Be a detective in Yuanshin

Of course, "Tao Wen" is not included in this list, because I think "Tao Wen" is not a second creation. If it is not OOC, it is difficult to write at all, or to put it more bluntly, it is impossible to write.

The so-called expressing feelings, I actually want to talk about why I use "stupid" to describe Dadalia.

When I saw the post just now, my first reaction was: Huh?Isn't the son an idiot?

Seeing the content of the intermediary post again, after thinking about it, it seems that I am not an idiot, so why do I have such a wrong perception?

Then, while revising, I reflected on it carefully.

After sorting out the cause and effect, I found it quite interesting and wanted to share it with you.

Let me tell you first, when I was playing Yuanshen, the plots were all past C, and when I was going to write later, I only made up for it through videos over and over again.

I've read Liyue's main story about five or six times, and probably not many readers have read it more than I do. After all, the main storyline is really not worth revisiting.

To bluntly complain, Mihayou's main plot has changed from Bounce to Yuanshen, which is really super stretched.

At that time, there was a saying, although the main plot of the original god was stretched, but I don't think there is any problem with writing it this way.

From the perspective of game profitability, the main line is a typical example of not seeking merit but seeking no fault.

As long as you don't make the character bad, as long as you deal with it and let the player focus on the character, everything will be fine.

In addition, playing the game to experience the plot and watching the video to supplement the plot are completely two states. Maybe you feel that there is nothing wrong with the plot when you play, but when you supplement or aftertaste, you will find that some plots are simply unbearable to look at.

We all know that games are played by people, so the player's experience is more often considered. As long as the player's experience is okay, it is actually not a big problem.

Back to the topic, my son gave me a naive impression. At first, I thought it was because of the sub-plot, the son’s identity as "the director of the toy salesman stationed in Liyue Port in the Zhidong Kingdom", which is too funny, and then it is the setting of the ATM. .

But I thought about it carefully and found that this is actually not the case, because I made up the main line first, and then added the branch lines.

In my impression, when I read the main story line, the son Dadalia gave me the impression that IQ is not too high.

Why is this so?

Sitting in front of the computer and thinking about it, I realized that it is actually very simple. The portrayal of the son Dadalia in the main plot is too stretched!

Let me explain first, the stretching here does not mean that Dadalia is not well shaped. In fact, after reading the main story, I like Dadalia quite a lot.

But if you like it, you like it. Dadalia can't feel his ingenuity at all. Instead, he just thinks that he is a marionette being led around, and he is completely stupid.

Logically speaking, Dadalia was calculated by the lady and Zhongli in the main plot, so it cannot be said that the son is not good, but that the opponent is too powerful.

Just like in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms (which does not involve the history of the Three Kingdoms), Zhuge Liang and Zhou Yu fight. After watching it, I only think that Zhuge Liang is very smart, but I don’t think Zhou Yu is stupid.

It's not that our army doesn't work hard, but the Communist (harmonious) army is as high as it is.

So here comes the question, why doesn't Yuanshen feel this way?

Because Zhongli and Ms. Zhongli in the main line of shaping, did not create the feeling of wisdom chaotic world and military rebellion.

You may not believe me, but when I watched Liyue’s main plot, I thought Keqing, who played soy sauce, was the best portrayal.

In fact, this is probably the case. From the PV to the setting, everyone's IQ ability setting is 99/100, but when the main storyline is presented, it is only about 50/60.

Ke Qing, who didn't have many episodes, was spared.

In fact, this is also a common problem that creators encounter. They want to create a protagonist with a high IQ, but the creator's lack of ability leads to the fact that the character's IQ actually created gives people a halo of wisdom, and the feeling of fighting wits with fools.

Once when I was chatting in the author group, when talking about the plot of Yuanshen, a friend made complaints like this.Yuanshin is a 12+ game, with a main plot of 9+ and a branch plot of 18+.

The main plot of the original gods is fairy tales, and fairy tales cannot be delved into, otherwise what you see and what the fairy tale wants to show will inevitably run counter to each other.

The standpoint is different, and the results seen are naturally different.

