My Yunyang girlfriend is too sweet

After Xu Yang finished his meal, he was still thinking that it might take him a while to finish writing the script, but he didn't expect that he would fill in the ending very quickly.

After that, just check the plot clearly, and then add the branch line.

Xu Yang was thinking about it while eating his lunch that was several hours late.

But the plot
Xu Yang himself read it from beginning to end. After all, Xu Yang has never had any experience in writing scripts before, and because Xu Yang wrote the script himself, he always felt that it was reasonable and no problem.

So Xu Yang couldn't pick out any faults, he could only modify some unsound sentences and typos.

Not knowing how to modify it, Xu Yang put down his pen, went to the kitchen to drink water, turned on his phone and checked Moments.

[Ran Xian: I finally fulfilled one of my old wishes and ended a week of retreat, so relaxed! 】

Closed for a week?
So the reason why I didn't see Ran Xian a week ago was because Ran Xian was in retreat?

Has she finished her new book now?
Xu Yang realized that he didn't know the specific situation of Ran Xian, so he simply opened a certain blog and started searching for idle people's affairs, to find out what works he hadn't paid attention to during this period of time.

After "Love Notes", several new books have been published one after another, with various styles, but most of them are light novels and love stories. Xu Yang looked at the introduction and found that most of them have won awards. After thinking about it, I went to a shopping website and bought a copy of each.

I wanted to ask Ran Xian for help, and Ran Xian's novel writing skills are also quite good. I can feel it now when I write the script. The previous literary foundation is not very good. When writing the script, I actually feel a little lack of words.

If I really want to make games in the future, I have to write more scripts, so reading more books will definitely be very useful to me.

After placing the order passionately, Xu Yang checked the time, and it will be dinner in a few hours.

So, Xu Yang made up his mind that he should go to Ran Xian for help.

My grand plans and great careers start with Ran Xian!
By the way, I can treat Ran Xian to a meal later.

The [-]-fold cashback rate made Xu Yang want to invite his Yunyang girlfriends to eat, drink and have fun anytime and anywhere.

Speaking of this, Xu Yang began to imagine the happiness of explosive growth in assets after everyone worked in one place and took everyone to eat, drink and have fun together.

But now, Xu Yang has to find Ran Xian first and revise the script for himself.

After tidying up his messy appearance, Xu Yang knocked on the door next door.

Should be at home, right?

"Dong dong dong."

Ran Xian is at home, finished her recent work, and is enjoying her happy vacation.

Ran Xian was quite surprised when someone knocked on the door.

I didn't order takeaway, and there was no express delivery, who will knock on the door?

Ran Xian was a little confused when the knock on the door rang again.

"Is anyone home?"

Um?Isn't this Xu Yang's voice?
Ran Xian froze for a moment, got up and opened the door for Xu Yang.

"Brother? What's the matter with you?"

Ran Xian looked at Xu Yang who was a little embarrassed.

Of course Xu Yang was a little uncomfortable. After all, he spoke rudely to people yesterday and pushed them against the elevator wall, but he came to ask for help today.

"I"

Xu Yang didn't know what to say.

"Come and sit first."

Ran Xian turned sideways and let Xu Yang enter the room.

Xu Yang had been to Ran Xian's house before, and he also had an impression of the furnishings in Ran Xian's house, the most impressive one must be the bathroom.

Memories that I obviously thought I had forgotten suddenly popped up again as if they were refurbished.

Xu Yang quickly thought of something else, and expelled the things that shouldn't be in his mind.

Xu Yang looked at Ran Xian, she didn't have any other expressions.

Now that the hostess has already put it down, don't worry about it so obscenely.

Xu Yang thought for a while, and went into Ran Xian's room frankly.

"Sit casually, what do you want to drink? There are tea, juice, and wine."

For some reason, Xu Yang felt that Ran Xian looked at him and smiled when he was talking about wine.

"Juice is fine."

Xu Yang said quickly.

Ran Xian went to the kitchen to pour a glass of fruit juice. The tea table was originally the scented tea that Ran Xian was drinking.

After handing the juice to Xu Yang, Ran Xian brought up another plate of small snacks.

It was the one given to Xu Yang before.

Xu Yang didn't know how to speak, and after hesitating for a while, he started chatting about family matters.

"Well, I see that your circle of friends said that the new book is finished?"

Ran Xian nodded.

"That's right, I was forced by the editor to type at her home for several days."

A tall black figure holding a small whip and sneering appeared in Xu Yang's mind.

"It's so miserable, don't you work at home?"

"I can't help it. My editor said that I delayed the manuscript too much. She couldn't supervise me when I was at home. The book is about to end, so she took me home and kept me under strict supervision."

Ran Xian spread her hands, took a small sesame biscuit and put it in her mouth.

Xu Yang was amused by Ran Xian's description.

"No wonder I haven't seen you in the past few days."

"Why, do you miss your sister?"

Ran Xian glanced at Xu Yang with a half-smile.

Xu Yang coughed dryly twice, quickly waved his hands in denial, "No!"

"So what's the matter with you, brother? You don't come here specifically to ask me if I've finished the draft, do you?"

Ran Xian picked up her small glass teacup and looked at Xu Yang.

"Then what."

Xu Yang also felt that it was not good for him to be so careless, so let's get straight to the point.

"I want to ask you a favor."

Ran Xian froze for a moment, raised her eyebrows, and put down her teacup.

"You said, as long as my sister can do it, she will definitely help."

Ran Xian is always grateful for Xu Yang's help that day. At first, she thought that a small game controller was not enough to express her gratitude, so she would definitely do something for Xu Yang to repay her when she had the chance.

I didn't expect the opportunity to come so soon, and God helped me.

"It's not a big deal."

In front of a professional writer, Xu Yang, a novice writer of scripts, felt a little embarrassed, and felt a little embarrassed to ask Ran Xian to help revise the script.

What if you get ridiculed?What should I do if I am said to be overwhelmed?
That would be so embarrassing.
"what?"

Ran Xian asked.

Xu Yang blocked all the flinching in his mind.

The person in front of me is the big boss who wrote fifteen "Love Notes". It is good luck that many novices can't ask for the help of a big boss to revise. A piece of meat, seize the opportunity!
After giving himself a wave of blood, Xu Yang raised his head and looked at Ran Xian with sincere eyes.

"I want to ask you to help me revise the game script I wrote!"