restless daily life

Bai Zhizun sat beside him, his smile was free and unrestrained but implied majesty.

"Hmm... the atmosphere feels weird."

It was a tuanzi girl who was brought out to practice and was known as a genius. Her voice of joy and doubt made one wonder if she was on the battlefield.

Maybe this tense atmosphere is my own illusion?Or maybe it's just that the Emperor Xuetian next to the girl in the dumpling has his own coercion, Cai Muzuo couldn't help thinking.

Why?Who is Snow Emperor?

"In the light novel of Zaimuza, the two sides pointed out a reasonable question one by one - guessing fist is the first mover."

Emperor Xuetian didn't speak well, but he was upright, naturally invincible.

Cai Muzuo suddenly came back to his senses, he realized that he was already a piece of pork waiting to be cut on the chopping board, did this posture really solve his own kung fu problem?This is obviously to discuss the superiority - how terrible!The tuanzi girl pretended to be innocent, and successfully plotted against herself, making herself lose the chance to escape the terror!

Huh?Am I speaking a little strangely?

"good."

Bai Zhizun replied casually.

As if time seemed to be blocked for a moment.

Zai Muzao recovered from his ignorance, only to realize that the two had completed their probing confrontation.

Emperor Xuetian was a little startled, and his invincible heart was shaken.

Bai Zhizun showed disdain, but closed his eyes and smiled.

Just now……

Emperor Xuetian threw a punch, but turned back in an instant, and was immediately repelled by Bai Zhizun along the long river of time!

Zai Muzao racked his brains, trying to recall the confrontation between the two peerless figures in the time interruption.

Hachiman Bodhisattva remained silent, while the girl with the tuanzi had a dignified expression. Both of them sensed that their realm strength was obviously higher than their own.

etc!Fighting against such characters will definitely turn the world upside down, if I don't take the opportunity...

"Grammar is wrong! Grammar is the law of language, and wrong grammar is wrong sentences. The grammar of this book is chaotic, and I am extremely fond of inverted sentences. However, the shape is inverted and the spirit is confused. If the sentence is not smooth, the meaning is difficult to express! This is a big taboo! "

Bai Zhizun let out a long cry, the laws were distorted and chaotic, up and down collapsed, heights were dislocated, inside and outside were separated, this is Yin and Yang chaos!

This blow came into his eyes, and Zai Muzuo sensed the fatal flaw in the technique. He couldn't help being cold all over, and his blood was almost reversed.

"The words do not convey the meaning. The meaning of many words does not conform to the dialogue environment, and they can even be called random piles. Although they are similar, this is not a structural problem, but a problem of understanding the meaning of words."

Let your yin and yang go against each other, but I am the only one who can't invade.

Emperor Xuetian had expected it long ago, she stood still, and the chaotic and upside-down laws passed through her body, smashing a star behind her into powder!

The mournful cry of the stars cracking, and the supreme sword intent came out, and Cai Muzuo couldn't help feeling a pain in his heart, he was actually injured by the Tao!

Bai Zhizun is good at wielding a saber, but he didn't think that the saber's intent has been incorporated into every action, every thought and every word!

Hmm... am I thinking something weird?

"Plagiarism and stitching! Although there is no complete plagiarism fusion, it seems to be called a reference, but the reference is too much! The protagonist's magic sword, the kingdom's proud princess, the dragon Ned, and even the plot of the queen and the maid! Too much Many works with different styles are stitched together, resulting in the fragmented and fragmented plot style, making it difficult to adapt to joy, sadness, passion, kitsch, complaints, and emotion!"

Bai Zhizun stretched out his hand and pulled out the knife from the thoughts of all beings. This knife is called Wuding, and it has no final shape. It can attract all phenomena and resist all living beings. Come to the stars, cut them out together!

Throughout the ages, there seems to be a whisper resounding.

A ray of light flew out of the mouth, and countless stars disintegrated and shattered, among which the knife intent scattered and scattered, but none of them could cut off the ray of light.

Emperor Xuetian raised his hand to grab the ray of light.

This is the Heavenly Emperor's unsurpassed deeds, cutting himself off from his past lives, cutting himself off from the unborn, and only taking the present sword forged in this life.

Nothing at this time can be destroyed, and nothing in this world can be hurt.

Don't ask for the future of the past, just ask for invincibility in this life, don't ask for eternal glory, only for today's brilliance!

"The plot is abrupt! It's obviously just a harmonious cooking and eating incident, but there is a scene where the heroine undresses inexplicably in the middle! Naked, naked aprons and the like are simply meaningless!"

"ridiculous--"

Bai Zhizun saw a flaw, swung his knife into the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, and cut it down with the meaning of Vientiane: "The audience of light novels is like this! The audience likes it, so what's the place for your remarks?!"

