[Comprehensive] I really have a problem with my daily life
Chapter 272 "The Male Protagonist" and "Today's Private Salvation"
There are actually many problems with this decision.
First, although "Saving the World Today" is very popular, after all, it has been over for more than a year. Even though the broadcast of TV has brought a wave of popularity, it is not under the name of JUMP, and although it seems to be very successful, its readers The foundation is not necessarily as good as "The Actor".And although they are both my works, they are not as easy as the linkage between "CROW" and "+natural". Because of the difference in themes and places of serialization, the readers of the two works do not overlap very much.And it is easy to be suspected of frying cold rice.
Second, "Private Salvation" and "Actor" are not under the name of the same publishing house, and the linkage needs to be greeted and not blatantly, otherwise there will be copyright disputes.
But... I made this decision, which naturally has its own particularity and purpose.
First of all, in order to ensure the coherence and freshness of the work, I chose a timeline in which "Salvation of the World" has no positive descriptions, and even the characters do not show their faces—before Rose was born and when the Queen was still alive.
This part of the plot has been lying in my outline for a long time. I originally thought that I would use it when I promised "VIBES" to publish a short story for the anniversary after the completion of "The Actor", but now it is suitable to take it out. use. VIBES should also agree, because this will also boost the popularity of Jinsi Salvation in disguise.
As for why I don't create a new world but use the big world view of self-salvation... First, this world view is already quite complete, and it is very difficult to design another one of the same level in a short period of time; second, I and The number of votes for "CROW" was not much different, so this time it was suspected of calling on former readers to canvass votes.
But this will actually be very stressful.
Because previous readers would have had considerable expectations of this, and if the story didn't satisfy them it wouldn't work.And new readers who haven't read "Ji's Private Salvation" won't get the point of old readers, but will feel inexplicable and unsmooth. If it is not done well, it will lose the support of new readers and lead to a drop in ranking.
So my task now is...to create works that satisfy both groups of readers!To put aside the original is still a wonderful story without the slightest dyslexia!
Fortunately, I am also experienced.After all, the two short stories "No Tomb" and "With a Kiss" are short comics for girls who don't understand that "Private Salvation" is still established. There is no obstacle for new readers, even "No Tomb" followed by "Private Salvation" royal family setting.If it weren't for my Twitter congratulations stamp, those connections would still be readers' guesses.
But this time it's not the same... This time it's a formal collaboration... So the most important thing is to come up with new ideas, but to control your creative desire and not let it go...
I looked at the first item [Mist reborn Claire] among the proposals I listed and was crossed out, thinking silently.
It's best... the old readers who come here will also forget that this is the world of self-salvation today, and feel the brand-new story and brand-new touch.So there must be a connection, but at the same time the connection cannot remind readers that another work is mixed here.
After tearing up the outline three times, I finally completed the general main line and setting.
After experiencing the future world, the five members of the protagonist group have a slightly stiff relationship.And Tsukamoto Yuu's uncharacteristic silence also made the other three very worried.The daily chapter is to make the three people funny, encourage Tsukamoto Yu to cheer up, and show the JUMP friendship.
Then... Akane Xi Chuan, who hadn't appeared for a long time, suddenly appeared and told her to enter the new world.And tell everyone that the world may be different this time, and you must be mentally prepared.
Because they have repaired the four worlds, the bugs in the world will evolve while they are perfected.It can be seen from the fact that Akane Xichuan did not have the corresponding identity given by the world in the last world, and that the BUG itself appeared only after it appeared.
At the same time, the change in BUG's position made several people think differently, and even doubted whether what they were doing was correct.After all... Different from the previous worlds, in the robot world, that BUG still died to save them.
***
While I was revising the new outline, other people in JUMP were constantly chasing after my new wife.Although it is not obvious, but because everyone is working hard, everyone has gained some votes from the original "CROW" supporters, making everyone closer to "CROW".
The serialization of Mr. Fukuda and a newcomer both won the second place, just a little bit behind the first.
However, I, who had been given high hopes, fell silent, and every time I handed in the manuscript, I got sad eyes from the editor Hattori.
