuan for 8 years.

It's not that he doesn't want to go further in his career, but rather than the so-called success, he prefers to dive into the study of writing.

But he knew that no matter how many books he read and how many articles he wrote, he still couldn't craft such a good sentence.

Is it true that there are talented people from generation to generation?It seems that I am really old!
He couldn't help but smile.

At this time Zhou Qianqian asked: "Mr. Deng, if I guessed correctly, this composition should be written by your student, right? I didn't expect your student's level to reach such a high level."

Zhou Qianqian didn't mean to flatter her. What Deng Yun is best at is teaching students to write essays.

He even created a novel composition writing method, and any student who has been with him for a period of time will improve by leaps and bounds.

Deng Yun shook his head: "No, I know my students, they don't have this level."

Zhou Qianqian didn't believe it: "Who else could it be if it wasn't your class? Do other teachers have this ability?"

Deng Yun also hesitated, could it be that this poem was really written by his students?It's not entirely impossible.

After all, literary creation requires inspiration and talent in addition to personal literary accumulation.

"Maybe, but the specifics will not be known until the results come out."

Although Deng Yun spoke modestly, his face was still very happy.

He has already figured it out, so what if he can't write this kind of poem?The same is true for students' writing.

It is the pride of a teacher that blue comes out of blue and is better than blue.

"What's 'possible'? Mr. Deng, you are too modest, it is almost certain."

As Zhou Qianqian said, she hurriedly said to the other teachers who were reviewing the test papers, "Everyone, I found that our teacher Deng has taught another great talent. He is really a great talent!"

"Really? Let me see!"

"It's a good Bai Shoufang who regrets studying late, but Mr. Deng is really talented."

"awesome!"

"I admire you!"

"This..." Deng Yun was a little embarrassed. In fact, when Zhou Qianqian spoke, he wanted to stop her, but the other party moved too fast, and it was too late for him to react.

"Not necessarily my students."

"How is it possible? Tell me, who is it in your class?" said a male teacher who had a good relationship with him.

Deng Yun was overwhelmed, so he had to read the composition twice, and finally said: "It should be Hu Feng!"

"No.1 in your class? That is the number one in the whole school?"

"Yes."

"awesome!"

"I admire you!"

Seeing Deng Yun being surrounded by a group of teachers, humbly and proudly accepting other teachers' flattery, Kong Meng looked very embarrassed.

In fact, as soon as he heard Zhou Qianqian read a poem, he knew that the composition was written by a student in his class.

This monthly exam is an independent proposition composition with "cherishing time" as the core.

Concerning this kind of subject matter, Confucius and Mencius have emphasized it more than once in class, and even used many wise sayings from previous lives as examples.

"Black hair doesn't know how to study early, but Bai Shoufang regrets studying late." It is adapted from Yan Zhenqing's persuasion in Tang Dynasty.

After hesitating, he wanted to remind Deng Yun, but he gave up.

The other party is happy to accept everyone's flattery, isn't his strength slapped him in the face in the past?
He doesn't want to be slapped in the face, and it doesn't conform to his values.

Confucius and Mencius have always been very low-key in their dealings with the world.

(End of this chapter)