One more thing, it’s not because of anything else that I wrote the main plot of Yuanshen. It’s purely because I used to write original ones, and I’m used to having a clear main line. I’m really not very good at daily writing.

At the beginning, I planned to create an original main line, but then I thought that the original main line might as well be changed based on the existing main line, after all, the latter may accept more readers.

So I plan to adapt the main story of Liyue, recreate a familiar story, and then intersperse various popular characters in the story.

Maybe due to some reasons, there is a problem with everyone’s perspective on the problem, so it’s still the same sentence, if there is a character OOC situation during this process, I hope everyone can understand and remind me more, so I can correct it in time.

Chapter 21: "Nights That Never Sleep"

This is destined to be a sleepless night.

The bell was ringing at 12 o'clock in the morning, and the nerves gradually became tense with the tense and exciting atmosphere.

Paimeng and Ying hid themselves in the darkness early on, waiting for the people from Zhidong who rescued Catherine to come and throw themselves into the net;

Ekaterina, who was lying on the bed nervously, also began to pray silently. The young master is not here to hear the news that she has been arrested. Don't get so excited that she loses her mind when she hears that there is a fight.

As for the culprit who "planned" all this, Li Shuo... is lying on the sofa and sleeping soundly...

There are only three rooms in the detective agency, so Li Shuo has no choice but to sleep on the sofa.

In fact, it's not like he didn't think about going to Ying to discuss whether they can sleep together. After all, everyone has met each other honestly, so it doesn't matter if they sleep together again?

But after thinking about it, I still gave up this idea. There was no other reason, but I was worried that if I didn't suppress it and just wiped the gun and let the gun go off, I would spend my whole life in it.

Josh is not worth it...

Tick, tick, tick...

The second hand of the clock on the wall, with the rhythmic beating, indicates that the time has passed by every minute and every second.

From midnight to six in the morning, Ying, Paimon, and Ekaterina, who were sleepless, suffered every moment.

Ying, Paimeng: Why is there still no movement! ?

Ekaterina: Don't make any noise in the next second!

thump, thump, thump

The clock strikes six o'clock, and the sun's rays shine into the house, heralding the beginning of a vibrant day.

"what--"

Li Shuo yawned long and got up from the sofa.

The sofa is not as comfortable as sleeping on the bed, not to mention too soft, and it is very stuffy.

If you cover the quilt, you will wake up from the heat. If you don’t cover the quilt, it will be a little cold in the middle of the night, which is uncomfortable.

"Hey, why are you both staring at the dark circles under your eyes? Do you want to sleep? Didn't you sleep comfortably? No, didn't you sleep comfortably when you first came here the day before yesterday?"

In front of the washbasin, Li Shuo was brushing his teeth, when he saw Ying and Paimeng walking out of the bedroom listlessly, he asked what happened with a puzzled face.

Ying murmured completely dumbfounded: "Did no one come to rescue her last night?"

"Save what?"

Pai Meng groaned feebly, "Who else is Ekaterina? Didn't Li fish with Ekaterina yesterday, trying to catch that man who has a relationship with Dijun?"

"Who said I'm going to fish with Ekaterina!?"

Li Shuo was shocked. This brain hole must be too big. It would be a pity not to write novels.

"No fishing?"

Li Shuo looked puzzled: "What kind of fish are you catching? Ekaterina eats delicious food here. Why did Beiguo Bank take the risk of violating Liyue's laws and come here to save people?"

Paimeng and Ying stared wide-eyed and opened their mouths wide at the same time. They had ten thousand words in their hearts, but they couldn't speak them out.

What the hell is this called!

Ying felt that after staying with Li Shuo for a long time, she would go crazy sooner or later: "If you don't fish, how can you get the information we want?"

"Ask, what else can I do?"

After Li Shuo washed, he wiped himself off with a towel, looked at the clock and said, "It's almost time."

almost time?

What do you mean?

Could it be that there is a back trick! ?

Is it finally time to start! ?

Li Shuo walked to the door, opened the door of the office and explained: "Wait a minute, I'm going to buy breakfast. Let me tell you that the fried dough sticks and tofu nao in the street next door are delicious. In our entire Liyue City They are all famous, that is, if I am famous, I don’t need to queue up, but if it were someone else, I would definitely not be able to queue if I got there late.”

fluorescent:"..."

