Be a detective in Yuanshin

Seeing the back of Coral Palace Xinhai leaving, Li Shuo stood there silent for a long time.

Until a familiar voice came from a distance.

"Zheping, Zheping, all the herbs you asked for have been picked."

Li Shuo looked in the direction of the voice again, only to see Ying carrying a medicine basket and Paimeng walking beside him, riding the setting sun slowly from a distance.

The setting sun stretched their shadows very long, but there was no trace of irritability or dissatisfaction on the faces of the two of them. Instead, they gave people a sense of contentment.

Maybe it's good, at least I can do things that I don't hate. Is this a kind of happiness?

Thinking about it, Li Shuo waved his hands while walking in the direction of Ying and Paimeng: "Ying, Paimeng, look who's here?"

When Ying and Pai Meng heard Li Shuo's voice, they immediately showed pleasant expressions. Pai Meng even flew directly in front of Li Shuo, and then pretended to be a little angry. Yeah, we've been waiting for Lee for days."

Zhe Ping, a member of the resistance army, saw that Ying and Paimeng were very familiar with this Liyue man who had just arrived today, and asked with some surprise, "Do you know each other?"

"Hmph, of course I do."

After Paimeng finished speaking proudly, he seemed worried about revealing Li Shuo's identity, so he hurriedly changed the subject and said, "Zhe Ping, we have picked all the herbs you asked for. Let's see if there are any problems."

Hearing the herbs, Zheping's attention was immediately diverted.

He looked at the medicine basket that Ying handed over, and at the medicinal herbs that were needed in the military camp inside, he couldn't help being happy, and the excitement and joy were all on his face.

After thanking Ying and Paimeng, he left with the medicine basket in his arms. He planned to make these herbs into medicine overnight, so that if the soldiers on the front line were injured, they could immediately apply the medicine they got on their bodies. on the wound.

Ying and Paimeng watched Zheping leave happily, and then turned to Li Shuo and said, "In the rebel army, there are those who always want to overthrow Daozuma's regime, and there are those like Zheping who just want to live a peaceful life after the war is over. Yes, there are all kinds of people in the rebel army."

"This is for sure. After all, there are so many people in the Rebel Army, and they come from all over the world. They have different experiences and have different purposes for joining the Rebel Army.

It's just... when the members become complicated, those who are most likely to be hurt are those who really have lofty ideals. "

Li Shuo folded his hands on his chest, looked around the recruits in the barracks again, and then thought of those voices who disobeyed the military orders in the barracks on Baleng Island, and the girl who was put on the leader of the rebel army and could only continue to act bravely...

Perhaps it is not the purpose of the Coral Palace to form the rebel army at all, but to see which step these rebels lead the Coral Palace in the end.

Just like when the people of the Coral Palace forcibly captured the demon god Orobus to invade the rice wife, the benevolent Orobas died under the knife of Lei Duan in the end.

Feng Shui turns, as if it is fate. I don't know where the soldiers of the rebel army will take the Coral Palace.

Apologize and talk about the positioning of the rice wife chapter by the way

First of all, I would like to apologize to the readers who caught up here because of the quality of Daozuma.

Due to various reasons in the middle and late stages of the Liyue chapter, there are many deficiencies in the writing, but considering the update speed of the Liyue chapter and my personal ability, to be honest, the Liyue chapter can be regarded as my normal performance.

I used to write original stories, and I was not good at writing fan fiction, so even though many readers were dissatisfied with Liyue's stories, I have a clear conscience.

But the rice wife article... I really feel ashamed as I write it.

Although I haven't finished writing it yet, although I think the exciting content is in the back, but reflecting on the story rhythm of Dao Wife's chapter is really sparse, I feel a little ashamed of chasing readers.

Originally, I planned to wait until the end of the rice wife article to say some things, but when I wrote the heart sea yesterday, I felt like a stick in my throat, and I really couldn’t express it, so I wanted to talk about it, and then I would like to apologize to everyone at this opportunity , let everyone down.

The content of the follow-up single chapter may be a bit long, mainly to talk about the content of the book, about the main plot of the original God game 2.0 and 2.1, and the plot of the characters has little to do with it.

I know that radish and green vegetables have their own preferences, so I don't want to comment too much on the quality of the main plot and the plot of the characters.

In fact, the reason has already been said, talking about this thing is too offensive.

If the point of view is the same as mine, subscriptions will not be increased. On the contrary, if the sentence is wrong, some readers may abandon the pit.

Therefore, regarding the plot of the Inazuma Chapter of the Yuanshen game, we will seldom talk about the plot, and mainly talk about the creative ideas of the Inazuma Chapter in this book, and explain some problems a little bit.

Note: The following "Inazuma Chapter" refers to the story content of the Inazuma Chapter in this book, not the 2.0 and 2.1 plot settings of the original game.

First of all, the outline of Dao's Wife is relatively rushed, because just after 2.1 was updated, Liyue's chapter was basically finished, and I started to write Dao's Wife in full swing, and I have been in poor health for the past half month, so I really don't have time to correct it. The outline is finely carved.

