How to raise a passer-by wife

[Is it not good to appear directly in real life?]

[Image problem? ]

[Mr. Benizaka Akane is very beautiful]

[I can attest]

"Why this way." Benizaka Akane paused, "Because I like it."

Then there was the sound of a can being deflated.

[This is an open can of beer]

[absolutely yes]

[frozen www]

[I seem to know why she broadcast live broadcast]

Sonoko Machida brought the topic back casually, "About Benizaka Zhuyin, I believe that many people know something about it, and those who don't know it can get familiar with it gradually. Today's first broadcast is mainly to briefly introduce the live broadcast content of the follow-up plan."

[good direct www]

[Generally speaking, it is to introduce the character setting]

[seems like no introduction]

[The model is highly movable]

[Looks like a ghost castle style]

[Produced by Chuqing, it must be a boutique]

"There's nothing to introduce." Benizaka Zhuyin took over the conversation, "As for the character setting, just keep watching and you'll understand. The main thing is the content. If you like this kind of content, keep watching. If you don't like it, change to another anchor. , no need to waste time."

"Because the content of our live broadcast is determined in advance, future activities will also be carried out around this point, and there is no idea to modify the content for the time being." Machida Sonoko said softly, "So compared to the character setting, we should talk about the content first. made."

Ying Lili sighed, "The gap between people..."

"It's clearly the same thing," Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's mouth moved, "The gap is really big."

"Fortunately, you reminded me." Xiao Lin Kongqing fed Xiao Lin Hui a grape, "If sister Zhu Yin broadcasts the live broadcast by herself..."

That picture is so beautiful.

It's exciting to think about.

"You came up with the idea of ​​letting sister Zhu Yin broadcast live, I just added it."

"Without your addition, my idea would not have been implemented so well."

"No, you always have a way."

Ying Lili: "...watch the live broadcast and watch the live broadcast."

"To put it simply," Benizaka Akane explained, "I will help revise light novels and manga during the live broadcast. Everyone is welcome to contribute, but only for unpublished works. I don't want to cause trouble."

"Our live broadcast is mainly to help those who want to create, but can't find the direction." Sonoko Machida smoothed things over, "Of course, we just provide suggestions, and it doesn't mean we are the authority. You must keep this in mind. "

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu nodded, "A wise move."

Ying Lili felt the same way, "If the published works are criticized...the flames are unavoidable."

[The professional guidance of Akane Benizaka? ! ]

[Great! ]

[Is this something I can watch for free? ]

[Great help! ]

[Contribution Contribution]

"Because it is the first live broadcast, the manuscript is prepared in advance. For the specific content and process, everyone who is interested can continue to read." Machida Yuanzi called up the manuscript and put it on the live broadcast screen, "First of all, the first one. "

"This..." Benizaka Zhuyin said, "No, let's be next."

Chapter 501

Ying Lili raised her forehead, "I knew..."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu put her arms around her chest, "I don't feel surprised at all."

"It's very Sister Zhu Yin's style." Xiao Linhui sighed, "But isn't this a bit too fast, I only read the first page...it should be the cover."

"I don't know much about this." Xiao Lin Kongqing hugged Xiao Lin Hui, "Let's see what Sister Zhu Yin said?"

Not surprisingly, real-time comments are also popping up question marks at a breakneck pace.

"Wait for me..." Machida Sonoko's voice was full of weakness, "This is not a real manuscript review. What you are facing is not an author with experience in manuscript submission and creation, but a newcomer."

"Ah, indeed." Benizaka Akane reacted, "You mean, you can't simply deny it?"

"right?"

"Do you want to explain and guide in more detail?"

"right?"

"So that they can enjoy a full range of reality blows?"

"Yes... no." Sonoko Machida sighed, "I mean, you can't just say no, but explain what is wrong."

"Isn't that the same as what I said..." Benizaka Zhuyin muttered, "Simply put, this manga belongs to the kind that is brought to the editorial department, and the editor takes the file bag and takes out the manuscript paper to have a look , and then stuff it back without turning it over.”

[? ? ? ]

[So strict? ]

[Too cruel]

[I have seen this scene with my own eyes]

[This is too hurtful]

"Ah... indeed." Machida Sonoko further explained, "As an editor, you have to read a lot of submitted works every day. Basically, you only need to read the first page to know what route the work is taking."

