Do you want to eat Amway? [Comprehensive British and American]

The next day, Abel, who normally went to work at the police station, waited until noon to spare and proudly announced his nephew's recent situation to his old subordinates.

"What, writing novels? Your nephew has started writing novels?" Nathan asked in surprise, with a somewhat relieved expression.

He was a good fighter when he was still young, joined the SWAT team and was active on the front line. He once fought side by side with Abel, and he has a deep relationship.The family affairs of his old boss a few years ago were not hidden from him, and Nathan also gave up after sighing—they were indeed inferior to the young people, so they simply returned to the rear, and now they are in charge of the crime research and control department.

"What's the name? Where can I read it?" Hope, who had always been serious, also showed a smile on his face, knocking on the table and asking urgently.

Those old members of the special police team who retired back then have developed in their new positions, but the contact has not been broken. Under the leadership of Abel, they still like to get together once when they are free.Although their jobs are different, there are always some people who can't be there, but they all have a good relationship.

Hope is one of them.He was now the head of the crime scene unit, always on the go, and he had worked with Abel a few years ago, before he was transferred.He's one of the first to arrive at the party now.

"That's right, let's all see how Carl writes." Berent followed suit. He had been blown off one ear, and his appearance made young police officers think he was particularly fierce and not easy to provoke.Now he is retired in the police training department-compared with the dangerous battles in the past, training young people seems to Berent to be retired, especially leisurely.He is an experienced old policeman.

"Okay." Abel didn't refuse, and said Carl's personal website address and the title of the book, "He just started writing, and no one read it, so I wanted to ask everyone to help."

"It's easy." Nathan immediately understood what Abel meant, and agreed immediately, "I'll let our groups take a look when I get back. Those guys are idle every day."

"Wes didn't come today. Our department is close, so I'll let him know." Berent tacitly said, "They have a lot of people."

Seeing that several old friends understood what he meant, Abel agreed and smiled with satisfaction without saying a word.

It's done!

It’s one thing to share what’s going on with everyone as usual, it’s another to ask for help.Abel can only command his own group now, and it would be good if half of the group listened to his suggestion to read Carl's novel, which was not what Abel wanted.

He was going to surprise Karl—

Those old friends who used to fight together are now the best choice. Although they are inconspicuous and their positions are not too high, they are scattered in miscellaneous positions. There are also many people in charge or juniors. Helping Abel spread the news inside the police station should not be underestimated.

"Let me see what I wrote..." Hope calmed down, and immediately took out his phone and started searching.Not many of them have nephews, and they always mention them, and they have impressions of each other.Speaking of Abel's nephew who was mentally unstable, Hope was also very sympathetic.

The emaciated Steve Rogers participated in the conscription...and failed repeatedly. He could only envy his good brother Bucky to join the army. He was unilaterally beaten on the street and refused to give up.Seeing the novel magnetic levitation car at the expo, the genius scientist Howard Stark walked into his eyes...Steve mustered up the courage to go to the conscription again...still failed, he still did not give up.

Suddenly there was a turning point... Steve was spotted by Dr. Erkins, he joined a team out of the ordinary, and came to the training camp.

To be continued.

"???" Hope was taken aback, looking at the progress bar that had reached the bottom of the website, he realized that the article was over.

"The number of words is a bit short." Berent commented with a frown on the side.

"It's quite a few." Hope returned to his serious expression and agreed.

For professional reasons, they have a lot of innate affection for the protagonist Steve, and they don't subconsciously look down on novels of this era like today's young people.What's more, the protagonist's personality and experience are very appetizing, which further deepens their favorability.This made Hope look forward to the plot.

Why Steve must insist on joining the army has not yet been explained, why such a thin and small man was exceptionally selected by the doctor, and what ability he has to cope with the following military life, these basic contexts have not been described-this makes Hope Very dissatisfied, because the word count is really too small.

"Carl's writing is good?" Abel's face was showing off, and the old police officer was very proud. "You don't know that I was shocked when I first read it! Carl can still write novels!"

Nathan reluctantly responded twice.

Don't you just have a nephew?Is it amazing to have a nephew, jealous!He doesn't even have a child.

Speaking of which, the basic communication of this meeting has been completed, and the old police officers left with the task, ready to spread this Amway to their own department-Abel was actually quite sure.

These big men in the United States are full of muscles and beer bellies. They are really busy at work all day long, and they are really free when they are free.Can't leave the post, can't mess with the computer, what else can they do besides chatting?Read novels.

So there are not one or two guys in the police station who like to read novels.

In addition, this is a novel recommended by your immediate superiors, do you think the police officers dare not show face?Abel is sure that in these few days, Carl will definitely receive this surprise.

……

Carl was indeed pleasantly surprised.

He had nothing to do in the hospital except recuperate, so he continued to write new plots as soon as he woke up. After noon, he posted another chapter, and then checked the number of hits on Chapter 1 by the way.