Especially during the two days of severe cold and high fever, I was in a daze, throwing up whatever I ate, and could only drink porridge.

It's not that it's a bad sale, it's just that it really affects the state of writing. The reason why it is forced to write is also for full attendance and half-year awards.

In the end, the body still couldn’t hold on, and the full attendance and half-year bonuses were gone for a few days. I lost more than 3000 yuan internally and externally. This also caused the outline of the Dao Wife chapter to be changed several times later.

In fact, it is quite normal for novels to revise the outline. The outline of Liyue chapter is quite different from what is written now, and it has also been revised for five or six editions.

The problem is that the details of the Liyue chapter have been modified, but the main line has never been changed.

Let's put it this way, the inspiration for writing the Liyue chapter was "98 Flood Fighting".

It rained heavily in Henan two months ago. When I was paying attention to the disaster situation, I looked back at the story of fighting against the flood in 98 and was shocked. That's why I conceived the main story of the next part of Liyue.

Although many details have been changed in the follow-up, the main idea has not changed.

In fact, writing original stories is the same. After the outline of original stories is written, the details will be modified in many ways.

but!

But the main plot will never change!

Unless there are serious bugs in the main storyline or content that is seriously overthrown, no matter how readers give feedback, the direction of the main storyline will never change. This is a principle that must be followed in original writing.

Because the main plot is the context of a story and the meaning of this story.

Even if it is Xiaobaiwen, changing the main line of the story for no reason will make the rhythm of the whole book jump out.

Regarding the rhythm, it sounds mysterious, but it is actually a very straightforward thing.

If you are interested, you can go to Station B to search for a video UP master called "Sword Attendant". Some of his videos are very detailed.

By the way, this up master is also writing a book with our hedgehog cat, and the author's name is also "Sword Attendant".

Readers who are interested in Western Fantasy can read his Hedgehog Cat "Black Scepter", which is also a book involving "change".

The main purpose of talking about the above is to tell everyone that it is normal to change the outline, but it is very abnormal to change the outline of the main line.

The rice wife chapter has been changed several times, all of which are the main outline of the revision. Simply put, it is to cut the main artery, so the rhythm will feel chaotic when reading.

It's also normal, the plot direction of the main plot outline has been changed several times, if the rhythm is not chaotic, then I am really a fairy.

Here I mainly want to talk about the positioning of this book and why it is positioned in this way.

Actually... At this point I want to tell you something about my own personal experience.

I used to work in a bookstore, a bookstore that sold children's books.

At that time, because of work needs, the boss asked me to read more of these books, so that I could sell and introduce them to customers in the future.

Children's books are not for children aged six or seven, but for children aged two, three, and four.There are also words in it, which are basically for parents to read to their children, and the children mainly look at paintings.

Then how simple the content of this kind of book is, I believe everyone can guess it.

That's the kind: Xiaohong asks Xiaoming to play, Xiaoming is very happy playing with mud, Xiaohong also plays mud together after seeing it, very happy...

It's similar... Anyway, it's the kind of book that looks particularly "Teletubbies".

This kind of book has more than 30 pages, and each book can be sold directly for twenty or thirty, fifty or sixty.

At first I was very confused, does anyone buy this kind of book?

Later, there were many children in the store, so I talked with their parents and found out in contact with the children that because the children are too young, their ability to understand is limited. This kind of books that seem mentally handicapped to us is precisely prepared for them. best book.

Just get a copy of "Dream of Red Mansions", even if the story is full of hype, children will not understand it, and parents will not buy a copy of "Dream of Red Mansions" for two or three-year-old children.

Having said that, it is very important to find your own position.

Just like Hedgehog Cat's many books with particularly good grades, in the eyes of an old bookworm like me, I really can't stand it.But I will never belittle those books, let alone say that Hedgehog Cat is getting worse and worse. This kind of books can get good grades, because these books are not positioned for old bookworms like me.

Just like Zhongyuan Wubai, their book positioning is Xiaobaiwen, cool writing, without connotation, and they don’t pursue the so-called connotation. They just look for the largest market in the online literature to harvest.

When the book tells the readers from Chapter 1 that this is a short essay, if the readers use the attitude of reading a masterpiece to pick out the various mistakes in this book, it will be pure "KY" in Two-dimensional terms.

But in the same way, if a history book, from Chapter 1, gives the feeling of a "serious drama", then don't blame others for running out to find mistakes when they see some common-sense mistakes in historical texts.

When I used to write historical articles, some readers would point out a title because it didn’t fit that era, and readers would point out and criticize something that shouldn’t have appeared in that era.

At the beginning, I would accept and correct it humbly, but I was still very upset, because there were a lot of common-sense mistakes in other Hedgehog cat's other historical texts, and I didn't see readers point them out. Why did you follow me here?

It was later discovered that my book referred to a large number of historical materials, and the story also tended to be "dramatic", so readers' requirements were naturally higher.