"I saw someone cry because of this." Benizaka Zhuyin recalled the past, "It's much better now. In the past, many strict editors didn't consider the other party's feelings at all when facing the newcomers who brought their works. Say all kinds of harsh words mercilessly in front of others."

Ying Lili looked weird, "It's a shame she dares to say that about others."

"Although I can't see her expression," Kasumigaoka Shiwa sneered, "but judging by the appearance of her model, she obviously thinks that the harsh words she said are not harsh."

Many people in the real-time comments expressed dissatisfaction with this situation, thinking that the editor's judgment was too hasty.

"In fact, you can think about it from another angle. Both readers and editors enjoy good works. The difference is that readers need to spend money to be optimistic about works, while editors can make money by digging out good works." Sonoko Machida explained, "From this point of view, Editors want to encounter good works more than readers, and most readers will probably not be able to read works that editors can’t read.”

"From the point of view of the work, readers are much more ruthless than editors." Benizaka Zhuyin added, "At least the editor has a response. Readers, if they don't like it at first glance, they will go find other works."

[it actually makes sense]

[I always feel that something is not quite right]

[That's right]

[So where is it not working? ]

"To put it bluntly, the cover lacks the ability for the editor to turn the first page." Benizaka Zhuyin called out a red pen, and while marking on the picture, explained, "What kind of picture should I draw first, beautiful, strange and creepy Ones with beautiful lines, bright and light, seductive, handsome, ones with terrible style of painting, ones with excellent style of painting, ones that make people laugh, ones with few moving lines, ones with many moving lines, only female characters, only children , only rocks... You can choose from the ones I mentioned, or anything else that can make people turn over."

"Then there is an attractive title." Benizaka Akane completely ignored the reactions of the real-time comments, and continued, "The title is a comment on the screen and a summary of the story. "Jurassic Park" almost condenses the work All the elements in the book, "Kui!! Men's School" double emphasizes the theme of the story and the image of the characters, "Death Note" clarifies the important props in the story, and there is also a work titled "Chibi Maruko" with the protagonist's name, directly It clearly reflects the author's emphasis on the protagonist. The above titles simply and clearly tell readers what kind of story this is."

"At this point, a good cover is complete." Sonoko Machida concluded, "It is equivalent to passing the first level."

"This cover is a failure, and there is no need to read the rest." Benizaka Akane announced bluntly, "Next."

[Stop watching? ]

[What if the story is good? ]

[Yes yes yes]

[No matter how you say it, you should take a look at it]

Faced with doubts from real-time comments, Machida Sonoko said softly, "About this question, it's actually like this..."

As soon as she started, Akane Benizaka interrupted her a little irritably, "This thought of respect is really touching, it's so innocent and cute that I want to give you a candy."

"..." Xiao Linhui looked at Xiao Lin Kongqing, "Is this really all right?"

"It should be fine..." Kobayashi Kongqing was also a little uncertain, "Probably."

"Although I don't want to admit it," Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at the screen, "but I think the same."

Ying Lili leaned on her chin, "This should be just the beginning."

"If it is a reader who raises such a question, it is still naive, but if it is a creator, it is stupid." Benizaka Akane did not have the slightest awareness of friendly communication with the audience as an anchor, and there was sarcasm in her voice, "No reader is obliged to waste It’s time to read a boring work. What a creator should do is to try his best to attract readers to see the back, instead of emphasizing the back again and again outside the work [it’s very well written, you must read it] such nonsense If the writing is not good and the painting is not good, why ask others to tolerate it? As an author, it is necessary to create your own work, and readers don’t have to read your work. If you want people to see the back, polish the beginning, and Relying on the pity of others, just go begging and create something."

[But there are also some slow-heated works]

[can't generalize]

"Huh? Don't get me wrong." Benizaka Zhuyin noticed the real-time comments, "The point of slow heat is heat, not slow! Only works that become popular are called slow heat. You need to see the back before you can look back and say it's slow. Hot works, not every slow-paced work is called slow, slow development does not mean unattractive - the next one."

"This is too harsh..." Ying Lili looked at the real-time comments that were refreshed quickly, "I knocked down a lot of people with one shot."

"That means she dares to say that." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu narrowed her red eyes, "I will say it again in the future."

Chapter 502 It's Pure Coincidence

Seeing that the comment section was about to explode, Sonoko Machida immediately released a new work, "The next one is this, "Miss Kaguya wants me to confess~Genius love brain battle~"."

