[Hunter] Lydia's Life Story I
Chapter 101 Afterword
That's it for the first part!congratulations!
I struggled with it for a long time before, and finally decided to write another volume for the following content.The most important reason is - so that I can write an afterword in a legitimate way!Ha ha.
Kidding.There are three reasons for writing the second volume "A Brief History of the Brigade" separately.
One is that there are still many areas to be improved in this finished part. If it is placed separately, it will be more free to modify in terms of length.
The second is the second part, the time span is relatively long, and the relationship between the hero and heroine continues to heat up and ferment, just like the copywriting said, start a frenzied journey of showing affection!Because the sweetness (cough cough) has reached a higher level, I especially want to list the capitalized close-ups separately, which can be regarded as the author's capricious | nature |
Can't help but spoiler.
The second part mainly involves the content (especially the main storyline): the whole story of the establishment of the brigade, the whole story of dominating and leaving the Meteor Street, and the "mischief" in the outside world (currently, the mystery of Kuroro's life experience, the red-eyed genocide incident that has been considered , and interspersed with various adventure stories, including several foreshadowings about the ruins that were buried before...), the death of No. 1996 and No. [-] in [-], and has been written until the end of the Youkexin incident.
This one is the same as before, mainly based on the original plot, and the plot of the comics that will be involved basically follow the original, but there will be some revisions in the details, so it is not guaranteed to be completely consistent!After all, compared to rich, treacherous and eccentric ghosts, the brigade's happiness is our pursuit!
The third is that the second part is expected to include two volumes, the Meteor Street part and the outside world part, and the length will be relatively long, so after the 100 chapters of the first part, it seems a bit tired, and I personally feel that it would be better to disconnect it .
If this causes any inconvenience to everyone in reading, I apologize here.
Now let me summarize the closing remarks of the first part.
This can be regarded as my first completed novel (even if it is completed in stages!), 40 words, very fulfilling.Of course, this must be inseparable from the support and encouragement of everyone who reads the text!Thanks for introducing me to the back, and now I'm going to summarize the text.
The tentative title of the first part is "A Flower on Meteor Street", of course it can be called "Legend of Meteor", the key word is childhood sweetheart.
I'm afraid that I wrote 40 words and 100 chapters (in fact, I didn't make up [-] chapters, it's all fate!), finished the first part, and haven't let the hero and heroine out of the Douding era. Especially as a doujinshi, for which I was often complained by my three-dimensional friends.It is true that there was some pressure because of this, and I was afraid that everyone would think that my writing was slow, but looking back now, what I wanted to express was basically clear.
First of all, when writing a fan, I personally think that the biggest taboo is love and hate for no reason.We all know that Kurolo Luxilu will be a genius when he grows up, but the key is that Lydia doesn't know it!
To be honest, if she knew, I wouldn't be able to write this story—it's boring.
So here comes the problem.How do two strangers establish a trusting and intimate relationship step by step?Be sensible, this must be a very long process, full of careful trials and contests (although I have deliberately downplayed the "not sweet" fact) - at least for the hero and heroine in my book.They are actually very suspicious people, or at least, people who are not so easy to give trust and affection.As Lydia said in the extra episode (I put the extra episode later), other people's thoughts are very precious!In the story, there is no reason why I should be devoted to you just because you are the male/female protagonist.How to build trust, how to get closer to each other, from mutual cooperation, to mutual support, and then to mutual dependence, this is the process I described in the first book in six years and 40 words.
I hope that in the end, when you write about the side story from Kuroro's perspective, everyone will not feel that their feelings are castles in the air, abrupt and unfounded.This is what I fear the most and is the most common problem in fandom.Hopefully I've portrayed a genuine, deep, pure relationship.If I didn't write it, I believe it must be because of my writing ability, not the problem of the protagonist of the story.
Furthermore, it is the OOC issue that fans must pay attention to.There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people. It can be said that to a certain extent, OOC is inevitable in fan fiction.Going to the extreme, I believe that even if Fu Jian himself writes such a story anonymously, it will not satisfy everyone.Before I start writing, of course, I will be interested in the characters that have already been prototyped (here mainly Kurolo, Feitan, and Madge, and those who have appeared but have not been deliberately portrayed include Kiqiu, Knight, Franklin, Pike, Funks, etc.) , arranged in the order of appearance) have been interpreted and even enriched, but this only represents my personal thoughts. It’s a lot, but it’s basically hard to tell who is who. Many settings may be confused with animation, manga and fan...), so it’s not objective after all, I just hope that everyone will like it.
