The King
: review
Review it
Seeing a lot of readers spraying water, Haiyue said: I am wronged, I really didn’t pour water on purpose.
Slow-paced text, the progress of the plot will definitely not be fast. Haiyue has tried to reduce the foreshadowing content as much as possible, no matter how little logic there is, the loop cannot be closed.
The content is repeated, and the words are not denied. If you read carefully, you will find that the contents that seem to be similar before and after have different meanings.
From part to whole is itself a step-by-step process. If I didn't pay attention to it, I thought it was the same thing said twice, but this part of the content is essential.
Part cannot represent all, and individual cannot represent all.
In order to reduce the criticism, Haiyue blindly cut down the appearance opportunities of many characters. The background introduction of the characters has also been greatly reduced. As a result, I have read a lot of books, but there are very few characters that I can remember.
—failure.
To sum up: The main reason is that Haiyue's skills are not enough. In terms of partial and overall descriptions, he didn't do a good job of balancing the relationship between the two, and he deserved the scolding.
Blindly ran to cut the plot of the character, putting the cart before the horse. In the future, Haiyue will work hard to improve, and strive to achieve both characters and plots.
Insufficient updates are also one of the core reasons for review.
Embarrassment, trivial things are indispensable in life. If there are too many trivial things, the output will be low.
Additional superposition creates peak and trough periods, which can be reversed by non-manpower. After Haiyue, try to stabilize the seven thousand, it seems a bit difficult, I will fight my own blood and come on!
Before I knew it, it was almost twelve o'clock. One chapter was missing for a review, and I would try to write as little as possible in the future.
The review is over, and I hope readers will continue to encourage and supervise. Of course, don't forget to vote and subscribe, love you Haiyue forever!
(end of this chapter)
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