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The boy's name is Agni, and the girl's is his sister Luna.
In the world described by "Fist of Flame", Agni and Luna live in a small village where there are many old people who cannot grow food, so every day, the brother and sister will cut off the arm of the brother, Give it to the residents of the village as food.
Perhaps it was the brother's painful cry that made the sister a little unbearable, and the ax she was holding couldn't help shaking.
Agni felt his sister's hesitation, but showed a bright smile.
"It's okay, let's continue, there are still seven jobs to do."
A seemingly cheerful sentence made the eldest lady sitting in front of the screen more and more frustrated.
Holding up the chopsticks and picking up the pen, he hesitated for a while, but in the end he didn't cross the document out.
Instead, he continued to conceive.
Wrapping their arms in their arms, the two went down the mountain and entered the village.
There is snow and ice everywhere, even wearing a thick padded jacket, it is inexplicably cold.
Gently knocked on the door, only to find that an elderly uncle had opened his eyes and died on the bed.
"Uncle Wana was starved to death."
"Yeah, he didn't choose to eat human flesh."
In this apocalyptic era, not everyone can accept the unreasonable survival mode.
Agni blames himself, but his sister comforts him.
"It's not my brother's fault, it's the Ice Witch who covered the whole world with snow, causing everyone to have no food and kill each other."
"Yeah." Agni nodded, didn't speak, just kept silent.
The younger sister continued to sigh.
"If it weren't for the Ice Witch, neither Uncle Wana nor Mom and Dad would have starved to death."
A few simple words.
Simple, without the slightest modification, and even the sentences seem childish.
But the frame of the whole world is clearly depicted.
This is the first paragraph of the opening chapter of "Flame Fist".
There are not many words, about 3000 words, and this is Li Xia's manuscript with polished details.
In the manga, it's just more than one chapter.
But I don't know why Li Xia's writing is a bit complicated.
She felt that she was about to be depressed, and she didn't know if this "Flame Fist" really passed the review and was published in juvenile literature, would it cause a so-called disturbance among readers.
Three thousand words is definitely not up to the [-]-word first draft that Editor Huang said.
But the eldest lady felt that this opening chapter was very charming, novel and at the same time the atmosphere was well established. If it was really passed on, Editor Huang might not pass it.
Just do it.
After packing the manuscript and sending it to the mailbox, Li Xia took out his phone and pressed Huang Bian's number.
"Hello? Mr. Chow Yun-fat, is there any question you haven't figured out yet?"
Within two seconds, a mature male voice sounded over there.
Editor Huang didn't care too much, and asked cheerfully. He thought that the eldest lady called because she didn't hear clearly about the essay competition.
It is true that the interval between the two phone calls was less than an hour, and Teacher Chow Yun-fat's ink-stained temperament basically told her to write the manuscript. It would be good if the manuscript was not stuck on the last day of the deadline, so how could it be so fast?
"No, the manuscript is almost finished, why don't you take a look at it?" The eldest lady shook her head and said, "The document has been sent to your mailbox."
"So fast?" Editor Huang was surprised.
Subconsciously glanced at the clock, and turned out the calendar again. Seeing the disbelief, he thought it was because he had time-traveled unconsciously.
Not daring to be careless, he opened the mailbox casually.
In the afternoon, before it was time to get off work, Editor Huang made this call while sitting in front of his desk.
The moment I clicked on the file, the word count of the [-] words came into view.
Editor Huang didn't read the content either, and asked amusedly, "Isn't the beginning a bit short?"
"Look at the subject first. The main reason is that the selection of the subject is a bit out of bounds. I'm afraid that you won't be able to pass the review."
The eldest lady gave a dry cough and said.
"Can't pass the trial?"
Editor Huang was taken aback.
He lacks imagination, and even after thinking about it, he can't imagine a mere urban text. How can he cross the line of publishing.
The hero was called by a dog?
As a result, he narrowed his eyes and looked at the first two words, but he took a sharp breath.
"This is……"
"You read it before talking."
Li Xia had a dry cough and urged him aside.
Editor Huang restrained his figure.
With squinted eyes, he looked back and forth on the small screen.
He didn't look at ten lines like he used to review other books, but read very carefully.
The content of 10 words is neither long nor short, and it can be read in about [-] minutes.
The originally cheerful atmosphere gradually fell into silence.
"Ask Mr. Tang about this book."
After a while, he said quietly.
It's not that the subject matter is not good. Although the plot is explicit, it is not bloody, and it is far from reaching the high-voltage line that is difficult to publish.
But after all, it is the work of Mr. Chow Yun Fat.
There are too many people staring at that prestigious title. If something is really wrong and it is widely reported, the resulting variables will be too difficult to control.
The world view of this book seems to be a bit lame.
To be on the safe side, I still have to ask for the opinions of the above.
"That would be troublesome."
Seeing that this work has not been finalized immediately, Li Xia smiled wryly, but there was nothing he could do.
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The next few days passed a little loosely.
The closer the results are, the more serious the atmosphere will be.