It is true that many friends in the comments below praised me for being more reductive. In my heart, this is really the greatest praise and affirmation of me!I dare not say how much I restore the characters, after all, the existence of Lydia itself is the biggest variable.What I want to say is, restoration, this must be one of my pursuits, or the direction of my efforts, but I will not forcibly distort the direction of the development of the story.Even speaking from the bottom of my heart, as of now, Kuroro is no longer, or not just, the future leader here.He's the hero of my story, and I... can't even find the right words to describe him, but that's what he is anyway, and you all know that.
But don't be nervous, I said that the story basically follows the original line (but only to Youkexin, not including this year's new show!), just take Kuroro as an example, don't worry that he will become A lover who is affectionate, compromises, and has no regrets, this level of OOC is beyond my tolerance.But I also disagree with portraying the hero as a ruthless character who only uses and plunders in his heart. This is not the Kurolo in my heart.Everyone can understand that because of Lydia's appearance, Kuroro retains such a kindness in his heart, and it is enough to be convinced of this to read the following story.
Some people are not born kind, but no one is born not to love, I think so.
Let's talk about the story again.
Looking at the full text, the main line of this part is relatively clear: nursery school in five districts - abnormal district head in eleventh district - business alliance in eighth district - Liuying Street Women's Federation (referred to as Women's Federation, no reference or allusion).
To sum up the content, I think it is: the male protagonist has the magic of "I don't want to tease my sister, I have to tease", and the female protagonist has a curse of "wherever I go, where the sky changes", referred to as "Meteor Street Disaster Duo".Oh, and there is also a male partner who is abused all the time, "Fei Tansheng has no face to love.jpg"... Hahaha, haha, ha.
Closer to home.Because I want the story to move forward as soon as possible, coupled with the immediacy and incompleteness of the serialization itself, although I can guarantee that the general plot is fully taken into account, there are still many deficiencies, large or small, in many details.That's why I want to leave this one alone for future revisions.
Specifically, there is a big plot that I will definitely write in detail, and that is what happened in the eleventh district.At that time, because I considered that there was nothing interesting in this paragraph, and it might be rather depressing, I just took it all in one stroke.But the more I wrote it, the more I realized that this paragraph is really important.It can be said that it was the first qualitative change in the relationship between Kuroro and Lydia, and the process of truly moving towards trust and mutual dependence.Lydia said that they made an appointment, "You are my spear and I am your shield", and it was during this time period.I thought about it, and I must find time to add this paragraph in the form of an extra episode, to give readers, myself, and Kurolo and Lydia in the story an explanation.
Why Kuroro accommodates Lydia everywhere (he was not like this when he was in the nursery), why Lydia is almost pathologically dependent on Kuroro, the answers are all here.It would be brutal, but cruel to the point of being almost romantic.
There are also other trivial and warm details of life, those little jokes that are still full of meaning, I don't want to lose any of them, I will take them out to make everyone laugh.
Let's talk about the update time.
I will definitely overhaul the full text, there is no doubt about it, the only difference is when.The story is not finished yet, and I will focus on updating backwards, and I can only wait for free time for revisions and patches, maybe after I take the postgraduate entrance examination.
This article has been serialized for more than a year, and friends who have been following the article know that I am preparing for the postgraduate entrance examination.My hand speed, plus the time to conceive, is basically about [-] words per hour, which is not counting the time of Kavin (I can't help but say that Kawen is like bian/mi, which drives people to death).If I write a chapter, it will basically take me half a day, so it is even more difficult to guarantee the day (these two days are not counted, it is too depraved to study at all).
I will try my best to maintain a big rhythm of updating every other day, but in fact, I have to study during the day, and basically only use the time after nine o’clock in the evening to code words. It is a more reliable estimate to save a chapter after two to three days of writing. Here I still want to give an explanation to the old readers who chased after the second part.
Anyway I will do my best.When the story is written here, I also feel that I am getting better and better. There is almost a force that forces me to move forward quickly, to write down the wonderful stories in my mind and turn them into facts in a certain sense.I really feel that I am weaving a complete world little by little, Kurolo and Lydia, they are in another time and space, waiting for me to record their future for more people to see.
I hope that everyone can accompany me to move forward slowly. In the second half of the year, the closer the December exam is, the update may be affected. I can only say that I will try my best.When the postgraduate entrance examination is over in January next year, no matter what the result is, I should have a period of explosive daily updates?I don't know where I will write it at that time... I usually don't have any manuscripts.
Last but not least!I want to thank all the readers who have been with me through this journey!Really very, very grateful for your company, support and encouragement! ! !
