into the sheath
Chapter 218 Afterword
Finally finished writing.
I have always thought that the postscript is a reward for the author who completed an article, and this time I can finally receive this award in a legitimate way√
I stumbled and wrote more than 40 words, and when I typed the words "full text", I suddenly felt a little emotional.To be honest, when I first wrote the article, I never imagined that I could really write such a long piece of text, but as I slowly worked on it, 20 words, 30 words, 40 words, [-] words, from this point of view, it is actually still It's amazing.
It's a pity that the final ending was not perfect, and many of the foreshadowings left before were not closed well, or even fully unfolded, such as Han Yi and Zhang Minglang mentioned by some readers (I don't know if there are still others) I remember that this pair was the doctor who first gave Jiang the medicine. In the design of the outline, the reason why Zhang Minglang developed this medicine was because he wanted to use it for himself. Yi stayed together for a longer time, but later things developed differently than expected, he was used by others), and Lin Xiaojing and Xiao Ziwen, as well as Xiong Jun and Su Ting, Xiao Hui and Xiao Yu Nianqiu, Zou Bingxuan And Sun Yixiao (Shaoshao BG, no one must remember hhh), even Shao Yuanhang and Yu Xi (I guess none of you can guess that these two people can be a couple)... When conceiving this article, Too greedy, I really conceived a lot of things, including all the CPs under this setting, the most common sentinel x wizard (Xiong Jun couple), guide x sentinel (I don’t need to say this) , sentinel x ordinary person (Han Yi Zhang Minglang), guide x ordinary person (Lin Xiaojing Xiao Ziwen), sentry x sentry (Zou Bingxuan and Sun Yixiao), guide x guide (Wen Jinghuan and Shu Zi, this is a single arrow), etc., cp covers The direct consequence of too much and insufficient ability is that you can't get it back in the later stage. Everything is spread too far and scattered, and you feel that you can't write when it's time to finish.Of course, the lack of energy since this period of time is also a reason.
Let’s talk about the worldview behind it.In the beginning, the birth of "Into the Sheath" was just a small fragment I wrote in the group, which was where Tang Heng suffered from rage at the beginning. The description in the first version was much more detailed than now, and all the strokes were written by me It is used to describe our little Tang’s personal status, and he wrote more than 2000 words eloquently (and he feels very eager for himself). This is the initial prototype. Later, the two protagonists have names. Tang Heng is an excellent military academy Unexpectedly, Jiang Feng is an officer of the military academy, and the follow-up is to investigate the cause of Tang Heng's accident, and the behind-the-scenes masterminds are Jiang Feng and his organization called "Judger"... Then one day, the I had a dream, so there is the current Zerg setting.As far as I am concerned, I like this background very much, although I did not present it clearly in front of everyone, it is a society full of contradictions, sentinels and guides, their respective interiors, and their relationship with ordinary people Between people, due to mutual incomprehension, there are too many things worth writing, and the existence of the Zerg is such an opportunity: at the moment of a huge crisis, some people can see it, some people can feel it indirectly, and the rest People can't perceive it at all.If the narrative is complete, it should have written about the great changes in society after the truth was made public (that is, the series of consequences caused by the photo Lin Xiaojing gave Qin Hong), but it was simply taken away by one sentence in the end.
As for the role, let's talk about Tang Heng first.Although he is the cause of my writing, in the outline, he is just a witness. I have tried countless times to push him from the sidelines into the tumultuous struggle, but I have failed countless times. Maybe it is my lack of ability , it may be because of his personality, he is lonely and courageous, he insists on one thing and never gives up, and, playing straight balls, I hope I can portray his growth after experiencing these things, and also Hopefully the part about him that everyone loves remains the same.Regarding the oral habit of "Lao Tzu", to be honest, it is indeed one of the manifestations of my inability to write, because in my initial setting, he is a very vulgar, careless mercenary, a mercenary who does not know the heights of the world and thinks highly of himself Bing, and all this is reflected in the language, the most intuitive is such a somewhat ugly word, but in fact, I also pay attention to it when I use it, only when he is guilty, guilty, weak and unwilling to show it, I will deliberately emphasize this self-proclaim instead of abusing it, but maybe this kind of treatment is still too much, and I will pay attention to it when I try such a character again in the future.