"Why, why is this?" Editor Hattori muttered, "Why, Iori-sensei, did you just enter the transitional stage of a dungeon ending? When will you open a new dungeon? When do you say that the new dungeon should be modified? When can I see it? ?”
Ah... all the respectful titles are gone.I was as calm as a bell, and handed over the manuscript of the new chapter: "Here! The name of the new copy!"
The editor Hattori jumped up instantly, but the excitement didn't last long, and he fell down softly, with a disheartened expression on his face: "What's the use... This week is also the day when the new wife teacher will hand in the final manuscript ..."
"Yeah, but what I said will determine whether he can break the myth of his invincibility!" I said confidently, "I hope I can win the front page once... Ah, no, "CROW" will finally come back." If so, it must be the front page... Please help me win the coloring page once!"
Editor Hattori got a little excited by what I said, sat up straight and took the name, looked at it seriously, and his expression became more and more serious.
After reading it, he put down his name and didn't speak for a long time.
"...how?" I was so confident that I became uneasy after being teased like this!
"...Excellent, indeed very competitive. As for the final result, it is up to the readers to judge." Editor Hattori said slowly, and the next second his tone became a little more aggrieved, "Mr. Iori, are you deliberately stuck in the Did you hand in the last episode of CROW?"
"Hahahaha... No, I must at least make the necessary explanations clear before starting a new dungeon!"
"Forget it... Anyway, you are more self-willed than the other..." Editor Hattori's voice was full of sadness, he sniffed and changed the subject, "But... Iori-sensei, do you really want to set it like this?"
"Well, this is the best plan I chose after thinking for a long time." I nodded, "Although the specific storyboard must be revised, the plot is generally like this."
"Hmm... It's also a bold attempt." Editor Hattori wiped off his sweat, "But there is always something like this that is Mr. Iori's style... something."
Me: "..." What is my style? You tell me!
"But... Iori-sensei, you have to know that this early stage may be voted high because of the freshness, but if the main tone is like this, the later stage will definitely not be satisfactory."
I frowned when I heard this: "Well, I know."
This dungeon is a copy of the past history of saving the world today.
But this time the five of them traveled across the past, Akane Sugawara and Yuu Tsukamoto landed in one place, and the other three landed in another place.When Akane Xichuan and Yu Tsukamoto looked at each other in an awkward atmosphere, the other three were not much better.
The other three male protagonists fell directly... where the demons were tested.Knowing the purpose of the experiment, the three were extremely disgusted, destroyed the facility and let the person go.
On the other side, the male and female protagonists who were alone with each other also sorted out a lot of information in the chat without saying a word.
"Speaking of... Xi Chuan, how did you know what is a bug in the world?"
"There will be guidance."
"Hey—what kind of guidance?"
"When the time is right, there will be an allegory of God to give instructions."
"...Wait! This thing sounds very unreliable! Where is the god!? What kind of fable! It even feels like there is some PY transaction behind it!"
"The method passed down from generation to generation in our Xichuan family does not require you to be questioned by an outsider." After Xichuan Qian finished speaking, she was startled and looked at Tsukamoto Yu.
"Outsiders... Ah." Tsukamoto Yuu laughed twice, looked at her, and smiled as if to be tolerant, "That's right, I'm sorry, Xi Chuan."
"...It's good that you know." Qi Chuanqian turned her head away sullenly, and when her back was turned to him, her face showed regret.
"What is the BUG in this world, do you have any instructions?"
Akane Qi Chuan immediately returned to her normal expression, turned her head slightly and replied, "It's a race that shouldn't exist in this world."
"...Wait a minute! Genocide?! Actually, we are the villains!? The bugs we eliminated are the messengers of justice!?"
"The Messenger of Justice you mentioned will kill all human beings in the future."
"..."
Then, the hero and heroine joined the trio.
"Yo, it's too late for you guys! We've already finished our work!"
"Hmph, it's just a trivial matter."
"That... If the BUG is this experiment, we're done."
Qi Chuanqian was dumbfounded after hearing what they said, and for the first time slashed people with a knife in an extremely vicious way: "You idiots! The ones you let go are the bugs!"
