Zongman: Start with Sakurasou and pick up a female high school student

Chapter 346

Kasumigaoka Shiyu glanced at him.

Opened her little mouth and swallowed the mint candy.

After a while.

Lin Xi lowered her head again slowly.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu gently put her hands around his neck.

Her beautiful eyes were a little blurry.

After that.

Naturally, they kissed for a while.

The two separated reluctantly.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu slapped away his dishonest.

hand on her black silk legs.

Picked up the computer next to him and handed it to him.

"Here, my latest plot, come and comment on it for me."

Lin Xi also quickly got into the state.

Began to read her novel seriously.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's writing style is still exceptionally beautiful.

And he writes very delicately.

It makes people feel as if they are in the story. The whole story and the image of the heroine are becoming more and more vivid.

Kasumigaoka Utaha fully adopted his previous suggestions.

Love Metronome Volume 2.

Added a tsundere character with golden twin tails.

As the childhood sweetheart of the male protagonist who promised to marry when they were 13 years old, she competes with the heroine Sayuka for the ownership of the male protagonist.

This blonde twin tail looks like Eriri.

And in the end, Eriri became the loser, and the heroine became the winner in life.

After reading it, Lin Xi lightly turned on the laptop.

"How is it?"

Kasumigaoka Utaha looked at him expectantly.

Lin Xi gave a thumbs up.

"Great! Yin's character is well-developed."

"The competition with the heroine is also vivid, and Sayuka's charm has reached a new level."

"And the childhood sweetheart is a tsundere. It's understandable that she failed in the end because of her lack of frankness."

"But, has Eriri seen it?"

"I think she would be so angry if she saw it."

Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Utaha smiled proudly.

"I'll show it to her tonight."

"So, do you have any suggestions about the plot?"

"Of course I do!"

Lin Xi immediately opened up the conversation.

"Senior Shiyu, your first volume is about the love of high school students."

"The second volume focuses on the love between the hero and heroine after entering college."

"The hero and heroine in this period have gained some growth and become more mature."

"It is clearer what you want in the future."

"You can say that you wrote the second volume perfectly."

"The hero and heroine got married, and the childhood sweethearts bless them."

"This is equivalent to expanding the first volume and making it a perfect ending for the love metronome."

"But this is not conducive to the creation of the third volume. Let me ask first, have you ever thought about writing the third volume?"

When Shiyu Kasumigaoka heard this, she was excited.Smiling, she leaned in and kissed his cheek.

"I hadn't thought about it before, but now, I think I should listen to your advice and think about the plot of the third volume."

"Okay, then I'll continue."

Lin Xi touched her cheek and smiled knowingly.

Organize the next sentence and continue to talk about her opinion on the plot.

"First of all, if you write the third volume, then leave a suspenseful ending at the end of the second volume."

"For example, when the wedding is going on, the heroine's mother suddenly jumps out to object and says something super explosive."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu was stunned.

"What explosive words?"

Lin Xi smiled wickedly.

"Just write, [The heroine's mother cried out: You can't get married! Because you are siblings!"

"Lovers eventually become siblings, this script is explosive enough!"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu widened her eyes.

The little mouth was also wide open.

After a long time, she gave him a thumbs up. (To read the exciting novels, go to Faloo Novel Network!)

"You are indeed a master of depression who can write the magical girl Misaki!"

"Although your suggestion is great, I still want to ask, are you a devil?"

Kasumigaoka Utaha really admires his imagination.

I am the love metronome, writing the love story of the hero and heroine.

The hero and heroine met, got to know each other, fell in love, experienced various tests from childhood sweethearts, and other handsome guys, and finally entered the palace of marriage.

As a result, he jumped the plot.

The hero and heroine are set as siblings.

So will this marriage be concluded or not?

Although it is said that love can transcend everything.

But in society, the boundaries of ethics and morality cannot be easily challenged.

So the ending she gave, "lovers eventually become siblings", can be said to be very explosive.

"Senior Shiyu, how can you ask me that? Of course I am a human!"

Lin Xi felt a little aggrieved when he heard her words.

"I'm just thinking about the plot for you."

"Hehe, I know, I just sigh, how can you come up with such an explosive setting? Keep talking."[]

"If this is the ending of the second volume, what about the third volume?"

Lin Xi thought about it and answered seriously:

"Isn't it simple?"

"Since the hero and the heroine are siblings, the marriage is naturally a must."

"The parents of both sides forced the two to separate."

"Then, a year later, the hero's childhood sweetheart and the heroine's suitor also began to pursue her again."

"It's up to you to set the plot here."

"Anyway, you can do something in the third volume and make the heroine lose her memory, or the hero loses his memory too."

"In 997, I experienced all kinds of pursuit and manipulation by my childhood sweetheart and the handsome guy who fell from the sky.After the story, the hero and heroine finally return to the place where they first dated and regain their memories. ”

“Between ethics and morality, love and reason are constantly intertwined, and finally the hero and heroine decide to go abroad, find a place where no one knows them, and continue to be together.”

“Then, at the very end, you can also set that they are not actually siblings.”

“The hero’s mother cheated on more than one person, so wouldn’t the heroine be able to get married openly again?”

“Of course, whether or not to have this setting depends on your own play, and you can also refer to other readers’ comments before making a decision. "

After finishing speaking, Kasumigaoka Utaha could not help but open the computer,

and recorded all the inspirations that came to her mind.

She took a deep breath.

But her heartbeat was still accelerating.

Her full chest was heaving.

Her beautiful figure was even more charming and attractive.

Kasumigaoka Utaha looked at the male protagonist who inspired her with her bright eyes.

She threw herself into his arms.

"Xijun, you are so great!"

"Thank God for letting me meet you!"

Lin Xi smiled slightly and raised her hand to touch her hair.

"I'm glad I can help you."