People in Tokyo, almighty useless people

But is the primitive society really so beautiful?

If it was so beautiful, the tribes in Africa who cannibalized and sold slaves would not be so disgusted by modern people.

"That's not completely sure, Peach Blossom Spring doesn't exist, does it?" Maruhashi Yeko frowned and said with disapproval.

"Then do you think the Babel Tower of the Babylonians can really lead to the kingdom of heaven?" Shi Liangping asked retortly.

"Babylon's... Tongtian Tower." Yoko Maruhashi pondered,

According to legend, after the great flood that destroyed the world, the descendants of Noah settled in the Mesopotamia Plain and the Mesopotamia Valley.

That is the ancient Babylon of later generations.

One day, someone asked a question: "If God wants to destroy us again, what should we do? Should we do something so that the flood doesn't happen again."

Humans at that time spoke the same language, had the same accent,

What that person said made all human beings reflect.

So all human beings united and built a city on the ground called Babylon City; built a tower on the ground that reaches the sky, called the Tower of Babel;

Human beings want to use the "Babylon City" to spread their name to the whole world, lest everyone be scattered all over the world,

Then use the "Tiantian Tower" to go to heaven and return to the embrace of God.

When God knew this, he doubted that his oath was doubted,

God does not allow man to doubt his oath.

So he decided to punish these human beings who forgot the agreement, just like punishing Adam and Eve who ate the forbidden fruit,

After that, God quietly left the kingdom of heaven and came to the world. He changed and differentiated the human language, causing human beings to be scattered all over the world because of language barriers.

Humanity is thus no longer united, and is plunged into perpetual strife.

The Tongtian Tower was abandoned in the middle of its construction. Since then, human beings have no ability to build a Tongtian Tower that can lead to the kingdom of heaven.

This is the story of the Tower of Babel in Babylon.

"It should be the same as Plato's Utopia. It is impossible to build." After thinking about it, Yoko Maruhashi gave such an answer.

Shi Liangping nodded,

Yes, whether it is Taohuayuan, Tongtian Tower, or Utopia, these purely idealistic social concepts are basically impossible to realize.

Even Peach Blossom Spring is the same,

As long as there are people, there must be classes, and it is impossible to truly realize equality for everyone.

In these stories, the Peach Blossom Land will not be found in the end, the Tongtian Tower will fail in the end, and the Utopia will be just a fantasy in the end, because if these things come true, the story will not come back.

A long time ago, there was such a story that illustrated this point of view.

——A group of hot-blooded teenagers work together to fight against the dystopian high-pressure government and try to overthrow the evil rule. During the process of this story, the teenagers will gradually discover that the government is fundamentally right and they are just secondary school students.

After Maruhashi Yeko knew the truth, she took out another notebook and recorded her gains.

At this moment, Shi Liangping tilted his head back slightly, only to find that the Yeko Maruhashi cabinet was full of such notebooks.

How many types of notebooks does she have?Are all literary girls so hardworking and serious?

Shi Liangping was slightly surprised.

"Thank you very much. I'm thinking about creating a novel recently. Your opinion on this aspect is very important to me." Yoko Maruhashi thanked while writing.

"Fiction creation? You can ask me, and I can give you advice. I used to dream of becoming a director," Shi Liangping propped his chin and laughed.

During the period of rebellion,

Shi Liangping once wanted to drop out of school to become a director, write scripts and shoot by himself.

But although he later gave up the idea after the rebellious period,

However, he made a lot of friends in script writing and novel writing because of this, and he knew quite a lot about this aspect.

"Then what do you think is the most important thing in novel creation?" Yoko Maruhashi stopped writing, stared at him with big clear eyes and eyelashes trembling slightly.

"Conflict! The most important thing in a novel is always conflict!" Shi Liangping replied without hesitation.

"Why is it a conflict?" Yoko Maruhashi bit the tip of her pen, looking very confused.

"Why is the love of Romeo and Juliet great? Because only the love that has experienced great suffering is great love. Why are the protagonists of hot-blooded anime hot-blooded? Because only the man who grew up under countless setbacks is the real hot-blooded hero. .”

Shi Liangping spoke slowly, expressing his point of view: "Conflicts and conflicts are the soul of novels."

A novel without conflicts is hardly a novel,

Many people think that novels without conflicts are actually just conflicts between people and the times in essence, and they are still created around conflicts and contradictions in essence.

Of all the novels that Shi Liangping has read, the only part that is not clear about prose and novels,

Probably "Norwegian Wood" by Haruki Murakami.

"Well, writing a novel is completely different from writing poetry or prose. I heard a novel writer say that there are only dozens of routines in the world, and all novels have been written.

I was shocked at the time, but now it seems that the creation of novels is indeed dancing with shackles! "

Marubashi Yoko sighed in frustration, "Originally, I wanted to write a groundbreaking novel after switching from prose to novel, but now it seems that the creation of novels is completely different from prose."

Seeing the sadness in Maruhashi Yoko's eyes, Shi Liangping felt a little sympathetic.

But there is no way, the fact is like this, human emotions are limited, and there may be groundbreaking works on other subjects,

But for novel creation, the routine has really been written to death,

No matter how good a novelist is, he can only write new patterns of existing routines, and it is impossible to blaze new trails.

If Yoko Maruhashi wants to create novels, he must not be able to pursue self-expression on his own,

Instead, we should learn from the experience of our predecessors and create our own path on the shoulders of giants.

Chapter 7, Film Tips

Hisada Yasuta looked at the two people chatting happily in class in astonishment, feeling extremely shocked,

There are countless students pursuing Yoko Maruhashi, from excellent students in the same grade to outstanding seniors in senior grades.

