Bandage fine tricks

In the matter of opening a new pit, Teacher Zhen Ji's action is MAX, inspired by a flash of thought a few months ago, just drinking coffee and eating dessert outside, "Detective Boy" The framework of the first case of "X" is almost set up.

Except for a few short detective stories, most detective stories follow the rhythm of one book and one case, and the number of words in a book is generally more than [-] words, and within the length of [-] words, it is necessary to introduce all the facts involved in a case. The background of each character, the occurrence of the event, the reasoning process, and the final ending, it is doomed that this case cannot be solved "smoothly" all the way.

It's normal to go astray.

But how can we make the plot that goes off the beaten path more attractive to readers, instead of generating ideas like "this guy is good food, but he will make mistakes in reasoning", which is a test of the author's skills.

Whether it is the ability to describe the text or the ability to design the plot.

Not to mention……

Xiaoba pulled the wrench fingers, one for Mr. Ranpo, one for Shinigami elementary school student (high school limited edition), one for Mr. Henggou Masashi who is also good at mystery novels, one for Ellen who has not seen but has seen many works in bookstores. Mr. Poe... When he thought that the reasoning work he had written would appear in a world with these people, Xiao Ba had the urge to give up directly.

But mystery novels are all about hobbies—whether it’s reading or writing—it’s impossible to give up like this, but the category of mystery novels is 100% crushed into scum, although she admires Mr. Henggou Masashi I also like Mr. Edgar Allan Poe's works very much, and I am more willing to share with Mr. Ranpo about the taste of thick dim sum, but this does not mean that she is willing to see her works being crushed to scum by these big guys.

So Xiao Ba played a side ball.

Adjust the description technique, change the background of the story, change the setting of the characters, and position it as a "light novel" instead of a serious mystery novel.

The first story is about the mediocre grades in a certain private high school where the rich and powerful’s children are everywhere, and even occasionally there is a crisis of failing the exam, but the protagonist who has always been able to pass the make-up exam smoothly leads a peaceful high school life until one day, A transfer student came to his class, a blond-haired, childlike girl.

The protagonist finds that there seems to be some secrets in the transfer student through some careful observations. His intuition tells him that he cannot investigate, otherwise he will be drawn into a deeper fog, but the will of the universe will not let him You successfully escaped. A friend of the protagonist runs a high-tech company at home. The other party has a good impression of this transfer student, so he chose a certain weekend to invite a whole study group including the protagonist and the transfer student to his house. The company visited the new technology conference, and the protagonist discovered that a commercial spy was trying to steal the corporate secrets of a friend's company.

So after going through such and such commercial espionage plots that didn't match the campus culture, the transfer student refreshed his entire understanding of the protagonist, and almost subconsciously said to himself that he could easily see through such an arrangement. The protagonist friend next to him followed up very politely: "Do you know X?"

"That famous detective 'X' who is famous for being mysterious, and no media has ever photographed him?" The transfer student of the beautiful blonde girl asked in amazement.

"It's a rumor that no photos were taken. In fact, it's because the newspaper is controlled by my family. I don't like to be disturbed by others, so I asked them to intercept the media that took photos. After all, the best way to deal with paparazzi is paparazzi— — Only the paparazzi know where to ambush for a good photo," another friend chimed in with a laugh.

The transfer student was stunned for a moment, and his eyes subconsciously fell on the black-haired boy who was yawning lazily, even half-closed his eyes, and was unable to lift his spirits.

This person is X?

——This is the end of the first opening scene.

Just looking at the beginning is a very common beginning of campus light novels, and even has a bit of nerd development, but since the appearance of commercial spies, its "core" has shifted from ordinary otaku to light novels to suspense mystery novels, using "who is the murderer" It replaces the hook of "what kind of spark will the transfer student and the protagonist have?" in most readers' minds, and attracts readers to look down.

Of course, in order to hold both hands hard, Xiao Ba did not forget to arrange a thread to continue hooking another part of the readers who came for the heroine of the beautiful girl.

In many cases, if the writing power and the plot arrangement are improper, it is very likely that neither the former mystery novel lovers nor the residential light novel readers will be caught. In the end, they will end up empty-handed. In terms of delicate balance, readers on both sides can be interested to read it together.

——Children make choices, I want them all!

After rereading the opening plot and making some minor adjustments and revisions, Xiao Ba started to work on the second key case, which is the case that will run through this book with [-] words—the previous "appetizing" plot is only three The ten thousand word or so is just an introduction to attract people to look down.

Someone walked by and sat down opposite, Xiaoba felt something, looked up, and saw Zhu Fu Jingguang putting the guitar case on his back, and asked with a smile: "What are you doing so attentively?" ?”

"A little thing." Xiao Ba blinked, closed his notebook, and stuffed it back into his backpack, "When did you come back?"

This time I mainly met with Zhu Fu Jingguang, and it was incidental to stuff her identity information with Xianshuiren, so at this moment, Xianshuiren has been sent to the store to buy "clothes that fit the temperament of a college student".

"Two months ago." Zhu Fu Jingguang said this with a complicated mood. After he came back, he had already learned from his friend that the decision to recall the undercover agent was a message from the Time Court. That mysterious department was like a Like the ability of a prophet, he called back many undercover personnel including him at just the right time, allowing them to escape the subsequent purge.

However, judging from this level of accuracy, probably their identities have been exposed...

The subsequent conversation with Nana, who seems to be his new direct boss who seems to have amnesia, also confirmed this point: both the black organization and the smuggling group have already recorded the information of their group, so next they It needs a makeover, and then restores its normal identity and returns to the "bright" side.

