Tokyo, everyone is drawing comics, who still wants to fall in love?

The director of the Comics Web Department of Qunyingsha, Saburo Mikami, was stunned at this moment.

What happened?

Why did this remake appear here like a slap in the face? I just said it was a pity that there was no artist to remake it!

Is this a coincidence, or did someone deliberately frame me?

Saburo Mikami looked at the assistant.

The assistant also looked innocent.

Saburo Mikami calmed down for a moment, and his mind was spinning rapidly.

No, it was just a coincidence, not someone deliberately framed me or something. Although the assistant's ability is a bit problematic, he can be trusted.

[Ahem, everyone, take a look, this comic was eliminated by the Hand Award. On the one hand, it is because the competition for the Hand Award is indeed fierce and there are many excellent works. On the other hand, this comic must have some very big flaws. ] Director Saburo Mikami cleared his throat and tried to pull back the words.

But the people below were still a little dazed.

Because anyone who sees the opening picture will give a thumbs up: "It's awesome!"

"This, this is an eliminated comic?"

"Isn't it right? Is it wrong?"

Some students have begun to question it.

Fujido Kaoru did not stare like before, because she was also in shock and doubt.

Shocked, because the author she saw was still the web version of Oda Shingo, how could he draw such a wonderful picture? !

Doubt, is it suspected that the web version has a remake of the artist? Really? I happened to encounter it so coincidentally, and it was when the lecturer mentioned the web version.

Also, will this work really be eliminated by the hand award?

Her thoughts were the same as those of most people present.

[Let's take a closer look at this comic. ] Sankami Saburo began to change the manuscripts one by one by hand.

There was no other way, he had to finish the class.

[Usually, 80% of the mistakes made by novices are that the opening is irrelevant to the theme. ] Sankami Saburo began to use his rich experience in rejection to try to fit some common mistakes made by novices to this comic.

The second picture, a close-up of a fist.

[Ahem, the opening close-up of this comic is very relevant to the theme, at least it is not a novice mistake. ]Saburo Mikami secretly confirmed in his heart that the author's remake of his poor painting skills was acceptable.

Everyone had already put aside the web version they had seen before, and their attention was attracted by this remake.

Was this explosion the power of a fist?

Anyone would think so, because the previous series of close-ups of the protagonist swinging his fist and fists had formed an inherent impression.

The third picture was a close-up of the explosion effect.

The fourth picture was still a close-up of the explosion effect.

On the fifth page, a monster appeared, waved his hand and shot out a ball of light, and another part of the city was reduced to ruins.

There was a slight wow sound from the audience.

The picture was full of shocking power!

Saburo Mikami was stunned, and casually took out a comic that he had used for demonstration before.

Compare and switch at the same time.

There was a web comic as an example before, which also had many close-ups. But when this "One Punch Man" came out, the previous one was dwarfed.

No, it's completely not on the same level!

The explosion scenes of both are simple shots, while the scenes of One Punch Man are not only continuous, but also have a sense of progression.

[The continuous switching of shots gives people a sense of action, like watching an animation. This is called "the comics can be drawn in motion" by the editor!] Sansaburo Mikami gave a subconscious comment.

In the comic scene, the little girl crying in the ruins attracted attention.

The monster's hand began to grow to a demonic level.

The huge claws made readers subconsciously think of the sandbag-sized fist of the protagonist at the beginning.

The monster grabbed the girl, as if there would be a scene of flesh and blood exploding in the next moment.

But a figure appeared.

Close-up, close-up of the back, close-up of the cloak rolling up!

For ten consecutive pages, there were almost no words except for the background broadcast.

Just the picture, yes, the picture, completely expressed by the picture!

Now, Sansaburo Mikami said nothing and continued to show the original comic draft silently.

The protagonist Saitama saved the little girl in a critical moment.

The weirdo was surprised, the weirdo turned around, the weirdo was confused.

"Who are you?" The first line of dialogue in the whole story was spoken by the villain.

The protagonist just responded calmly: "A person who became a hero out of interest."

After the close-up of the protagonist's agile figure from behind, the close-up of the protagonist's smile from behind, and the close-up of the protagonist's appearance from the side, the protagonist's face finally appeared.

A bald head!