Don't look at Yoko Maruhashi's usual amiable appearance,

In fact, she is the most difficult existence recognized by all boys. Why would such an excellent girl do such a cheap thing?

That's Shi Liangping, who is at the bottom of the class. Is there any benefit in making friends with this kind of person?

There is something wrong with this world, what the hell, why are trash and abandoned houses so popular?

Hisada Yasuta scratched his hair and became irritable.

Those who have read the book know that it is even more difficult to become the deputy director of a certain department in the first year of high school than to be the top three in the grade.

As for why Maruhashi Yoko is so prestigious in the Literature Department, he doesn't know.

He only knew that most of the people in the literature department would come to her frequently for business, and she had already been appointed as the next minister in the literature department.

Marubashi Yoko is such a popular and beautiful girl, if he didn't pursue the idea, it must be fake, but because of self-knowledge, he has never tried it.

Seeing Shi Liangping happily chatting with Maruhashi Yeko was even more uncomfortable than his own broken love.

Hisata Kota had a dark face, secretly thinking that after school in the afternoon, he must beat this dead house into a pig's head,

It's not like he hasn't seen Shi Liangping practice swords, that level... huh,

He is one of the top four seeded players in the Kendo club, and ten Shi Liangping standing together will not pose any threat to him.

Anyway, he's been arrogant for a while now, the damned waste and abandoned house, he will be the one to feel better in the afternoon.

The history class is over, the get out of class is over, and then the class is over, the class is over, and the class is over,

This is the last class of the morning.

The two were completely unaware that time was passing, and they chatted very happily.

Shi Liangping cited two movie examples, analyzed the "mobilizing the audience's emotions" in the novel's creation method, and expressed his views to Maruhashi Yoko.

The first movie is "First Blood 4" directed by Sylvester Stallone,

This director should be familiar to many people,

Back then, he successfully won Oscars and Golden Globes for "Rocky", which he wrote and acted, and he can be described as a genius director.

In "First Blood 4", there is a very classic emotional mobilization link.

The protagonist follows an ordinary fleet to a place full of robbers. The conflict is encountering robbers, and the climax of the plot is that the protagonist kills these robbers.

But before the conflict, the fleet encountered two robber ships,

For the first time, the protagonist bypassed the robbers through superb boat skills and avoided the crisis.

The second time, the protagonist asks everyone on the ship to give money to the robbers, and use the money to eliminate the disaster.

But at the end of the second time, when the robbers were about to leave, the robbers suddenly found a woman on the fleet and were about to do something to the woman, so the protagonist had to do it.

Every time I am surprised, it is the so-called emotional mobilization, which is the ups and downs of the plot.

The emotions of movie viewers will appear when watching a movie: nervous, relaxed, nervous, relaxed, super nervous, and the plot is high.

Such a plot will appear very tense and can mobilize the reader's emotions.

Yoko Maruhashi recognized it very much,

"Multiple times of tension and relaxation will break the psychological defenses of movie viewers and make it easier for movie viewers to enter the world of movies." Yoko Maruhashi commented.

The second movie is "School Rules", which was shortlisted for Oscars. It is about school bullying, and the emotional mobilization of this movie is also very classic.

The basic routine is: push down the protagonist, and the protagonist counterattacks.

Every time the protagonist is depressed, there will be a pleasant plot.

Either the protagonist succeeds in resisting (others splash the protagonist with feces, and the protagonist reciprocates), or the protagonist is comforted (after being humiliated by a group of people, he is rescued by the heroine and comforted)

In the final big conflict, the protagonist's relatives and friends were forced to leave, and his girlfriend was also forced to leave (the protagonist who lost his mind almost didn't kill the villain).

Although the method used is different from the previous movie,

But the psychology of movie viewers is also: depressed, happy, depressed, happy, very depressed, very happy.

If this method is used by people in reality, it is also called PUA.

But in film art and novel art, this kind of operation is called emotional mobilization, which can make the audience more immersive.

Maruhashi Yoko's eyes lit up after hearing this, and she pulled the stool beside him,

"It's great, I didn't expect Shi Jun to be so powerful!" Maruhashi Yoko exclaimed loudly. "It's the first time I've heard such a theory."

Shi Liangping rubbed his nose, shook his head, expressing that this is just a little opinion,

No matter how much you study about theory, it’s useless. He didn’t realize his movie dream after learning so much.

In the end, these things became the capital for him to blow water in front of the high school girls.

[Writing skills have reached the excellent level standard, and the host's writing ability has been promoted to the excellent level]

[The host's current ability: reading and learning·excellent level, writing·excellent level]

But just when Shi Liangping was thinking this way, the [Almighty Plus] plug-in secretly added some abilities to him.

This made him a little overwhelmed.

If this continues, he won't really become the legendary hexagonal schoolmaster, right?

"Then do you think, if I want to write a novel, whose novel should I study?" Marubashi Yeko's eyes sparkled, and he was very happy.

"Who are you learning from? Your writing should be very good, right? Take a look at Xin Haicheng's book, his book seems to be very popular." Shi Liangping thought,

"But his novels are all about romance."

Yoko Maruhashi showed a cute expression,

She stared at Shi Liangping, as if she didn't understand: "I've never heard Xin Haicheng's words."

Shi Liangping was also taken aback for a moment, he recalled his memory, it seems that this world is slightly different from the original world,

For example, Xin Haicheng is not an ordinary person in this world, but a descendant of a rich man,

He wanted to write a book because he was forced to inherit his father's assets worth hundreds of billions, so he had to be depressed all day long when his dream could not be realized, enjoying a miserable life with endless money.

In addition, Japan's animation industry is not as developed as in the previous life, and many works have not appeared.

Shi Liangping scratched his head in annoyance. Is he still going to wait for Xin Haicheng's new movie to be released?