Things from Another World

Tang En slammed the table hard, threw back a few manuscripts handed over by an elf beauty, and yelled: "No! Unqualified! Go back and rewrite! Remember! Three chapters of gold! Three chapters of gold!"

Tang En's yelling scared the beauty elf in front of her, and her ears pulled down, her neck distressed and her head down.

She is a very popular poet in the Emerald Corolla. Her poems are very popular among her sisters. She originally thought that she could easily complete the task of Tang En, and handed in her new works with confidence. Actually failed.

"Don't understand what the Golden Chapters are !? I'll explain it to you again! Just to have the protagonists, contradictions, outbreaks, and goals in the first three chapters, and if necessary, the Golden Fingers should also be written. There is only one purpose for all. Is to make readers happy! "

"But there is no way to pave the way," the elf girl whispered. "There is no story at all ..."

"No storylines! The readers don't care what the story is, they are impatient! They just need to be cool! It's enough to be cool!"

Tang En snarled at the table and said, "But see what you wrote? Ah? 'Morning light disperses the mist, the girl walks on the waves, the goddess drops the hymn, evil will purify'? Are you teasing me? Vernacular , Do you understand in vernacular? "

The beauty elf poet frowned, shook her head in a hurry, and looked at Tang En with big eyes and watery eyes.

"From the main point of view, what you wrote is a story of a heroine, and that alone has been cast off!"

"On the first page, there are only four sentences. In terms of writing style, although it is concise enough, it has no sense of rhythm. What is the name of the protagonist? What is the purpose of the protagonist walking on the waves? What is the goddess to do to lower the light Gold finger? Or blessing? Or strengthen the protagonist's body? You didn't write it clearly! And the last sentence, isn't this nonsense? Everyone knows that evil will eventually lose, so readers don't care about it. Point, what they care about is how the protagonist beats his face, how he pretends, how cool! "

"Let me repeat your four sentences in the right way, and you will appreciate it."

Tang En brewed, and slowly said under the gaze of the beautiful elf poet: "At dawn, our protagonist A woke up at home on time, and then he quickly climbed to the window on the second floor, and the young and beautiful girl B next door did as usual. It ’s customary to start taking a bath—this paragraph can be further refined or simplified depending on the age limit of the work—after taking a shower, a holy light suddenly fell from the sky, and the goddess found that A was peeping at her maiden bathing, so punish him! "

"But, who is A? He is the protagonist of the story! Therefore, the goddess must kneel and lick when he comes! Under the protagonist's three-inch non-rotating tongue, the goddess is content with satisfaction. When he left, he also gave a protagonist A great gift , Strengthened the protagonist A's strength, then also purified his body, taught a few skills, and then gave the protagonist A a task, the evil Z is about to wake up, in order to save the world, he must take the green plum bamboo horse B to the road together to save the world ——Why take B with you? As the protagonist, someone needs to be warmed up at night when sleeping. "

"Then the protagonist went to B, but unexpectedly met the villain C who had been crushing on B. C mocked the protagonist A and pulled hatred hard. Then A slaps C to death, successfully slaps his face, harvests the sweetheart B, and takes Together, B set out to save the world and began to drive out the evil. He defeated enemy D, defeated beauty E, defeated enemy F, and defeated beauty G ... "

With that said, Tang En spread his hand: "Look, wouldn't you just write this in a lighter way? Also, use vernacular! Do you understand vernacular? It's straightforward, don't go around and say anything."

"Oh……"

The beauty elf poet nodded indifferently: "In short, is to defeat the enemy and collect beautiful women?"

"Savvy! What's your name?"

Although she wrote very averagely, it was the first one who had the courage to submit a manuscript. It can be used as a key training object, so Tang En made such efforts.

"Dantrian."

"..."

Tang En was silent for a moment, and said gravely, "If you have time, you can flip through your bookshelf, maybe you will wake up some strange attributes."

Dantrian looked inexplicable.

"Go back and change, remember, our main readers are men, so we should write this story from a male perspective, as for the story from a female perspective, that is the future."

What Sally wants is to increase the Elven population. If men don't have that idea, how can they increase the population? At this time, of course, it is necessary to develop some corresponding literary works. Long Aotian who opened the large stallion mode properly meets the conditions!