Because the timing was completely destroyed this time, Akane Sukawa had to make a second time travel.
This copy is an important part of everyone's psychological transformation and inner struggle, and starting to think about the justice and meaning of what they do.
The rules of the world require them to kill all the royal families, because the existence of the royal family is too buggy, and once they have bad thoughts, they are extremely destructive.But the protagonist group couldn't do anything at all, especially when Xi Chuanxi was rescued by the queen during the second time travel.The only man who stood firm began to waver.
This is equivalent to that we all know that nuclear weapons are very dangerous, but when nuclear weapons have the same emotions as you and show all good intentions, do you want to eliminate them for the potential danger?
The five of them still didn't make a move in the end.After being chased and killed by the royal boss who wanted to destroy all mankind, and the five of them worked together to kill the boss because of his immortality, and the queen won by injuring the enemy by one thousand and self-damaging eight hundred, the five were discussing After that, it was unanimously decided to abandon this world quest.
Before leaving, the queen also confessed that she has the ability to predict, but she actually knew their intentions, so she deliberately used soft policies to influence them.
Shuji Isshiki couldn't help but asked, "Aren't you afraid that we will do it again?"
"You are not such contradictory children." The queen smiled softly.
"I believe that with Her Highness the Queen here, the royal family will definitely not become the destroyer of this world!" Tsukamoto Yu came out to smooth things over.
"I know that our family is about to perish. Immortality is not only a gift, but also a curse, and the way to stop this curse is a gift given to us by our ancestors." The Queen said calmly, "They gave us It is not the means of death, but of liberty."
Tsukamoto Yu suddenly felt touched for some reason: "His Royal Highness..."
"Please rest assured, Your Excellency Yu, Your Excellency Shuji, Your Excellency Kento, Your Excellency Shindou, Your Excellency Akane." The queen smiled slightly, "Thank you for your help, but it is up to the people of this world to decide how the world will go next."
She lowered her eyes and touched her flat belly with a gentle expression: "And there is no lack of hope in this world."
In the Mozu dungeon, the seven virtues emphasized are hope.
First, although "Saving the World Today" is very popular, after all, it has been over for more than a year. Even though the broadcast of TV has brought a wave of popularity, it is not under the name of JUMP, and although it seems to be very successful, its readers The foundation is not necessarily as good as "The Actor".And although they are both my works, they are not as easy as the linkage between "CROW" and "+natural". Because of the difference in themes and places of serialization, the readers of the two works do not overlap very much.And it is easy to be suspected of frying cold rice.
Second, "Private Salvation" and "Actor" are not under the name of the same publishing house, and the linkage needs to be greeted and not blatantly, otherwise there will be copyright disputes.
But... I made this decision, which naturally has its own particularity and purpose.
First of all, in order to ensure the coherence and freshness of the work, I chose a timeline in which "Salvation of the World" has no positive descriptions, and even the characters do not show their faces—before Rose was born and when the Queen was still alive.
This part of the plot has been lying in my outline for a long time. I originally thought that I would use it when I promised "VIBES" to publish a short story for the anniversary after the completion of "The Actor", but now it is suitable to take it out. use. VIBES should also agree, because this will also boost the popularity of Jinsi Salvation in disguise.
As for why I don't create a new world but use the big world view of self-salvation... First, this world view is already quite complete, and it is very difficult to design another one of the same level in a short period of time; second, I and The number of votes for "CROW" was not much different, so this time it was suspected of calling on former readers to canvass votes.
But this will actually be very stressful.
Because previous readers would have had considerable expectations of this, and if the story didn't satisfy them it wouldn't work.And new readers who haven't read "Ji's Private Salvation" won't get the point of old readers, but will feel inexplicable and unsmooth. If it is not done well, it will lose the support of new readers and lead to a drop in ranking.
So my task now is...to create works that satisfy both groups of readers!To put aside the original is still a wonderful story without the slightest dyslexia!