Jiang Feng's words, between the two protagonists, my selfishness is more towards him. His character background is richer than Tang Heng's. In fact, I should be able to see it. The promotion of all the story nodes is also to a large extent It was done by relying on Jiang Feng.When portraying him, I didn't want to portray him as an iceberg. He just doesn't like to talk in private, or to be more precise, he doesn't like to express himself.Due to his own experience, he will hide himself very deeply. On necessary occasions, he can show power, and he can also make a smooth gesture.But it is such a Chief Jiang who was captured by Tang Heng who appeared recklessly. Maybe this is fate. After thinking about it again, I feel reluctant, so I should be cruel and assign Xiao Tang to him.
The third thing I want to talk about may be Qin Hong.I believe that many readers don't like him, and his final exit posture is a bit sloppy (but I thought about that scene a long time ago, mainly because I didn't write Qin Hong's hysteria and Jiang Feng's Su Zhatian).He is actually a rather tragic character. After becoming an adult, he differentiated and became a guide. He thought he could realize his ambitions, and was even conceited to be superior to others. level, so he can fight against the mind control of the guides, which is why he has no fear in front of many guides (Jiang Feng, the real Mr. Shu), this encounter distorted his mentality, and after that, he became the leader of all kinds of ordinary people. Interest group work is actually a manifestation of his pursuit of a sense of accomplishment. He wants to prove one thing: the guide is no big deal, I will be better than you!However, even with this mentality, he still does not agree with his status as an ordinary person, and he looks down on ordinary people in his heart.The most obvious externalization of this distorted mentality is the parrot "Huang Ya'er" he carried with him. The setting may be a bit abnormal, so I didn't focus on describing the details, but I don't know if anyone has Notice that Huang Ya'er is not a parrot, but is constantly being replaced, because (in my private setting) quantum beasts do not excrete, Qin Hong performed surgery on the parrots, and the direct consequence was to cause Qin Hong didn't take pity on their short life. What he needed was an existence like "Huang Ya'er", not a specific creature.
Shu Zi, Mr. Shu, his story is a bit sad. If you are interested, you can go to my Weibo. "Lighthouse" is his story (just some general ideas, not even expanded, and I may write about it when I have the opportunity) this one).
Xiao Yu Nianqiu, this character also appeared very early at the beginning. As the person in charge of the sanctuary, she also has many stories of her own. Named her husband's surname, for example, she slandered and attacked many guides who wanted to prove that they were stronger than the sentinels. In fact, what she wanted to portray was an image of bowing to fate and putting pressure on the group she used to belong to, but it didn't seem to be successful. .
In this way, Lin Xiaojing was also a role from the beginning, Jiang Feng's secretary.The original idea was that Jiang Feng, as a big boss, doesn't like to talk, and needs a sounding board, so Lin Xiaojing appeared naturally (later, because she was given Xiao Ziwen's cp and other tasks, part of her role was given by us Li. The glasses are replaced by the body · Qing) She and Su Ting were actually sisters in the very first version (now this version is no longer), because they are ordinary people, they were abandoned by their parents, and they entered the tower by chance. Later, it was also for this reason that she hated the sentinels and guides, and secretly worked for the "judge" (but she didn't expect that the boss of the judge was actually her boss).It's a pity that the part of her past with Xiao Ziwen was given too little space, only a little bit related to the gift of photos, and there were many gaps.
Let’s not talk about others. A lot of things that I want to say have actually been said one after another in my speeches and everyone’s replies.
Finally, thanks to the fish who have been with me all the time, really!Love you guys!I couldn't have made it this far without you guys!Give you a comparison!I actually read all your comments, but sometimes I really don’t know what to say. After the revision of the waste text, the emoticons can no longer occupy characters, so... cough.
All in all, it is a great honor to meet and get acquainted with you all!
Let me attach a short passage that I suddenly wrote Ye Laifei on a certain summer night last year.
>I prefer to compare the world that completes this novel to a huge drawing paper, and I am the painter who scribbles on it.I don't have a high enough ladder to see the whole picture, so I have to stand up when I'm tired of drawing and look at the circle around me that I just drew.
>Maybe I had a rough outline in my mind at the beginning, but I couldn't help but add more careful thoughts to the details.Just draw and draw and draw until the last blank space is filled and I leave it there and step back.One step, two steps, three steps...
>Until I stand far enough away, I can see that in the gorgeous glow of the sky, there is a huge canvas full of colors spread out, and I can also chat with passers-by about this painting with a smile, saying with emotion:
> Ah, so it looks like this.
Happy New Year, see you next time!