The chattering noise outside the yard also dissipated a lot.
For the past two days, the eldest lady has nothing to do in her room, so she continued the manuscript of "Sword Immortal", which can be regarded as preparation for the end of the first part.
This work, which has been updated since last year, is finally about to mark its end in half a month.
In fact, the ending is not appropriate?
Originally, she wanted to continue the plot of "Sword One" and write the content of the third part, but because of a phone call from Juvenile Literature, she temporarily changed her mind.
Although "Sword Immortal III" is definitely going to be written, but the date has been postponed, and I don't know when it will be put on the schedule again.
"Sword Immortal" was not favored from the beginning, after all, the subject matter was too old-fashioned, and at first glance, it always gave people a feeling of being too perfunctory.
But such contempt did not last long, and was changed by the novel style of writing in the text.
I vaguely remember that when it was still 20W words, this book had already climbed to the top three of the rankings.Not to mention joining the family background later, and signing a contract for promotion through external channels.
I heard that being able to sign a contract with an external channel is not a small honor for the author on the site.
However, the eldest lady felt very confused, and she didn't feel a little bit of glory.
Because since she found out about the promotion cooperation, she rarely pays attention to the performance of her novel on the Internet.
So when Xiao Liang, the editor in charge, secretly called and told himself as a personal friend how terrible the income of this novel was and how profound its influence was.
The eldest lady always has the illusion of a world away.
It's as if this book was not written by me, no matter how chaotic it is, it has nothing to do with me.
It's not that "Sword Immortal" is not his own flesh and blood, subconsciously treat it differently.
It's just a very simple reason. In this life, Li Xia is too lazy to go online, too lazy to read those annoying gossips, so he is naturally out of touch with the Internet.
Even in the past two days, the final plot was drawn up, that grand ending with no joy or sorrow.
There was not even the slightest fluctuation in the eldest lady's heart.
I just fantasized about the uproar from readers after I uploaded this piece in my mind, then shook my head amusedly, got up and left.
"I guess those fans will have to quarrel."
Just like in the previous life, many people are looking forward to the author's kindness in the end and a happy ending.Even if it is not a happy reunion, at least the protagonist group will not die so miserable.
Ke Lixia was not such a kind person, so he naturally brought over the orthodox ending without magic reform.
Thinking about it, she was a little curious again.
Wait until the day when the ending is published.What kind of wailing will there be on the Internet?
That scene must be very fun.
Thinking about it, the corners of her mouth couldn't help but rise slightly, and she smiled like a little devil.
Chapter 332 Chapter 329, the torment before the results were announced
After walking out of the room, the eldest lady went to the bathroom to wash up.
I don't know if it's because I've been too full of energy and energy these two days. I stayed up late last night to update, but I woke up this morning and couldn't see at all.The two dark circles that were still hanging under the eye bags disappeared early, leaving only the white and watery skin with a touch of blush.
"Being more and more manly." Li Xia made a strong pose in front of the mirror, and then just smiled silly.I don't know how this exquisite bump can be regarded as a man.
He grabbed a towel and walked out, but when he wiped his face, he found that the atmosphere in the living room was a bit strange.
I don't know when my father and mother got up early, and they are sitting on the sofa hugging each other, and they are still leaning very tightly. It would be more affectionate and affectionate to hold hands together, but it happens that the two elders are slightly lowered. Head, dim sunlight slipped in from the table, but it did not illuminate the faces of the two of them clearly.
Such a scene is too visual.
Isn't it the famous scene in those TV dramas when the two elders have a relationship crisis?
Could it be that the father and mother are at odds with each other and want to play the trick of divorcing and dividing property?
The eldest lady couldn't help but thumped in her heart, and a bad premonition enveloped her.
It is true!
Dad runs out non-stop every day, and rarely stays at home when he is free.Even during the college entrance examination, when her father took care of Li Xia, he basically had a meal at home at noon. As for the evening, he still liked to do things and rarely stayed overnight.
Although making money is a good thing, but if you lose emotional communication with your wife in this way, it is easy to create a gap.
But then again, my father was very busy in his previous life, so he didn't see any emotional turmoil between the two?
It was at the stall where the eldest lady was thinking wildly.
The father and mother looked at each other, unexpectedly, the two elders seemed to have a good relationship, and there was no trace of quarrel.But looking at the eldest lady cautiously, he opened his mouth, hiding some small thoughts.
"Are you hiding something from me?" The eldest lady was a little taken aback, "Say what you want to say."
"Well, daughter, don't be nervous. Everyone will have such a day." The father hesitated for a while, sighed, and then spoke.
But it is still foggy.
The mother also followed behind: "Yes, anyway, you have to be mentally prepared. Don't have any burdens. You should eat and drink. If something goes wrong, Mom and Dad will not give up on you."
It was as if Li Xia was about to be captured on the spot.It made her startled.
"What the hell are you guys talking about?"
The eldest lady desperately recalled whether she had done anything illegal and disciplined in the past two years, but she couldn't figure it out after thinking about it. What happened?
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