I'm just sorry for plagiarism

As a result, one of his subordinates accidentally moved the mouse a little away.

In an instant, a white light illuminated the screen, and an unedited manuscript appeared on the screen.

"Are you writing an update?"

Having not seen his daughter's work for a long time, Father Xia was naturally a little curious, so he casually came over, intending to see what kind of works this girl is updating recently.

Unexpectedly, after seeing this, he couldn't stop anymore.

Chapter 339 336, 500 million more

The father was originally curious about what kind of novels the eldest daughter was reading after more than two years.

Speaking of which, when it comes to updating, Dad can be regarded as the founder of the mountain who has been with his daughter all the way. Not only does he know a part of the inside story, but he also knows that the famous teacher Chow Yun-fat on the Internet is his little prodigy.

It's strange to say, how did this girl, who was only fourteen or five years old, portray the intrigue between adults so brilliantly?The realism of the picture, as if she had experienced it herself, is really surprising.

As for the series of pen names of Venus, Li Xia did not dare to disclose them to his father.

It's true, let's not talk about the bitter and bitter plot of "Warrior".

Which family's children can write such an atmosphere of writing in high school?Although there may indeed be one or two, but surely not many?

But what the hell is "Beauty Teacher"?

Not to mention the glib protagonist, the gist of the novel is a well-prepared slap in the face. The protagonist Qin Chao has countless wives, even to the point of being attractive, and there are even a lot of coercion in the play. The girl's shot, you can't take it out at all, okay?

If the father knew that his daughter was writing such a wild and unconstrained novel outside, he would probably be overwhelmed with high blood pressure on the spot, right?

It's really unsightly.

Shame is about to be reported, okay?

That's why when the eldest lady heard something from her sleep in a daze, she was startled awake.

Seeing that he had been pushed to the edge of the bed with a chair at some point, and the burly old man was sitting in front of the computer instead of himself, looking through the document intently.

The bottom of my heart couldn't help but thumped.

It's not good to yell secretly.

The content of "Fist of Flame" is not too outrageous in terms of male and female love. Although it is dark and depressing, at least it is acceptable.

It's just that in this laptop... besides the manuscript of "Flame Fist", the manuscript of "Beautiful Teacher" is also hanging on the desktop?

What to do if you are seen! ?

Didn't this kill her?

"Hey, what are you doing? Peeping at my novel?" Subconsciously, he yelled, even the tone was sharp and hasty, not at all the old god in the past who didn't care about anything. appearance.

"Huh? Huh?"

The old man didn't react yet, but he came back to his senses hastily after hearing the yelling behind him.

It also looked like a thief who had been caught, with a hesitant expression on his face, and a little unreasonable.

"I didn't peek, didn't you just sit next to me? I saw you took a curious look when you were not lying in bed early in the morning, and then accidentally... Daughter, you were not like this before, it's not that you don't mind me Any advice for you..."

As he spoke, the middle-aged man felt a little aggrieved.

When she was in junior high school before, her daughter was not very famous, and his father Xia was also a half-grown street writer, writing about the rivers and lakes essays about love and hatred every day. At that time, my daughter was very clingy to me , Even the manuscript of "Dream" was given to myself to read, and it was called polishing and revising.

Unexpectedly... three years in Hedong.

When we got together again, my daughter was so sensitive that even the slightest touch of her manuscript made me clamor to catch a thief.

Dad said he was hurt.

His behavior made the eldest lady a little at a loss.

Outlined his neck and looked, and found that his father happened to be reading the manuscript of "Flame Fist", not "Beauty Teacher".Only then did Ben let go of the heart he was still holding on to a little bit.

"Look, I just got up and my eyes are a little blurry. I thought you were my cousin and came to visit relatives."

The eldest lady made up a mouthful casually, and waved her hand, pretending to be relaxed.

The old man scratched his head, and put down the mouse in embarrassment, "If you don't look at it, you will get angry if you look at it again."

"Just watch it if I tell you to. Why are you still blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah. Don't let him get away with it.

Such a playful attitude somewhat restored Father Xia's vitality.

Then he squinted his eyes and looked at the screen curiously.

"You wrote this novel? The sections look pretty delicate."

The plot of "Flame Fist" is rather stream-of-consciousness, mostly short-lived scenes, which can be described properly in half a sentence. Unlike "Beauty Teacher", which has a long series of coherent paragraphs, naturally the entire page looks very empty.

In the novels created by Li Xia, "Sword Immortal" and "Flame Fist", which are quite stream-of-consciousness, have roughly the same text layout.

"How did you write it?" The young miss asked again with a laugh.

The old man shook his head, and replied, "I haven't read much yet, you just woke up after reading a few paragraphs, and you didn't taste anything."

The first two paragraphs refer to the scene of heavy snow covering the earth, which can be regarded as a description of the world view, but similar doomsday plots often appear in novels, and my father has not noticed any difference between this novel and other doomsday works difference.

"Then you watch it first, and give me a comment after reading these three chapters?"

Li Xia folded his arms, laughing again.

Dad just nodded.

I am also quite curious.

Anyway, he is off today. Although he is in charge of the company, he still has a day or two of free time every month.

