How to raise a passer-by wife

Using the scenery painted by Ying Lili, through the monologue of the male and female protagonists, the changes of various emotions are narrated. By the time the audience recovers from the scenery, they have heard the whole story and are deeply involved in it. Sorry to feel the same way.

Yes, that's how it feels.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked at the screen, and there was still the original line of words on it.

Obviously, I already have a general idea in my heart, but it is difficult to convert it into words.

"This is for you." Kobayashi Hui handed over a stack of printing paper, "When I sort out my thoughts, I often use flowcharts and mind maps to assist my thinking."

Compared with the line-by-line words on the document, the combination of graphics and text can more intuitively show the thinking in the mind.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu took the pen and paper, "Thank you."

The pen in his hand flew up and down, Kasumigaoka Shiyu wrote characters one by one, circled them, spread out one by one, and connected with each other.

"The story about changing schools?" Kobayashi Hui understood part of it.

"Yeah." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was a little surprised, but considering Kobayashi Hui's insight, it's not surprising that she could understand, "It's from..." Her gaze stayed on Ying Lili for a moment, " Inspiration from Kong Qing."

"That's it..." Kobayashi Hui glanced over Ying Lili, who was irritably throwing a ball of paper aside, "Tell the story after separation... Do you regret it?"

"The general flow has been determined." Kasumigaoka Shiyu is very handy with emotional changes, but for the sake of depicting emotions, some logic in the plot will naturally be sacrificed, "Is there any obvious problem?"

"Well...that's it." Xiaolin Huibainen scratched the connecting line on the paper with her fingertips, "Since both parties are missing each other, why don't you make a phone call? Even if it's an ordinary friend, make a phone call It’s also good to have a few words of contact, we used to be so close, even a video is not too much, right?”

"Good question." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu nodded in agreement, "This question is good because I haven't thought about it at all."

Chapter 517

Human attention is limited, the more you focus on one aspect, the easier it is to ignore other aspects.

When Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was immersed in the delicate emotional construction, he ignored an obvious problem.

If you really miss it so much, why not just call?

If you don't even make a phone call, do you really miss it that much?

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu bit her pen, trying to think about the key points.

After Kei Kobayashi pointed out the problem, Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who opened his mind, discovered a more fatal problem.

vanity.

The emotional changes of the hero and heroine after separation are all unilateral and subjective.

But there hasn't been much interaction and connection between the two of them, which makes this emotion seem a little vain.

Or to put it more harshly.

Hypocritical.

But if there is a connection, make a phone call, send a video or something, this subtle feeling of being indifferent, wanting to touch but withdrawing your hand, is completely destroyed again.

This is embarrassing...

"Not enough materials..." Ying Lili rolled up the drawing paper a little irritably, "This tram has a good texture, but the style is too old... This thing is probably older than me, I don't understand that at all."

As the daughter of a diplomat, Ying Lili's means of transportation are very convenient.

For this kind of existence similar to the green leather train, simple drawing is okay. If you want to pursue a more realistic effect, you still need to draw more materials.

"Age..." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at Ying Lili in a daze, and a thought suddenly appeared in his mind, "That's right...the age."

"Huh?" Ying Lili replied with a puzzled voice, "What?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu drew a long line on the paper with a pen, "Just turn back the time to a time when mobile phones were not so popular."

Ying Lili thought for a while, "That would be too far back..."

"Don't transfer your family's situation to other people's." Kasumigaoka Shiyu waved his hand, "Then lower the protagonist's age, so as to limit their communication method to letters."

"You are studying the script..." Ying Lili finally realized, "And then?"

"Otherwise, what else can I study?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's thinking became clearer, "The two protagonists are in the same school, and then one of them will transfer to leave, and the relationship between the two will change. Then the other will also transfer. During this process, I realized the feeling of the other party at that time, so I decided to meet the other party."

"That's why we need to use letters to communicate." Xiao Linhui discovered the key, "In this way, what is thought in the heart does not necessarily fall on the pen, and what is written on the paper will vaguely reveal what is in the heart."

"This kind of feeling is exactly what you are good at." Ying Lili stared at Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who could always come up with new tricks for her.

Kasumigaoka Shiwa drew arrows one by one, "The hero and heroine approach each other on the tram, recall the past in the surrounding scenery, read letters to each other, tell everything about it, and finally meet."