"Congratulations, the dawn has come."

Zhu Fu Jingguang hummed, although when he got the news of the retreat, he had roughly thought about how he would be arranged in the future, but when it really came to this, he was a little at a loss.

He was used to lurking in the dark.

"Then, now that the business is done, let's talk about private matters." Xiao Ba told Zhu Fu Jingguang all the things that need to be paid attention to, and after dealing with the matters assigned by the King of Gold, he began to put his own private matters on the agenda, " You know 'zero'."

She used declarative sentences instead of interrogative sentences, which was normal, because she had the right to transfer Zhu Fu Jingguang's files, so she could naturally see his police academy career and the records of his undercover black organization from his files.

Including his friend, zero, who undercovered the black organization with him.

The difference is that Zhu Fu Jingguang had to quit the organization when his identity was revealed three years ago, while his friend Zero is still in the black organization.

As the deepest nail driven into it by the Japanese police.

Zhu Fu Jingguang didn't know why Nana suddenly mentioned zero, could it be...she remembered?

This idea just came up, and when I touched the strange eyes of the girl behind the sunglasses, those tiny joys disappeared like morning dew in the sun.

She can't remember.

Just thinking about it, he heard the question from the girl in front of him: "Did we know each other before?"

Zhu Fu Jingguang opened his mouth and found his voice after a while: "...Why do you ask?"

"You, and zero, when you saw me for the first time, you seemed to want to call me by a name. The initial pronunciation was 'N'. I thought it was because we knew each other before. You are used to calling me by my surname or nickname Asha or something like that. Yes, after all the first syllable is 'N' - I have lost a lot of memories, so I thought you were part of it at the time, but some time ago I found those memories that I had lost, and after combing carefully, I found that You are not among them." Xiao Ba calmly explained the results of his thinking during this period, "But whether it is you or Zero, it seems that they are very familiar with me, whether it is my ability or my... cat."

She originally wanted to say that she was distracted, but considering that this was one of her ways of retreat, she chose to blur this statement.

Zhu Fu Jingguang was silent for a while, and then said softly: "...I'm sorry, we admitted the wrong person."

……what?

Xiao Ba's tense face almost collapsed directly.

Her serious face is not for this kind of answer!

If it wasn't for the wrong occasion, she would have flipped the table!

But it's not far from flipping the table—before Xiao Ba decided to grab Zhu Fu Jingguang's collar and shake him desperately, the music sound from the special message on the mobile phone made her give up this idea for the time being.

He took out his phone and looked at it, and Xiao Ba let out an urg: "... so fast?"

Zhu Fu Jingguang straightened up, and didn't ask what's wrong rashly: he has been lurking in the dark world for many years, which has created his unparalleled patience and vigilance. Even if he is now ordered to return to the bright world, this cautiousness still won't change. disappear.

But he still thought about it subconsciously: her expression seemed a little surprised, but compared to the content, her surprise seemed to point to... time?

Do you think the news should not come so soon?

While Zhu Fu Jingguang was thinking about what that was, Xiao Ba had already quickly browsed through the second task sent to her by the King of Gold—the first task was to be the immediate boss of the Supernatural Secret Service Division, not to replace him. The original farming chief, but became the boss of the farming chief.

A digression: As of today, the new leader of the Supernatural Secret Service Division has not reported yet, and there are already rumors that the new leader of the Supernatural Secret Service has just started his career and collapsed in the middle...

"Your new transfer order hasn't come down yet, why don't you accompany me to Xisheng Town first," Xiao Ba gasped as if suffering from a toothache, "It's the first new job."

Zhu Fu Jingguang didn't have many objections, only a little question: "What content?"

"The succession battle to determine the next successor of a certain old Italian mafia family has just been fought in Bingsheng, but the guests from Italy haven't left yet, so the old man asked us to find out what made them so Lingering and forgetting to return." Xiao Ba sighed.

Damn it, she actually missed all the succession chapters, she just doesn't know if it's more miserable if she didn't do it empty-handed, or this one...

And if she remembers the plot of the manga correctly, the future chapter is just after the battle of succession, and there is no time for 27 to breathe. If she takes on this mission now, she won't just run into those natural disasters and go to the future, right?

...It won't be so miserable, right?

As it turns out, the reality can be worse.

Standing on the street in a foreign country, the girl with long curly black hair blinked her eyes. Her pretty face and slightly out-of-season clothes attracted the attention of many others, but she was too disturbing to others. Before, those gazes were naturally moved away by gentlemen, which made Xiao Ba, who was already thinking about finding a hidden corner to become a cat and figure out what was going on, heaved a sigh of relief.

The wind blew her long hair, and the slightly salty smell in her nose made her know that she was at the beach before she saw the blue sea.

Namori Town is not by the sea.

A second ago, she was still on the way to Sawada’s house with Momo Jingguang. Suddenly, a strong electromagnetic noise made her subconsciously cover her ears. After she closed her eyes reflexively and opened them again, the Japanese town in front of her became A seaside city full of exotic customs.

The people around him also changed from a Mongolian with a lot of colorful hair, but who can see the characteristics of a yellow race, to a Caucasian with a high nose, deep eyes and white complexion.

The language courses mastered after recovering the memory let Xiaoba recognize the language used by those people talking and which language the words on the signs on the streets and alleys belong to.

Italian.

Quickly going through all the details before and after his suspected crossing in his mind, combined with the time displayed on the street electronic signboard, Xiao Ba quickly deduced the truth and quickly locked the culprit:

Irie Masaichi, better not let me catch you!

To bombard her with rockets for ten years, I really think cats are easy to bully! ! !