"Oh……"

Dantrian hesitated for a moment, and whispered, "Don, the world you said before ... are there any references?"

Tang En's eyes brightened: "Are you interested?"

"Ok……"

Dantrian nodded: "I always feel that the story you are telling is not a fictional story, it is very much like a real world. If there are reference materials to play under that framework, I should be able to write You are satisfied with the story. "

"I'm not satisfied, I'm just inspiration for you."

Downe corrected her: "The story you write is ultimately meant for Queen Isari."

After speaking, Tang En smiled again: "But it is a little too difficult for you to write such articles directly, so ..."

With a wave of his hand, Tang En took out a stack of paper and said proudly, "This is the outline of the story I wrote to you last night. You can take it and circulate it separately, and learn."

"Great!"

Dantrian opened her eyes, took the outline, and said with confidence: "Relax, swear in the name of the goddess, I will-I will write this thing called a novel!"

"What a **** to teach ..."

Watching Dantrian leave, Down said: "Next."

A blond elf girl confidently handed in the manuscript: "This is a comic I drew."

"Oh."

Tang En only glanced and took a moment of air-conditioning: "What's your name?"

"three--"

Tang En's eyes jumped, don't tell me she's called Sanqianyuan ...

"Trefoil."

The elf girl Sanye pointed at the hair ornament on her head happily and said, "Because the seed that was born with me left three leaves."

"call."

Tang En breathed a sigh of relief: "Sanye ... what ..."

"Ok?"

"You ... this is not a comic ..."

Tang En was holding those pieces of manuscript paper, his hands were trembling: "This is a sketch ..."

The few manuscripts that Sanye took up had no problems with the lens, story, and rhythm. Except for the story, he still couldn't jump out of Prendall's circle. The others were impeccable, and it can even be said that even if they were on the earth, they could be instantly It's an instant hit because her painter is so scary!

This is not a comic at all, but a sketch by sheet!

Every character, every detail in every lattice, every tree leaf, and even every grass can clearly see the veins above!

Already realistic!

"Are you tired of drawing like this? How long did it take?"

"Not tired. It didn't take long for me to use magic to speed up a bit."

With a light smile on Sanye's face: "Just the time for a meal, mainly because it takes a little time to conceive the story, and it doesn't take much time to paint."

Found the treasure!

Tang En was ecstatic, what is Jin Zhengji on earth! ? These three leaves are simply Prandall's human flesh printer!

"Great!"

Tang En grabbed his hands: "Apart from this style of painting, can you master other styles of painting? Exaggerated? Funny? Concise?"

Sanye was a little uncertain: "Should be fine ..."

"it is good!"

Tang En finally saw hope: "In the future, the artist of the official book will decide you!"

Mitsuba stunned: "What is an official book?"

"I'll tell you slowly later."

Tang En smiled and patted Sanye's shoulder: "In the future, let others plan the story. All you have to do is draw the original. I believe Queen Isari and Eggwin know your contribution. I will be very happy. "

"It's my honor."

After watching Sanye leave, Tang En rubbed his hands, a little impatient.

Judging from the current learning speed, they will still be constrained by Prendall's inertial thinking in a short time, and it is difficult to exert their true strength. .

However, he is not good at drawing or writing.

So Tang En had other ideas.

To see the results right away, the best way is to touch them with your fingers and let them complete the first work with their hands taught, and then they will understand what the market needs.

The outline that Tang En gave them before was the first step. In the next step, Tang En decided to come up with a detailed outline. Not only that, there are also some very ... well, adult things, which is exactly what Isari needs. He did not have any psychological pressure to take it out, but the thought of Tang En had an inexplicable excitement when he thought of cultivating silly elves and beauties to create these things.

What does he take out?

Of course, many people on the planet ’s sexual enlightenment teachers are well-known works. As long as the original framework is magically modified to remove the content of heavy taste, some milder works are born.

If the words are not enough, the official work of Sanye ’s ghost-and-beast painter is absolutely sharp, and the effect of putting them together is self-evident.

It can be expected that these things will definitely stimulate the needs of the elves in some way.

Of course, perhaps because of the simplicity of the elves, they may wake up more slowly, but what Tang En has to do is to awaken their consciousness step by step. As soon as they start to wake up, the later things have nothing to do with him.