Fortunately, I am also experienced.After all, the two short stories "No Tomb" and "With a Kiss" are short comics for girls who don't understand that "Private Salvation" is still established. There is no obstacle for new readers, even "No Tomb" followed by "Private Salvation" royal family setting.If it weren't for my Twitter congratulations stamp, those connections would still be readers' guesses.
But this time it's not the same... This time it's a formal collaboration... So the most important thing is to come up with new ideas, but to control your creative desire and not let it go...
I looked at the first item [Mist reborn Claire] among the proposals I listed and was crossed out, thinking silently.
It's best... the old readers who come here will also forget that this is the world of self-salvation today, and feel the brand-new story and brand-new touch.So there must be a connection, but at the same time the connection cannot remind readers that another work is mixed here.
After tearing up the outline three times, I finally completed the general main line and setting.
After experiencing the future world, the five members of the protagonist group have a slightly stiff relationship.And Tsukamoto Yuu's uncharacteristic silence also made the other three very worried.The daily chapter is to make the three people funny, encourage Tsukamoto Yu to cheer up, and show the JUMP friendship.
Then... Akane Xi Chuan, who hadn't appeared for a long time, suddenly appeared and told her to enter the new world.And tell everyone that the world may be different this time, and you must be mentally prepared.
Because they have repaired the four worlds, the bugs in the world will evolve while they are perfected.It can be seen from the fact that Akane Xichuan did not have the corresponding identity given by the world in the last world, and that the BUG itself appeared only after it appeared.
At the same time, the change in BUG's position made several people think differently, and even doubted whether what they were doing was correct.After all... Different from the previous worlds, in the robot world, that BUG still died to save them.
***
While I was revising the new outline, other people in JUMP were constantly chasing after my new wife.Although it is not obvious, but because everyone is working hard, everyone has gained some votes from the original "CROW" supporters, making everyone closer to "CROW".
The serialization of Mr. Fukuda and a newcomer both won the second place, just a little bit behind the first.
However, I, who had been given high hopes, fell silent, and every time I handed in the manuscript, I got sad eyes from the editor Hattori.
"Why, why is this?" Editor Hattori muttered, "Why, Iori-sensei, did you just enter the transitional stage of a dungeon ending? When will you open a new dungeon? When do you say that the new dungeon should be modified? When can I see it? ?”
Ah... all the respectful titles are gone.I was as calm as a bell, and handed over the manuscript of the new chapter: "Here! The name of the new copy!"
The editor Hattori jumped up instantly, but the excitement didn't last long, and he fell down softly, with a disheartened expression on his face: "What's the use... This week is also the day when the new wife teacher will hand in the final manuscript ..."
"Yeah, but what I said will determine whether he can break the myth of his invincibility!" I said confidently, "I hope I can win the front page once... Ah, no, "CROW" will finally come back." If so, it must be the front page... Please help me win the coloring page once!"
Editor Hattori got a little excited by what I said, sat up straight and took the name, looked at it seriously, and his expression became more and more serious.
After reading it, he put down his name and didn't speak for a long time.
"...how?" I was so confident that I became uneasy after being teased like this!
"...Excellent, indeed very competitive. As for the final result, it is up to the readers to judge." Editor Hattori said slowly, and the next second his tone became a little more aggrieved, "Mr. Iori, are you deliberately stuck in the Did you hand in the last episode of CROW?"
"Hahahaha... No, I must at least make the necessary explanations clear before starting a new dungeon!"
"Forget it... Anyway, you are more self-willed than the other..." Editor Hattori's voice was full of sadness, he sniffed and changed the subject, "But... Iori-sensei, do you really want to set it like this?"
"Well, this is the best plan I chose after thinking for a long time." I nodded, "Although the specific storyboard must be revised, the plot is generally like this."
"Hmm... It's also a bold attempt." Editor Hattori wiped off his sweat, "But there is always something like this that is Mr. Iori's style... something."
Me: "..." What is my style? You tell me!
"But... Iori-sensei, you have to know that this early stage may be voted high because of the freshness, but if the main tone is like this, the later stage will definitely not be satisfactory."
I frowned when I heard this: "Well, I know."
This dungeon is a copy of the past history of saving the world today.