This is by no means a polite word, I don't like to say polite words, let alone Two-dimensional.Really, 40 words, one hundred chapters, one year and two months, is not a short mileage.I can go down so smoothly, absolutely cannot do without the companionship and encouragement of all the readers below!Whether it's a reminder, a compliment, or my favorite discussion about the plot, it's my spiritual food and my driving force!It is no exaggeration to say that every time I finish writing a chapter and send it out, I will open the webpage three times a day to see if there are any new comments. Every comment makes me ecstatic and treasured.
Sorry to say, I don't reply to every comment, sometimes I don't have time, sometimes I really don't know what to say, so I can only giggle to myself.But definitely, I have read every comment more than once, twice or three times, and every time it brings me confidence and happiness, I have the determination and perseverance to continue writing, and bring more excitement to all those who appreciate me. s story.
It was the first time I posted an article in Jinjiang, and I was gradually groping for many things, such as clicks, such as collections.Every time a reader says that they just saw it and liked it, I am happy to pass it by, it's as simple as that.But one thing is clear, I really just wrote this article because I like it so much and I can’t wait to share it with more people, so I have neither signed a contract nor joined V, as long as I can have more If many readers see this and like this story, they can ask for nothing more!
Of course, if everyone can comment more, discuss the plot, or question it, I will be grateful... The update will also be more motivated! !
As for landmines, I want to emphasize them here! ! !
Because there is no contract, my dear, the landmines you voted cannot be transferred to my side!I just found out about this... so please stop throwing landmines!
Leave me a comment, I will be very, very satisfied!
Don't be discouraged if you have already thrown landmines before!Because although it cannot be transferred to cash, the author can convert the income into Jinjiang coins, which means I don't need to recharge for a long time!
It feels so good to be "nurtured", thank you everyone, mememememe! !
Once again, there will be no need to send landmines afterwards.However, if I can post a comment and tease the author, I will still cherish it very much and be very, very happy!
Speaking of it, to be honest, without you lovely readers, this article would never be where it is today-woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much, I love you all! ! !
Well, that's all I want to say, thank you for your patience!
Chapter 1 of the second part of "A Brief History of the Brigade" of "[Hunter] Lydia's Life Record" will be released tomorrow. There is a link in the "Author has something to say" below the article, I hope you like it!
I will work hard!
Thanks again!
2016. 7, 11
by Meng Shu
Extra Story: The Wonderful Era of Douding
I struggled with it for a long time before, and finally decided to write another volume for the following content.The most important reason is - so that I can write an afterword in a legitimate way!Ha ha.
Kidding.There are three reasons for writing the second volume "A Brief History of the Brigade" separately.
One is that there are still many areas to be improved in this finished part. If it is placed separately, it will be more free to modify in terms of length.
The second is the second part, the time span is relatively long, and the relationship between the hero and heroine continues to heat up and ferment, just like the copywriting said, start a frenzied journey of showing affection!Because the sweetness (cough cough) has reached a higher level, I especially want to list the capitalized close-ups separately, which can be regarded as the author's capricious | nature |
Can't help but spoiler.
The second part mainly involves the content (especially the main storyline): the whole story of the establishment of the brigade, the whole story of dominating and leaving the Meteor Street, and the "mischief" in the outside world (currently, the mystery of Kuroro's life experience, the red-eyed genocide incident that has been considered , and interspersed with various adventure stories, including several foreshadowings about the ruins that were buried before...), the death of No. 1996 and No. [-] in [-], and has been written until the end of the Youkexin incident.
This one is the same as before, mainly based on the original plot, and the plot of the comics that will be involved basically follow the original, but there will be some revisions in the details, so it is not guaranteed to be completely consistent!After all, compared to rich, treacherous and eccentric ghosts, the brigade's happiness is our pursuit!
The third is that the second part is expected to include two volumes, the Meteor Street part and the outside world part, and the length will be relatively long, so after the 100 chapters of the first part, it seems a bit tired, and I personally feel that it would be better to disconnect it .
If this causes any inconvenience to everyone in reading, I apologize here.
Now let me summarize the closing remarks of the first part.
This can be regarded as my first completed novel (even if it is completed in stages!), 40 words, very fulfilling.Of course, this must be inseparable from the support and encouragement of everyone who reads the text!Thanks for introducing me to the back, and now I'm going to summarize the text.
The tentative title of the first part is "A Flower on Meteor Street", of course it can be called "Legend of Meteor", the key word is childhood sweetheart.