Paimon: "..."

Also famous! ?

It's notorious!

Can't you just strangle this guy?

Seeing Ying and Paimon whose anger was soaring, Li Shuo asked again: "Do you want tofu nao salty or sweet?"

"Salty!"

"Sweet!"

After Paimeng and Ying finished speaking, they immediately looked at each other, and the conflict shifted in an instant.

Not long after, Li Shuo came back with fried sticks in his mouth and breakfast in his hand.

Gan Yu doesn't like to eat greasy food, so Li Shuo specially bought her some light breakfast.

Putting the breakfast on the table casually, Li Shuo hugged a dozen deep-fried dough sticks with oiled paper, and took two servings of tofu nao and said, "I'll ask that Ekaterina for information about the emperor, you guys eat first. "

Huh?

Do you really have to ask?

Didn't she try it yesterday, Ekaterina didn't cooperate at all, she couldn't ask anything.

No, I have to go and have a look.

Otherwise, I am really sorry for staying up this night!

Thinking in this way, Paimeng and Ying walked into the "little black room" with their respective tofu brains. Seeing this, Gan Yu looked at herself, then at Li Shuo and the others, and had no choice but to follow with her breakfast.

Yekaterina also didn't sleep all night, but she was thankful that the young master restrained her urge to fight.

At the same time, I am also a little confused. Li Shuo must have another trick, right?

Otherwise, I really feel sorry for his notoriety in Liyue City.

"boom!"

The door opened, and Ekaterina was startled. Is the final judgment finally coming?

Li Shuo: "I don't have pork chop rice in the morning, fried dough sticks and tofu nao, so it's time to go down?"

Ekaterina: "..."

At this moment, someone finally experienced the feeling that Paimeng and Ying couldn't get up or get down after being choked by Li Shuo for the past two days.

It's no wonder that everyone in Liyue City is afraid of him. This kind of guy hasn't been hacked to death with a knife so far. Isn't it scary!

"I bought a lot this morning, I want to eat and take whatever I want, right..."

As Li Shuo said, he reached out and took off Ekaterina's mask. He didn't know what's wrong with the people of Zhidong Kingdom, so he wore a mask if he had nothing to do, and he didn't worry about admitting the wrong person during the day and sleeping with the wrong person at night. ...sleeping the wrong person seems to be good too?

In terms of appearance, Ekaterina is not bad, at least it can be seen that she is very young, probably only in her twenties, but she looks a little haggard, and she looks like she lacks sleep.

With the mask removed, Ekaterina was somewhat uncomfortable, especially her heart was beating even harder.But she had already made up her mind, no matter how intimidating Li Shuo was, she would never say a word.

Li Shuo looked at Ekaterina's expression and nodded, then pulled over a chair and said, "Relax, there is no need to be too nervous, I will ask you a few questions later, but if you don't want to answer the questions It doesn't matter, just keep silent.

Forgot to tell you, in fact, I can read minds. "

Chapter 22: The Moment of Adult Breakdown

Mind reading?The occult "magic" that often appears in this kind of drama?

And Li Shuo doesn't have the eyes of God, how can he use "magic"! ?Originally, Ying wanted to question loudly like this, but she found out that there seemed to be one of the people present who could use elemental magic even without the eye of God...

Not only was Ying suspicious, but even Ekaterina's face was full of disbelief.

If Li Shuo really knows how to read minds, why wait until now?Just use the mind reading technique when you are in Beiguo Bank, wouldn't it be enough to read the result you want?

"Why, don't you believe me?" Li Shuo pulled a chair and pushed it in front of Ekaterina, signaling her not to eat breakfast in bed, after all, it would be difficult to wash fried dough sticks and tofu brains if they fell on the bed.

Ekaterina took a bite of the fritters, without saying a word, it was self-evident what she was thinking.

Li Shuo was not annoyed either: "It doesn't matter if you don't believe me, how about we play a game? It's the same question as before, who did you book the room in Liuli Pavilion, Liyue's friend? A customer of Beiguo Bank? Fools?