But this time the five of them traveled across the past, Akane Sugawara and Yuu Tsukamoto landed in one place, and the other three landed in another place.When Akane Xichuan and Yu Tsukamoto looked at each other in an awkward atmosphere, the other three were not much better.
The other three male protagonists fell directly... where the demons were tested.Knowing the purpose of the experiment, the three were extremely disgusted, destroyed the facility and let the person go.
On the other side, the male and female protagonists who were alone with each other also sorted out a lot of information in the chat without saying a word.
"Speaking of... Xi Chuan, how did you know what is a bug in the world?"
"There will be guidance."
"Hey—what kind of guidance?"
"When the time is right, there will be an allegory of God to give instructions."
"...Wait! This thing sounds very unreliable! Where is the god!? What kind of fable! It even feels like there is some PY transaction behind it!"
"The method passed down from generation to generation in our Xichuan family does not require you to be questioned by an outsider." After Xichuan Qian finished speaking, she was startled and looked at Tsukamoto Yu.
"Outsiders... Ah." Tsukamoto Yuu laughed twice, looked at her, and smiled as if to be tolerant, "That's right, I'm sorry, Xi Chuan."
"...It's good that you know." Qi Chuanqian turned her head away sullenly, and when her back was turned to him, her face showed regret.
"What is the BUG in this world, do you have any instructions?"
Akane Qi Chuan immediately returned to her normal expression, turned her head slightly and replied, "It's a race that shouldn't exist in this world."
"...Wait a minute! Genocide?! Actually, we are the villains!? The bugs we eliminated are the messengers of justice!?"
"The Messenger of Justice you mentioned will kill all human beings in the future."
"..."
Then, the hero and heroine joined the trio.
"Yo, it's too late for you guys! We've already finished our work!"
"Hmph, it's just a trivial matter."
"That... If the BUG is this experiment, we're done."
Qi Chuanqian was dumbfounded after hearing what they said, and for the first time slashed people with a knife in an extremely vicious way: "You idiots! The ones you let go are the bugs!"
Because the timing was completely destroyed this time, Akane Sukawa had to make a second time travel.
This copy is an important part of everyone's psychological transformation and inner struggle, and starting to think about the justice and meaning of what they do.
The rules of the world require them to kill all the royal families, because the existence of the royal family is too buggy, and once they have bad thoughts, they are extremely destructive.But the protagonist group couldn't do anything at all, especially when Xi Chuanxi was rescued by the queen during the second time travel.The only man who stood firm began to waver.
This is equivalent to that we all know that nuclear weapons are very dangerous, but when nuclear weapons have the same emotions as you and show all good intentions, do you want to eliminate them for the potential danger?
The five of them still didn't make a move in the end.After being chased and killed by the royal boss who wanted to destroy all mankind, and the five of them worked together to kill the boss because of his immortality, and the queen won by injuring the enemy by one thousand and self-damaging eight hundred, the five were discussing After that, it was unanimously decided to abandon this world quest.
Before leaving, the queen also confessed that she has the ability to predict, but she actually knew their intentions, so she deliberately used soft policies to influence them.
Shuji Isshiki couldn't help but asked, "Aren't you afraid that we will do it again?"
"You are not such contradictory children." The queen smiled softly.
"I believe that with Her Highness the Queen here, the royal family will definitely not become the destroyer of this world!" Tsukamoto Yu came out to smooth things over.
"I know that our family is about to perish. Immortality is not only a gift, but also a curse, and the way to stop this curse is a gift given to us by our ancestors." The Queen said calmly, "They gave us It is not the means of death, but of liberty."
Tsukamoto Yu suddenly felt touched for some reason: "His Royal Highness..."
"Please rest assured, Your Excellency Yu, Your Excellency Shuji, Your Excellency Kento, Your Excellency Shindou, Your Excellency Akane." The queen smiled slightly, "Thank you for your help, but it is up to the people of this world to decide how the world will go next."
She lowered her eyes and touched her flat belly with a gentle expression: "And there is no lack of hope in this world."
In the Mozu dungeon, the seven virtues emphasized are hope.
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