"This requires frequent changes in the perspective of telling the story," Kobayashi Hui has accumulated a lot of professional knowledge in the past few years. "It is a big challenge for the rhythm of the story and the depiction of emotion."

"And the length is also a problem." Ying Lili added, "If you do it this way, it will take at least four to 10 minutes to finish."

I accidentally wrote it as a light novel again... Kasumigaoka Shiyu frowned slightly, but if I didn't write it like this, my emotions would be too vain... vain?

Isn't love inherently vain?

There are very few emotions like Kobayashi Kongqing and Kobayashi Hui who have a clear response.

Most of the love is lost without a trace.

I miss you, do you miss me as much as I miss you?

When I approach you, are you waiting, or are you going to stay away?

when i love you...

do you love me

This kind of vain but strong emotion is the essence of this story.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu waved his hand and crossed out half of the content on the paper, "Then just tell half."

Ying Lili was puzzled, "Half?"

"The opening chapter describes the departure of the heroine. While reading the heroine's letter, he recalls the past, telling the story of the encounter, acquaintance and separation of two people. The more you read the letter, the more you think about it." Kasumigaoka Shiyu summed it up succinctly, "It is Only describe this relationship from the perspective of the male protagonist."

"In this way, with the development of the story, the recognition of the male protagonist's emotions will gradually give rise to worries about the female protagonist's emotions." Kobayashi Hui followed Kasumigaoka Shiyu's thoughts, "He has such a psychology here, she What kind of mood is it over there?——This kind of feeling?"

The corners of Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's mouth turned up, "What I want is this unsure of uncertainty."

"As expected of you...but it's hard to finish like this." Ying Lili noticed the problem, "The accumulation of emotions in the front is enough, but what about the final ending? The heroine can't handle it."

From the perspective of story progression, men and women date and then meet.

But if you use a lot of space to describe the mood changes of one of them without describing the other, it will easily make people feel a sense of gap.

"There is a trick that I have used many times." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu chuckled, "Resignedly late and waiting without complaint or regret."

She wrote each word on the paper, "It was raining in the morning, and it was snowing at noon. The male protagonist took the tram to the appointed station as agreed. The tram was delayed and out of service due to the snow. The male protagonist was late, so The previously uncertain relationship became more and more shaken, until he arrived at the agreed place after a long time, and saw the person who was still waiting there."

it is more than words.

The long wait is a proof in itself.

Not everyone will wait that long...

"Rain and snow?" Ying Lili looked at the photo on the side, "Didn't you want to draw cherry blossoms?"

Painted for nothing?

"They met in the cherry blossoms." Kobayashi smiled lightly, "All the uncertain emotions in the past were settled at the moment they met, and the snow that made people feel cold was flying all the time. Slowly falling cherry blossoms."

"..." Ying Lili's eyes widened. Just hearing the description of such a scene makes people feel warm.

but......

"Hui's method is really good." Kasumigaoka Shiyu flicked the paper in his hand contentedly, "I've finished the script, now the pressure is on your side, Eriri."

"Gu..." Ying Lili made a strange sound.

This kind of scene is easy to say, but it is another matter to draw it!

Chapter 518

"How does it feel to return to the workplace?" In the mansion in Tokyo where every inch of land is expensive, on the entire floor contracted by Hongzhu Planning Company, Benizaka Zhuyin's office is the company's president's office, or rather, Benizaka Zhuyin In the studio, Akane Benizaka smiled curiously surrounded by a pile of materials and machines.

Kobayashi Kongqing was too familiar with this kind of smile.

Eirisu and Kasumigaoka Shiwa often smiled like this at him and Kobayashi Megumi.

Especially Kasumigaoka Shiwa, her smile is exactly the same as that of Benizaka Akane.

I have to say that life is really amazing.

Machida Sonoko is optimistic about Kasumigaoka Shiwa, and Benizaka Zhuyin is optimistic about Eri Rika.

As a result, Kasumigaoka Shiwa became more and more like Benizaka Akane, while Eriri tended to develop towards Machida Sonoko.

Kobayashi Kongqing beckoned, "Hand it over."

"What?" Hongsaka Zhuyin looked away, "A gift for Lan Lan? You don't need to hand it over."

"Wine bottle." Kobayashi Kongqing straightened his arms, "It's at your left foot...you're not afraid of getting the manuscript wet."

"Just draw again..." Benizaka Zhuyin reluctantly handed the one-liter wine bottle to Kobayashi Kongqing, "How did you find out?"

