interstellar second director

I don't know whether it's because I'm desperate for the future, or because I have the idea that Danqingchi can change his mind. In short, Aijima sent the script he wrote to Danqingchi through the optical brain.

The two found a coffee shop and each had a drink. Dan Qingchi began to read Aijima's script in silence.

The more he watched, the more ashamed he became. He knew why there were so many screenwriters, but Aijima was left behind and couldn't find a director.

This script has too many flaws.

The protagonist of the story is a teenager, and the background is a remote and backward small planet.Through hard work, the young protagonist grows from a penniless homeless man on the planet to a decisive... interstellar pirate.

Why Interstellar Pirates? ! !

Let’s not talk about whether this kind of film that becomes a villain through all kinds of hardships and dangers complies with the regulations. The protagonist obviously strengthened himself first and then joined the army. , As a result, the war failed due to the subordinate's mistake, and then the protagonist surrendered in a second and went to conquer the star universe with the interstellar pirate brother.

Is this change too fast? 10 minutes ago, he was still declaring his loyalty to the Star Alliance, and 10 minutes later, he took off his military uniform and became a pirate?Has the character of the protagonist declined a little faster?

Regardless of this point, other story lines in the entire plot are also very problematic.

If love is involved in most stories, the protagonist will be equipped with a CP. In the world before Danqingchi, the male protagonist’s CP is a beautiful woman.The CP of a specially labeled film may be a male.A more refreshing article may have more than one CP, or it may be ambiguous, and there is no one who has achieved a positive result.Anyway, there is logic to be found.Even in Interstellar movies, the only difference is that the CP may be people from different planets.

However, in Aijima's script, as long as it is a talking creature, it is a little unclear from the protagonist.

Is this harem too big?

Should I thank you for giving up the battle pet next to the protagonist? Hey!

Regardless of the ending and CP, a detailed discussion of the protagonist's promotion path is just to expose a small conspiracy of the hostile faction. Isn't it a little smooth that the official rank can be triple-jumped?Even if Danqingchi didn't know the official titles and rules of the interstellar military camp, he must have never been so easy, otherwise there must be as many colonels as dogs, and the generals are walking all over the street.

If you compare the career of a director to a chef, and a screenwriter to a person who submits ingredients.So at the beginning, Taozi sent Danqingchi a plate of messy green vegetables, and after rearranging it, he could still make a plate of delicious food, while Aijima brought a plate of rotten cabbage, Danqingchi was completely There is no desire to save.

This script is full of problems in terms of plot and setting!

However, someone didn't notice this. Aijima looked at Danqingchi with shining eyes like a big dog waiting to be praised, and asked, "How do you feel?"

Dan Qingchi looked at Aijima in despair, and asked, "Have you considered changing your career?"

Aijima's expression immediately cooled down. He leaned on the back of the soft sofa and took a sip of coffee: "Then I'll wait until I repeat the grade. I really don't have the talent for this."

"I think you have a lot of talent for spoofing." Dan Qingchi replied.

"Are you suggesting I change it to a comedy?"

"Comedy can ignore part of the logic." Dan Qingchi said, "At least it is not as rigorous as the requirements of the main drama. And... can the setting of your protagonist become an interstellar pirate really pass?"

"Don't you think that's very impactful?"

"Well, it's quite impactful. I'm going to be scared stupid." Dan Qingchi whispered.Anyone who sees the protagonist stepping into the battlefield on the previous page and wins will be at the pinnacle of life, and whoever is immediately defeated on the next page, follow the interstellar pirates, you and me... Ah bah, following the interstellar pirates to conquer the universe, their jaws will be scared off.

Sometimes a reversal can surprise the audience, but a big reversal that is completely opposite to expectations without warning is a failure at all!

"You don't plan to revise the script?" Dan Qingchi asked, "Even if such a script is filmed, it may not pass."

Aijima opened the script and looked back from the beginning with a bitter face: "Is it really that bad?"

Dan Qingchi: It's so bad, it makes people wonder if you did it on purpose.

"What questions?" Azima asked.

"First, the protagonist's goal at the beginning has deviated, and the ending suddenly becomes an interstellar pirate, which is unacceptable."

"I see a lot of people writing the story of Admiral, it's like changing."

"...Secondly, there are too many ambiguous partners, and the harem is too big. Even gold may not be able to be cute, let alone a person."

"Isn't that cool. Isn't gold nice, who doesn't like it?"

"Of course there is, otherwise religion would not have been born. The ascetic monk who cut off all emotions and desires is the best example. I don't know if there are any ascetic monks now." Dan Qingchi whispered.In his previous life, he had seen ascetic monks, eating a few radishes and cabbage a day, traveling thousands of miles a day was the basic practice, and praying to the Buddha with his hands clasped together.Due to various reasons, each of them is skinny and skinny, but their eyes are firmer than the other.

"Any more?"

"I suggest that you better understand the knowledge about interstellar soldiers." Dan Qingchi said, "These points are the biggest problems."

Aijima leaned back on the sofa: "Why don't I rewrite it."

Danqingchi took a sip of his drink and remained silent.

"Little brother, you really know a lot."

"I'm not a little brother, I'm a director."

"Oh, so little director, have you ever filmed any works? Why don't you let me take a look?" Aijima said to Dan Qingchi with a smile.

"Nie Yuan" is currently in theaters, you can go to the cinema to watch it." Dan Qingchi replied.

Ajima: ...

silence.

After a while, Aijima stood up suddenly, turned on the optical brain and started searching. After finding the information about Nie Yuan, she found the director's introduction.According to the latest update of Encyclopedia, there is a very clear photo in the introduction of the director of Nie Yuan, Dan Qingchi, who has an immature face sandwiched between handsome men and beautiful women on the sofa.

That's a screenshot of the press conference.

Ajima looked at the photo, then at the real person, and then checked the photo again.

He sat down slowly, took a deep breath, exhaled: "It's really you..."

"I thought you knew." Dan Qingchi was a little surprised.Although he is a newcomer in this circle, after all, he is the latest hot search, and "Nie Yuan" is on the rise, although he will not be recognized everywhere he goes, but he stands in front of this person and declares his name as the director, As a screenwriting student, he didn't even find his face familiar!

"Recently, I was worried about finding directors and actors, and I didn't pay much attention to the news on the Internet." Aijima raised her forehead.He had indeed heard the news about the underage director, but he didn't pay attention at all, and he didn't remember his name.Aijima has always thought that these things are far away for him. Even if he wants to join the showbiz circle, he will have to wait two or three years, or maybe even longer.Aijima even felt that she might have changed her major halfway.

Who would have thought that the talented director on the news could stand in front of him at this moment, sitting in a coffee shop with him and drinking a drink!

"You shouldn't have told me, just let me be so confused, and then you can help me make a movie." Aijima almost cried.

"Can't you do it now?"

"No, you belong to a famous director, and being helped by you is considered cheating." Aijima looked at Dan Qingchi as if she had lost 300 million star coins in despair, "It's okay if you don't know, and those who don't know are innocent. Not now, woo woo..."

Danqingchi: ...

In fact, you can pretend not to know me now.

This man is surprisingly straightforward.