"128 clicks." Brightly appeared on the screen.

Carl was taken aback: "Why are there so many?"

Even if Uncle Abel recommended it for him, but as a professional writer, Carl understands that even in a flower-growing country with a large number of people, as a pure newcomer, he writes a short chapter that is completely unknown and does not have any exposure channels. A day's hits can be double digits at best.

He couldn't help dragging the progress bar to look down.

At the bottom of the article, there are many comments left by people, which have gradually become active.

The first floor [Ascension]: "Well written! #爱心##爱心##大角#"

[-]nd Floor [Tell me to bed please]: "More, buddy!"

The third floor [being hypnotized]: "Too little..."

The fourth floor [I'm the cutest]: "Does anyone know what's going on with this article? I heard that everyone is an acquaintance, what's the password? 'Recommended by the boss'?"

On the fifth floor, [Tiaotiaochatchat] replied to [I'm the cutest]: "The code matches! But brother... your name..."

On the sixth floor [I can't live without eating meat] replied [I'm the cutest]: "Ditto! Who knows what's going on?"

Seventh Floor [Later Us]: "Novels with this kind of era background are rare, and they are not the subjects that the public likes."

……

Carl stared puzzled at the lively comments.

what's the situation?Seven or eight people left a message saying that they were recommended by their superiors, and the passwords matched, but they were not their colleagues.Don't they belong to the same department?Uncle Abel was a police officer in Yuan Karl's memory, but I don't know more specifically.Did he have... so much energy in the police station? ?

Ignoring the comments, Carl smiled at the ones expressing concern, not caring.

Who said the subject of this article is not good?It's just that the really glamorous stuff is just coming out.

——Chapter 2 is about Steve's military life, how he defeated other teammates with his wisdom, and was impressed by Colonel Phillips and the female agent Carter, including Phillips who was not satisfied and threw a fake /hand/ Grenades/bullets to test Steve's plot.Steve used his actions to hand in a perfect answer.

Colonel Phillips couldn't understand Steve's thin body, and he gradually became convinced, and agreed to let Steve be the candidate for super soldier serum injection.

In this chapter, the Super Soldier Serum comes into play.This clearly changes an article that may be a realistic subject into a subject similar to magical science fiction.A large number of young people who were not interested in this may turn to be interested.

From here, Steve's life will also undergo a major reversal.After injecting the serum, he transformed from a sickly bean sprouts and small body into a tall, muscular, perfect golden figure, handsome, upright and kind-hearted "Captain America".

This is another small climax.

Readers who read it may feel excited, or feel refreshed by substituting themselves, or admire the protagonist who still insists on not giving up after falling in love with Steve as a weak child, and still maintains his heart after gaining abilities beyond ordinary people.Then start to fantasize about how Steve will be treated after gaining the ability?How would anyone who laughed at him before look at him in surprise?

In this way, readers will be enticed to read on, and then they will find-ah, it becomes "to be continued" again.

Continue to wait for tomorrow's update!

Readers are beating their chests and feet, their hearts are itching unbearably, and the little hook left at the end is hooked until tomorrow.This is the usual sinister intention of the authors. A small hook is left at the end of each chapter, and a big hook is left at the climax.

Therefore, whether the article is well written or not depends entirely on the author's ability to seduce people.

It would be even better if there was an appealing genre in the text, and Carr's Steve Rogers uses a genre... If Carr's readers have been to the country of flowers, they will definitely understand that this It is the genre of waste wood.

The hero of this series of articles was just a waste at the beginning, ridiculed and ridiculed by others, and once he rose through hard work or opportunity, he slapped everyone in the face, creating a contrasting sense of refreshment.

Carl was thinking with great interest when he wrote it-Marvel's screenwriters seem to be very good at this too.

And he actually portrayed an old-school image.Most of the protagonists in current novels have all kinds of strange tempers, willful, free will, and the moral bottom line is blurred, because this makes readers more comfortable and has better data.

The protagonists of the novels that Karl saw during the days when he searched for information on the Internet are basically like this. This is the current fashion, because they feel that the protagonists who are too upright and have a bottom line should be eliminated and lag behind. Authors would only write them in the early years. The current style is not as good as the current style, which is more pleasing to readers.

Everyone needs more novel and exciting, more immersive.

—But Karl just wanted to write such an image.He must write this upright, charismatic and self-sacrificing Captain America in its original form and bring it to everyone.

Who said that this style will definitely fall behind and not attract readers?Are so many fans of Steve in Marvel brought by the wind?

"..." Carl silently turned off the computer.

He is not in a hurry, let this article slowly ferment for a while, there will always be a day when readers will be slapped in the face.

Now Carl is off to bathe the cubs in the nursery.

The author has something to say: the screen names in this article were all provided by friends in the group~thanks to them!

After this article enters v, I will post the group name for everyone, okay?