"Just draw what you say, but your eyes will still look in that direction, plus the smell of alcohol in the room..." Kobayashi Kongqing sighed, "Your level of lying is basically at the same level as Lan Lan's. .”

"Lan Lan will lie too?"

"No." Kobayashi Kongqing replied, "So you are on the same level as her."

"Tch...you're starting to give me a hard time." Benizaka Akane mumbled, "This is your idea—use this new project to fire the first shot of returning to the industry?"

"Although I have gradually come into contact with some work before, there are really not many situations where I leave home to concentrate on dealing with it like now." Kobayashi Kongqing sealed the wine bottle, "If I want to talk about the feeling, it is the feeling that I don't want to work and want to work."

"Dependence on family members and responsibilities on shoulders, right?" Benizaka Akane took out a piece of paper and wrote it down, "It's similar to my analysis."

"I'm used to seeing Lan Lan's innocent and lovely smile, and I feel that the whole world has become better." Kobayashi Kongqing flicked the wine bottle with his finger, "After starting the specific work content, I found that rotten people are still rotten, trash is still trash It is not difficult to rectify it by hand, but after all, it is a company, and it still needs to speak in terms of business. The Superstar project is going too smoothly, so many people think that RER is supported by them. Before Hui officially returns to the workplace, he still needs to get Produce convincing works, so that those dishonest guys can take care of themselves."

"That's why you came up with the project of scenery pornographic animation film, you want to create a new category..." Benizaka Akane paused, frowning and glaring at Kobayashi Sorao, "What you are talking about right now Is it going to be a mistake?"

"The animation movie project..." Kobayashi Sorao had just opened his mouth when he was interrupted by Benizaka Akane.

"Answer the question I just asked first."

"I'm used to it." Xiao Lin Kongqing also discovered his situation, "It's a way of education and coping..." Thinking of Xiao Linlan's endless questioning, the corners of Xiao Lin Kongqing's mouth turned up slightly, "Learn to speak Afterwards, Lan Lan became very curious. She wanted to ask about everything, and then kept asking. At this time, she needed to distract her with other topics before answering her questions. If she was still curious , you can talk about it in depth, if it’s just on a whim, you will soon forget the previous question.”

At the very beginning, Xiao Lin Kongqing still maintained her previous habit, trying to explain her doubts to Xiao Linlan from beginning to end.

But obviously...the young daughter doesn't have the patience of her mother, nor does she have the comprehension ability to follow his train of thought.

So he began to adjust his communication methods, first using other topics to attract Xiao Linlan's attention, and after judging that she was really interested in the questions raised, he then explained.

Start with the conclusion, and then add arguments before the conclusion a little bit.

With more and more expositions, Xiao Linlan also began to try to keep up with his thinking and understand the process of his expositions.

Kobayashi Kongqing also learned to distinguish between effective communication and ineffective words during this process.

Like some questions, what Xiaolin Lan pays attention to is not the question itself, but Xiaolin Kongqing's response when she asks a question.

At times like this, you need coaxing.

And some problems, Xiao Linlan really wanted to understand, what she needed was to solve the confusion, not to deal with it.

At this time, it is useless to coax her, but it will make her feel frustrated and continue to question her.

In the process of educating Xiao Linlan, Xiao Lin Kongqing felt that he was also being educated.

"I heard that once you have a child, you will become a madman." Hongsaka Zhuyin raised her eyebrows, "I didn't expect you to be the same."

"It's not too fancy..."

"Okay, let's talk about movies." Benizaka Zhuyin flipped through Kobayashi Kongqing's project, "The idea is very good, but the amount of work is also huge. To show results in a short period of time requires a lot of investment."

This is not difficult to understand.

Not to mention movies, even in comics, the background is a part that needs to be completed quickly and time-saving.

Most of the time, the background picture only needs a large close-up to show the scene where the story takes place.

If the background is painted perfectly, it takes a lot of effort.

This is true for still cartoons, not to mention moving animations.

Ordinary animated movies need to ensure the level, as long as the scene is ordinary and the characters are not too damaged, it is enough.

But according to Kobayashi Kongqing's plan, the scene needs to be kept at a very high level within 10 minutes, so as to stabilize the animation style and maintain the animation level.

"So I need sister Zhu Yin's help." Kobayashi Kongqing said bluntly.

"I'm not interested." Benizaka Zhuyin closed the proposal, "I'm interested in the finished product, but I'm not interested in this kind of production."

"Ok?"