At the request of some readers, I want to see the elf data of the protagonist so far, so I sorted it out for you to see.

In addition, since the Tomato chapter must be at least 1,000 words to be published, the data word count is not enough. It just so happens that I have something to say to my readers, but the chapter review and book review area can only write a maximum of 300 words, which is not enough, so I took this opportunity to write what I want to say in this chapter.

Don’t treat this chapter as the main text, just treat it as a discussion post I created independent of the book review and chapter review.

By the way, do you want to see this single chapter of elf data?

I hope everyone will tell me what they think. I want to count it so that I can judge whether to publish such things in the future.

Without further ado, here are the data:

[Elf: Butterfree]

[Attributes: Insect, Flying]

[Gender: Female]

[Features: Compound Eyes]

[Qualifications: Insect (52% good); Flying (50% good)]

[Racial Value: 395]

[Strength: Level 24 (Primary)]

[Skills: Wind, Impact, Silk, Hardening, Insect Bite, Ultrasonic Wave, Telekinesis, Poison Powder, Paralysis Powder, Hypnotic Powder, Air Slash, Blow Away, Hold]

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[Elf: Little Fire Horse]

[Attributes: Fire 】

[Gender: Male]

[Features: Flame Body]

[Qualification: 78% Good]

[Racial Value: 410]

[Strength: Level 10 (Novice)]

[Skills: Collision, Call, Tail Shaking, Lightning Flash, Sparks, Flame Jet, Double Kick, Hold, Trampling]

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[Elf: Charming Eyes]

[Attributes: Evil, Ghost]

[Gender: Male]

[Features: Mischievous Heart]

[Qualifications: Evil (75% Good); Ghost (92% Good)]

[ Race value: 380]

[Strength: Level 24 (Primary)]

[Skills: Grab, Stare, Scare, Strange Light, Shadow Sneak Attack, High Five Surprise Attack, Immobilize, Shoot Down, Shadow Claw]

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[Elf: Wood Gecko]

[Attribute: Grass]

[Gender: Male]

[Feature: Lush]

[Qualification: 70% General]

[Race value: 260 (Full value 310)]

[Strength: Level 15 (Primary)]

[Skills: Slap, Stare, Absorb, Parasitic Seed, Rock Blockade , a flash of lightning]

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[Elf: Doi Ninja (mutation)]

[Attributes: Bug, Ground, Ghost]

[Gender: Female]

[Features: Compound eyes]

[Qualifications: Bug (10% good); Ground (80% general); Ghost (10% good)]

[Racial value: 266]

[Strength: Level 1 (Primary)]

[Skills: Grab, Throw Sand, Harden, Suck Blood, Shadow Ball]

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Regarding the problem of some readers saying that the elves are captured too quickly, I will talk about it.

First of all, this is definitely from the perspective of the reader, or more accurately, from the perspective of God, not from the perspective of Yang Yan.

From Yang Yan's perspective! From Yang Yan's perspective! From Yang Yan's perspective! Important things are said three times, and I will analyze them for you.

Butterfree is Yang Yan's first elf friend after he came to this world. It is similar to "childhood sweethearts". In Yang Yan's heart, it cannot be considered a main battle elf, but Butterfree is the strongest in his hand now. Butterfree is actually half a main battle elf + half a pet elf (actually this is a spoiler, I didn't want to say it)

Ponytail, Yang Yan's initial elf, in Yang Yan's current view, when its strength grows to be close to Butterfree, it will undoubtedly be the main force, the real main battle elf.

Soul Eye is the first good-level elf that Yang Yan has encountered besides his father's Parasaurolophus, so isn't it normal to want to accept it? It is also being cultivated as the main force by Yang Yan now.

As for Bryonyx, Yang Yan now doesn't think that Bryonyx will become his Pokémon. First of all, whether Bryonyx's qualifications can be restored is a big problem. Secondly, even if Bryonyx's qualifications are restored, Yang Yan can hardly be sure whether Bryonyx will be willing to become its Pokémon. So at this point in time, Bryonyx is not considered a Pokémon officially captured by the protagonist.

Finally, Doi Ninja, Yang Yan felt that this was a complete accident, and Doi Ninja's physical condition was not good, and he might die at any time, so he couldn't be trained as a main elf at all. Now Yang Yan just took it as a pet elf.

So in summary, what Yang Yan really needs to spend nowThe only thing I have cultivated is three Pokémon. Is it a lot? In Yang Yan's opinion, it is not a lot.

We cannot stand in the perspective of God and judge the current things by what will happen in the future. This is illogical.

Moreover, when we read a book, we can put ourselves into the characters in the book, so why do we have to jump out and evaluate from the perspective of readers or God when commenting?

Is it more appropriate to think and examine the problem from the current perspective of the characters in the book?

I hope everyone can think about it more.

After talking about the reader's perspective, I will talk about it from the perspective of the author.

In order to make the plot of each Pokémon captured by the protagonist more reasonable and without logical flaws, I don't know how many brain cells died. You can review it and see if it is like this. The logic can basically be explained, right?

In addition, I actually have a little bit of deep meaning in the arrangement of each Pokémon. Of course, it cannot be seen now. It may take more than 500,000 words to reveal it little by little. I won't say more here.

Finally, I will talk to you from my perspective as a creator.