I'm afraid that I wrote 40 words and 100 chapters (in fact, I didn't make up [-] chapters, it's all fate!), finished the first part, and haven't let the hero and heroine out of the Douding era. Especially as a doujinshi, for which I was often complained by my three-dimensional friends.It is true that there was some pressure because of this, and I was afraid that everyone would think that my writing was slow, but looking back now, what I wanted to express was basically clear.
First of all, when writing a fan, I personally think that the biggest taboo is love and hate for no reason.We all know that Kurolo Luxilu will be a genius when he grows up, but the key is that Lydia doesn't know it!
To be honest, if she knew, I wouldn't be able to write this story—it's boring.
So here comes the problem.How do two strangers establish a trusting and intimate relationship step by step?Be sensible, this must be a very long process, full of careful trials and contests (although I have deliberately downplayed the "not sweet" fact) - at least for the hero and heroine in my book.They are actually very suspicious people, or at least, people who are not so easy to give trust and affection.As Lydia said in the extra episode (I put the extra episode later), other people's thoughts are very precious!In the story, there is no reason why I should be devoted to you just because you are the male/female protagonist.How to build trust, how to get closer to each other, from mutual cooperation, to mutual support, and then to mutual dependence, this is the process I described in the first book in six years and 40 words.
I hope that in the end, when you write about the side story from Kuroro's perspective, everyone will not feel that their feelings are castles in the air, abrupt and unfounded.This is what I fear the most and is the most common problem in fandom.Hopefully I've portrayed a genuine, deep, pure relationship.If I didn't write it, I believe it must be because of my writing ability, not the problem of the protagonist of the story.
Furthermore, it is the OOC issue that fans must pay attention to.There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people. It can be said that to a certain extent, OOC is inevitable in fan fiction.Going to the extreme, I believe that even if Fu Jian himself writes such a story anonymously, it will not satisfy everyone.Before I start writing, of course, I will be interested in the characters that have already been prototyped (here mainly Kurolo, Feitan, and Madge, and those who have appeared but have not been deliberately portrayed include Kiqiu, Knight, Franklin, Pike, Funks, etc.) , arranged in the order of appearance) have been interpreted and even enriched, but this only represents my personal thoughts. It’s a lot, but it’s basically hard to tell who is who. Many settings may be confused with animation, manga and fan...), so it’s not objective after all, I just hope that everyone will like it.
It is true that many friends in the comments below praised me for being more reductive. In my heart, this is really the greatest praise and affirmation of me!I dare not say how much I restore the characters, after all, the existence of Lydia itself is the biggest variable.What I want to say is, restoration, this must be one of my pursuits, or the direction of my efforts, but I will not forcibly distort the direction of the development of the story.Even speaking from the bottom of my heart, as of now, Kuroro is no longer, or not just, the future leader here.He's the hero of my story, and I... can't even find the right words to describe him, but that's what he is anyway, and you all know that.
But don't be nervous, I said that the story basically follows the original line (but only to Youkexin, not including this year's new show!), just take Kuroro as an example, don't worry that he will become A lover who is affectionate, compromises, and has no regrets, this level of OOC is beyond my tolerance.But I also disagree with portraying the hero as a ruthless character who only uses and plunders in his heart. This is not the Kurolo in my heart.Everyone can understand that because of Lydia's appearance, Kuroro retains such a kindness in his heart, and it is enough to be convinced of this to read the following story.
Some people are not born kind, but no one is born not to love, I think so.
Let's talk about the story again.
Looking at the full text, the main line of this part is relatively clear: nursery school in five districts - abnormal district head in eleventh district - business alliance in eighth district - Liuying Street Women's Federation (referred to as Women's Federation, no reference or allusion).
To sum up the content, I think it is: the male protagonist has the magic of "I don't want to tease my sister, I have to tease", and the female protagonist has a curse of "wherever I go, where the sky changes", referred to as "Meteor Street Disaster Duo".Oh, and there is also a male partner who is abused all the time, "Fei Tansheng has no face to love.jpg"... Hahaha, haha, ha.
Closer to home.Because I want the story to move forward as soon as possible, coupled with the immediacy and incompleteness of the serialization itself, although I can guarantee that the general plot is fully taken into account, there are still many deficiencies, large or small, in many details.That's why I want to leave this one alone for future revisions.
Specifically, there is a big plot that I will definitely write in detail, and that is what happened in the eleventh district.At that time, because I considered that there was nothing interesting in this paragraph, and it might be rather depressing, I just took it all in one stroke.But the more I wrote it, the more I realized that this paragraph is really important.It can be said that it was the first qualitative change in the relationship between Kuroro and Lydia, and the process of truly moving towards trust and mutual dependence.Lydia said that they made an appointment, "You are my spear and I am your shield", and it was during this time period.I thought about it, and I must find time to add this paragraph in the form of an extra episode, to give readers, myself, and Kurolo and Lydia in the story an explanation.
