This protagonist is really good
Chapter 856
I would like to thank you all for your companionship and support for half a year. Thank you very much!
First of all, I want to say that my new book has been published, "Three Kingdoms: My Fiancée is Zhen Jiang"!
Secondly, I am not very good at describing my feelings, so I will simply summarize some mistakes in this book.
So others are ending remarks, and I can only call it ending summary.
Please help me summarize what I have not summarized and write it at the bottom. Thank you.
First, when this book was first written, I just wanted to complain about the content of the son-in-law and the rich man. At that time, I was completely excited and started writing directly. There was no outline, scope or ending at all.
The beginning of this book has undergone a change. Readers who have been following the book from the beginning should know the original content of this book. At that time, Bai Xiaobai did not actually have any strange identity, nor did he have the setting of the God King later.
All this was later that some people gradually read it, and I began to think about how to end it.
After all, if no one reads it, it will be a eunuch. If someone reads it and then eunuchs it is a moral issue.
Poor writing is a problem of ability, and eunuch is a moral problem.
The outline was established in the chapter where Fan Jin was killed. I remember very clearly that it was because the character Fan Jin appeared to drag on for a few chapters, and he was killed immediately after the outline was written.
So you found that Fan Jin died very hastily, because this character did not die according to the plot, but was "murdered" by me.
Second, my thoughts were shaken many times during the writing process, and the most important one was the question of whether to open a harem.
Many people asked me whether I would open a harem. At that time, I thought about opening a harem, anyway, there were many heroines.
But because the style at the beginning tended to be a single heroine, and I personally didn't really want to open it, so I hesitated several times on the question of whether to have a single heroine in the whole article.
This also led to a very fragmented issue on the heroine, too many ambiguities but few heroines, which will be changed in the next book.
Third, there are too many explanations for the character's behavior. This is because I don't have enough control over the plot, which led to me putting a lot of ideas and concepts in the text.
This is indeed a big shortcoming. After reading some writing books, I corrected this problem after 600 chapters.
This is indeed a big problem. I will correct it in the next book.
Fourth, the problem of Lin Xueer. This is because when I wrote this paragraph, many people said that they didn’t want to see Lin Xueer and the God of War. This character was pitted by me.
I can talk about my outline. In the design of this book, it should be after Li Zhen’s death, when Li Che inherited Li Zhen’s remaining hundreds of millions of assets and squandered them in the bar, he flirted with Lin Xueer, and then the God of War appeared.
From the content, you can see that I have done a lot of foreshadowing for the appearance of the God of War, such as: Ying Donghuan, the female owner of the bar, etc.
However, as a serialized novel, after deciding to pit it, it can’t be made up later, and the plot gap is too serious.
Not only Lin Xueer was pitted, but also the female teacher in high school was actually the heroine of the high school tyrant stream, and I also pitted it. Ning Xuepei, who transferred to the school, also paved the way for the high school tyrant stream.
The heroine who got married in the end was a female heroine, and I also tricked her out.
There should be eight protagonists who were tricked out by me, because I still have eight outlines that I haven't written yet, all of which are handwritten in A4 font. The folder is on the bookshelf next to the table and I can see it every day.
In fact, there are foreshadowings in the book, but in fact, they can't be considered foreshadowings. I have already put them on the table, so I won't count them one by one.
This shortcoming needs to be corrected in this book.
Fifth, the characters are too stereotyped.
This is caused by inconsiderate thinking in the later stage. In this book, only Lu Wanqing, Bai Xiaobai, Mu Xuanzhen, Ling Guoguo and Jiang Shangxue are the female characters I have thought about, and the rest are all applied in the same mold.
After Lu Wanqing's story ended, I thought about finishing the book. I personally think that Lu Wanqing's story is still relatively complete.
Finally, typos, this question...
You think I have a lot of typos in the beginning, but you are used to it in the later part.
Just kidding, it still needs to be corrected.
Finally, in the new year, I wish you all: Happy New Year! All the best! May all your wishes come true!
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