"I also did my homework. The heroine took off her clothes and was seen by the supporting actor, and the supporting actor became a villain after being jealous. The abruptness of the plot I mentioned was just for the promotion of the story. The audience of light novels like this would not I like the plot."

This is the flaw that Xue Tiandi deliberately exposed.

At present, the sword is really nothing, even the invisible sword intent, even the myriad of phenomena, is still swept away by the sword.

The awe-inspiring and invincible heart of Emperor Xuetian, who only wants to be invincible in this life, forged the invincible sword of today.

"It seems that you not only studied carefully, but also roughly investigated the light novel environment in such a short period of time—"

It never occurred to Bai Zhizun to see through this scheme, and this saber was just a false move. He did not move, but he had already reflected the world into the sea of ​​consciousness. In the spirit of the sea of ​​consciousness, he suddenly cut out the most magnificent sword of fantasy!

"But it's too superficial! The depth you can sink into is too superficial! Some light novel readers like this kind of plot! They like wives! Have you ever heard of tauren warriors?!"

This knife came out of Bai Zhizun's sea of ​​consciousness, and cut the Xuetian Emperor who was reflected in the sea of ​​consciousness.

Turning fictitiousness into reality, Emperor Xuetian was hit by the knife.

The emperor's blood spilled into the sky, accompanied by a groan of surprise.

"What?! I didn't expect Zai Muzao to have such a hobby... I hope your hobby is limited to light novel creation, otherwise you may go to the police station, or go to the hospital, or burn down in the morgue in the future. It will be easy. "

puff--!

Cai Muzuo covered his heart and almost lost his temper, a sword intent appeared on the avenue.

The sword intent collided with the sword intent, and the damage became heavier. Zai Muzao felt the contemptuous eyes of the girl in the dumpling towards him, as if she was silently expressing something... Maybe she was contemptuous of her own weakness.

Damn -- 30 years in Hedong, 30 years in Hexi, don't bully the young and poor!

"That part doesn't count, but there are other abrupt parts of the plot! Whether it's the king suddenly becoming a villain for an unreasonable reason, or—"

"That's the effect of plagiarism and stitching! It is two routines to write high-ranking people as friends and enemies! There is no proper reconciliation and transition, of course there will be a sense of separation and abruptness in the style of painting and the plot! Can you guess the two Which two novels are the plots from? You don’t know light novels, but you are too confident to try to figure out light novels in one night!”

"Sure enough, in an unfamiliar field, you can't express your opinions rashly-in this case, the opinions I put forward are typos. There are a total of 220 nine typos in the full text, and I have marked each one. As an author, you should carefully check and review yourself. The text, this is for others to read."

Emperor Xuetian swung the present sword, constantly slashing away the invisible sword intent.

Even though she was wounded by a knife and her invincible heart was shaken, she still wanted to be invincible in this life!

"Using memes indiscriminately! Let me explain to Yukinoshita who is out of touch with the Internet. Meme can be said to be some modern sayings, born from various phenomena, situations and accidents, and quickly formed through the Internet! For example, the protagonist is encouraging the dragon princess to be independent. When you are in the middle of the world, it seems very inappropriate to say "the hymn of humanity is the hymn of courage" to motivate the other party! Because the other party is not human at all!"

Bai Zhizun laughed out loud, since he was a match for his opponent, he would become stronger as he fought.

Two outstanding figures show off all kinds of wonderful skills!

There is no fixed sword, but now the sword, the confrontation is frustrating, don't give up!

The role labeling is so thin that it is not as good as a piece of paper!The dialogue is streamlined, and you don't know what to say after reading it!The plot is repeated, and an overly familiar plot development can be seen more than a dozen times!Improper use of rhetoric, what should be highlighted is not highlighted, and what should not be highlighted is crazy!There are logical errors in the motivation of the characters, which makes people doubt whether it is synonymous with capriciousness, a nail in the mental hospital!The foreshadowing was not recovered, and I couldn't help but want to question the author's fish-like memory!

The language is surging, the grammar is disintegrating and analyzing, and the collision of thinking is becoming more and more intense!

Cai Muzuo's dying cry was so small and powerless!

Ordinary characters can only be turned into dust here, and heretics such as sociology, philosophy, and drama are also drawn into the battle, and there are sages to help out from time to time!

The way of Confucius and Mencius' benevolence and righteousness is sung across the ancient and modern world. Natsume Soseki smiled and described the world of mortals delicately. Traveling freely with time, Mori Ogai struggled coldly, questioning himself between change and tradition.

The fighting of the strong has already drawn the struggle to the nine heavens, and the two top figures are going all out at this moment, and the Dao Heart of the weak can only be disintegrated in the aftermath and turned into ashes!

They fought to the edge of the universe, and even their words were wiped out!

Cut off the past life, cut off the next life, cut off the karma and pride in the world of mortals.

Today's sword, this life's law, is invincible in this life.

Emperor Xuetian groaned and drew out his sword, cutting off the long river of time, locking this moment, showing his invincible style!