--------------------
It's not the text, it's all nonsense, you don't need to read it
I have always thought that the postscript is a reward for the author who completed an article, and this time I can finally receive this award in a legitimate way√
I stumbled and wrote more than 40 words, and when I typed the words "full text", I suddenly felt a little emotional.To be honest, when I first wrote the article, I never imagined that I could really write such a long piece of text, but as I slowly worked on it, 20 words, 30 words, 40 words, [-] words, from this point of view, it is actually still It's amazing.
It's a pity that the final ending was not perfect, and many of the foreshadowings left before were not closed well, or even fully unfolded, such as Han Yi and Zhang Minglang mentioned by some readers (I don't know if there are still others) I remember that this pair was the doctor who first gave Jiang the medicine. In the design of the outline, the reason why Zhang Minglang developed this medicine was because he wanted to use it for himself. Yi stayed together for a longer time, but later things developed differently than expected, he was used by others), and Lin Xiaojing and Xiao Ziwen, as well as Xiong Jun and Su Ting, Xiao Hui and Xiao Yu Nianqiu, Zou Bingxuan And Sun Yixiao (Shaoshao BG, no one must remember hhh), even Shao Yuanhang and Yu Xi (I guess none of you can guess that these two people can be a couple)... When conceiving this article, Too greedy, I really conceived a lot of things, including all the CPs under this setting, the most common sentinel x wizard (Xiong Jun couple), guide x sentinel (I don’t need to say this) , sentinel x ordinary person (Han Yi Zhang Minglang), guide x ordinary person (Lin Xiaojing Xiao Ziwen), sentry x sentry (Zou Bingxuan and Sun Yixiao), guide x guide (Wen Jinghuan and Shu Zi, this is a single arrow), etc., cp covers The direct consequence of too much and insufficient ability is that you can't get it back in the later stage. Everything is spread too far and scattered, and you feel that you can't write when it's time to finish.Of course, the lack of energy since this period of time is also a reason.
Let’s talk about the worldview behind it.In the beginning, the birth of "Into the Sheath" was just a small fragment I wrote in the group, which was where Tang Heng suffered from rage at the beginning. The description in the first version was much more detailed than now, and all the strokes were written by me It is used to describe our little Tang’s personal status, and he wrote more than 2000 words eloquently (and he feels very eager for himself). This is the initial prototype. Later, the two protagonists have names. Tang Heng is an excellent military academy Unexpectedly, Jiang Feng is an officer of the military academy, and the follow-up is to investigate the cause of Tang Heng's accident, and the behind-the-scenes masterminds are Jiang Feng and his organization called "Judger"... Then one day, the I had a dream, so there is the current Zerg setting.As far as I am concerned, I like this background very much, although I did not present it clearly in front of everyone, it is a society full of contradictions, sentinels and guides, their respective interiors, and their relationship with ordinary people Between people, due to mutual incomprehension, there are too many things worth writing, and the existence of the Zerg is such an opportunity: at the moment of a huge crisis, some people can see it, some people can feel it indirectly, and the rest People can't perceive it at all.If the narrative is complete, it should have written about the great changes in society after the truth was made public (that is, the series of consequences caused by the photo Lin Xiaojing gave Qin Hong), but it was simply taken away by one sentence in the end.
As for the role, let's talk about Tang Heng first.Although he is the cause of my writing, in the outline, he is just a witness. I have tried countless times to push him from the sidelines into the tumultuous struggle, but I have failed countless times. Maybe it is my lack of ability , it may be because of his personality, he is lonely and courageous, he insists on one thing and never gives up, and, playing straight balls, I hope I can portray his growth after experiencing these things, and also Hopefully the part about him that everyone loves remains the same.Regarding the oral habit of "Lao Tzu", to be honest, it is indeed one of the manifestations of my inability to write, because in my initial setting, he is a very vulgar, careless mercenary, a mercenary who does not know the heights of the world and thinks highly of himself Bing, and all this is reflected in the language, the most intuitive is such a somewhat ugly word, but in fact, I also pay attention to it when I use it, only when he is guilty, guilty, weak and unwilling to show it, I will deliberately emphasize this self-proclaim instead of abusing it, but maybe this kind of treatment is still too much, and I will pay attention to it when I try such a character again in the future.
