Today, I suddenly received a notification from my editor about the book being put on the shelves. Because the readership has been steadily declining... so I hastily wrote a shelf notification, and also talked about the problems with the book.

First of all, according to the outline, the first volume mainly tells the story of Karl using the [Warp] and the [Mind Stone] to exploit bugs, change his situation, solve crises, and gradually consolidate his position.

To be honest, although it involves the [Warp], there aren't many scenes. Most of the time, Karl uses it as a simple tool.

There are two reasons for this design:

First, for an ordinary person who has just traveled to Marvel, the survival crisis that needs to be solved first must come from the real world, and then the Warp... and from getting out of the dead end to now, it has only been a little over three weeks!!!

I don't know how high friends who often travel through time can reach in these twenty days, and what kind of great achievements they can create?

But Karl's goal at this stage is very clear, which is to put all his energy into how to collect more [Prestige Points] to increase [Dimensional Strength], so naturally he has no time to explore the development of the [Warp].

The reason why everyone thinks the development of the [Warp] is "too slow" is because we have always been looking at the plot from God's perspective, so we feel like it has been a long time, but in fact, only a short twenty days have passed in the plot...

And in the second volume, which is about to begin, after solving the most urgent survival crisis and gaining a firm foothold, Karl will begin to explore the potential of the [Warp] and the four Chaos Gods.

In my opinion, this is also a process of "transforming from a human to a god" (I don't know if this is the right way to think, it's my first time writing and I have no experience).

Secondly, it is also the most important setting of this book, and the most controversial part - [Warp]!!!

In fact, before starting this book, in order to understand the [Warp], I specifically searched online for relevant descriptions in the rule book (3rd edition) to know that in the [Warhammer] worldview, the [Warp] was not as evil and powerful as we know it in the [40K era] from the beginning.

It was because of the impact of the "5 million-year-long" [War in Heaven] that it became the twisted, evil, depraved, and powerful ghost it later became, and the subsequent birth of the 3+1 Chaos Gods!

That is to say, the [Warp] did not have good or evil at the beginning of its birth!

It was precisely because of this setting that the author specially designed the [Warp] to be initialized when designing the golden finger of this book, and then the process of developing and growing from weak to strong (Okay, I admit, it is actually easier for newcomers to write this way. If I directly started with the ubiquitous [Warp] in [Warhammer 40K], I might not be able to grasp it.)

And because there are 65 million years less of corruption and twisting accumulation (65 million years from the [War in Heaven] to the beginning of M1), the four Chaos Gods in this book will have both positive and negative sides at the same time, instead of simply taking the evil route...

As a result, I didn't expect that this rigorous setting that I thought was very careful has become the biggest failure of this book (I'm really crying 555)!!!

This made me truly realize how serious a mistake it is for a newcomer to misjudge the preferences of readers (I know now that what everyone wants to see is the powerful and evil [Warp], who wants to see the development process... I will definitely change it next time, definitely next time)

So in the process of updating the novel, many readers abandoned the book because the [Warp] has no presence, and the author can only helplessly say sorry to everyone!

Although the author has been telling stories very carefully since the beginning of the book, each chapter does not get stuck at 2000 words, does not flood the system panel, does not flood the data bar, and does not follow the original plot line step by step, but is very sincerely telling a brand new story that integrates multiple elements (can be regarded as a brand new parallel universe).

But as a newcomer with no writing experience, I still exposed many shortcomings, and sometimes I was almost crazy when I was stuck, and I was stumbling forward all the way.

And the most headache for me is that because of the lack of writing experience, I can't arbitrarily change the layout and outline like other old authors, and still make the subsequent plot seamlessly connected and ensure that the plot does not collapse!

So even if I know that everyone wants to see the rise of the [Warp] and the scenes of the four Chaos Gods as soon as possible, I dare not bring the plot designed in the back of the outline forward to show it.

Because once I deviate from the original outline, I probably won't be able to grasp the next plot.

It is likely that there will be problems such as inconsistent connection between the upper and lower parts, and the plot will be too torn, so it will collapse before 200,000 words!!!

This is not what I want, because it will not improve my writing level at all.

I also know that this clumsy writing method is destined to lose a lot of readers.

But at the moment, I can't find a better way to solve this problem except to try to delete some foreshadowings and fragments to speed up the process.

To put it bluntly... it's still my own writing skills that are not good, I admit it!!

Fortunately, the author is a part-time writer, and writing books late at night after get off work is purely supported by interest, so I don't have too much extravagant expectations for the results of this book.

As long as I can get more than 300 subscriptions, earn some cigarette money every month, and prove that I am worthy of writing stories for everyone, I am already satisfied.

My positioning for myself is to adapt to the atmosphere and rhythm of writing at the starting point as soon as possible, accumulate more problems and experience found in the writing process, and strive to bring more exciting stories to everyone in a better way in the next book.

So I will hold a sincere heart for this book, do my best to tell the story in a fairly exciting way, and then ensure that I write it long and don't eunuch it (I hope so, never set a flag).

The latest novels are first published on Liu 9 Books Bar!

In addition, thank you very much to those readers who have been giving the author recommendation tickets, monthly tickets, and rewards, I remember the nicknames of each of you.

Seriously, without your support, as a newbie, I might have given up long ago!

All of the above are the sincere words of a new author, so please support the first order as much as possible if you have time.

The shelf time is set after 12 noon today, and there will be 8,000 to 10,000 words offered at that time. Good luck and thank you all in advance!!!

Finally, let's use a line that can express my current mood as the ending of the shelf testimonial...

[Coach, I want to play basketball]!!!

Thank you "Faint Determination" for the 100-point reward, thank you "Noah God's Dad" for 1 monthly ticket, thank you "Wind of the Abyss" for 1 monthly ticket, thank you "Zhou Xiang" for 2 monthly tickets, and other readers who have been voting for recommendation tickets, the author is very grateful!!!

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