The previous explosive and amazing storyboards and delicate and tense painting skills suddenly changed at this moment!

The protagonist's bright head with a very sloppy painting style!

Everyone on the stage and off the stage felt that they were a little overwhelmed.

It was as if the emotions had been raised one after another, but were suddenly slapped down at this moment.

[King's hand...] Sankami Saburo said in a low voice of surprise. But the microphone played this voice out.

This is a subconscious evaluation formed by years of reading comics and reviewing manuscripts.

The king's hand is a move in shogi that can capture the opponent's king. According to the comics industry, it refers to a picture carefully drawn by the author that firmly grasps the curiosity of the readers.

Because this powerful contrast picture brings about a strong curiosity!

This guy is the protagonist? !

As expected, many students in the lecture hall began to look at each other in bewilderment.

Everyone knows that you must continue reading at this moment, and you must not stop! The comic has completely captured the readers at this moment.

No, no, we know the plot!

Some students reacted, and even Fujido Kaoru subconsciously let out a light "ah".

Everyone noticed that everyone's heart was captured by the remake of One Punch Man! Almost forgot the plot they had seen before!

It's not that I forgot! But the tension of the picture is too strong and the expression is too outstanding, which makes people feel like they have never seen it before!

Is this the same work? !

Are you kidding me!

Are you kidding Onmyoji? !

Are you kidding the eight million gods of Fuso? !

Everyone present couldn't believe it.

Is this kind of visual appeal comparable to the mere web version? Just the opening of the first chapter has firmly captured the readers' hearts!

Then, the weirdo began to brag and talk nonsense.

It seems to make people very impatient...

When the readers are about to get bored with the large amount of text, suddenly!

The entire comic suddenly returned to the state of close-up presentation of the plot! Just because...

The protagonist punches!

ONE PUNCH MAN!!!

Suddenly stopped!

Exciting!

Exciting!

Pointing out the theme! Pointing out the theme!

Pointing out the theme with one punch————!!!

Many people present remembered the importance of the theme of the work mentioned by the guest teacher just now.

This is the remake of "One Punch Man"!

Fudo Kaoru's breathing became rapid, staring at the huge projection screen in the lecture hall, and she couldn't recover for a long time.

Even though she knew this plot before, and was even very familiar with it, she was still shocked!

"..."Minister Mikami Saburo's hands were shaking a little. He didn't use the optical projection anymore, but stood silently on the stage and looked through the original drawings directly.

"Keep showing it!"

"I want to see it again!"

Some students began to get impatient.

But Mikami Saburo ignored it because he didn't hear it.

He was completely absorbed in flipping through the original drawings, with sweat dripping from his forehead.

Quality... stable!

Storyboards... perfect!

Drawing skills... excellent!

Plot... catchy!

Rhythm... brisk!

Mikami Saburo took a deep breath and looked at the signature again.

Author, Oda Shingo...

An unfamiliar name.

Is he a newcomer?

Mashaka!

No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No!

Although young, Mikami Saburo has been immersed in comics for more than 20 years! As the director, his experience is no less than that of an old editor!

Laymen watch the excitement, while experts watch the doorway!

This level is impossible!

Which great god is wearing a vest? !

He took off his glasses and wiped the sweat from his forehead with a handkerchief.

[Excuse me, take a break. ] Mikami Saburo suddenly turned off the microphone, left the podium, and walked backstage.

A ball of anger welled up in his heart.

If he hadn't come to guest talk about comics, how long would this work have been delayed?

Because of the judgment of the subordinate editor, it was almost delayed!

Why can't the web department always produce results?

Why is the work place of the web department arranged in the basement of the headquarters building? !

As the director of the web department, why do I always speak last at the headquarters meeting? !

Director Mikami Saburo's breathing became rapid and his steps became heavy.

Immediately, a school teacher came forward to respond, but seeing his serious expression and picking up his mobile phone to go backstage, it seemed that there was an important call.

The teacher had to go to the podium first and prepare to save the situation temporarily.

The students in the audience were also talking a lot, and the scene was a little out of control for a while.

At this time, a loud roar came from the backstage where Director Mikami Saburo turned!

It was Mikami Saburo who was on the phone, but he couldn't suppress his anger and roared:

"Kamefuji Keiji! Baka Wild Deer————!!!"

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