I want to pour all my love for Pokémon into this book, so in my personal opinion, I even think that the protagonist has not captured enough!

I think everyone should like a lot of Pokémon, in addition to the very popular Gardevoir, Lucario, Gengar, Big Brother, Greninja... everyone must have other Pokémon that they particularly like.

I think if there is a chance to go to the elf world, everyone must want to capture them all.

So I definitely want to, the number of Pokémon I particularly like must be more than 10, of course not as exaggerated as 80 or 100. So of course, I also want the protagonist to have these Pokémon, but which ones are they, everyone will wait and see.

The original intention of writing this book is actually to give me an explanation for my love for Pokémon for so many years, and to fulfill my own feelings.

So this is not only written for you, but also for myself. Yang Yan is the self who went to the elf world in my imagination. How could I treat myself badly?

But from the author's point of view, I certainly can't be self-willed and write randomly. I pay great attention to logic when I read books. If there are big loopholes in the logic, I will even abandon the book. So of course, I will not write randomly against the settings in the book. You can rest assured.

In addition, I want to say that whether you like it or not, what I write is what I like.

If you like it too, then go with me to see the scenery there.

If you don't like it, please come quietly and leave quietly.

If you don't love it, please don't hurt it!

You can dislike what others like, but you should maintain the minimum respect.

Confucius also said, "Don't do to others what you don't want others to do to you."

We are all civilized people, so don't do immoral things. (The author's desire to survive is too strong)

A few days ago, I saw in the author group that an author said in the group that his book was rated 4 stars by someone. As a result, the rating of the book was still 8.5 in the morning, but it became 8.0 in the afternoon. The key point is that the reason for the 4 stars was "It's well written, but too short."

Please, it's not long since I started writing, of course it's short, but it's also what I worked hard to write. You read a chapter for three or five minutes, but it takes at least one or two hours to write a chapter. Do you think about our hard work?

What he said in the group was so aggrieved...

Do you know how many 5 stars are needed to make up for a 4 star?

So don't rate and judge a book casually.

It's not easy for everyone, I hope we can understand each other.

That's all for now. If there are still questions that you are concerned about, I will continue to answer them in this chapter (in fact, 300 words are too few, I am helpless)

Just treat this chapter as an interactive chapter between readers and authors, as a supplement to the book review area.

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I found that what people complain about most recently is the setting of talent and race value.

I don't know how other Pokémon fan fictions are set, and what do you think.

I will explain the setting in my book here. If there are such questions in the future, I will not explain it again.

In my setting, talent is equivalent to the root bone in martial arts novels, genes and talents in reality. This kind of thing is innate, good is good, bad is bad.

Strong talent means high upper limit, no problem, right?

I don't deny that some people and elves can break through the limitations of talent through persistent training, but that is only a very small number.It is just a few individual cases, not a universal view.

You should not use 0.00001% of individual cases to refute 99.99999% of the group, it does not make sense logically.

As for the racial value, the reason why I set it to be lower is that I think it is unreasonable to put it in the real world.

In the same race, there must be tall and short people, fat and thin people. Aren’t the racial values ​​a description of physical fitness? So how can everyone be the same?

This kind of thing should be acquired and can be changed.

If it is really the same, then can it be understood that the speed of growing tall and short should be the same? The strength of strong and thin bodies should be the same?

Is this reasonable? It is not reasonable at all!

Games are games, and reality is reality. For the sake of convenience, it is definitely impossible for games to consider all settings to be the same as the real situation, otherwise even if you pull out all the hair of the programmer, he will not be able to design it.

It's the same when I write novels. I can't write everything according to reality. If that's the case, the buggy setting of race value should be discarded.

So in order to make a better and easier-to-accept situation between the two, in my setting, the race value is a physical state that Pokémon can reach as long as they are in good physical condition, well-nourished, and exercised enough.

This value is the same as the value that can be found in the encyclopedia.

Of course, it is also possible to break through, but it must be talented, persistently trained, and lucky or with the blessing of some external forces to have a little chance of doing it.

This book should also write about the breakthrough of race value in the future, but in order not to make everyone feel disgusted and not to destroy the balance of power, I guarantee that only a very small number of Pokémon can do it.

And even if it breaks through, only the aspect that Pokémon is best at can break through, such as those who are good at speed can only break through the speed race value; those who are good at strength can only break through the attack race value. No Pokémon can break through both limitations.

And even if you break through, the added racial value can only be 5 points at most, or one or two points at least. I think this should not cause an imbalance in the power system, and it can also ensure that the elves that break through are indeed stronger than those of the same race.

I think this is more reasonable.

So please don't say anything in the comments, you are wrong, it should be like this, it should be written like that! It is clearly like this in the game, how can you write it like this? ! Or the reality is clearly like this, how can you copy the game completely? !

This situation is like you are telling a fantasy author that your level is wrong, it should be like this; how can your level be called this name? It should be called that name!

In this regard, I can only say:

Give you the pen, you write it! Write whatever you want, I don't want to care!

Well, that's all about the talent and race value settings. I really don't want to explain this topic anymore. It's annoying...

(Although I originally planned to do so, after too many people complained, I decided to give up the controversial topic of race value and respect the official. I won't change it. I wrote the details in the book circle. If you are interested, you can take a look.)

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