Wizards are mighty

(Actually, the entire book is in Chapter 3 of this volume)

Q version Vick thought for a while and continued.

"The beginning of the war here can be more detailed to reflect the determination and fighting ability of the Sea Clan."

"At the same time, the story of the new master targeting Sean is quite exciting and full of dangers."

"The story of the maid being prevented from coming to help is also very reasonable and can reflect the conspiracy and contradictions of one's own side. The plot of Sean's promotion to the master level in a desperate situation is a key point in the whole. The process and feelings of the promotion can be described in detail, and Sean’s strength improved after promotion.”

"At the same time, the plot of the two teaming up to kill the Sea Master and the blocking leader is reasonable and can reflect their strength and courage. The plot of dividing the spoils is best explained in more detail, including the type, value and distribution method of the spoils. Wait and prepare for the follow-up.”

"Daily, lasting for 450 years, embodying the revered status of a master, rising to level 32, deciphering clues, and exploring the ruins with others."

450 years of daily life can reflect the passage of time and Sean's growth, and the revered status of a master can also be described through some specific examples. "

"Such as how you are treated in society, how respected people are, etc."

"Upgrading to level 32 should be particularly detailed, including the insights on upgrading, the key to breakthrough, etc. The plot of deciphering clues and exploring ruins can also add to the fantasy and interest of these experiences."

“All the members entered the ruins, continuously passed levels, obtained treasures, entered the center, found the heavy treasure (energy-gathering core), and fought with each other. In the end, only Sean and the leader were left. The maid blew herself up and severely injured them, and Sean killed them with all his strength. "

"The plot of entering all the ruins here can be described in more detail. The plot of continuously breaking through levels and obtaining treasures can reflect the wisdom and strength of the team. The plot of entering the center and discovering the heavy treasure is a key point in the whole process and should be detailed Describe the appearance, function, value, etc. of Chongbao.”

"The plot of fighting each other is intense and exciting, and it can also show the greed and cruelty of human nature. The plot where only Sean and the leader are left in the end can even reflect Sean's strength and courage."

"The plot of the maid blowing herself up and seriously injuring her can also describe her spirit of self-sacrifice and strength in more detail. The plot of Sean killing her with all his strength can reflect Sean's strong strength and determination."

"Repair it, obtain the treasures, leave, and head to the Northern Continent, intending to find a small country and become a strong protector of the country."

"Well... this kind of trimmed plot can explain the physical and mental state of the team members in more detail, and the plot of obtaining the treasure can describe the storage and use of the treasure in more detail."

"It can be said to be quite perfect."

Q version Vic finished speaking in one breath, and then breathed a sigh of relief.

"How's it going? What does the higher narrative layer say?"

The imaginary Vic and the real Vic turned their heads and looked at each other.

Shortly afterwards, a line of small luminous characters appeared on the Book of the World.

"Just finish reading the last paragraph."

…

…

After seeing this line of writing, Vic breathed a sigh of relief.

"Great, it's finally over."

"Come on, keep going."

Q version Vic nodded silently, stopped talking nonsense, and continued to pick up the Book of the World in his hand and read it.

"Traveling around the Northern Continent, I met a prince who wanted to start a rebellion. Sean invested in him and promoted him to the official level. After the promotion, Sean forced him to sign a contract."

"This incident is quite interesting. It adds new variables to Sean's journey."

"Meeting an ambitious prince is a classic setting, and Sean's investment behavior gives the story a direction. However, here we can describe more about the prince's character and the reasons for his rebellion, so that high-dimensional observers can better understand Sean The motivation for the investment and why he was forced to sign the contract after his promotion would make the plot richer.”

"Sean and the maid helped him seize power, and then became a strong protector of the country."

"Then it's daily life, lasting for 1,500 years, and Sean reaches level 37."

"Well, I think the span of 1,500 years is too big. You can choose some important nodes to expand, otherwise it will become monotonous." "If you skip too much, high-dimensional observers may feel that Sean's growth is too abrupt. , if you choose to expand, you can also write some specific details of Sean’s emotional changes, interpersonal relationship development and strength improvement during this long period of time.”

"The fox tribe gave birth to the Destined Fox. Through prophecy, he learned that Sean had an opportunity to make his tribe strong, so he led several masters and official levels to hunt down Sean, and used the Feather of the Filthy Bird to terminate the prince's contract. , the prince rebelled and put the master level and formal level into the gate of the abyss."

"At this time, Sean is inside collecting materials."

"The plot is very complex and interesting. The setting of Fox of Destiny adds a lot of fantasy color, and the use of feathers to cancel the contract is also very clever, triggering new conflicts very accurately."

"However, we should pay attention to explaining each link clearly here. For example, the origin and function of the Feather of the Filthy Bird can be mentioned appropriately to make everything more reasonable."

"After Sean was injured, he fled into a small plane. The opponent was guarding the door. Sean planned to escape and succeeded. The Destiny Fox saw that he couldn't do anything, so he surrendered to Sean."

"My comment on this is that Sean was injured and fled to the small plane, and then planned to escape. This is a very meaningful part. It can describe in detail Sean's state after being injured, the environment of the small plane, and the cleverness of the escape plan. The surrender of the Fox of Destiny can also show its ability to judge the situation."

"Sean was angry and retaliated, then forced him to sign a contract, used and threatened him, and led his tribe into the small plane after eliminating the hidden dangers, etc."

After saying this, Q version of Vic breathed a sigh of relief.

"How is it? Is it over here?"

He looked at Vic and the virtual Vic who seemed to be doing nothing, and asked directly.

"Almost, it should be so in theory."

The virtual Vic took the Book of the World and then turned to the last page.

Before this, he had tried to turn to the end in one breath, but found that he could not do it anyway.

It was as if the number of pages of this strange book was infinite.

No matter what, there are always more different contents.

Until now, the Q version of Vic has completed what the "creator in the higher narrative layer" ordered, and the book has a real last page.

But this end, isn't it also a new beginning?

With this thought, Vic suddenly raised his head.

I saw that everything around him had returned to nothingness at this moment.

With the help of the "author", the other two have each gone to a new world.

And he is about to get his final destination.

"Well, is it coming?"

Vic opened his hands and squinted his eyes.

During this time, he could feel that the higher narrative layer's eyes on him were getting fewer and fewer.

This is not only because of what they did before.

It's because the "author" has made some efforts in the higher narrative layer.

"Come on!"

Vic took a deep breath and focused his attention completely on his mind.

Boom!

With a loud noise that shook the soul.

He could vaguely perceive that there was a faint shout from the higher narrative layer.

"It's completely eunuch!"