Who is calling invincible?Which one is invincible?All hands are ants, full of heroism!

There was a distant long laugh, coming from the past that should have been cut off, awakening the memory of Emperor Xuetian, and memory is the connection of cause and effect.

"Unfinished book! This is a novel that hasn't been finished yet. It doesn't even count as a volume. Even if it is to be cut in half, readers can't be satisfied with this kind of ending that doesn't even come to an end! Even a complete story It’s not even considered, of course it’s the author’s taboo! Unqualified!”

"...Are you talking about your light novel that was cut in half?"

"Hahaha! My book has two full volumes, even if it is cut in half, it is still an open ending! And at this moment, I am the one pointing at the peak of taste!"

Emperor Xuetian was astonished.

It turns out that I have already had a fight with him?Bai Zhizun actually remembered himself when he passed by?And made a fake cut at the self at that time? !

No, not right!

Emperor Xuetian was shocked and angry.

This person is actually so despicable, with deep scheming, I am afraid that all sentient beings have been left with a false knife in the past, just for a certain moment to turn the false into reality and kill the opponent who may appear in front of him!

The falsity from the past has turned into reality, and it is inevitable.

Today's sword can't cut through the past!

Emperor Xuetian harbored hatred, but he had exhausted all his moves, and had no new energy, so there was nothing he could do.

To perish at the hands of villains is not to become immortal——

"Uncommon words——! There are a lot of uncommon words in this novel. I can't read them smoothly without searching for information on my mobile phone. Is this a very big problem?"

The dumpling girl blocked this deadly knife from ancient times!

Even if she is a genius, she is still a genius who has not yet grown up. How can she penetrate this knife of time, cause and effect, and reality?

However, she really stands in the way.

When Bai Zhizun took a closer look, he was shocked. This person had sealed his spiritual consciousness since the past, and kept his spiritual consciousness in the past state without being stained by the wear and tear of time. Therefore, he was both stupid and talented!

It is by relying on this clumsy and risky method that the Danzi girl can block a knife from the past!

This is a method that neither Bai Zhizun nor Xue Tiandi have noticed, because this method is tantamount to digging their own grave, but at this moment a miracle is revealed!It can be called a master hand!

Emperor Xuetian swung his sword again and re-entered the realm of invincibility. Since the past sword was exhausted, her invincibility in this life has gone a step further, her dao heart is shining brightly, and the sword is hard to resist, quickly forcing Bai Zhizun into a corner!

"Hachiman, save me!"

Bai Zhizun roared.

The Hachiman Bodhisattva did not speak, but his face showed sorrow and helplessness.

Can't you count on it... Then you can only use the last resort!

"I can teach Muza how to write light novels!"

With a long roar, Bai Zhizun shook the river of time, he actually tried to sacrifice the future, directly blew himself up, and defeated Xue Tiandi at the cost of cutting off the future!

"Wait a minute."

A Buddha's name resounded throughout the nine heavens and ten places.

Bai Zhizun's power to cope with the future dissipated, and the invincible realm that Emperor Xuetian intercepted at this moment was re-stabilized.

"Minister, your light novel failed the review twice, and once it was cut in half, with all due respect—please spare Zai Muzao's life."

The Hachiman Bodhisattva sang Amitabha in order to understand past grievances and block the White Supreme at this critical moment.

Bai Zhizun was shocked and angry, but he had no time to care about him!

"There is no main storyline. Student Bai is probably used to writing short dramas. Even the two volumes of light novels, if not for some foreshadowing, the main storylines of each seem completely useless. One volume of the main line focuses on the daily love harem, and the other volume Focus on plot twists and changes."

"Facing this kind of stitched light novel, it's hard for Bai to notice one thing - this light novel really doesn't have any main line, it doesn't focus on depicting battles, nor does it focus on intrigue, even if it's the so-called harem opening, The description of the plot between the various heroines is also extremely shallow."

"I have read some of the light novels on the market. No matter the light or dark and the changes, there is at least one main line that connects the story in series, which plays the role of promoting the storyline, burying the suspense, and building the framework of the story. However, in the novel by Zaimoza There is no such backbone."

Xue Tiandi recalled the past, and her shaken invincible heart was quenched and reborn, and she had already completed the ultimate sublimation. From that past knife, she saw Bai Zhizun's fatal flaw.

Use the insidious methods of the past to maintain the incomparable intrepidity at the moment-you are evil, you should be chopped off!

Jianguang traverses the nine heavens, cuts through the prehistoric, shatters everything, cuts off the past, shatters the future, and directly captures this moment!

That was a brilliant sword that ascended to the pinnacle of this world!Invincible sword!

"Hachiman! How dare you betray me!!"

It broke the past life and the next life, and cut off the present moment.

Three lives are cut off, and the avenue is broken!

Bai Zhizun let out a roar of resentment.