To put it more bluntly, readers pointed out mistakes because they valued me and felt that my book had some other value besides Tu Yile.

Talking about these issues of positioning, in fact, I want to talk to you about the positioning of "Dao Wife Chapter", so that everyone can have a psychological expectation.

The rice wife chapter is different from the Liyue chapter. I still want to write something about the Liyue chapter. Although my ability is limited, the writing is not very good, but the Liyue chapter is a fan work of a game. , besides being entertaining, did write something.

Show it to other Yuanshen lovers, they may not like it, but at least they have to admit that the Liyue chapter is like a story, and even occasionally a few wonderful episodes can make readers remember deeply, and it may be possible in a few months. Remember.

But the positioning of Dao Wife's chapter... without Liyue's chapter, I just want to write a simple and refreshing article.

When I first wrote the Dao Wife Chapter, I wanted to write and explore some very compelling topics about "eternity", but I gave up later.

Then I changed the outline and wanted to write about the fateful confrontation between Lei Movie and the Puppet General.

According to Mihayou's setting, it is impossible for Li Shuo to see Lei Movie, and all factors that try to prevent Lei Movie from pursuing eternity will be regarded as obstacles by the puppet general and removed.

So according to Mihayou's setting, when Li Shuo went to see Lei Movie, the puppet general should draw his sword and hack Li Shuo to death.

It is even said to continue to develop according to the main line of Mihayou. If the screenwriter of Mihayou has not forgotten his own settings, now when General Raiden gives up the pursuit of eternity, it also triggers the AI ​​​​setting of General Puppet, and General Puppet backstabs Lei Movie A knife, I feel normal.

The outline of my second edition is to write about the confrontation between Lei Movie and the puppet general. Happy end is that the puppet general has the ability to think independently like a skirmisher, and is no longer limited to the AI ​​setting. s story.

This version was also rejected by me.

because!

Both versions will inevitably involve Ray Films' thinking about eternity.

According to Mihayou's main line, Lei Movie's thinking about eternity, then I can only say... there is no way to write.

To explain, games and novels are two different carriers.

The plot of the rice wife chapter is full of two hours, if you play by yourself, you count as doing the task, four hours is enough, and it is done in one go.

When watching the plot, there are pictures, music, and dubbing by voice actors.

All the atmosphere of the plot is almost created, and then the music starts, the picture becomes more gorgeous, coupled with the voice actor's performance, everyone's thoughts follow the plot of the game.

Especially for the players of Tuyile, it is almost enough. After watching it, remembering a few famous scenes is considered a success. As for whether it is reasonable or not, it is really not a big problem.

But the text is different. Dry text usually depends on the reader's imagination.

Then the plot of Thor is more controversial. From the standpoint of Dao wife, and from the standpoint of Thor, it will inevitably cause a lot of controversy.

Under the carrier of text, this kind of controversy will be infinitely magnified.

At this time, leaning towards one side will inevitably offend the other side.

Remember the positioning mentioned above?

Because of the Liyue chapter, the readers who can catch up here are probably not just to watch Li Shuo posting with his sister, otherwise the quality of Liyue's emotional drama would have been lost...

Due to the screening problem of the Liyue chapter, writing about the controversial plots of Thor at this time is destined to offend some readers.

I also said that novels are most taboo to write plots that please some readers but offend some readers.

Because the part of the readers who are pleasing will not subscribe to double copies, and the part of the readers who are offended may directly abandon the pit, so... excellent authors should try to please all readers as much as possible.

This is also the reason why I simply changed some settings of General Raiden directly. Although this change may cause dissatisfaction among some readers, it can be regarded as paving the way for possible development.

Speaking of which, General Thunder should also be the only character in this book whose setting has been changed.

No matter how other settings are changed, at least the character settings have not been changed...

Frankly speaking, I think Thor is a highly popular character, but if you really want to focus on Thor, you shouldn't bang the eye hunting order and the lock-up order, as well as the topic of "eternity".

At least it is the plot of Daoqi after Shuying and Yae Shenzi untie the knot in Lei Movie. Even if the lock-up order is still in place, at least Daoqi is relatively peaceful.

If I were given another chance to write Dao's Wife, when Li Shuo entered Dao's Wife, Ying had already solved the troubles of General Thunder.

It won't be as troublesome as it is now, and maybe that kind of plot is more enjoyable.

But... when writing the Liyue chapter, too many foreshadowings were laid, and the Daofu chapter was written too quickly, so it was impossible to write it like this.

In other words, the above plots can be written, but they must be written after Li Shuo and the Abyssal Cult officially fight.

So after much deliberation, I decided to write the first part of Dao Wife as a cool article, which is the confrontation between Kong and Li Shuo.

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In addition, I would like to say a few more words. In fact, I once wanted to make Li Shuo Di, but I saw some situations about Dao's wife, so I just made up a bunch of brainstorming.

Some seemingly unreasonable or stupid decisions will also be rationalized in various brain supplements, which can also increase the fun.

There is one reason why I gave up this way of writing. First of all, I don't want to.