"Huh?" Kobayashi Hui made a doubtful voice.

If she remembers correctly, this should be the creative project that Shiwa and Eiriri talked about at the beach when they went to Kazushima with Star Cluster.

Kobayashi Kongqing also remembered this incident, "You actually drew it?"

"Idle is idle..." Ying Lili muttered.

"After all, the material collection has been completed." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's gaze swayed at Kobayashi Hui and Kobayashi Kongqing, "If you don't draw it, you will forget it."

Kasumigaoka Shiwa designed the script and dialogue, and Eiriri completed the painting. It happened that Akane Benizaka needed material for the live broadcast, so the two directly handed over the opening that had just been completed.

Kobayashi Hui's eyes turned slightly, Kasumigaoka Shiu picked up the coffee, and Eriri picked up the black tea.

Both of them wanted to appear calm and breezy, but their subconscious actions had already betrayed them.

"It's not bad. The one just now was a negative textbook, and a positive one will come up soon." Benizaka Zhuyin commented on the cover, "First of all, there is a picture, a girl with red eyes and a flat chest, who is obviously Miss Kaguya in the title. The female characters I just mentioned have a few requirements for beautiful lines, beauty and seductiveness. Then there is the title, which is a tricky way to directly put the outline of the story and point out the main theme of the story to attract readers. The purpose of the longer and longer title of the novel. And the content of the title contrasts with the serious expression of the character on the cover, which naturally makes people want to turn to the first page."

Sonoko Machida did a good job of supporting the show, "So what are the requirements for the first page?"

"It's very simple, it makes people want to read the second page." Benizaka Akane replied naturally, "Different from the cover, starting from the first page, as a manga, there must be lines or narration, so the content of the text must be convincing." The attractiveness of people watching." Benizaka Akane gave an example, "Calm, sad, angry, shocking, wordplay, Dai Fangyan, haiku style, rap-like rhyming... ...is all about grabbing the reader.”

"I remember someone said," Sonoko Machida brought up the topic, "The first page is actually a preview of the manga, giving readers a general idea of ​​the content of the manga."

"When you are new to a work, readers definitely want to know the general direction of the work as soon as possible." Benizaka Akane responded, "If you have read it for a long time and still don't understand what the work is about, you will definitely get impatient. Again, the work There are many, readers are not bad for this one."

"For beginners, it's easy to think too far back, trying to leave too much foreshadowing in the early stage, and the result is confused." Machida Sonoko regretted this. The content is meaningless if you can’t draw it.”

"Speaking of this, there is another situation." Benizaka Akane thought of more, "From the very beginning, I was thinking whether the audience I drew in this way would be too small, and another part of readers might be lost. Even a small part Readers can't be satisfied, so I consider the feelings of most readers, I can only say that anyone who has a dream is great, will not leave and will not delay the imagination of flying..."

"Let's look at the first page." Machida Sonoko hurriedly manipulated the screen.

Kobayashi Kongqing sighed, "I can feel Sister Yuan Zi's helplessness through the screen."

Ying Lili pointed out, "It means that an editor like her who communicates with people with a bad temper all the year round can handle Akane Benizaka."

"Actually, I can do it too." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu squinted at Ying Lili, "After all, I also had the same experience."

"Xiazhiqiu Shiyu!"

Kobayashi Kongqing: "Watch the live broadcast and watch the live broadcast."

"This first page is the qualified preview we just mentioned. It puts forward a shocking violent theory, points out that love is the theme of war, and leads to the following story." Benizaka Zhuyin remembered the audience in the live broadcast room, and finally began to interact. , "So do you want to continue watching?"

Under the enthusiastic response of the audience, Benizaka Zhuyin continued to read, while explaining various creative techniques in detail.

Kasumigaoka Shiwa and Eiriri gradually relaxed from the initial nervousness, and even started to take notes.

Before you know it, the content of a few chapters is over.

"From the perspective of creation, there are still some problems, but they are harmless." Benizaka Zhuyin took a sip of beer, "As for the development of the plot later, Xiaoyuan, you are better at it."

"Actually, there is no problem at present..."

"Then let's talk about the risks."

Kasumigaoka Shiu and Eriri stared at the screen seriously, and they were delighted by the feedback in the real-time comments.