Jiang Feng's words, between the two protagonists, my selfishness is more towards him. His character background is richer than Tang Heng's. In fact, I should be able to see it. The promotion of all the story nodes is also to a large extent It was done by relying on Jiang Feng.When portraying him, I didn't want to portray him as an iceberg. He just doesn't like to talk in private, or to be more precise, he doesn't like to express himself.Due to his own experience, he will hide himself very deeply. On necessary occasions, he can show power, and he can also make a smooth gesture.But it is such a Chief Jiang who was captured by Tang Heng who appeared recklessly. Maybe this is fate. After thinking about it again, I feel reluctant, so I should be cruel and assign Xiao Tang to him.
The third thing I want to talk about may be Qin Hong.I believe that many readers don't like him, and his final exit posture is a bit sloppy (but I thought about that scene a long time ago, mainly because I didn't write Qin Hong's hysteria and Jiang Feng's Su Zhatian).He is actually a rather tragic character. After becoming an adult, he differentiated and became a guide. He thought he could realize his ambitions, and was even conceited to be superior to others. level, so he can fight against the mind control of the guides, which is why he has no fear in front of many guides (Jiang Feng, the real Mr. Shu), this encounter distorted his mentality, and after that, he became the leader of all kinds of ordinary people. Interest group work is actually a manifestation of his pursuit of a sense of accomplishment. He wants to prove one thing: the guide is no big deal, I will be better than you!However, even with this mentality, he still does not agree with his status as an ordinary person, and he looks down on ordinary people in his heart.The most obvious externalization of this distorted mentality is the parrot "Huang Ya'er" he carried with him. The setting may be a bit abnormal, so I didn't focus on describing the details, but I don't know if anyone has Notice that Huang Ya'er is not a parrot, but is constantly being replaced, because (in my private setting) quantum beasts do not excrete, Qin Hong performed surgery on the parrots, and the direct consequence was to cause Qin Hong didn't take pity on their short life. What he needed was an existence like "Huang Ya'er", not a specific creature.
Shu Zi, Mr. Shu, his story is a bit sad. If you are interested, you can go to my Weibo. "Lighthouse" is his story (just some general ideas, not even expanded, and I may write about it when I have the opportunity) this one).
Xiao Yu Nianqiu, this character also appeared very early at the beginning. As the person in charge of the sanctuary, she also has many stories of her own. Named her husband's surname, for example, she slandered and attacked many guides who wanted to prove that they were stronger than the sentinels. In fact, what she wanted to portray was an image of bowing to fate and putting pressure on the group she used to belong to, but it didn't seem to be successful. .
In this way, Lin Xiaojing was also a role from the beginning, Jiang Feng's secretary.The original idea was that Jiang Feng, as a big boss, doesn't like to talk, and needs a sounding board, so Lin Xiaojing appeared naturally (later, because she was given Xiao Ziwen's cp and other tasks, part of her role was given by us Li. The glasses are replaced by the body · Qing) She and Su Ting were actually sisters in the very first version (now this version is no longer), because they are ordinary people, they were abandoned by their parents, and they entered the tower by chance. Later, it was also for this reason that she hated the sentinels and guides, and secretly worked for the "judge" (but she didn't expect that the boss of the judge was actually her boss).It's a pity that the part of her past with Xiao Ziwen was given too little space, only a little bit related to the gift of photos, and there were many gaps.
Let’s not talk about others. A lot of things that I want to say have actually been said one after another in my speeches and everyone’s replies.
Finally, thanks to the fish who have been with me all the time, really!Love you guys!I couldn't have made it this far without you guys!Give you a comparison!I actually read all your comments, but sometimes I really don’t know what to say. After the revision of the waste text, the emoticons can no longer occupy characters, so... cough.
All in all, it is a great honor to meet and get acquainted with you all!
Let me attach a short passage that I suddenly wrote Ye Laifei on a certain summer night last year.
>I prefer to compare the world that completes this novel to a huge drawing paper, and I am the painter who scribbles on it.I don't have a high enough ladder to see the whole picture, so I have to stand up when I'm tired of drawing and look at the circle around me that I just drew.
>Maybe I had a rough outline in my mind at the beginning, but I couldn't help but add more careful thoughts to the details.Just draw and draw and draw until the last blank space is filled and I leave it there and step back.One step, two steps, three steps...
>Until I stand far enough away, I can see that in the gorgeous glow of the sky, there is a huge canvas full of colors spread out, and I can also chat with passers-by about this painting with a smile, saying with emotion:
> Ah, so it looks like this.
Happy New Year, see you next time!
--------------------
It's not the text, it's all nonsense, you don't need to read it
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