He simply leaned in front of the screen and began to observe seriously.

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It turned out that it was okay not to look at it, but when he saw it, his father's attitude immediately changed.

The content of the three chapters is as high as ten thousand words, no more, no less, and if you read it quickly, it may be done in more than ten minutes.

But looking at the end of the manuscript, the father turned the manuscript to the beginning again as if he didn't believe in evil, and checked it again from the beginning.

The expression on the chin is as serious as it is, and the reading speed has also slowed down significantly.

Staring at each word, it seems that they intend to analyze the author's inner world from these few words.

After reading it again, he took a sharp breath.

"how do you feel?"

The eldest lady was standing with her hands behind her back, looking like a little chef waiting for comments from diners.Laughing.

But the old man looked hesitant and didn't speak.

After organizing the sentence for a long time, he opened his mouth cautiously.

"That daughter."

"Ok?"

"If you have any discomfort in your heart, just tell me directly, you don't have to hide it." The father spoke very carefully, as if he was holding a precious object in his arms, for fear of falling and touching it. same.

"What do you mean?"

"It was her fault that your mother gave you homework every day, and we are usually a little strict with you. As a father, I will review this, and I will also be responsible for explaining it to my mother. Don't worry about it. Don't take it to heart, she is also letting her daughter become a phoenix."

It's getting more and more confusing.

"What do you want to express?" Seeing the father playing tricks, the eldest daughter really couldn't help but laugh.

"I mean to say." Unexpectedly, the old man had a bitter face.

"What the hell is your work? It's so dark, is there something wrong in your heart? Could it be that you have suffered some kind of blow and something is wrong? You can't have any accidents, you are the only one in our family It's my daughter."

It is true that the world view of "Fist of Flame" is too depressing, and the atmosphere is extremely mature and sophisticated, showing that airtight world.

Not to mention the writing style, just thinking like this is not like what normal people can write.

Perhaps for adults, after going through the tempering of society, they are somewhat fragile, and it is inevitable that they will have some pressure that is hard to vent in their hearts.

But Li Xia is just a child. If such a gloomy inner age is not derived from some accident, who would believe it?

"You were bullied at school? Which bastard messed with my daughter, you name it, I'll help you get justice."

Pop was waving his arms, righteous indignation.

The eldest lady is dumbfounded.

"Don't mess around, you, nothing, just tell me how the novel is written and give some comments?"

"Then tell me first that you're really not being bullied?" The father didn't care about the novel at all, he just looked at his daughter with worried eyes.

"No! This is actually the idea of ​​a netizen of mine. I think the subject matter is quite fresh, and no one has written about it, so I just took it here." The daughter coughed dryly, and said vaguely, "You know it too , There are a lot of talented people and strangers in the book circle, so if there are any good themes, I will borrow them."

Looking at her daughter's reasonable expression, she doesn't look like a fake.

The old man's heart was hanging, so he let go of it a little bit.

After hesitating for a while, he said sincerely.

"Actually, the scene creation in this opening chapter is very good, the writing style is also great, and it is very realistic... But to be honest, it is because it is too realistic that I am afraid that your mind is really full of that kind of gloomy Idea."

That's not to say you're calling someone mentally ill.

Things that are too stream-of-consciousness are not acceptable to everyone.

There is a saying that the genius is on the left and the lunatic is on the right. In Li Xia's opinion, this "Flame Fist" is more like a work mixed between genius and madness.

"Not bad right?"

Having received the affirmation from his old father, Li Xia chuckled and twisted his nose, looking quite proud.

"However, I have a doubt. Where are you going to send this book? Juvenile literature?"

The old man paused, then pointed to the screen, and asked curiously.

"Is the content a bit out of line? If it is written like this, will it pass the review?"

This said the eldest lady's heart knot, and she immediately sighed, "Yes, I heard that the review in the past two years has been much stricter than before."

Juvenile literature can be said to be the most fertile ground for short stories to develop. Although there is no strict review mechanism for online articles, it is difficult for a 30-word novel to cause any waves on the Internet, even if the content is concise.

What if I don't pass the trial?

To be honest, even the eldest lady was confused.

Unexpectedly, it was at the silent stall.

His cell phone, which was hidden under the quilt, suddenly vibrated.

The father and daughter stopped talking and looked at each other.

"Whose?"

"Let me see." Li Xia turned it out, swiped and pulled the screen, his delicate eyebrows touched twice, "Yes, made up by Huang?"

"Did I talk to you about the audit? Listen to me?"

The sharp old man couldn't help raising his eyebrows.

Li Xia couldn't help but took a deep breath.

With a complicated mood, he pressed the on button.

"Well, editor Huang."

"okay."

"Don't be nervous, don't be nervous, just tell me the result."

"Ah? What..."

"No way."

"This is too..."

After a series of inexplicable modal particles, the short phone call was hung up.

Looking at his girl leaning against the wall in a daze, the father couldn't help but say, "The article hasn't passed the review? It doesn't matter, let's find another one. If it doesn't work, you can go to the Internet Literature Company to have a look. You just now Not to mention that the review of physical documents has been relatively strict in the past two years."

Did not expect to face this comfort.