Why Kuroro accommodates Lydia everywhere (he was not like this when he was in the nursery), why Lydia is almost pathologically dependent on Kuroro, the answers are all here.It would be brutal, but cruel to the point of being almost romantic.
There are also other trivial and warm details of life, those little jokes that are still full of meaning, I don't want to lose any of them, I will take them out to make everyone laugh.
Let's talk about the update time.
I will definitely overhaul the full text, there is no doubt about it, the only difference is when.The story is not finished yet, and I will focus on updating backwards, and I can only wait for free time for revisions and patches, maybe after I take the postgraduate entrance examination.
This article has been serialized for more than a year, and friends who have been following the article know that I am preparing for the postgraduate entrance examination.My hand speed, plus the time to conceive, is basically about [-] words per hour, which is not counting the time of Kavin (I can't help but say that Kawen is like bian/mi, which drives people to death).If I write a chapter, it will basically take me half a day, so it is even more difficult to guarantee the day (these two days are not counted, it is too depraved to study at all).
I will try my best to maintain a big rhythm of updating every other day, but in fact, I have to study during the day, and basically only use the time after nine o’clock in the evening to code words. It is a more reliable estimate to save a chapter after two to three days of writing. Here I still want to give an explanation to the old readers who chased after the second part.
Anyway I will do my best.When the story is written here, I also feel that I am getting better and better. There is almost a force that forces me to move forward quickly, to write down the wonderful stories in my mind and turn them into facts in a certain sense.I really feel that I am weaving a complete world little by little, Kurolo and Lydia, they are in another time and space, waiting for me to record their future for more people to see.
I hope that everyone can accompany me to move forward slowly. In the second half of the year, the closer the December exam is, the update may be affected. I can only say that I will try my best.When the postgraduate entrance examination is over in January next year, no matter what the result is, I should have a period of explosive daily updates?I don't know where I will write it at that time... I usually don't have any manuscripts.
Last but not least!I want to thank all the readers who have been with me through this journey!Really very, very grateful for your company, support and encouragement! ! !
This is by no means a polite word, I don't like to say polite words, let alone Two-dimensional.Really, 40 words, one hundred chapters, one year and two months, is not a short mileage.I can go down so smoothly, absolutely cannot do without the companionship and encouragement of all the readers below!Whether it's a reminder, a compliment, or my favorite discussion about the plot, it's my spiritual food and my driving force!It is no exaggeration to say that every time I finish writing a chapter and send it out, I will open the webpage three times a day to see if there are any new comments. Every comment makes me ecstatic and treasured.
Sorry to say, I don't reply to every comment, sometimes I don't have time, sometimes I really don't know what to say, so I can only giggle to myself.But definitely, I have read every comment more than once, twice or three times, and every time it brings me confidence and happiness, I have the determination and perseverance to continue writing, and bring more excitement to all those who appreciate me. s story.
It was the first time I posted an article in Jinjiang, and I was gradually groping for many things, such as clicks, such as collections.Every time a reader says that they just saw it and liked it, I am happy to pass it by, it's as simple as that.But one thing is clear, I really just wrote this article because I like it so much and I can’t wait to share it with more people, so I have neither signed a contract nor joined V, as long as I can have more If many readers see this and like this story, they can ask for nothing more!
Of course, if everyone can comment more, discuss the plot, or question it, I will be grateful... The update will also be more motivated! !
As for landmines, I want to emphasize them here! ! !
Because there is no contract, my dear, the landmines you voted cannot be transferred to my side!I just found out about this... so please stop throwing landmines!
Leave me a comment, I will be very, very satisfied!
Don't be discouraged if you have already thrown landmines before!Because although it cannot be transferred to cash, the author can convert the income into Jinjiang coins, which means I don't need to recharge for a long time!
It feels so good to be "nurtured", thank you everyone, mememememe! !
Once again, there will be no need to send landmines afterwards.However, if I can post a comment and tease the author, I will still cherish it very much and be very, very happy!
Speaking of it, to be honest, without you lovely readers, this article would never be where it is today-woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much, I love you all! ! !
Well, that's all I want to say, thank you for your patience!
Chapter 1 of the second part of "A Brief History of the Brigade" of "[Hunter] Lydia's Life Record" will be released tomorrow. There is a link in the "Author has something to say" below the article, I hope you like it!
I will work hard!
Thanks again!
2016. 7, 11
by Meng Shu
Extra Story: The Wonderful Era of Douding
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